Run: 2026-09-10-01M25DDPNE6VMSFD6HK88Q2TT8

Run Details

Duration:
20.2s
Cost:
$0.001931
Provider:
DeepSeek

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The third deadbolt stuck the way it always did. Rory braced a heel against the frame, dragged it back with both hands, then pulled the door open six inches and stopped. Rain lashed the stairwell window. Downstairs, the curry house extractor fan rattled through the floorboards like a bad tooth. Ptolemy slid out from behind the radiator, wound himself between her ankles, and purred at a volume that seemed to insult the whole building. Lucien Moreau stood on the landing in a charcoal suit that had surrendered to the weather somewhere around Aldgate. Water ran off the brim of a hat she had never once seen him wear. His cane rested against the wall beside him, ivory handle catching the corridor bulb, and his eyes did what they always did — one amber, one black, both of them fixed on her like she was a page he hadn't finished reading. "You're dripping on Eva's mat." "Your mat, I think. You sleep here." "I feed the cat." Ptolemy deserted her without a backward glance and shoved his face into Lucien's shin. Lucien looked down at him the way a man might look at a lawyer who'd just changed sides. "Et tu." "He has no loyalty. It's the coat. It smells expensive." Rory kept her hand flat on the door and her shoulder against the jamb. Her left wrist caught the light, the small crescent scar pale against the rain-grey air. "Eva's not in." "I know. I watched her leave forty minutes ago. Grey coat, took the wrong umbrella." "You watched her leave." "I waited until it was only you." The extractor fan rattled. Water dripped off his hat onto the mat in a slow, patient rhythm. Rory leaned her forehead against the door edge. "You've got a phone." "I have four. You've blocked all of them and the landline at Golden Empress, which was genuinely impressive." "Yu-Fei gave you the number?" "Yu-Fei gave me a six-minute lecture about the Fourteen Koans of the Hungry Ghost and then the number. I'd have preferred the koans." "You're soaked." "I'm aware." She didn't move. Six weeks sat in the gap between them, filling it up like rising water — the club in Soho, the stairs, the fire door, his voice flat and deliberate, a liability with a pretty face, get out of my way. She'd got out of his way. She'd been two streets south when the windows went. He'd known they would. "I'm not letting you in." "Then I'll stand here and you can watch me ruin a two-thousand-pound suit." "That's a two-thousand-pound suit?" "Two thousand four hundred. There's a woman in Savile Row who despises me." Rory folded her arms. The rain kept on. Below them a delivery moped coughed and died and started again. "You could have told me," she said. "Yes." "Two words. That's all it would have taken. There's a bomb, Rory, or there's a woman upstairs with a sigil in her hand and no reason to like us, or — anything. Anything at all." "I know." "You said I was a liability." "I said a great many things with the specific intention of making you leave the building." He rotated the cane under his palm, slow, the way he did when he wanted a cigarette and had given them up for the fourth time. "It worked. I've been trying to decide ever since whether that makes me clever or unforgivable." "Where's the middle?" "There isn't one. I looked." Ptolemy had given up on the shin and gone back to the radiator, tail flicking. Rory watched him rather than Lucien, because looking at Lucien had a cost and she'd already paid it once, in instalments, for six weeks. "You could have called," she said. "After. To say you'd got out." "I did call. Twice. The first time you were in the shower. The second time you were standing in my kitchen." She looked up. "I've never stood in your kitchen." "You stood in the hallway of my building for nineteen minutes and then went home. Silas told me. He was extremely smug about it." "That man is a menace." "He's a publican. It's the same profession with better lighting." Rory laughed before she could stop it, one short breath, and hated herself for it immediately. Lucien's mouth moved, barely, the way it did when he decided not to smile because he thought it would cost him something. "Nine minutes," she said. "Nineteen." "Nine. I counted." "You counted to nine and then walked home six blocks in the wrong direction." He tipped the hat back an inch, water running off the brim. "I know, because I was at the window." The stairwell light buzzed. Somewhere down Brick Lane a siren wound up and unwound and went away. Rory pressed the back of her hand to her mouth. "Why the hat?" she said finally. "You don't wear hats." "It's raining." "You own an umbrella. I've seen the umbrella. It has a duck on the handle." "Eva gave me that umbrella. I've never forgiven her." He let the cane settle and looked at the six inches of open door, and his voice came down a register. "May I come in, Aurora. I would like to explain myself while dry. And then you can throw me out, and I'll go, and I won't come back unless you ask me to." "Unless I ask." "Yes." "That's very fair of you." "It's the least fair thing I've ever done. I'm counting on the gesture." Rory stood in the door with the rain and the smell of curry and the cat and the six weeks of it, and her hand flat on the wood, and the small scar on her wrist going white where she pressed it. "Take the hat off first," she said. "It's a nice hat. I don't want it dripping on the scrolls." Lucien removed the hat, held it out, and waited. Rory stepped back. The door swung wide, and the flat opened up behind her — every surface buried in Eva's books and scrolls and research notes, a mug of cold tea on the almanac, Ptolemy already padding across the carpet to reclaim his spot on the windowsill. "Not one word about the mess," she said. "I was raised in Marseille. I've seen worse." "You've never seen worse." "I've seen worse and I've charged people for it." He stepped in, set the hat on the coat rack's empty hook as if he'd lived there all along, and paused just past the threshold, close enough that she could smell rain and cedar and something underneath that she had spent six weeks not thinking about. "Rory." "Don't." "I haven't said anything yet." "You were going to say it with the face."
