Run: 2026-09-03-01M1M1CVWGTJCB9X293NM9DQEK

Run Details

Duration:
4m 25s
Cost:
$0.040066
Provider:
Tencent

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4417" name="Tomás Herrera" aliases="Tommy, Tomás, Herrera" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Support"> <eyeColor>warm brown</eyeColor> <hair>short curly dark brown</hair> <height>5'10"</height> <age>29</age> <skinTone>olive skin</skinTone> <scar>scar running along his left forearm from a knife attack</scar> <medallion>Saint Christopher medallion around his neck</medallion> <birthplace>Seville, Spain</birthplace> <description>A former paramedic who provides off-the-books medical care for the clique.</description> <backstory>Born in Seville, Spain. He moved to London to work for the NHS but lost his license after administering unauthorized treatments to supernatural patients.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the thriller genre. A detective is pursuing a suspect through rain-soaked city streets at night. The chase takes them from the street level down into an underground market. The detective must decide whether to follow the suspect into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The green neon sign above The Raven's Nest guttered in the downpour, casting a sickly emerald wash across the wet pavement of Soho. Detective Harlow Quinn pressed herself into the brick alcove opposite the bar, rain running in cold rivers down the back of her coat. Her salt-and-pepper hair, cropped close, was plastered to her skull. She tilted her left wrist; the worn leather watch strap creaked, the face showing 01:47. She had watched the door three hours, ever since the clique's meeting started behind the secret room's bookshelf. Contraband, extortion, worse—the file in her pocket tied them to all of it. Her sharp jaw ached from clenching. A side door banged open. Tomás Herrera stepped out into the rain. He shrugged into a jacket, olive skin gleaming under the neon, short curly dark brown hair soaked through. His fingers found the Saint Christopher medallion at his throat, clutched it, then his warm brown eyes scanned the street. He didn't see her in the alcove's shadow. Quinn pushed off the wall. "Herrera! Police! Stop!" Her boots hit the wet pavement, water spraying the kerb. Heads turned from the doorway of the Nest; a couple under a shared umbrella twisted to look. Herrera's head snapped toward her. For a heartbeat their eyes locked, his wide and startled, hers hard and unyielding. Then he ran. He bolted down the narrow street, trainers slapping through puddles. Quinn followed, military precision driving every stride. She cut around the corner, shoulder clipping a drunk tourist's umbrella; the man swore as the umbrella tumbled into the gutter, but she didn't break pace. "Lost your licence, didn't you, Tommy?" The words punched out between her footfalls, her breath burning in her chest. "That why you're running?" "You think a licence matters now?" Herrera knocked over a stack of empty crates outside a shuttered kebab shop; they clattered across the pavement, rolling into her path. She vaulted them without slowing. "You followed me from the Nest, Detective. Turn back while you still can." His sleeve rode up as he grabbed a lamppost and slingshot himself around the next turn. The puckered scar along his left forearm shone wet beneath the streetlamp, a pale rope of tissue from a knife attack years ago. Quinn burned the image into memory. "Heading to the Market, are we?" she shouted. "Which full moon is this? Camden tonight, yeah?" He didn't answer. He put on speed. They left Soho's cramped alleys behind, pounding north through the rain. Neon reflections bled across the wet asphalt, red and gold and green smearing under the tyres of a black cab. Its horn blared as Herrera darted in front of it; Quinn slapped the cab's bonnet as she passed, the metal cold and wet against her palm. Her chest heaved, but her stride never faltered. The worn leather watch weighed on her wrist, a metronome counting down the seconds. The streets widened. The colourful shutters of Camden Market loomed dark and dripping, locked for the night. Rain hammered the corrugated awnings, drumming a rhythm that matched the blood in her ears. Herrera veered down a narrow service road fenced with corrugated iron. Ahead, a boarded-up staircase descended into the earth, flanked by a faded sign: CAMDEN TUBE STATION — NO ENTRY. Steam rose from a vent in the pavement, carrying the scents of wet concrete, burnt sage, and something metallic, like old blood. Herrera hit the top of the stairs and stopped, chest heaving. He turned, rain plastering his curls to his forehead, and looked back at her. Thirty feet. Twenty. She slowed, boots sliding on loose gravel at the threshold, and stopped at the top. "Last chance, Quinn." His fingers found the medallion again; he gripped it so hard the chain bit into his throat. "Down there, your badge means nothing." Then he backed onto the first step, then another, keeping his eyes on her. Quinn paused a second, then followed him down. The staircase enclosed them in shadow. Rainwater and decades of grime made the steps slick; she caught the