Run: 2026-09-10-01M25DCS0W3X5BEKKMVMT0FP6F

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28.6s
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$0.002603
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DeepSeek

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You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

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The chain caught on the third deadbolt and the door opened exactly six inches. Rain in the gap. Wet slate and exhaust from Brick Lane, and beneath both the curry house breathing cumin up through the floorboards. Then the other smell — cedar and cold iron — and her body recognised it before her brain would consent to. Lucien Moreau stood on the landing with his collar turned up and his ivory-handled cane hooked over one forearm, platinum hair flattened dark at the temples. Rain beaded along the shoulders of a charcoal suit worth more than her month's rent. His eyes stayed level with hers: one amber and catching the stairwell bulb, one black and swallowing it whole. "You told me not to come," he said. Rory put her weight against the door. "I remember." "May I —" "No." "Rory." "Don't." The way he said it, the soft French roll in the back of it, like he'd been saving it for the length of a street and a flight of stairs. She leaned her forehead against the door's edge and listened to herself breathe, and to the drip of him onto the landing lino, and to Ptolemy, who had come out from under the radiator to investigate, because of course he had. The tabby shoved a paw into the six-inch gap. Rory got a foot in front of him and scooped him up against her chest, where he set up a racket. "You have a cat now," Lucien said. "It isn't mine. It's Eva's." "Is Eva in?" "No." "Then I'm speaking to the cat," he said, gravely, "which is more than I deserve. Bonsoir, chat." Ptolemy, treacherous animal, purred. From below came the scrape of a chair and the shout of a delivery boy and the back door banging. The stairwell was shared with four flats and Mistress Ahad on the ground floor, who took a dim view of everything, and the rain was coming in sideways now, and he was dripping on the mat she'd bought with her own money from a shop on Hanbury Street. She stepped back. "Two minutes." "Two minutes," he agreed. "Wipe your feet." He wiped his feet. He leaned the cane in the corner beside the door, and it made a small precise sound against the plasterboard, like a full stop. Then he took off his coat and hung it on the hook anyway, as though he'd been given three hours, and stood in the middle of Eva's flat looking at the ruin of it: books in towers, scrolls furled and labelled, Eva's cramped copperplate pinned to every available surface, cold tea in a mug with a chipped rim, the Golden Empress jacket slung over the back of a chair with the little gold dragon on the breast. "You're delivering food," he said. "Part time." "Yu-Fei Cheung." "Don't." She set Ptolemy down. "Don't do that. Don't do the thing where you know everything." "I delivered a parcel of my own to the Golden Empress last week and Yu-Fei told me a girl had come back to work there in September. That's not intelligence. That's gossip." "It's you doing the thing." He was quiet for a moment, and his hands — she watched them, because watching his hands was safer than his face — found his cufflinks and turned them the way he did when he was being careful about what he said next. "I'll do the thing," he said. "There isn't a version of this where I don't. But you should hear it before you throw me back down the stairs." She boiled water because her hands wanted work. The kettle was Eva's, the mug was Eva's, the tea was a cheap own-brand that Lucien would have opinions about and had the grace not to voice. Rain ran down the window in the front room, and the neon off a shop sign threw red into the puddles on the sill. "Four months," she said. "Four months and eleven days." "Don't." "I didn't count. It counted itself." She set the mug down too hard. Tea jumped the rim. "Someone came to see me on Tuesday," Lucien said. "Two someones. That's my two minutes and then I'm going." He didn't move. "A woman knows a name. She came from Avaros and she went back to it, and she was asking about a Malphora." The word sat in the room. Rory looked at the tea. "That isn't a name I use." "Someone's using it." "Then someone has a problem, and it isn't mine." "Rory." He said it softly and it still went through her like the point of a pin. "She had a description. Height, colouring, the scar on the left wrist." He wasn't looking at her wrist. He was looking at the carpet, which was worse. "She had it from a list. A list of people who've been seen with me." The radiator ticked. Ptolemy wound once around Lucien's ankle and abandoned him for the sofa. "And what did you tell her," Rory said, "this time." There it was. She watched it land. He accepted it the way he accepted everything, which was without flinching and without any of the noise a person was owed. "Nothing," he said. "But I know how that sounds." "It sounds like the last time you said nothing, and then you gave a man Eva's address." "That's fair." "It's not fair. Fair would be one of us getting to be wrong." He had gone very still. Out on Brick Lane a taxi sloshed past, and somewhere down the street a door banged. "Four months ago," he said, "a man from my father's house held a lien on me. You knew that. What you didn't know — what I should have told you at a table in your kitchen, and instead I made jokes about the wallpaper and went home — is that he called it in. He wanted something he could sell, and I had something. I gave him the address of a flat above a curry house." Rory's mouth was dry. "Why." "Because he'd have taken it off me anyway, and I wanted the other thing he was holding kept." "What other thing." "You," he said. "In a manner of speaking. He wanted to know who I was fond of. I gave him a place instead of a person, and I told myself that was very clever, and it wasn't. It was cheap and it was mine, and you had four deadbolts, and you never found out, because nothing happened." His eyes came up then. "Until you found out anyway. And then you were gone in the morning, and the tea was still hot, and I stood in that room for a long time." The tea was going cold now. She hadn't touched it. "I would have stayed," Rory said. Her voice came out thin, and she hated it. "If you'd asked me, that night, at the table, I would have stayed. I would have stayed because you'd have asked. And I've spent a lot of my life staying where someone asked me to." Her left wrist ached. It always did when she thought about it. The little crescent of a scar, a childhood fall off a wall in Cardiff, and the man after that who'd never touched her face but always her wrist. "Evan taught me that. He didn't have to lock the door. He just had to need me." Lucien looked at her properly for the first time since the doorway. "I know," he said. "You don't." "I know the shape of it. You told me about Cardiff once, in the