Run: 2026-09-10-01M25DDVEWVW5F0N6N7484VZKT

Run Details

Duration:
33.1s
Cost:
$0.002379
Provider:
DeepInfra

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The bus dropped her at the edge of Richmond Park, its tail lights shrinking to pinpricks before the dark swallowed them whole. Rory stood for a moment, listening to the silence. Not a true silence — there were the rustles of small things in the undergrowth, the distant hum of the city she'd left behind — but a heavy, watchful quiet that pressed against her ears like cotton wool. She checked her phone. Ten forty-seven. The last bus back to the city left at midnight from the same stop. Two hours. Plenty of time. The Heartstone Pendant lay warm against her sternum, a second heartbeat beneath her ribs. It had been pulsing since she'd stepped off the bus, a steady thrum that seemed to sync with her own pulse. She'd felt it react before, near the places Eva had marked on her map — thin spots where the world wore through like old fabric. But never this strong. Never this insistent. The gate to the grove stood open. Iron scrollwork, rusted at the hinges, black against the moonlit path beyond. She hadn't expected that. In her experience, the fae didn't leave doors ajar. Rory stepped through. The change was immediate. The air shifted — thicker, older, carrying the scent of crushed wildflowers and something underneath, something like ozone after a lightning strike. The trees on either side of the path grew close, their branches interlocking overhead until the moonlight filtered through in silver slivers. Her footsteps made no sound on the grass. She checked her phone again. Ten forty-nine. Three minutes. She'd been walking for three minutes and covered perhaps a hundred metres. The math didn't add up. The grove was small — she'd studied the maps, cross-referenced Eva's notes. From the gate to the standing stones should have taken no more than five minutes at a brisk pace. The pendant flared hot against her skin. Rory stopped. The path ahead forked around an ancient oak, its trunk wider than her flat. The bark was smooth, almost polished, as though generations of hands had touched it in passing. No moss grew on its surface. No ivy climbed its branches. The grass at its roots lay flat and yellowed, as if something had pressed it down for a very long time. She chose the left fork. The wildflowers began. Bluebells and foxgloves, their colours muted in the dark, blooming in defiance of the season. She'd read about this place — Eva had told her stories, the kind that made her laugh and then stop laughing abruptly. Time moved differently here. An hour inside could be minutes or days outside. Rory checked her phone again. The screen flickered. Ten forty-nine. The same minute. The same second. The clock hadn't moved. She put the phone in her pocket. The pendant burned against her chest, a heat that should have been painful but wasn't. She could feel it pulsing in time with something else now, something deeper in the grove. A rhythm that wasn't hers. The standing stones appeared through a gap in the trees. Nine of them, arranged in a rough circle, each one twice her height. They weren't made of the grey stone she'd expected. They were oak — living wood, twisted and grown into shape, their surfaces rippling with a texture that looked almost like faces. Eyes closed. Mouths open. Rory approached the circle. The pendant pulled her forward, a compass needle drawn north. She stopped at the threshold. The air inside the ring was colder. Not the crisp cold of an autumn night — a cold that settled in her bones, that made her teeth ache. The grass within the circle was white. Not frost. Something else. Something that crunched underfoot like old paper. She stepped inside. The first sound came from behind her. A whisper, soft and sibilant, like wind through dry leaves. She turned. Nothing. Just the dark trees, the path she'd walked, the absence of anything that should have been there. The second sound came from her left. A footstep. Deliberate. Measured. She spun, her hand going to the pendant. The stones stood silent. The wildflowers swayed in a breeze she couldn't feel. The third sound came from everywhere at once. A low hum, a resonance that seemed to rise from the ground itself. The standing stones vibrated with it, their surfaces shimmering. The faces carved by nature or something else seemed to shift, their closed eyes twitching, their open mouths widening. Rory backed toward the centre of the circle. Her breath fogged in the cold air. The pendant blazed against her skin, its crimson light spilling through her shirt, illuminating the space around her in pulses. She wasn't alone. She knew it now with a certainty that bypassed logic. The grove was watching. The stones were listening. Something moved at the edge of her vision — a shape, a shadow, a suggestion of limbs too long and angles too sharp. She didn't look directly at it. Some instinct told her that looking would be a mistake. The hum grew louder. The ground beneath her feet began to pulse, a slow rhythm that matched the pendant, matched her heart. The white grass crunched as she shifted her weight. The air tasted of copper and wildflowers. A voice spoke. Not words — a sound that shaped itself into meaning somewhere behind her eyes. You came. Rory's mouth opened. No sound came out. The pendant burned. The stones leaned inward, their branches reaching, their faces turning. The shape at the edge of her vision moved closer, and she felt its attention on her like a weight, like hands pressing against her skin. She closed her eyes. The voice spoke again, and this time she understood. We have been waiting. The hum stopped. The cold vanished. Rory opened her eyes. The circle was empty. The stones stood silent, their faces blank, their branches still. The white grass had turned green. The wildflowers nodded in a gentle breeze. She checked her phone. Eleven fifty-two. An hour. She'd lost an hour. The pendant lay cool against her chest, its light extinguished. Rory turned and walked back the way she'd come, her footsteps loud on the path, her breath steady, her eyes fixed on the gate ahead. She didn't look back. She didn't need to. She could feel the grove watching her leave, the stones remembering her shape, the thing at the edge of vision still there, still waiting, still hungry. The gate swung shut behind her. The iron scrollwork groaned. The city lights glittered in the distance, impossibly far away. Rory ran for the bus stop.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags0
