Run: 2026-09-03-01M1M1CHWG277YYFQZNBQ5MHR9

Run Details

Duration:
4m 9s
Cost:
$0.043985
Provider:
Tencent

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The green neon sign above the door of The Raven’s Nest hummed against the drizzle, casting a sickly glow across the wet cobbles of the Soho alley. Inside, the air held the scent of old paper and spilled ale. Maps curled on the walls, their edges browned by years of smoke, and black-and-white photographs watched the room with the flat stares of men long dead. One showed a bridge in Prague, its stones slick with rain. Behind the bar, a bookshelf sagged with leather-bound volumes, one shelf set a fraction out of line. Silas Blackwood moved behind the counter, a glass in one hand, a cloth in the other. His grey-streaked auburn hair caught the low light, and his beard, trimmed to a point, shadowed the collar of his shirt. A silver signet ring winked on his right hand as he set the glass down. He favoured his left leg, the old knee injury making each step a deliberate negotiation with the floorboards. Rory sat on a stool at the far end, her shoulder-length black hair tucked behind one ear. She wore the padded jacket of the Golden Empress, the golden phoenix bright over her heart, and her fingers traced the rim of a half-empty glass. The crescent scar on her left wrist flashed pale against her skin. The door opened. Rain slipped from the shoulders of a woman’s coat as she stepped inside, shaking an umbrella with brisk, efficient movements. Her gaze swept the room, dismissal already forming, then snagged on Rory. The umbrella stilled mid-shake. Nia Pryce’s mouth parted. She closed it, took a breath, and crossed the room, her heels clicking on the boards. “Aurora?” Rory turned. Her bright blue eyes widened, then cooled, the shutters coming down behind them. She didn’t stand. “It’s Rory now.” Silas paused in his polishing. His hazel eyes flicked from Rory to the newcomer, weighing, measuring. He set the cloth down without a sound. Nia slid onto the stool beside Rory, leaving a careful gap. She smelled of rain and expensive shampoo, of the kind of life that involved dry-cleaned coats and hotel conference rooms. “Rory. Right. I heard you’d moved to London, but I didn’t know where.” She glanced around at the maps, the photographs, the dim green light. “I didn’t expect to find you in a place like this.” Rory’s thumb found the scar on her wrist. She rubbed it once, then stopped. “It’s a bar. You drink, you listen to the rain, you go home.” Silas limped over. His left leg dragged on the bare boards. He stopped at Nia’s elbow. “What can I get you?” Nia looked at him, at the signet ring, at the quiet authority in the set of his shoulders. “A white wine. Pinot Grigio, if you have it.” Silas poured without comment. He slid the glass across the bar, then rested his hand near Rory’s empty one. “You want another?” Rory shook her head. “I’m working early.” Silas set the bottle down with a thud. “Yu-Fei’s got you on the breakfast run?” Rory shrugged, a small movement. “Something like that.” Silas grunted. He took the cloth and moved a few feet away. He didn’t go far. He took up a fresh glass and began to polish, his back angled toward them, his posture a wall. Nia turned her wine glass by the stem. “You disappeared. After that night, you vanished. No calls, no texts. I thought you were dead.” Rory’s jaw tightened. She picked up her drink, set it down again without drinking. “I’m not dead.” Nia’s gaze dropped to Rory’s left wrist, to the crescent scar pulled white against the glass. “Is that from him?” Rory’s thumb stilled on the scar. “I fell off a wall when I was nine. Childhood accident. Evan had nothing to do with it.” Nia’s throat worked. “You could’ve fooled me. I wrote to you, Aurora. Letters, emails, a bloody Christmas card. You never replied.” Rory’s fingers curled around the base of the glass. The scar pulled white. “I read them.” Nia went still. “You read them?” “Every one.” Nia leaned forward, her wine forgotten. “And you couldn’t pick up a pen?” Rory’s laugh was short, a bark with no humour in it. “I could fill a page with reasons. You’d have hated all of them. They’d have sounded like closings, like I was arguing a case I’d already lost.” Nia’s eyes shone, but she blinked the shine away. “I blamed myself. I introduced you to Evan at that party in the second year. If I hadn’t—” Rory turned her full gaze on her. The years between them stretched, groaned. “If you hadn’t, someone else would have. Evan introduced himself. He had a smile like a promise and a temper like a slammed door. You were the friend who knew him from halls.” Nia’s hand shook as she lifted her wine. She didn’t drink. “I saw the bruises on your arms before you ever mentioned them. I told myself it wasn’t my business. I told myself you were strong, that you’d leave when you were ready. I let myself believe it because it was easier than dragging you out.” Rory looked at the map on the wall, then back at Nia. “You think I didn’t let myself believe things? You think I didn’t stand in that flat and rehearse the exact sentence that would make him stop? I knew the law, Nia. I knew what I could charge him with. Knowing didn’t stop his hand.” Silas set the glass down. The soft clink cut through the silence. “She knows the streets too. From Soho to Shoreditch, there isn’t a shortcut she hasn’t mapped. She reads a room the way other people read a contract.” Nia’s gaze darted to him. “And you are?” Silas hooked a thumb toward the ceiling. “Silas. I own the place. Rory lives upstairs.” “Upstairs.” Nia turned the word over, testing its weight. She looked back at Rory. “You live above a bar.” Rory’s thumb found the scar again, a habit she didn’t hide. “It’s a flat. It’s dry, the lock works, and Silas doesn’t ask questions I don’t want to answer.” Silas’s mouth twitched. He picked up another glass. “I ask plenty. She’s learned not to listen.” Rory’s mouth twitched, then flattened. Nia leaned forward, her voice dropping. “You were going to be a barrister. Your dad had the whole path mapped out—Pre-Law at Cardiff, then pupillage, then the Old Bailey. You used to quote precedent at me over breakfast.” Rory tapped her finger on the bar. “I was twenty and terrified. I wanted to make my father proud and my mother stop worrying. Turns out I was good at one and useless at the other.” Nia’s throat worked. “You’re