Run: 2026-09-10-01M25DCS0YDN6DH4Q20P10NMV5

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Duration:
15.1s
Cost:
$0.001490
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DeepSeek

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You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The oak standing stones rose from the earth like the ribs of some long-dead giant. Rory counted seven of them, each twice her height, their surfaces worn smooth by centuries of wind and rain. A faint luminescence clung to the moss that crept up their bases, glowing a soft, spectral green in the perpetual twilight of the grove. "Stay close," Isolde murmured, her bare feet silent on the grass. She left no footprints. Rory had noticed that at the park's edge, and the sight of it now sent a prickle down her spine. "The grove remembers those who wander. It does not always give them back." Nyx drifted at the rear, their form little more than a smudge of darkness against the deepening shadows between the trees. Only their eyes held any colour — that faint violet glow, fixed ahead with an intensity Rory had come to recognise as caution. "Reassuring," Rory muttered. The Heartstone pendant lay warm against her chest, a steady pulse that quickened with each step they took past the boundary stones. "You feel it too," Isolde said. It wasn't a question. "Like walking into a dream that doesn't want me here." Beyond the stones, the world changed. The air grew thick and heady with the scent of honeysuckle and crushed mint, so potent Rory could taste it at the back of her throat. Wildflowers carpeted the clearing — foxgloves taller than her waist, roses the colour of spilled wine, orchids that seemed to watch her with their dark, speckled centres. They bloomed in impossible abundance. Isolde had told her once that time moved differently here. An hour inside could be minutes or days outside. Rory believed it now. A sound reached her. Not birdsong — something older. A low, resonant hum that came from everywhere and nowhere, like the grove itself was breathing. "Listen," Nyx whispered, their voice carrying on the air like wind through dry leaves. "The veil is thin here. You can hear the other side." Rory tilted her head. Beneath the hum, she caught fragments — distant laughter, the clink of glass, a melody played on an instrument she didn't recognise. It smelled of roasted meat and honeyed wine. Her stomach growled despite the knot of unease in her gut. "Dymas," Isolde said. "Gluttony bleeds through. The barriers between realms grow weak in this place." "Weak enough to walk through?" Isolde's pale lavender eyes met hers. "For some." They moved deeper. The trees closed in behind them — not hostile, but watchful. Rory felt the weight of unseen gazes on her skin, the sensation of being measured. She kept her hand near her jacket, where the Fae blade rested in its sheath, cold and reassuring. Isolde had given it to her three days ago, wrapped in silk and sealed with wax. "Only draw it if you intend to bleed something," Isolde had warned. "The blade has a will of its own." The grove opened abruptly into a space that shouldn't have existed. A pool of water — perfectly circular, its surface like black glass — dominated the clearing. Above it, suspended in the air with no visible support, hung dozens of stones. Each one hovered and rotated in place, carved with symbols that glowed faintly gold. Their slow orbit created a shifting pattern of light across the water, constellations forming and dissolving with every rotation. Rory stopped walking. "What is this place?" "A crossroads," Nyx said. They had solidified now, their form sharpening into something almost human. "Between what was and what could be." Isolde circled the pool, her silver hair catching the light of the floating stones. She reached out and touched one. It spun faster, its glow intensifying. Images rippled across the water's surface — faster than Rory could follow. A city burning. A crown falling. A hand reaching through darkness. She saw her own face, older, gaunt, with eyes that held no light. "Isolde." Rory's voice came out sharp. "What am I looking at?" "Possibilities." The half-fae withdrew her hand, and the stone resumed its slow rotation. "The pool shows what waits. Not what must be." "Then it's useless." Rory turned away. Her scarred wrist throbbed — the old ache that came when the Veil was near. "Show me something I can use." The words had barely left her mouth when the water rippled. Not from the stones — from below. Something moved in the depths. Rory stepped back as a shape rose, dark and slick, pressing against the underside of the surface like a hand against glass. The pendant at her throat burned hot. "Don't move," Nyx said. The shape stilled. Then, slowly, it sank. The water smoothed. "What was that?" Rory demanded. "A memory," Isolde said. "The grove remembers." "Remembers what?" The Seer turned. Her expression had changed — something behind her eyes that Rory hadn't seen before. Not fear. Not quite. "It remembers everything, Aurora. Every version of every soul that has ever