Run: 2026-09-03-01M1M16KWTACPGM3PGCXTG1TES

Run Details

Duration:
4m 31s
Cost:
$0.042709
Provider:
Tencent

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The third deadbolt gave a metallic groan, and Rory yanked the door inward. Cold air rolled in off Brick Lane, thick with exhaust and the cumin-scented steam rising from the curry house below. Lucien stood in the grimy hallway, one hand folded over the ivory head of his cane, charcoal suit sharp enough to cut the gloom. Platinum hair slicked back. One amber eye caught the weak bulb; the other, black as a drowned star, drank the light. He hadn't changed. That was the hell of it. Rory tightened her grip on the edge of the door until the crescent scar on her wrist paled. "You." The word left her before she could dress it up, before she could make it a wall. Lucien's mouth curved, but the smile didn't reach either eye. "Laila." "Don't." She made the syllable a blade. His gaze dropped to her mouth, then rose with a drag that scraped her nerve endings. "You answer to Rory now. The name I gave you was for when the dark had ears." "Funny. I remember you giving me a lot of things I didn't ask for." His knuckles flexed on the cane. The flat behind her held its breath: no hum from the fridge, no clink of Ptolemy's collar, just the tick of the deadbolt she hadn't reset and the blood-heat of him standing in her doorway after eight months of silence. A tabby shadow slid around her ankles and butted her shin. Ptolemy, traitor that he was, arched against Lucien's trouser leg. Lucien bent enough to scratch the cat behind one ear, the movement pulling his jacket taut across his shoulders. "He still likes me. That has to count for something." "It counts for nothing if you've been feeding him." At last he looked past her, into the cramped clutter of Eva's flat. Books stacked in leaning towers, scrolls unrolled across the table, research notes pinned to every spare inch of wall. The place smelled of old paper, chai, and the jasmine oil Eva used on the radiator. "Nice place. Very you. All these exits and still nowhere to run." Rory didn't step back. She didn't invite him in, either. Her spine stayed straight, shoulders squared, the way she'd learned to stand when Evan's shadow stretched too long. "How did you find me?" "Eva's cat has a microchip. Your friend posts pictures of that animal like it's her child. Took me an hour to cross-reference the vet records with the tenancies on this street." "That's stalking." "That's my job." "Your job is fixing things for people who can pay. I stopped being able to pay the month you decided I was a case study." The black eye stayed flat. The bulb overhead flickered; she knew the difference between bad wiring and a lie. "I never took a penny for you, Aurora." The sound of her full name in his mouth, the French rounding the vowels, hit low in her belly. She hated that. She hated that he knew the exact spot to press. "Then why are you here, Lucien? It's been eight months. I changed the locks, the number, the route I walk to the tube. I stopped sleeping above Silas' because you knew that stairwell too well. And now you're standing here saying my name like it's a spell." He lifted the cane and set it down again, a single precise tap on the threshold. She didn't miss the way his fingers lingered near the hidden release. "Evan's out." The air left her in a rush. For one traitorous second her knees considered unlocking, then she locked them instead. "Evan's nobody. He's a bitter man with a grudge and a fist. I left him in Cardiff." "You left Evan in Cardiff. The thing wearing him now walks through London and asks questions in places that don't tolerate questions." Her mouth went dry. "You're lying." "Am I?" He reached into his jacket. Her gaze tracked every inch of the movement. "He went to a broker in Whitechapel three nights ago. Paid in iron and blood for a name. Guess whose." He held out a folded slip of paper. She didn't take it. Her hand had closed around the doorframe instead, the scar pulling white. "I don't want your paper." "You want the truth. You always did. Even when it cut." That was the trouble. He'd never once lied to her about the danger. He'd simply decided which