Run: 2026-09-03-01M1M21ZVQC7W5GAKEAS21YBNR

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3m 31s
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$0.032732
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You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Romance genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The door cracked before the last knock died. "Rory. Pack light. I owe you." Her flat key bit her palm. She had seen him through the peephole, tall in a charcoal suit, platinum hair slicked back, an ivory cane propped against the frame. A thin red line stained the side of his jacket. "Lucien." "Inside." "I don't open doors for you." "Then you can watch them take your flat." He nodded at the corridor. A shadow moved beyond the frosted window. It had no shape, only a hunger. "I brought a warning, not a courtship." Her thumb found the chain. The deadbolt slid. The door opened. Black pepper hit her first, then iron, then the hot sweet smell under his tongue. "Step inside." She held his face in the light. One eye burned amber. The other held a dark, still depth, like a hole in a mirror. "You smell like a funeral." "Mine. Scheduled." She stepped back, not far enough to make a welcome. He entered, and the cane tapped once on the boards. Below, the bar let out a low thump, then a glass rattled in a rack. Silas would be pouring. "A word." "Your word broke me first." His jaw tightened. "My word is a knife. I kept the blade from you." "By hiding Evan." The name hit the counter between them. She turned to the sink. Her wrist ached where the crescent scar rode under her cuff. "I saw the file. Avaros seal. You sold my location to your father." "I sold my debt." "To my blood?" His fingers closed on the cane. The ivory handle gleamed under the bare bulb. "Your father sent me first." "My father?" "A barrister who learned his daughter could not sleep with the lights on. He paid me to keep you alive. Evan paid me to bring you back. I chose your life and kept your name clean." "And Evan?" "He is not dead." A wine glass left her hand. It shattered on the tiles. She lunged, and her fingers scrabbled at the cut side of his suit. Red spread across her knuckles. Lucien caught her wrist. "Careful. I am bleeding." "Good." "Evan is in Avaros. He has a debt. Your scar is the mark." "You are not telling me the truth." "I am telling you enough. The rest will bleed out of you if you stay here." The corridor outside groaned. The shadow at the window pressed close. A hand of black smoke moved over the glass, then withdrew. "He is here." "He was never here." She wiped her blood on her jeans. "You lied to me." "I gave you a lie that kept you breathing." "You had no right." "No. I had no right. That is the trouble." His hand found her jaw. His thumb brushed the scar. The mark flared, hot and blue under her skin. Her vision stuttered. For one second, she smelled wet stone, heard a bell with no source, and felt a pull so hard her teeth ached. Lucien let go. "Your mark answers Avaros. It has answered since you were small. Your parents called it glass. Glass does not leave crescents." "Stay away from me." "I will not." The corridor door at the end of the hall slammed. Not against the frame, into it. Wood split. The flat around them shuddered. The bar below fell silent, as if Silas had stopped breathing. "Run." "No." "Then choose: run, or become the thing that opens your door." She looked at the split wood. She looked at his hand, still raised, still shaking a little, though he would never call it a tremor. "Eva." "Brick Lane. My address. We go now, or we do not go at all." The door frame caught fire. Not orange, but a pale blue that ate the wallpaper without heat. He took her hand. His grip closed like a lock. They went down through the bar, but the bar was empty. The stools had turned their backs to them. The jukebox hummed a tune with no notes, and the glasses behind the counter rolled in slow lines, all facing the street door. Silas stood with his back to them, wiping the same spot on the bar over and over. "Keep moving," Lucien said. Silas did not turn. "You are either very brave or very stupid." "Both." Lucien put a black card under the beer glass. "Keep the change. Do not open for Evan." "Who else?" "A debt. One with fangs." Silas nodded once. He was not a man who asked twice. The street door stood open. Brick Lane pressed close beyond it, the lane a throat of brick, glass, and shuttered fronts. A curry house sign bled red light over the road. The air held curry, diesel, and the sharp bite of a nearby chemist. A kebab van idled with its grill on, the smell thick and brown. Somewhere, a dog barked, then stopped. Aurora walked fast. Her hand did not leave his. "Your flat?" she said. "Too close to the bar. Too close to the mark's first address." "My first address?" "The place you were born. The scar was cut there." "My mother said a shelf fell." "Shelves fall straight. They do not cut in curves." A black car rolled past them on the far side of the lane. It had no plates. The windows held nothing but a depth that moved like water. Aurora stopped. "Do not stop." "I am not afraid of a car." "It is not a car." The car passed. The streetlight above them bent toward it, then straightened, wrong by a degree. They walked faster. The lane narrowed at the corner, past a corner shop with a broken door and a shelf of newspapers stacked in neat piles. A neighbour, still in a bathrobe, pulled his curtain back an inch. He saw Lucien and let the curtain drop. "Good," Aurora said. "London knows what to do with the devil." "That is not my title." "Close enough." Eva's curry house sat in the middle of the lane, its sign a smear of yellow and green. The smell hit them before the door did: garam masala, charred onion, and the warm bread of something baking below. A tabby cat sat on the low step, one eye half shut, watching the street with an old soul's patience. "Cat," Aurora said. "Ptolemy. He knows me. That is the only reason I keep the flat." The door to the building was heavy wood, painted dark green, and the step was worn to a shallow bowl by feet. The stairwell smelled of curry powder and old paint. Ptolemy followed them up, his tail low, his throat working in short, silent bursts. Eva's flat held three deadbolts on the front door, each one brass, each one scratched by years of keys. The key in Aurora's hand went to the first. The second took a harder pull. The third bit the keyhole, then gave. Inside, the flat was a one-bedroom mess of books, scrolls, and research notes. Pages lay open on the kitchen table. A lamp stood over a stack of maps. The