crossed this threshold. Some of them are still here." The trees behind them rustled. Rory spun, the Fae blade half-drawn before she caught herself. But nothing moved in the undergrowth. Nothing she could see. "We should go," Nyx said. Their form had gone hazy again, less solid, edges bleeding into the shadows. "The longer we stay, the more it takes." "Takes what?" "Attention." Isolde nodded. "We have what we came for." Rory looked at the pool one last time. The floating stones continued their dance. The water remained still. But deep beneath, something stirred again — watching, waiting. She felt it as a pressure behind her eyes, an almost-voice that whispered without words. She turned her back and followed the others toward the standing stones. The wildflowers bent toward her as she passed, brushing her legs like fingers, and the air grew thicker, honey-sweet, trying to hold her. The grove did not want to let her go. When she crossed the boundary and the twilight faded to the grey English afternoon of Richmond Park, Rory took a breath that felt like her first in hours. Her watch said only twenty minutes had passed. Her hands were shaking. She pressed them flat against her thighs and forced them to still. Nyx materialised beside her. "You saw something in the water." "I saw myself." "That's not what I asked." Rory looked up at the trees of the ordinary park — oaks and chestnuts, birdsong, the distant sound of traffic on the perimeter road. "I saw what I might become. And I saw something else. Something that knew me." Isolde was already walking toward the path that led to the gate, her bare feet silent on the fallen leaves. "The grove knows everyone who enters," she called back. "The question is what it decides to remember." Rory touched the pendant. Its warmth had faded to nothing. Cold metal against her skin. A warning, or just a stone. "Are we coming back?" Nyx asked. "Not today," Rory said. She started walking. "But yes. Something tells me we don't have a choice."
created_at"2026-09-10T10:21:41.433Z" 9/10/2026, 10:21:41 AM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags17
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"Rory turned away [away]"
dialogueSentences42
tagDensity0.405
leniency0.81
rawRatio0.059
effectiveRatio0.048
91.38% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1160
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"perfectly"
count1
1
adverb"slowly"
count1
highlights
0"perfectly"
1"slowly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
43.97% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1160
totalAiIsms13
found
0
word"spectral"
count1
1
word"down her spine"
count1
2
word"intensity"
count1
3
word"pulse"
count1
4
word"quickened"
count1
5
word"stomach"
count1
6
word"weight"
count1
7
word"measured"
count1
8
word"silk"
count1
9
word"throbbed"
count1
10
word"depths"
count1
11
word"dance"
count1
12
word"warmth"
count1
highlights
0"spectral"
1"down her spine"
2"intensity"
3"pulse"
4"quickened"
5"stomach"
6"weight"
7"measured"
8"silk"
9"throbbed"
10"depths"
11"dance"
12"warmth"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences100
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences100
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences125
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen28
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1173
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions13
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
33.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions47
wordCount944
uniqueNames10
maxNameDensity2.22
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity4
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Rory21
Heartstone1
Isolde11
Fae2
Veil1
Seer1
English1
Richmond1
Park1
Nyx7
persons
0"Rory"
1"Isolde"
2"Fae"
3"Seer"
4"Nyx"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
globalScore0.388
windowScore0.333
63.79% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences58
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"orchids that seemed to watch her with their dark, speckled centres"
1"felt like her first in hours"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.853
wordCount1173
matches
0"not hostile, but watchful"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences125
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs46
mean25.5
std21.01
cv0.824
sampleLengths
058
148
244
325
410
510
687
725
825
945
1015
115
128
1363
1420
1574
167
1722
1862
1911
2022
2127
2252
234
2410
255
267
272
2842
2925
3026
312
321
338
3442
3544
3636
3716
3810
393
405
4139
4237
4321
446
4517
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences100
matches(empty)
73.42% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount3
totalVerbs158
matches
0"was breathing"
1"were shaking"
2"was already walking"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount13
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences12
totalSentences125
ratio0.096
matches
0"Only their eyes held any colour — that faint violet glow, fixed ahead with an intensity Rory had come to recognise as caution."
