Run: 2026-09-03-01M1M1BPBEN8ST7XNFK6H2N5FB

Run Details

Duration:
5m 5s
Cost:
$0.043671
Provider:
Tencent

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The bone token was smooth as old ivory against Detective Harlow Quinn’s palm as she ducked under the low brick arch of the service tunnel. The guarded entrance to the Veil Market did not look like much—just a shadowed stairwell beneath Camden that stank of rust and cat piss—but at forty-one, with eighteen years of decorated Metropolitan Police service behind her, Quinn had learned that the most dangerous places rarely advertised themselves. She held the token up. The air shimmered, and the abandoned Tube station beyond it unfolded like a held breath released. She stepped onto the northbound platform and let her brown eyes adjust, shoulders squared with military precision. Beneath the fractured tiled walls and peeling advertisements, the Veil Market had taken root. Stalls crouched in the alcoves, their awnings stitched from what looked like spider silk and velvet. Ghost-lanterns floated above them, casting the sickly green light of something that had never been electricity. The air tasted of copper, burnt sage, and hot sugar. Enchanted goods glittered on blankets. Scrolls of information were stacked like kindling. And, in a glass case at the back of one stall, rows of banned alchemical substances sat in sealed vials, their wax tops unbroken. The market moved locations every full moon; tonight it was Camden’s turn to host the dark. Quinn checked the worn leather watch on her left wrist. Ten minutes past one. She had forty-eight hours before the moon pulled the whole bazaar somewhere else, and she intended to have her answers by then. The crime scene tape had already been strung around a stall near the platform edge. DC Priya Raman stood just inside it, notebook in hand, her posture easy in a way Quinn’s never was. Beyond her, half-hidden behind a rack of hanging charms, Eva Kowalski hovered, her worn leather satchel hugged to her chest as though it were a shield. Quinn’s sharp jaw tightened. Eva was twenty-six, with a curly red halo of hair escaping its tie, a scatter of freckles across a too-pale face, and round glasses that made her look like a startled owl. She was an occult researcher, a research assistant in the British Museum’s restricted archives, and—more to the point—she was Aurora’s childhood friend. Quinn had spent the last eight months quietly building a file on Aurora’s little clique, and every thread she pulled seemed to end with someone like Eva, too clever and too close to the things that went bump in the London dark. “Guv,” Raman said, straightening. “Scene’s as we found it, apart from the doc. Victim is one Corin Fell, fifty-ish, Shade artisan. Sells Veil Compasses. Or he did.” Quinn ducked under the tape without a word and let her gaze drop to the body. Corin Fell lay on his back behind the counter, one hand flung out, fingers inches from a small brass compass. There was no blood. No overturned stool, no scattered coins, no signs of a struggle. The dead man’s face was locked in a silent scream, the veins beneath his skin gone black as ink. The till beneath the counter was still full of coin and folded information-scrips. Nothing had been taken. “Banned alchemical substances?” Quinn asked, nodding at the case. “Sealed, guv,” Raman said. “Every one. Till’s full, stock’s intact. Looks like misadventure to me. Fell was known to sample his own product. Probably took a bad dose of something, dropped the compass, and that was that. No struggle, no forced entry, nobody went in or out after him. I’d call it accidental death and save us all a lot of paperwork.” Quinn crouched, her knees cracking softly. She did not reach for the compass yet. She looked at the floor instead. The platform tiles were filmed with a decade of grime thick enough to hold a print. There was one clear set of shoeprints leading from the stall’s side door to the counter—Fell’s, presumably. On the customer side of the counter, the grime was churned by the passage of dozens of shoes from the market’s earlier hours, but no single set approached the body and stopped. No one had stepped behind that counter with him. “And the compass?” Quinn asked. Raman shrugged. “Toy, guv. Brass thing, points north, probably. He dropped it when he started fitting.” “It is not pointing north,” Eva Kowalski said. Both detectives looked up. Eva had drifted closer, her green eyes wide behind the round lenses. She tucked a strand of curly red hair behind her left ear, the nervous gesture Quinn had already logged twice since