not useless.” Rory’s gaze dropped to her jacket, to the golden phoenix over her heart. “I deliver noodles, Nia. I ride a bike through traffic and get tips in coins. I go by Rory because Aurora sounds like a girl who believed the system worked.” Nia’s shoulders dropped an inch. “I sound like I’m cross-examining you.” Rory’s eyes held a flicker of the old light. “You always did mistake an argument for a debate.” Nia reached across the gap between their stools. She didn’t touch Rory, just let her hand rest on the bar. “I missed you, Rory. Not the barrister. You.” Rory didn’t answer. She stared at the map on the wall behind the bar, at the inked rivers and borders that no longer matched the world outside. The green neon sign buzzed, a trapped insect. Nia checked her phone, the screen lighting her face. She stood, gathering her coat. “I have a conference dinner. The Strand. Tomorrow night, I’m free.” She hesitated. “You still have my number?” Rory’s hand went to her pocket, to the phone there. “Yeah.” Nia’s voice caught, then steadied. “Use it. Or don’t. But I’m not writing to a ghost again.” She walked to the door, pushed it open, and the rain swallowed her. The neon sign flickered once, then held. Silas limped over and collected Nia’s empty glass. He didn’t speak, just waited. Rory’s thumb brushed her own wrist, the crescent scar a pale moon on her skin. She pulled her phone from her pocket, turned it over in her hand, and set it on the bar beside her empty glass. “I read them. I never knew what to write back.” Silas picked up the cloth. The map of Prague watched from the wall, its inked stones eternal, unchanging, while the rain kept falling on Soho.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags1
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"She glanced around [around]"
dialogueSentences44
tagDensity0.023
leniency0.045
rawRatio1
effectiveRatio0.045
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1430
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
75.52% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1430
totalAiIsms7
found
0
word"traced"
count1
1
word"efficient"
count1
2
word"flicked"
count1
3
word"silence"
count1
4
word"weight"
count1
5
word"flicker"
count1
6
word"flickered"
count1
highlights
0"traced"
1"efficient"
2"flicked"
3"silence"
4"weight"
5"flicker"
6"flickered"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
highlights
0"eyes widened"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences93
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences93
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences136
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen45
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1430
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions8
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
0.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions68
wordCount892
uniqueNames11
maxNameDensity2.91
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity6
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Raven1
Nest1
Soho2
Prague2
Blackwood1
Golden1
Empress1
Rory26
Pryce1
Nia21
Silas11
persons
0"Raven"
1"Nest"
2"Blackwood"
3"Rory"
4"Pryce"
5"Nia"
6"Silas"
places
0"Soho"
1"Prague"
2"Golden"
globalScore0.043
windowScore0
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences61
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1430
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences136
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs95
mean15.05
std15.07
cv1.001
sampleLengths
093
170
255
339
420
51
618
73
824
931
1036
1114
1213
1316
145
1518
169
1719
183
194
203
218
227
235
243
2535
268
2716
2814
293
3016
314
326
3318
343
3518
3613
373
383
393
402
416
427
4311
4427
459
4618
4713
4833
4911
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences93
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs157
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences136
ratio0
matches(empty)
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount900
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"involved dry-cleaned coats"
adverbCount26
adverbRatio0.028888888888888888
lyAdverbCount1
lyAdverbRatio0.0011111111111111111
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences136
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences136
mean10.51
std8.43
cv0.801
sampleLengths
027
112
226
311
417
516
621
715
818
917
1026
1112
123
1320
1412
154
164
1716
181
192
2013
213
223
235
2411
258
2611
2720
2825
2911
308
316
3213
333
348
355
365
3718
389
394
4015
413
424
433
448
457
465
473
482
4910
47.06% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats4
diversityRatio0.20588235294117646
totalSentences136
uniqueOpeners28
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences90
matches(empty)
ratio0
95.56% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount28
totalSentences90
matches
0"His grey-streaked auburn hair caught"
1"He favoured his left leg,"
2"She wore the padded jacket"
3"Her gaze swept the room,"
4"She closed it, took a"
5"Her bright blue eyes widened,"
6"She didn’t stand."
7"His hazel eyes flicked from"
8"He set the cloth down"
9"She smelled of rain and"
10"She glanced around at the"
11"She rubbed it once, then"
12"His left leg dragged on"
13"He stopped at Nia’s elbow."
14"He slid the glass across"
15"He took the cloth and"
16"He didn’t go far."
17"He took up a fresh"
18"She picked up her drink,"
19"She didn’t drink."
ratio0.311
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount87
totalSentences90
matches
0"The green neon sign above"
1"Maps curled on the walls,"
2"Silas Blackwood moved behind the"
3"His grey-streaked auburn hair caught"
4"A silver signet ring winked"
5"He favoured his left leg,"
6"Rory sat on a stool"
7"She wore the padded jacket"
8"The crescent scar on her"
9"The door opened."
10"Rain slipped from the shoulders"
11"Her gaze swept the room,"
12"The umbrella stilled mid-shake."
13"Nia Pryce’s mouth parted."
14"She closed it, took a"
15"Her bright blue eyes widened,"
16"She didn’t stand."
17"Silas paused in his polishing."
18"His hazel eyes flicked from"
19"He set the cloth down"
ratio0.967
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences90
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences36
technicalSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags1
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
83.7380%