Run: 2026-09-03-01M1M2J06KE6M8FDYFCTKYAM18

Run Details

Duration:
4m 33s
Cost:
$0.044530
Provider:
Tencent

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The green neon sign above the door of The Raven's Nest buzzed like a wasp caught in a jar. Rain slicked the Soho pavement outside, smearing the reflection into something that moved when nothing did. Aurora pushed through the door with a thermal bag from Golden Empress steaming against her hip. The dim swallowed her. Inside, the air held old paper, beeswax polish, and the sour tang of spilled beer. Maps curled on the walls: coastlines, city grids, borders drawn in ink and redrawn in pencil. Black-and-white photographs watched from the shadows, men in trench coats caught mid-stride on streets that no longer existed. She shook rain from her hair. Her bright blue eyes adjusted to the dim. Her left wrist caught the light, the crescent scar white against her skin. She wore her delivery jacket, the golden empress embroidered over her heart, and her boots left wet prints on the floorboards. Silas Blackwood stood behind the bar. He polished a glass in slow circles, the silver signet ring on his right hand ticking against the crystal. He shifted his weight, and his left leg dragged a fraction. Grey streaked the auburn at his temples. A beard, trimmed close, covered a jaw she remembered as clean-shaven. Hazel eyes lifted from the glass and stopped on her face. She set the bag on the polished wood. "Delivery. Name says Silas." He stilled. The glass paused mid-wipe. He lowered it to the bar without a sound. "Aurora." The name landed wrong. She felt the flinch start in her shoulders and killed it. "Rory." His voice dropped the way a man drops a weight he'd carried too long. "You're the tenant upstairs." She glanced at the ceiling, at the floorboards that separated the bar from the flat she'd moved into three weeks ago. Eva had handed her the keys with a smile and a warning: the landlord's away, don't wreck the place. "Eva didn't say the landlord was you. She said the owner was abroad." "Prague." He came around the bar, each step announcing the limp. He stopped a metre away, close enough that she saw the lines fanning from his eyes and the darker grief under them. "Tying off loose ends. The knee flared. I came back early." "You're limping." "I notice." He tapped the signet ring against the bar. "The bullet missed everything important. It caught the stairwell on the way out." She let the bag sit between them. The smell of sweet and sour pork and fried rice seeped into the beer-and-wax air. "Last time I saw you, I was eighteen." Her hands stayed flat on the wood. "You came to the house in Cardiff. You and Dad argued on the driveway for an hour. He said you were dragging me into something. You said he was burying me in statute until I forgot my own name." "I remember the law books." He poured a measure of something amber and slid the glass toward her. She didn't touch it. "You were going to be a barrister. Your mother had the speech written." "I finished the degree." He waited. "Then I didn't do anything with it." The silence stretched. Outside, a bus hissed past. Somewhere behind the bookshelf, a clock marked the hour with a sound like a swallowed cough. "Evan?" Her hand moved to her left wrist, fingers covering the crescent scar. She hadn't meant to do it. She saw him see it. "Eva talks too much." "Eva talks enough to keep you breathing." He picked up a fresh glass and resumed polishing, though the first one still sat untouched. "She told me you left Cardiff. She didn't tell me why you came to London." "I came because Eva said the rent was cheap and the curry was good." "Rory." The name again. She looked at him. The neon turned his hazel eyes into something feral and green. "Evan's in Cardiff." She gripped the bar. "I'm in London. That's the whole story." "That's the story you tell the police if they ask." He set the glass down. "Say the one you tell at three in the morning." "I don't drink at three in the morning." "Everyone drinks at three in the morning. Some just use a different glass." Her fingers tightened on the wood. It was smooth, worn by decades of elbows and secrets. "You vanished." The words came out flat, a statement dropped on the counter between them. "One day you were at the house, arguing with Dad. The next day you were gone. No letters. No calls. You sent a key to a flat in Soho and let Eva play estate agent." "I vanished because ghosts don't send Christmas cards." He leaned his weight on his good leg. "I was hunting a man who'd already died in a Prague morgue. I chased him across three countries while your father was still shouting at me over the phone. I told him I'd watch out for you. I told him I had a lead." "You had a limp." "I have a bar." He looked at the maps, the photographs, the green neon reflected in the optics behind him. "I came back and bought this place because a man with a limp can't run, but he can pour a drink and listen to the people who can." She closed her fingers on the glass. The amber caught the light. She didn't drink. "You kept the maps." "Old spooks map rooms. You learn the exits or you learn the hard way." "You sound like a barman." "I am a barman." The signet ring ticked against the bar. "Same trade, different poison." She thought of the flat upstairs, the single bed, the box of law textbooks she hadn't opened since arriving. She thought of the crescent scar, the way Evan's hand had closed around that same wrist, the way the glass had felt under her skin at nine years old. "You remember the greenhouse." He didn't pretend otherwise. "You were nine. You fell through the glass reaching for a beef tomato. Your father drove like a man possessed. You didn't cry. You watched the blood and asked if the tomato was okay." "It was a beef tomato. It survived." "You always did care about the wrong things." "I cared about you." The words sat between them, ugly and true. "You were the only one who didn't treat me like a daughter or a student. You treated me like a person who might have a plan. Then you left." He stopped polishing. The rag hung from his right hand, the silver ring catching the neon. "I know." He didn't look away. "I came back to a city that had moved on and a flat above a bar that needed a tenant. Eva said