Run: 2026-09-03-01M1M1TW0FCGRNN8AA7C86V3GS

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Duration:
3m 31s
Cost:
$0.035360
Provider:
Tencent

Model input

System
You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Horror genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
I shouldn't have left the path. The Heartstone pulsed against my collarbone, a slow throb like a second heartbeat. Sweat glued the silver chain to the back of my neck. Somewhere behind me, the familiar dark of Richmond Park had folded shut like a fist, and the trees had stopped being trees. The note had slid under my door above Silas' bar an hour after my last delivery for Golden Empress, back when the clock still made sense. The delivery note held one line, in a hand I'd know anywhere. "Bring the stone. Midnight. Come alone." The corner of the paper gripped Eva's bracelet, a silver heart no bigger than my thumbnail. It matched the size of the pendant under my shirt, the deep crimson gemstone that had arrived in the post three weeks ago with no return address and a card that said only, "It will keep you safe." I lifted the grease-spotted white paper bag from Golden Empress. The bag held prawn crackers and a single portion of salt-and-pepper squid. Someone had paid in advance, in cash, with a tip the size of my weekly rent. I'd come for the money, and for Eva, and because the note had her handwriting and her bracelet and no explanation at all. Ahead, the ancient oak standing stones rose in a ragged circle, pale as bone in the dark. Wildflowers crowded their roots, little white blooms that shouldn't have been open at this hour, or in this cold. I crushed a handful under my shoe. The scent hit me at once, honeysuckle and rotting meat, sweet enough to make my eyes water. "Eva?" My voice came out smaller than I wanted. The dark swallowed it without an echo. I checked my phone. No signal. The screen's clock blinked from 23:58 to 00:01 between one step and the next, though I'd been walking for a good ten minutes. Time moved strangely in the Grove. Everyone knew that. An hour inside could be minutes outside, or days. I'd hoped for minutes. I'd hoped to dump the bag, grab Eva, and run. The Heartstone gave another pulse, warmer this time. Heat seeped through my shirt, into the small crescent-shaped scar on my left wrist as I brushed it. A childhood accident, Mum calling me in for supper, Dad's study smelling of pipe smoke. The memory came and went, sharp and unwelcome. The pendant only warmed near a Hel portal. I stopped dead. The Grove was Fae-touched, a hidden clearing in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm. Ancient oak standing stones marked the boundary, not gaping gates to the Norse underworld. Hel portals belonged in graveyards, in blood-soaked soil, in places the Fae themselves avoided. The stone shouldn't have been warm here. Something moved at the edge of my vision. I turned fast. The bag rustled. Nothing waited behind me. Only the wildflowers, their little white faces turned towards me. Every bloom in the clearing had swivelled on its stem, tracking me like eyes. My skin prickled. I told myself it was the wind, but the air was utterly still, hot and close as a held breath. A bicycle bell rang. The sound came from my left, bright and close, the ting-tang of a bell on a child's bike. My head snapped round. No path ran between these trees, no road for a bike, and no child should have been awake in the middle of Richmond Park at midnight. The bell rang again, softer, further off, then a third time from directly behind me. Ting-tang. Ting-tang. The pattern was wrong. The gap between the rings stretched too long, then snapped shut, like something testing the sound, learning the shape of it. My free hand found the pepper spray on my keyring. The canister felt pathetic, a plastic toy against whatever crouched in the dark. Then the wok clanged. The sharp metallic ring of Yu-Fei's kitchen, a thousand miles from any road, the sound of a spatula against steel. I'd stood in that kitchen a hundred times, heat blasting my cheeks, Yu-Fei shouting orders in Cantonese while I loaded thermal bags. The clang came again, closer, followed by the low murmur of a crowd. Voices. Dozens of them, layered over each other, speaking a language that slid away before I could catch a word. They sounded like they were standing right behind the nearest stone. I backed up. My heel caught on a root, and I staggered. The bag tore. Prawn crackers spilt across the wildflowers like broken bones. The little white blooms drank the grease and turned, slowly, towards the spill. "Eva, this isn't funny." No answer. The silence that followed pressed against my eardrums. Even the phantom crowd had stopped. I counted the standing stones. I'd passed seven on my way in, spaced evenly around the clearing, each one carved with spirals that hurt the eye if I looked too long. Now there were eight. The extra stone stood where the gap had been, the way I'd come, its bark wet and black, the spirals on its surface moving like slow water. I blinked. Still eight. My mouth went dry. The Heartstone burned. Not a faint warmth now, a steady heat that bit at my collarbone, the deep crimson gem glowing through my shirt like a fresh coal. A Hel portal. Here. In Isolde's Grove. "Who's there?" I aimed the pepper spray at the new stone, at the shifting spirals. "Show yourself." A shape unfolded from the shadow between two oaks. It moved wrong, too tall, its limbs bending at angles that made my gut churn. It stayed at the edge of the dark, just a suggestion of a figure, a smear of paler night. It lifted an arm, and the sleeve of a coat slid back to reveal a hand with too many joints. The fingers clicked together. Tick-tock, they went, a dry wooden sound. Tick-tock. My breath came short. I backed towards the centre of the circle, shoes slipping in the crushed wildflowers. The thing followed, matching me step for step, always just beyond the reach of my phone's torch. I hadn't turned the torch on. I didn't remember putting it away. "Eva?" The name broke in half. And from the dark ahead of me, clear as a bell, Eva's voice answered. "I'm here, Rory." Relief hit so hard my knees weakened. Then she stepped into the moonlight, and the relief curdled. Her straight shoulder-length black hair hung in wet ropes. Milk filmed her bright blue eyes. The smile she wore belonged on a corpse, stretched too wide, the lips cracked and black at the corners. Water pooled at her feet, though it hadn't rained in a week. "You shouldn't have brought it." The voice was Eva's. The cadence was wrong, every syllable laid out like a knife on a table. The thing wearing her face tilted its head. "He's been waiting so long for the stone." Behind her, the air between two ancient oak standing stones tore open. The rent in the world breathed out a cold that smelt of grave dirt and old copper. The wildflowers all turned at once, their little white faces pointing at the wound in the air. The Heartstone flared crimson, pulsing in time with the thing's tick-tock fingers, and every shadow in the Grove began to lengthen towards me. Eva's corpse-white hand reached for my chest. "Give it to me, Rory." The last of the light died as the shadows closed in, and I opened my mouth to scream.