1"Wildflowers carpeted the clearing — foxgloves taller than her waist, roses the colour of spilled wine, orchids that seemed to watch her with their dark, speckled centres."
2"Not birdsong — something older."
3"Beneath the hum, she caught fragments — distant laughter, the clink of glass, a melody played on an instrument she didn't recognise."
4"The trees closed in behind them — not hostile, but watchful."
5"A pool of water — perfectly circular, its surface like black glass — dominated the clearing."
6"Images rippled across the water's surface — faster than Rory could follow."
7"Her scarred wrist throbbed — the old ache that came when the Veil was near."
8"Not from the stones — from below."
9"Her expression had changed — something behind her eyes that Rory hadn't seen before."
10"But deep beneath, something stirred again — watching, waiting."
11"Rory looked up at the trees of the ordinary park — oaks and chestnuts, birdsong, the distant sound of traffic on the perimeter road."
88.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount936
adjectiveStacks2
stackExamples
0"lay warm against her"
1"thicker, honey-sweet, trying"
adverbCount28
adverbRatio0.029914529914529916
lyAdverbCount8
lyAdverbRatio0.008547008547008548
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences125
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences125
mean9.38
std6.47
cv0.689
sampleLengths
015
119
224
311
44
520
613
721
823
93
1022
116
124
1310
146
1526
1627
175
1810
199
204
214
225
2316
2414
2511
264
2722
288
2911
303
3112
325
336
342
353
3611
3715
3818
3916
4012
418
4211
4316
4414
4514
4619
473
484
494
55.47% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats9
diversityRatio0.376
totalSentences125
uniqueOpeners47
76.63% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences87
matches
0"Only their eyes held any"
1"Then, slowly, it sank."
ratio0.023
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount23
totalSentences87
matches
0"She left no footprints."
1"It wasn't a question."
2"They bloomed in impossible abundance."
3"It smelled of roasted meat"
4"Her stomach growled despite the"
5"They moved deeper."
6"She kept her hand near"
7"Their slow orbit created a"
8"They had solidified now, their"
9"She reached out and touched"
10"It spun faster, its glow"
11"She saw her own face,"
12"Her scarred wrist throbbed —"
13"Her expression had changed —"
14"Their form had gone hazy"
15"She felt it as a"
16"She turned her back and"
17"Her watch said only twenty"
18"Her hands were shaking."
19"She pressed them flat against"
ratio0.264
23.22% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount76
totalSentences87
matches
0"The oak standing stones rose"
1"Rory counted seven of them,"
2"A faint luminescence clung to"
3"Isolde murmured, her bare feet"
4"She left no footprints."
5"Rory had noticed that at"
6"Nyx drifted at the rear,"
7"The Heartstone pendant lay warm"
8"It wasn't a question."
9"The air grew thick and"
10"Wildflowers carpeted the clearing —"
11"They bloomed in impossible abundance."
12"Isolde had told her once"
13"An hour inside could be"
14"Rory believed it now."
15"A sound reached her."
16"A low, resonant hum that"
17"Nyx whispered, their voice carrying"
18"Rory tilted her head."
19"It smelled of roasted meat"
ratio0.874
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences87
matches(empty)
ratio0
51.28% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences39
technicalSentenceCount5
matches
0"The Heartstone pendant lay warm against her chest, a steady pulse that quickened with each step they took past the boundary stones."
1"Wildflowers carpeted the clearing — foxgloves taller than her waist, roses the colour of spilled wine, orchids that seemed to watch her with their dark, speckle…"
2"A low, resonant hum that came from everywhere and nowhere, like the grove itself was breathing."
3"She saw her own face, older, gaunt, with eyes that held no light."
4"Isolde was already walking toward the path that led to the gate, her bare feet silent on the fallen leaves."
66.18% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags17
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"Isolde murmured, her bare feet silent on the grass"
1"The half-fae withdrew, and the stone resumed its slow rotation"
54.76% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags12
fancyCount4
fancyTags
0"Isolde murmured (murmur)"
1"Rory muttered (mutter)"
2"Nyx whispered (whisper)"
3"Rory demanded (demand)"
dialogueSentences42
tagDensity0.286
leniency0.571
rawRatio0.333
effectiveRatio0.19
77.3808%