railing, cold iron under her palm, and took the descent two at a time. The air dropped in temperature with every step, the city's noise fading until only their footfalls and the drumming water remained. Tiled walls rose around them, flaking posters peeling like dead skin. Far below, a greenish-gold glow pulsed, unnatural and beckoning. They burst onto the lower landing. The abandoned ticket hall opened around them, vast and echoing, but it wasn't empty. At the far side, set into a bricked-up archway, stood a black iron gate. A figure in a heavy coat sat on a stool beside it, face lost in the shadow of a low-hanging lantern. The gate's lock glowed with a faint, bone-white light. Herrera reached the gate, breath sawing in and out. He dug into his pocket and pulled out a bone token, a sliver of carved bone with whorls etched into its surface, worn smooth by handling. He pressed it to the lock. The bone-white light flared. The lock gave a heavy clunk, and the gate swung inward. Beyond it, the station platform had vanished. In its place stretched a warren of stalls lit by lanterns burning green and gold, shadows moving between tables piled with bottled smoke, charms, and things Quinn's mind refused to name. The air throbbed with an energy that raised the fine hairs on her arms. Herrera glanced back over his shoulder, met her eyes across the landing, and stepped through. The gate began to swing shut. The guard on the stool turned to Quinn, a hand emerging from the coat, palm up, waiting. Quinn stood in the station's antechamber, rain dripping from her cropped hair onto the filthy tiles. Her chest rose and fell. She lifted her left wrist; the leather watch read 02:13. She pressed the radio clipped to her belt, but only a hiss of static answered. No signal. No backup. No bone token. Her jaw tightened until it ached. Three years ago, DS Morris had chased a suspect into a darkness like this one and never come back up. The file on her desk still bore the words 'unexplained circumstances', circled until the paper tore. She had never understood the shape of the thing that took her partner, but she knew the clique's hand guided it. Now Tomás Herrera, with his saint's medallion and his knife-scarred arm, stood beyond the gate, swallowed by a market that moved every full moon and sold what no human should own. The guard's hand remained outstretched. The gate hung ajar, the green-gold light spilling across the tiles, painting the wet concrete in colours that belonged to no neon sign. Quinn's hand dropped to her warrant card, then stilled. She thought of Morris, of the cold case file, of the way Herrera had clutched that medallion like a man already saying goodbye to the world above. The choice settled in her spine, hard and final. Harlow Quinn brushed the guard's reaching hand aside and followed Herrera into the Veil Market.
created_at"2026-09-03T16:24:55.961Z" 9/3/2026, 4:24:55 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags4
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences9
tagDensity0.444
leniency0.889
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1175
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
61.70% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1175
totalAiIsms9
found
0
word"clenching"
count1
1
word"gleaming"
count1
2
word"scanned"
count1
3
word"pounding"
count1
4
word"loomed"
count1
5
word"pulsed"
count1
6
word"echoing"
count1
7
word"etched"
count1
8
word"throbbed"
count1
highlights
0"clenching"
1"gleaming"
2"scanned"
3"pounding"
4"loomed"
5"pulsed"
6"echoing"
7"etched"
8"throbbed"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences88
matches(empty)
77.92% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount3
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences88
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences93
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen32
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1175
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions5
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions39
wordCount1113
uniqueNames13
maxNameDensity0.99
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Raven1
Nest2
Soho2
Harlow2
Quinn11
Herrera11
Saint1
Christopher1
Camden1
Market2
Morris2
Tomás2
Veil1
persons
0"Raven"
1"Nest"
2"Harlow"
3"Quinn"
4"Herrera"
5"Saint"
6"Christopher"
7"Market"
8"Morris"
9"Tomás"
places
0"Soho"
1"Veil"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences71
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1175
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences93
matches
0"clutched that medallion"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs29
mean40.52
std27.71
cv0.684
sampleLengths
0108
112
246
35
43
549
643
723
846
945
1016
117
1279
1384
1443
1526
1622
1773
1864
1941
2015
2167
2223
2353
2494
2528
2636
279
2815
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences88
matches
0"was plastered"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs194
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount2
semicolonCount8
flaggedSentences10
totalSentences93
ratio0.108
matches
0"She tilted her left wrist; the worn leather watch strap creaked, the face showing 01:47."