arriving. “That’s a Veil Compass. The needle doesn’t seek magnetic north. It points to the nearest supernatural rift or portal. And right now, it’s pointing at—” “At the wall, yeah,” Raman interrupted, unimpressed. “So there’s a draft. This whole place is a draft.” “No.” Eva’s voice shook, but she held her ground, her satchel strap creaking as she shifted. “The market moves every full moon because it sits on the ley lines. The barriers thin here. Look behind the counter. The air is… wrong. Something came through and took him. It wasn’t a bad batch. It was the veil.” Quinn rose slowly to her full five-foot-nine and looked where the compass needle pointed. The small brass casing sat on the filthy tile, its patina of verdigris dull in the ghost-light. The face was etched with protective sigils, still smoky but unbroken, and the needle was not spinning. It lay flat and true, aimed unerringly at the centre of Corin Fell’s chest. It was a Veil Compass, crafted by a Shade artisan—by the dead man’s own hand, if the stall sign above them was to be believed. Not the wall. Not the north. Not a draft. The dead man. Quinn’s gaze tracked down to Fell’s outstretched hand. She pictured the sequence: Fell behind his counter, something wrong already blooming inside him. He had grabbed the only tool he had that could name the problem. A Shade artisan would trust the protective sigils on the compass face; he would think the compass could close a rift as easily as it found one. But the Veil Compass was only a signpost. It could point. It could not save. She pulled on a pair of gloves, the latex snapping tight, and crouched again. Gently, she turned Fell’s head. Behind the left ear, half-hidden by the collar of his shirt, was a pinpoint puncture wound. A single bead of black residue clung to the torn skin, glimmering faintly like tar caught in moonlight. Quinn went still. She had seen that residue once before, three years ago, on the collar of DS Morris. Her partner had been found in a Bermondsey lock-up with no wounds, no blood, and veins like black wire, and the pathologist had called it idiopathic cardiac arrest. Quinn had called it unfinished business. She had never understood what had killed Morris, only that the world contained currents she could not map, and that the clique she now hunted moved through those currents like fish through water. “Guv?” Raman prompted. Quinn straightened, her sharp jaw set. “It’s not misadventure, Priya, and it’s not a random rift.” She nodded at the body. “The nearest portal is inside him. Somebody dosed him with a rift-catalyst—one of the banned alchemical substances, but not from his own stock. Those vials are sealed. This was brought in. The catalyst punched a temporary hole straight through his flesh, and his life was siphoned out through it. He grabbed the compass to try to close the wound, but all it could do was point at the damage.” Raman’s pen stopped. “You’re saying murder.” “I’m saying someone leaned over that counter, shared a drink or used a dart, and walked away. They never set foot behind the counter. They didn’t need to. They left the compass because they wanted us to find a dead artisan clutching a supernatural toy and write it off as a dealer who played with fire.” Quinn’s brown eyes flicked to Eva. “Or they left it because they knew exactly what the needle would do, and they wanted the rest of us to be too frightened of the veil to look at the man himself.” Eva had gone very still. She tucked her hair behind her left ear again, then seemed to catch herself and dropped her hand to the strap of her satchel. “A rift-catalyst,” she said quietly. “They’re impossibly rare. The archives say they were used in—” “In rituals that open doors in people instead of places,” Quinn finished. She took a step toward the younger woman, close enough to see the freckles stark across the bridge of her nose. “You recognised that residue the second you saw it. You didn’t need to look twice. So either you’ve read about it in those restricted archives of yours, or you’ve seen it before. Which is it, Miss Kowalski? And does Aurora know you’re down here, playing consultant to the Met?” Eva’s mouth opened, then closed. The ghost-lanterns guttered, painting her round glasses in shades of green and shadow. “I would never hurt anyone,” she said, but she did not answer the question. Quinn let the silence stretch, then turned back to Raman. “Bag the compass, the vials, and the body. Photograph that puncture wound before the doc moves him. This is a murder enquiry, and I want the residue run against every unsolved we have with black-vein presentation.” She