the girl's name was Aurora Carter. I didn't connect it. I hadn't seen you in seven years. You were a law student with a bright future and a laugh you didn't bother hiding. Then you walked in out of the rain with a Chinese takeaway and a scar on your wrist and eyes that had learned to check the exits." "The girl's still in there somewhere." "Are you looking for her?" "I'm delivering food in the rain, Silas. That's not looking. That's running." "From him?" "From the person I was when I let it happen." He absorbed that. The clock behind the bookshelf coughed again. A couple in the corner shrugged into their coats and left, their umbrellas dripping a trail to the door. The door opened. A group of tourists stumbled in, shaking coats, laughing too loud. Silas glanced past her, then back. "You're working." "Always." He pushed the bag an inch toward her. "That's your delivery. Tell Yu-Fei the prawn crackers are a bribe. She likes the maps." "She says your maps remind her of places she'll never go." "She says that to everyone." He picked up the untouched glass and set it in the sink. "Come down tomorrow. Not for the key. For a drink you don't have to carry through the rain." She shouldered the bag. The strap pressed against her delivery jacket. At the door, she turned back. He had already picked up another glass. The rag moved in slow circles. The signet ring ticked. The neon buzzed. The map of Prague behind him curled at one corner, a pin still sunk into a street she couldn't read from here. "I'll be here." He did not look up. She stepped into the rain. The door swung shut on the green light, the maps, and the sound of a glass being polished that had never once stopped.
created_at"2026-09-03T16:45:12.795Z" 9/3/2026, 4:45:12 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags9
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences60
tagDensity0.15
leniency0.3
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1440
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
82.64% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1440
totalAiIsms5
found
0
word"crystal"
count1
1
word"weight"
count3
2
word"silence"
count1
highlights
0"crystal"
1"weight"
2"silence"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences82
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences82
filterMatches
0"see"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences133
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen82
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1440
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions15
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions8
wordCount803
uniqueNames8
maxNameDensity0.12
worstName"Raven"
maxWindowNameDensity0
worstWindowName(null)
discoveredNames
Raven1
Nest1
Soho1
Golden1
Empress1
Blackwood1
Evan1
Prague1
persons
0"Raven"
1"Nest"
2"Empress"
3"Blackwood"
4"Evan"
places
0"Soho"
1"Golden"
2"Prague"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences57
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1440
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences133
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs81
mean17.78
std19.64
cv1.105
sampleLengths
0104
148
265
38
44
515
61
715
81
914
104
1140
1213
1344
142
152
168
1713
1822
1954
205
2117
2213
234
242
257
2624
271
2823
294
3038
3114
321
3318
343
354
367
3725
388
3913
4016
412
4213
4335
4460
454
4648
4715
484
4914
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences82
matches
0"being polished"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs139
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences133
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount810
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount20
adverbRatio0.024691358024691357
lyAdverbCount1
lyAdverbRatio0.0012345679012345679
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences133
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences133
mean10.83
std10.17
cv0.939
sampleLengths
019
116
216
34
415
516
618
76
88
913
1021
116
1219
1311
147
1511
1611
178
184
192
204
219
221
234
2411
251
2614
274
2821
2919
3013
3111
3222
3311
342
352
368
3713
387
3915
4015
4139
425
4313
444
4513
464
472
487
493
39.47% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats14
diversityRatio0.2857142857142857
totalSentences133
uniqueOpeners38
41.67% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences80
matches
0"Somewhere behind the bookshelf, a"
ratio0.013
5.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount43
totalSentences80
matches
0"She shook rain from her"
1"Her bright blue eyes adjusted"
2"Her left wrist caught the"
3"She wore her delivery jacket,"
4"He polished a glass in"
5"He shifted his weight, and"
6"She set the bag on"
7"He lowered it to the"
8"She felt the flinch start"
9"His voice dropped the way"
10"She glanced at the ceiling,"
11"He came around the bar,"
12"He stopped a metre away,"
13"He tapped the signet ring"
14"She let the bag sit"
15"Her hands stayed flat on"
16"He poured a measure of"
17"She didn't touch it."
18"Her hand moved to her"
19"She hadn't meant to do"
ratio0.538
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount74
totalSentences80
matches
0"The green neon sign above"
1"Rain slicked the Soho pavement"
2"Aurora pushed through the door"
3"The dim swallowed her."
4"Maps curled on the walls:"
5"She shook rain from her"
6"Her bright blue eyes adjusted"
7"Her left wrist caught the"
8"She wore her delivery jacket,"
9"Silas Blackwood stood behind the"
10"He polished a glass in"
11"He shifted his weight, and"
12"A beard, trimmed close, covered"
13"Hazel eyes lifted from the"
14"She set the bag on"
15"The glass paused mid-wipe."
16"He lowered it to the"
17"The name landed wrong."
18"She felt the flinch start"
19"His voice dropped the way"
ratio0.925
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences80
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences31
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"Rain slicked the Soho pavement outside, smearing the reflection into something that moved when nothing did."
69.44% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags9
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"He came around, each step announcing the limp"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
84.6075%