1"Contraband, extortion, worse—the file in her pocket tied them to all of it."
2"Heads turned from the doorway of the Nest; a couple under a shared umbrella twisted to look."
3"She cut around the corner, shoulder clipping a drunk tourist's umbrella; the man swore as the umbrella tumbled into the gutter, but she didn't break pace."
4"\"You think a licence matters now?\" Herrera knocked over a stack of empty crates outside a shuttered kebab shop; they clattered across the pavement, rolling into her path."
5"Its horn blared as Herrera darted in front of it; Quinn slapped the cab's bonnet as she passed, the metal cold and wet against her palm."
6"Ahead, a boarded-up staircase descended into the earth, flanked by a faded sign: CAMDEN TUBE STATION — NO ENTRY."
7"\"Last chance, Quinn.\" His fingers found the medallion again; he gripped it so hard the chain bit into his throat."
8"Rainwater and decades of grime made the steps slick; she caught the railing, cold iron under her palm, and took the descent two at a time."
9"She lifted her left wrist; the leather watch read 02:13."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount981
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"faint, bone-white light."
adverbCount17
adverbRatio0.017329255861365953
lyAdverbCount4
lyAdverbRatio0.004077471967380225
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences93
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences93
mean12.63
std7.48
cv0.592
sampleLengths
023
123
210
315
418
513
66
75
87
918
1020
118
125
133
1410
1517
165
1714
183
1910
207
2126
2219
234
2428
255
2613
2716
2823
296
308
318
323
334
3411
3520
3626
378
3814
393
4014
4115
4211
4319
4422
4511
4614
472
481
4915
58.06% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats11
diversityRatio0.41935483870967744
totalSentences93
uniqueOpeners39
80.32% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences83
matches
0"Then he ran."
1"Then he backed onto the"
ratio0.024
80.24% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount29
totalSentences83
matches
0"Her salt-and-pepper hair, cropped close,"
1"She tilted her left wrist;"
2"She had watched the door"
3"Her sharp jaw ached from"
4"He shrugged into a jacket,"
5"His fingers found the Saint"
6"He didn't see her in"
7"Her boots hit the wet"
8"He bolted down the narrow"
9"She cut around the corner,"
10"She vaulted them without slowing."
11"His sleeve rode up as"
12"He didn't answer."
13"He put on speed."
14"They left Soho's cramped alleys"
15"Its horn blared as Herrera"
16"Her chest heaved, but her"
17"He turned, rain plastering his"
18"She slowed, boots sliding on"
19"His fingers found the medallion"
ratio0.349
38.31% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount70
totalSentences83
matches
0"The green neon sign above"
1"Detective Harlow Quinn pressed herself"
2"Her salt-and-pepper hair, cropped close,"
3"She tilted her left wrist;"
4"She had watched the door"
5"Contraband, extortion, worse—the file in"
6"Her sharp jaw ached from"
7"A side door banged open."
8"Tomás Herrera stepped out into"
9"He shrugged into a jacket,"
10"His fingers found the Saint"
11"He didn't see her in"
12"Quinn pushed off the wall."
13"Her boots hit the wet"
14"Heads turned from the doorway"
15"Herrera's head snapped toward her."
16"He bolted down the narrow"
17"Quinn followed, military precision driving"
18"She cut around the corner,"
19"The words punched out between"
ratio0.843
60.24% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences83
matches
0"Now Tomás Herrera, with his"
ratio0.012
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences51
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"She had never understood the shape of the thing that took her partner, but she knew the clique's hand guided it."
1"Now Tomás Herrera, with his saint's medallion and his knife-scarred arm, stood beyond the gate, swallowed by a market that moved every full moon and sold what n…"
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags4
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"The words punched out, her breath burning in her chest"
38.89% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags1
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"she shouted (shout)"
dialogueSentences9
tagDensity0.111
leniency0.222
rawRatio1
effectiveRatio0.222
82.9898%