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags2
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences11
tagDensity0.182
leniency0.364
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
92.04% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1256
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"utterly"
count1
1
adverb"slowly"
count1
highlights
0"utterly"
1"slowly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
64.17% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1256
totalAiIsms9
found
0
word"pulsed"
count1
1
word"throb"
count1
2
word"familiar"
count1
3
word"echo"
count1
4
word"pulse"
count1
5
word"silence"
count1
6
word"warmth"
count1
7
word"churn"
count1
8
word"grave"
count1
highlights
0"pulsed"
1"throb"
2"familiar"
3"echo"
4"pulse"
5"silence"
6"warmth"
7"churn"
8"grave"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences112
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences112
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences122
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen38
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1256
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions3
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions35
wordCount1196
uniqueNames17
maxNameDensity0.5
worstName"Eva"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Eva"
discoveredNames
Heartstone4
Richmond2
Park2
Eva6
Golden1
Empress1
Grove4
Mum1
Dad1
Hel3
Fae-touched1
Earth1
Fae3
Norse1
Yu-Fei2
Cantonese1
Isolde1
persons
0"Heartstone"
1"Eva"
2"Mum"
3"Dad"
4"Fae"
5"Yu-Fei"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
2"Golden"
3"Grove"
4"Hel"
5"Norse"
6"Cantonese"
7"Isolde"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences79
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"sounded like they were standing right behi"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1256
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences122
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs49
mean25.63
std24
cv0.936
sampleLengths
06
146
238
36
454
561
660
71
815
961
1049
118
1254
138
1457
154
1663
171
181
1948
204
2186
2237
234
2416
255
2665
2735
282
2913
302
319
3258
338
3447
351
365
3714
383
3917
4046
415
4226
438
4412
4557
467
475
4818
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences112
matches
0"been open"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs177
matches
0"were standing"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences122
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount82
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount2
adverbRatio0.024390243902439025
lyAdverbCount0
lyAdverbRatio0
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences122
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences122
mean10.3
std7.37
cv0.716
sampleLengths
06
113
211
322
426
512
66
716
838
910
1012
1116
1223
1317
1419
157
1617
171
188
197
204
212
2223
236
243
259
264
2710
288
2918
3015
318
328
333
3416
3514
3614
377
388
393
403
414
4210
4314
443
4520
464
4718
484
4926
52.73% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats14
diversityRatio0.38524590163934425
totalSentences122
uniqueOpeners47
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount5
totalSentences103
matches
0"Somewhere behind me, the familiar"
1"Only the wildflowers, their little"
2"Then the wok clanged."
3"Even the phantom crowd had"
4"Then she stepped into the"
ratio0.049
99.61% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount31
totalSentences103
matches
0"I shouldn't have left the"
1"It matched the size of"
2"I lifted the grease-spotted white"
3"I'd come for the money,"
4"I crushed a handful under"
5"My voice came out smaller"
6"I checked my phone."
7"I'd hoped for minutes."
8"I'd hoped to dump the"
9"I stopped dead."
10"I turned fast."
11"My skin prickled."
12"I told myself it was"
13"My head snapped round."
14"My free hand found the"
15"I'd stood in that kitchen"
16"They sounded like they were"
17"I backed up."
18"My heel caught on a"
19"I counted the standing stones."
ratio0.301
23.11% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount90
totalSentences103
matches
0"I shouldn't have left the"
1"The Heartstone pulsed against my"
2"Sweat glued the silver chain"
3"The note had slid under"
4"The delivery note held one"
5"The corner of the paper"
6"It matched the size of"
7"I lifted the grease-spotted white"
8"The bag held prawn crackers"
9"Someone had paid in advance,"
10"I'd come for the money,"
11"Wildflowers crowded their roots, little"
12"I crushed a handful under"
13"The scent hit me at"
14"My voice came out smaller"
15"The dark swallowed it without"
16"I checked my phone."
17"The screen's clock blinked from"
18"Time moved strangely in the"
19"Everyone knew that."
ratio0.874
48.54% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences103
matches
0"Now there were eight."
ratio0.01
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences54
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"Wildflowers crowded their roots, little white blooms that shouldn't have been open at this hour, or in this cold."
1"A childhood accident, Mum calling me in for supper, Dad's study smelling of pipe smoke."
2"It moved wrong, too tall, its limbs bending at angles that made my gut churn."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags2
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
92.6735%