created_at"2026-09-10T10:22:11.636Z" 9/10/2026, 10:22:11 AM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags11
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"she said finally [finally]"
dialogueSentences60
tagDensity0.183
leniency0.367
rawRatio0.091
effectiveRatio0.033
95.55% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1123
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"very"
count1
highlights
0"very"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
95.55% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1123
totalAiIsms1
found
0
word"charged"
count1
highlights
0"charged"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences45
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences45
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences94
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen55
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1127
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions16
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
79.69% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions26
wordCount640
uniqueNames9
maxNameDensity1.41
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Moreau1
Aldgate1
Lucien7
Soho1
Ptolemy4
Brick1
Lane1
Rory9
Eva1
persons
0"Moreau"
1"Lucien"
2"Ptolemy"
3"Rory"
4"Eva"
places
0"Soho"
1"Brick"
2"Lane"
globalScore0.797
windowScore0.833
66.67% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences30
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"volume that seemed to insult the whole building"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1127
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences94
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs66
mean17.08
std17.98
cv1.053
sampleLengths
031
143
276
35
47
54
632
72
842
915
104
117
1217
1312
1418
155
1623
172
182
1962
205
2113
224
2313
2419
257
261
2735
282
296
3058
313
325
3339
3412
3521
369
3724
385
3910
4038
414
421
433
4434
4517
4610
4710
482
4915
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences45
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs112
matches(empty)
51.67% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount3
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences3
totalSentences94
ratio0.032
matches
0"His cane rested against the wall beside him, ivory handle catching the corridor bulb, and his eyes did what they always did — one amber, one black, both of them fixed on her like she was a page he hadn't finished reading."
1"Six weeks sat in the gap between them, filling it up like rising water — the club in Soho, the stairs, the fire door, his voice flat and deliberate, a liability with a pretty face, get out of my way."
2"The door swung wide, and the flat opened up behind her — every surface buried in Eva's books and scrolls and research notes, a mug of cold tea on the almanac, Ptolemy already padding across the carpet to reclaim his spot on the windowsill."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount638
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount21
adverbRatio0.032915360501567396
lyAdverbCount3
lyAdverbRatio0.004702194357366771
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences94
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences94
mean11.99
std11.44
cv0.954
sampleLengths
09
122
25
314
424
519
615
742
85
97
104
1114
1218
132
1424
1515
163
1715
184
197
204
2113
228
234
2418
255
2623
272
282
293
3040
316
329
334
345
3513
364
3713
384
394
4011
417
421
4335
442
456
4642
4716
483
495
61.70% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats2
diversityRatio0.3829787234042553
totalSentences94
uniqueOpeners36
83.33% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences40
matches
0"Somewhere down Brick Lane a"
ratio0.025
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount12
totalSentences40
matches
0"His cane rested against the"
1"Her left wrist caught the"
2"She didn't move."
3"She'd got out of his"
4"She'd been two streets south"
5"He'd known they would."
6"He rotated the cane under"
7"She looked up."
8"He tipped the hat back"
9"she said finally"
10"He let the cane settle"
11"He stepped in, set the"
ratio0.3
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount37
totalSentences40
matches
0"The third deadbolt stuck the"
1"Rory braced a heel against"
2"Rain lashed the stairwell window."
3"Downstairs, the curry house extractor"
4"Ptolemy slid out from behind"
5"Lucien Moreau stood on the"
6"Water ran off the brim"
7"His cane rested against the"
8"Ptolemy deserted her without a"
9"Lucien looked down at him"
10"Rory kept her hand flat"
11"Her left wrist caught the"
12"The extractor fan rattled."
13"Water dripped off his hat"
14"Rory leaned her forehead against"
15"She didn't move."
16"She'd got out of his"
17"She'd been two streets south"
18"He'd known they would."
19"Rory folded her arms."
ratio0.925
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences40
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences20
technicalSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags11
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags6
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences60
tagDensity0.1
leniency0.2
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
87.8052%