air smelled of tea gone cold and ink. Eva sat at the table, her chin in one hand, a red pen between her fingers. She looked up. "Rory," she said. "You have blood on your knuckles." Lucien stepped inside behind her. Ptolemy hissed, then left the room, tail straight up. Eva's eyes moved to his face, then to the pale blue stain spreading across the flat's walls. "You brought a problem into my house." "He brought me," Aurora said. Eva stood. "I know who that is. I know what he does. I also know what he cost you." "Tell me something I do not know," Lucien said. "Your father is dead." The flat went still. The tea in the pot rattled in the cup. Aurora's hand went to her throat. "When." "Three days. Heart failure, the paper said. Your mother says it was his knees. She does not believe her own words." Eva picked up a folded page from the table. "I have been waiting for this letter. It was not addressed to you." "Give it to me." "No. Not yet." Eva met her eyes. "If you take that letter, they will find you by morning." "They are here now." Eva's gaze dropped to the door. The three deadbolts turned. Aurora moved toward the table. The page slid under the lamp, and the words on it rose from the paper in thin black lines, then curled into the air like smoke. Lucien drove the cane into the floor. A blade flashed out from the ivory handle, thin as a needle, cold as a held breath. "Do not touch the paper," he said. Eva pushed the table away. "I did not touch it." The door opened. The hall outside was black, and the black had teeth. Evan stood in it. He wore a dark coat. His hands hung loose at his sides. He smiled, and the smile did not reach his eyes. "Found her," he said. Aurora's wrist burned where the crescent scar sat. Evan raised one hand and closed it around her wrist.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags14
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences78
tagDensity0.179
leniency0.359
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
93.47% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1532
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"very"
count2
highlights
0"very"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
96.74% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1532
totalAiIsms1
found
0
word"shattered"
count1
highlights
0"shattered"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences125
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences125
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences189
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen36
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1532
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions17
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
50.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions32
wordCount1047
uniqueNames5
maxNameDensity0.86
worstName"Eva"
maxWindowNameDensity3.5
worstWindowName"Eva"
discoveredNames
Silas5
Lane1
Lucien8
Eva9
Aurora9
persons
0"Silas"
1"Lucien"
2"Eva"
3"Aurora"
places
0"Lane"
globalScore1
windowScore0.5
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences77
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.653
wordCount1532
matches
0"Not orange, but a pale blue"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences189
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
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mean13.32
std13.66
cv1.025
sampleLengths
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31
41
56
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711
815
92
1024
115
122
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142
155
1614
173
1823
1913
204
213
2214
235
242
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262
274
2829
294
304
311
3213
337
3416
3522
363
3715
389
394
409
4144
423
4321
444
453
4634
471
481
4911
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences125
matches
0"was worn"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs175
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences189
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1048
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount33
adverbRatio0.03148854961832061
lyAdverbCount1
lyAdverbRatio0.0009541984732824427
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences189
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences189
mean8.11
std5.84
cv0.72
sampleLengths
08
16
26
323
410
51
61
76
813
97
107
117
125
133
143
1515
162
177
184
1913
205
212
2210
2310
2415
254
262
275
283
2911
303
317
325
3311
3413
354
363
376
388
395
402
4136
422
434
446
455
4613
475
484
494
42.86% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats14
diversityRatio0.30158730158730157
totalSentences189
uniqueOpeners57
29.50% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences113
matches
0"Somewhere, a dog barked, then"
ratio0.009
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount32
totalSentences113
matches
0"Her flat key bit her"
1"She had seen him through"
2"He nodded at the corridor"
3"It had no shape, only"
4"Her thumb found the chain."
5"She held his face in"
6"She stepped back, not far"
7"He entered, and the cane"
8"His jaw tightened."
9"She turned to the sink."
10"Her wrist ached where the"
11"His fingers closed on the"
12"It shattered on the tiles."
13"She lunged, and her fingers"
14"She wiped her blood on"
15"His hand found her jaw."
16"His thumb brushed the scar."
17"Her vision stuttered."
18"She looked at the split"
19"She looked at his hand,"
ratio0.283
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount104
totalSentences113
matches
0"The door cracked before the"
1"Her flat key bit her"
2"She had seen him through"
3"A thin red line stained"
4"He nodded at the corridor"
5"A shadow moved beyond the"
6"It had no shape, only"
7"Her thumb found the chain."
8"The deadbolt slid."
9"The door opened."
10"She held his face in"
11"The other held a dark,"
12"She stepped back, not far"
13"He entered, and the cane"
14"Silas would be pouring."
15"His jaw tightened."
16"The name hit the counter"
17"She turned to the sink."
18"Her wrist ached where the"
19"His fingers closed on the"
ratio0.92
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences113
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences41
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"The bar below fell silent, as if Silas had stopped breathing."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags14
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags9
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences78
tagDensity0.115
leniency0.231
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
87.0855%