restaurant, and then you took it back, and I have thought about the taking-back more than the telling." He picked up his mug, more for something to do than to drink. "I didn't come here to be forgiven. I came to say the name Malphora out loud in a room with you in it, so that when it comes to your door it isn't a surprise. That's all." "Two minutes," Rory said. "Two minutes are up." He set the mug down but didn't move toward his coat, and she didn't move either. "I'll go." "Sit down." He looked at her. "Sit down," she said, "before I change my mind and come to my senses, which I've been told is a thing that happens at my age." She crossed to the door and put her hand on the third deadbolt, the top one, the one that stuck and needed a shoulder behind it, and threw it home. Then the second. Then the first. Lucien's face did something she'd never watched it do. It went unguarded, briefly, like a man who'd walked into a warm room from the cold and had to remember how his jaw worked. "That's not to keep you in," Rory said, sitting down on the other end of Eva's dreadful sofa. "It's habit." "I know," he said. He left his coat on the hook. He took the chair by the lamp, where he could see her, and he turned his cufflinks once, slowly, and did not do the thing. Ptolemy, deciding the matter for both of them, climbed into the Frenchman's lap and went to sleep.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags26
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences64
tagDensity0.406
leniency0.813
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
86.97% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1535
totalAiIsmAdverbs4
found
0
adverb"softly"
count1
1
adverb"very"
count2
2
adverb"slowly"
count1
highlights
0"softly"
1"very"
2"slowly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
93.49% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1535
totalAiIsms2
found
0
word"weight"
count1
1
word"treacherous"
count1
highlights
0"weight"
1"treacherous"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences76
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences76
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences113
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen77
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1541
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions29
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions42
wordCount911
uniqueNames17
maxNameDensity0.88
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Brick2
Lane2
Moreau1
Rory8
French1
Ptolemy5
Mistress1
Ahad1
Hanbury1
Street1
Eva5
Golden1
Empress1
Lucien7
Cardiff1
Frenchman1
Rain3
persons
0"Moreau"
1"Rory"
2"French"
3"Eva"
4"Lucien"
5"Rain"
places
0"Brick"
1"Lane"
2"Hanbury"
3"Street"
4"Cardiff"
5"Frenchman"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences41
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1541
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences113
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs69
mean22.33
std26.76
cv1.198
sampleLengths
014
144
260
38
49
53
61
71
872
930
107
115
123
131
1417
154
1668
175
184
193
20105
215
222
232
2416
2532
265
2743
2828
2959
304
315
321
336
3411
3544
3611
376
383
399
4059
4115
4210
4329
449
4517
462
4713
4821
4976
96.03% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences76
matches
0"been given"
1"was owed"
0.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount6
totalVerbs157
matches
0"was coming"
1"was dripping"
2"was being"
3"wasn't looking"
4"was looking"
5"was going"
92.29% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount4
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences2
totalSentences113
ratio0.018
matches
0"Then the other smell — cedar and cold iron — and her body recognised it before her brain would consent to."
1"He was quiet for a moment, and his hands — she watched them, because watching his hands was safer than his face — found his cufflinks and turned them the way he did when he was being careful about what he said next."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount626
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount20
adverbRatio0.03194888178913738
lyAdverbCount1
lyAdverbRatio0.001597444089456869
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences113
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences113
mean13.64
std14.91
cv1.093
sampleLengths
014
14
219
321
426
515
619
78
87
92
103
111
121
1331
1441
159
1621
177
185
193
201
2117
224
2320
2448
253
262
274
283
294
3024
3177
325
332
342
355
3611
3732
385
3943
406
4122
428
4327
4424
454
465
471
486
497
53.39% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats8
diversityRatio0.36283185840707965
totalSentences113
uniqueOpeners41
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount4
totalSentences61
matches
0"Then the other smell —"
1"Then he took off his"
2"Then the second."
3"Then the first."
ratio0.066
29.84% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount29
totalSentences61
matches
0"His eyes stayed level with"
1"She leaned her forehead against"
2"he said, gravely"
3"She stepped back."
4"He wiped his feet."
5"He leaned the cane in"
6"She set Ptolemy down"
7"He was quiet for a"
8"She boiled water because her"
9"She set the mug down"
10"He didn't move"
11"He said it softly and"
12"He wasn't looking at her"
13"He was looking at the"
14"She watched it land."
15"He accepted it the way"
16"He had gone very still."
17"His eyes came up then"
18"She hadn't touched it."
19"Her voice came out thin,"
ratio0.475
33.77% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount52
totalSentences61
matches
0"The chain caught on the"
1"Lucien Moreau stood on the"
2"Rain beaded along the shoulders"
3"His eyes stayed level with"
4"Rory put her weight against"
5"The way he said it,"
6"She leaned her forehead against"
7"The tabby shoved a paw"
8"Rory got a foot in"
9"he said, gravely"
10"Ptolemy, treacherous animal, purred."
11"The stairwell was shared with"
12"She stepped back."
13"He wiped his feet."
14"He leaned the cane in"
15"She set Ptolemy down"
16"He was quiet for a"
17"She boiled water because her"
18"The kettle was Eva's, the"
19"Rain ran down the window"
ratio0.852
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences61
matches(empty)
ratio0
83.33% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences24
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"The stairwell was shared with four flats and Mistress Ahad on the ground floor, who took a dim view of everything, and the rain was coming in sideways now, and …"
1"Then he took off his coat and hung it on the hook anyway, as though he'd been given three hours, and stood in the middle of Eva's flat looking at the ruin of it…"
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags26
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"he said, gravely,"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags20
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"he agreed (agree)"
dialogueSentences64
tagDensity0.313
leniency0.625
rawRatio0.05
effectiveRatio0.031
85.6369%