pieces she got to hold. Rory glanced at the stairs over his shoulder, half-expecting Evan's silhouette, then hated herself for it. Lucien saw the flick of her eyes. Of course he saw. "He can't get in. Three deadbolts." "Three deadbolts keep out a man. They don't keep out what's riding him." The cat wound between them, tail high, unaware. Lucien's free hand rose, then stopped short of her arm, close enough that the heat of him crossed the gap. "Let me in, Aurora. Thirty seconds. Then you can bolt every lock and pretend I'm a bad dream." She should have slammed the door. Her fingers itched to. But Evan's face flashed behind her eyes, the last night in Cardiff, the way his hand had closed over her wrist hard enough to leave the crescent moon she still carried. Lucien had been the one who pried that hand off. Lucien had been the one who taught her to breathe again, then handed her a fake name and a bus ticket and vanished before she could ask him to stay. Attraction, hurt, all of it crowded her throat. "Thirty seconds." She stepped back. Not an invitation. A reprieve. Lucien crossed the threshold, cane tapping once on the floorboards. He filled the narrow hallway, wool and smoke and something darker underneath, bergamot laced with brimstone. The door swung shut; she threw the top bolt, then the middle, then the bottom, each clunk a small defiance. He watched her hands. "You still cover it when you're frightened." Rory's right hand flew to her left wrist, then dropped. Too late. "I'm not frightened of you." "A terrible liar. You were always terrible at lying to me." "You want to talk about lying? You let me think Evan was just a man. You let me believe I'd outrun him with a new name and a wig. All that time he was making deals with things that don't have names, and you knew. You used me as bait and called it protection." Lucien's jaw went hard enough to cut glass. The amber eye glittered; the black one stayed flat and endless. "I used you as bait because you were already in the water, Aurora. I put myself on the hook instead of you. Do you have any idea what I paid to keep your name out of the ledger? What I let them take?" "I didn't ask you to pay anything." "No. You didn't ask. You just ran, and expected me to clean up the blood." "I expected you to tell me the truth!" The shout ripped out of her, raw, and Ptolemy bolted for the bedroom. Rory dragged in a breath, then another, forcing her shoulders down. Silence pressed in. The radiator ticked. Somewhere below, a wok clanged and a chef shouted in Bengali. Lucien's voice dropped, low and rough, scraped raw at the edges. "I never stopped wanting you. That was never the problem." Her pulse stumbled. He saw it, the small betraying flutter at the base of her throat, and something in his face cracked open. "Don't." The word had no steel left in it. "You left before I could tell you the rest." He took one step closer, close enough that she smelled smoke and regret on his breath. "The night you walked out, I had the proof in my pocket. Evan's debt. The name of the thing that owns him. I came to give it to you and you were already gone, and every lock in this city may as well have been my own fault." Rory's mouth opened, then closed. Eight months of unsaid things crowded the hallway, thick as the books on every surface. "Say it." The demand hung between them, heavier than the deadbolts. "Say it, Lucien." He exhaled, and the sound was almost a laugh, almost a surrender. "Not here. Not with a blade under my palm and your ex's shadow on the stairs. Let me sit down, Aurora. Let me tell you why the man who made you flinch is the least dangerous thing hunting you tonight." She held his gaze. The deadbolts were thrown, the cat was hiding, and Lucien Moreau stood in Eva's cluttered hallway with his cane and his secrets and the same mouth that had ruined her for softer men. Rory nodded once. "One hour. Then you walk out that door and I decide whether I ever want to see you again." Lucien's smile this time reached the amber eye, at least. "One hour." He followed her into the flat, past the towers of books and the scroll Eva had left unrolled on the table, and Rory told herself the trembling in her hands was anger. It wasn't.