paused, thinking of Morris, of the three years of quiet, grinding not-knowing. “Including DS Morris.” Raman blinked. “Morris? Guv, that was—” “Idiopathic,” Quinn said flatly. “I remember. Do it anyway.” She stepped back under the tape and let the market breathe around her. Somewhere beneath the stall, a ghost-lantern popped, and the compass needle, still pointing at Corin Fell’s dead chest, did not waver. Eighteen years of service had taught Detective Harlow Quinn to trust what she could see. The evidence had not added up because everyone else had been looking at the veil. Quinn was looking at the man. And behind the man, clearer than any ley line, was the shape of the clique she had been circling for months—Aurora’s circle, with their secrets and their bone tokens and their impossible, stolen magic. Quinn touched the worn leather watch on her left wrist, felt the steady tick against her pulse, and smiled without warmth. She had them now. Or she would, before the full moon moved the ground beneath them all.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
66.67% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags15
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"she said quietly [quietly]"
1"Quinn said flatly [flatly]"
dialogueSentences29
tagDensity0.517
leniency1
rawRatio0.133
effectiveRatio0.133
88.58% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1751
totalAiIsmAdverbs4
found
0
adverb"softly"
count1
1
adverb"slowly"
count1
2
adverb"gently"
count1
3
adverb"very"
count1
highlights
0"softly"
1"slowly"
2"gently"
3"very"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
65.73% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1751
totalAiIsms12
found
0
word"shimmered"
count1
1
word"fractured"
count1
2
word"silk"
count1
3
word"velvet"
count1
4
word"churned"
count1
5
word"magnetic"
count1
6
word"etched"
count1
7
word"flicked"
count1
8
word"stark"
count1
9
word"silence"
count1
10
word"pulse"
count1
11
word"warmth"
count1
highlights
0"shimmered"
1"fractured"
2"silk"
3"velvet"
4"churned"
5"magnetic"
6"etched"
7"flicked"
8"stark"
9"silence"
10"pulse"
11"warmth"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences99
matches(empty)
56.28% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount3
hedgeCount3
narrationSentences99
filterMatches
0"watch"
1"look"
hedgeMatches
0"tended to"
1"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences113
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen71
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1744
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions11
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
50.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions83
wordCount1258
uniqueNames23
maxNameDensity1.83
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity3.5
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Detective2
Harlow2
Quinn23
Veil4
Market2
Camden2
Metropolitan1
Police1
Tube1
Priya1
Raman9
Eva9
Kowalski2
British1
Museum1
Aurora3
London1
Fell7
Corin3
Compass2
Shade2
Morris3
Bermondsey1
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Market"
3"Camden"
4"Police"
5"Raman"
6"Eva"
7"Kowalski"
8"Museum"
9"Aurora"
10"Fell"
11"Compass"
12"Morris"
places
0"Veil"
1"British"
2"London"
3"Corin"
globalScore0.586
windowScore0.5
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences68
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"looked like spider silk and velvet"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1744
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount2
totalSentences113
matches
0"learned that the"
1"seen that residue"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs39
mean44.72
std34.3
cv0.767
sampleLengths
093
1109
252
360
4100
527
616
771
89
962
1094
115
1216
138
1463
1517
1656
1714
1873
199
203
2177
2219
2334
243
2583
263
2790
286
2995
3044
3182
3232
3362
346
359
3634
3791
3817
80.45% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount7
totalSentences99
matches
0"were stacked"
1"was locked"
2"been taken"
3"were filmed"
4"was churned"
5"was etched"
6"been found"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs205
matches
0"was not spinning"
1"was looking"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount7
semicolonCount2
flaggedSentences7
totalSentences113
ratio0.062
matches
0"The guarded entrance to the Veil Market did not look like much—just a shadowed stairwell beneath Camden that stank of rust and cat piss—but at forty-one, with eighteen years of decorated Metropolitan Police service behind her, Quinn had learned that the most dangerous places rarely advertised themselves."