created_at"2026-09-03T16:21:31.17Z" 9/3/2026, 4:21:31 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags0
96.72% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1525
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"very"
count1
highlights
0"very"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
83.61% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1525
totalAiIsms5
found
0
word"gloom"
count1
1
word"silence"
count2
2
word"flickered"
count1
3
word"pulse"
count1
highlights
0"gloom"
1"silence"
2"flickered"
3"pulse"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences83
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences83
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences127
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen54
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1525
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions14
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
66.67% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions38
wordCount935
uniqueNames11
maxNameDensity1.39
worstName"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Rory9
Brick1
Lane1
Ptolemy3
Lucien13
Eva4
Evan3
French1
Cardiff1
Bengali1
Moreau1
persons
0"Rory"
1"Ptolemy"
2"Lucien"
3"Eva"
4"Evan"
5"Moreau"
places
0"Brick"
1"Lane"
2"Cardiff"
3"Bengali"
globalScore0.805
windowScore0.667
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences60
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1525
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences127
matches
0"hated that he"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs87
mean17.53
std15.5
cv0.884
sampleLengths
013
165
29
318
41
517
610
71
81
922
1017
1114
1246
1321
1419
1510
169
1748
1812
1928
205
2131
222
233
2425
2519
268
2732
2847
2928
302
3120
3217
3322
344
352
362
3713
3820
3924
405
4111
4222
4327
446
4513
4628
4718
4881
498
96.81% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences83
matches
0"was, arched"
1"were thrown"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs153
matches
0"was hiding"
52.87% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount4
flaggedSentences4
totalSentences127
ratio0.031
matches
0"One amber eye caught the weak bulb; the other, black as a drowned star, drank the light."
1"The bulb overhead flickered; she knew the difference between bad wiring and a lie."
2"The door swung shut; she threw the top bolt, then the middle, then the bottom, each clunk a small defiance."
3"The amber eye glittered; the black one stayed flat and endless."
93.96% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount938
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount44
adverbRatio0.046908315565031986
lyAdverbCount2
lyAdverbRatio0.0021321961620469083
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences127
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences127
mean12.01
std10.37
cv0.864
sampleLengths
013
120
224
34
417
53
66
718
81
917
1010
111
121
136
1416
1517
1614
176
1840
1911
2010
2119
2210
239
2413
2519
2616
2712
284
296
3018
315
3231
332
343
3525
365
3714
388
3919
403
4110
4247
4316
4412
452
467
4713
4817
4922
49.61% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats7
diversityRatio0.33070866141732286
totalSentences127
uniqueOpeners42
83.33% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences80
matches
0"Of course he saw."
1"Somewhere below, a wok clanged"
ratio0.025
75.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount29
totalSentences80
matches
0"He hadn't changed."
1"She made the syllable a"
2"His gaze dropped to her"
3"His knuckles flexed on the"
4"She didn't invite him in,"
5"Her spine stayed straight, shoulders"
6"She hated that."
7"She hated that he knew"
8"He lifted the cane and"
9"She didn't miss the way"
10"Her mouth went dry."
11"He reached into his jacket."
12"Her gaze tracked every inch"
13"He held out a folded"
14"She didn't take it."
15"Her hand had closed around"
16"He'd never once lied to"
17"He'd simply decided which pieces"
18"She should have slammed the"
19"Her fingers itched to."
ratio0.363
22.50% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount70
totalSentences80
matches
0"The third deadbolt gave a"
1"Lucien stood in the grimy"
2"Platinum hair slicked back."
3"He hadn't changed."
4"That was the hell of"
5"Rory tightened her grip on"
6"The word left her before"
7"Lucien's mouth curved, but the"
8"She made the syllable a"
9"His gaze dropped to her"
10"His knuckles flexed on the"
11"The flat behind her held"
12"A tabby shadow slid around"
13"Ptolemy, traitor that he was,"
14"Lucien bent enough to scratch"
15"Books stacked in leaning towers,"
16"The place smelled of old"
17"Rory didn't step back."
18"She didn't invite him in,"
19"Her spine stayed straight, shoulders"
ratio0.875
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences80
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences44
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"His gaze dropped to her mouth, then rose with a drag that scraped her nerve endings."
1"The deadbolts were thrown, the cat was hiding, and Lucien Moreau stood in Eva's cluttered hallway with his cane and his secrets and the same mouth that had ruin…"
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags0
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
87.3689%