1"The market moved locations every full moon; tonight it was Camden’s turn to host the dark."
2"She was an occult researcher, a research assistant in the British Museum’s restricted archives, and—more to the point—she was Aurora’s childhood friend."
3"There was one clear set of shoeprints leading from the stall’s side door to the counter—Fell’s, presumably."
4"It was a Veil Compass, crafted by a Shade artisan—by the dead man’s own hand, if the stall sign above them was to be believed."
5"A Shade artisan would trust the protective sigils on the compass face; he would think the compass could close a rift as easily as it found one."
6"And behind the man, clearer than any ley line, was the shape of the clique she had been circling for months—Aurora’s circle, with their secrets and their bone tokens and their impossible, stolen magic."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1280
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount49
adverbRatio0.03828125
lyAdverbCount17
lyAdverbRatio0.01328125
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences113
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences113
mean15.43
std13.11
cv0.85
sampleLengths
025
147
25
316
417
514
616
716
810
95
107
1124
1216
1310
144
1522
1615
1719
1826
194
2032
2122
2242
234
2423
2516
2620
274
2811
2919
3013
314
329
334
3458
356
368
376
3816
3917
4032
419
425
432
4414
458
464
4712
4822
4925
63.72% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats8
diversityRatio0.4247787610619469
totalSentences113
uniqueOpeners48
71.68% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences93
matches
0"Gently, she turned Fell’s head."
1"Somewhere beneath the stall, a"
ratio0.022
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount25
totalSentences93
matches
0"She held the token up."
1"She stepped onto the northbound"
2"She had forty-eight hours before"
3"She was an occult researcher,"
4"She did not reach for"
5"She looked at the floor"
6"She tucked a strand of"
7"It lay flat and true,"
8"It was a Veil Compass,"
9"She pictured the sequence: Fell"
10"He had grabbed the only"
11"It could point."
12"It could not save."
13"She pulled on a pair"
14"She had seen that residue"
15"Her partner had been found"
16"She had never understood what"
17"She nodded at the body"
18"She tucked her hair behind"
19"she said quietly"
ratio0.269
67.53% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount73
totalSentences93
matches
0"The bone token was smooth"
1"The guarded entrance to the"
2"She held the token up."
3"The air shimmered, and the"
4"She stepped onto the northbound"
5"Stalls crouched in the alcoves,"
6"Ghost-lanterns floated above them, casting"
7"The air tasted of copper,"
8"Scrolls of information were stacked"
9"The market moved locations every"
10"Quinn checked the worn leather"
11"She had forty-eight hours before"
12"The crime scene tape had"
13"DC Priya Raman stood just"
14"Quinn’s sharp jaw tightened."
15"Eva was twenty-six, with a"
16"She was an occult researcher,"
17"Quinn had spent the last"
18"Raman said, straightening"
19"Quinn ducked under the tape"
ratio0.785
53.76% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences93
matches
0"And, in a glass case"
ratio0.011
88.95% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences53
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"Ghost-lanterns floated above them, casting the sickly green light of something that had never been electricity."
1"Beyond her, half-hidden behind a rack of hanging charms, Eva Kowalski hovered, her worn leather satchel hugged to her chest as though it were a shield."
2"Eva was twenty-six, with a curly red halo of hair escaping its tie, a scatter of freckles across a too-pale face, and round glasses that made her look like a st…"
3"Quinn had spent the last eight months quietly building a file on Aurora’s little clique, and every thread she pulled seemed to end with someone like Eva, too cl…"
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags15
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags9
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"Raman interrupted (interrupt)"
dialogueSentences29
tagDensity0.31
leniency0.621
rawRatio0.111
effectiveRatio0.069
85.1117%