95.43% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1094
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"very"
count1
highlights
0"very"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
31.44% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1094
totalAiIsms15
found
0
word"silence"
count2
1
word"pulse"
count2
2
word"footsteps"
count2
3
word"flickered"
count1
4
word"could feel"
count2
5
word"whisper"
count1
6
word"measured"
count1
7
word"resonance"
count1
8
word"vibrated"
count1
9
word"weight"
count2
highlights
0"silence"
1"pulse"
2"footsteps"
3"flickered"
4"could feel"
5"whisper"
6"measured"
7"resonance"
8"vibrated"
9"weight"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences129
matches(empty)
98.56% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount4
narrationSentences129
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences129
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen36
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1104
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions2
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions20
wordCount1104
uniqueNames7
maxNameDensity0.91
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Richmond1
Park1
Heartstone1
Pendant1
Eva3
Rory10
Ten3
persons
0"Pendant"
1"Eva"
2"Rory"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
globalScore1
windowScore1
41.30% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences69
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"thrum that seemed to sync with her own pulse"
1"something like ozone after a lightning strik"
2"resonance that seemed to rise from the ground itself"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1104
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences129
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs39
mean28.31
std22.31
cv0.788
sampleLengths
069
125
267
332
43
556
67
750
87
964
105
1153
1210
1310
1443
1558
1614
1751
183
1937
2032
2149
2235
233
2457
2538
2617
272
287
2939
3013
314
3210
3327
346
356
3669
3720
386
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences129
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs170
matches
0"was watching"
1"were listening"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount10
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences9
totalSentences129
ratio0.07
matches
0"Not a true silence — there were the rustles of small things in the undergrowth, the distant hum of the city she'd left behind — but a heavy, watchful quiet that pressed against her ears like cotton wool."
1"She'd felt it react before, near the places Eva had marked on her map — thin spots where the world wore through like old fabric."
2"The air shifted — thicker, older, carrying the scent of crushed wildflowers and something underneath, something like ozone after a lightning strike."
3"The grove was small — she'd studied the maps, cross-referenced Eva's notes."
4"She'd read about this place — Eva had told her stories, the kind that made her laugh and then stop laughing abruptly."
5"They were oak — living wood, twisted and grown into shape, their surfaces rippling with a texture that looked almost like faces."
6"Not the crisp cold of an autumn night — a cold that settled in her bones, that made her teeth ache."
7"Something moved at the edge of her vision — a shape, a shadow, a suggestion of limbs too long and angles too sharp."
8"Not words — a sound that shaped itself into meaning somewhere behind her eyes."
88.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1099
adjectiveStacks2
stackExamples
0"lay warm against her"
1"lay cool against her"
adverbCount25
adverbRatio0.022747952684258416
lyAdverbCount4
lyAdverbRatio0.003639672429481347
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences129
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences129
mean8.56
std7.01
cv0.819
sampleLengths
022
19
238
34
42
514
62
73
814
921
1025
114
123
137
1412
154
169
173
184
1922
2022
218
225
232
242
2512
265
2712
2819
297
302
3114
3216
336
345
3521
365
373
3815
3922
404
419
425
433
442
453
463
474
487
4915
29.07% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats27
diversityRatio0.2558139534883721
totalSentences129
uniqueOpeners33
30.03% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences111
matches
0"Just the dark trees, the"
ratio0.009
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount27
totalSentences111
matches
0"She checked her phone."
1"It had been pulsing since"
2"She'd felt it react before,"
3"She hadn't expected that."
4"Her footsteps made no sound"
5"She checked her phone again."
6"She'd been walking for three"
7"She chose the left fork."
8"She'd read about this place"
9"She put the phone in"
10"She could feel it pulsing"
11"They weren't made of the"
12"They were oak — living"
13"She stopped at the threshold."
14"She stepped inside."
15"She spun, her hand going"
16"Her breath fogged in the"
17"She wasn't alone."
18"She knew it now with"
19"She didn't look directly at"
ratio0.243
14.05% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount99
totalSentences111
matches
0"The bus dropped her at"
1"Rory stood for a moment,"
2"She checked her phone."
3"The last bus back to"
4"Plenty of time."
5"The Heartstone Pendant lay warm"
6"It had been pulsing since"
7"She'd felt it react before,"
8"The gate to the grove"
9"Iron scrollwork, rusted at the"
10"She hadn't expected that."
11"Rory stepped through."
12"The change was immediate."
13"The air shifted — thicker,"
14"The trees on either side"
15"Her footsteps made no sound"
16"She checked her phone again."
17"She'd been walking for three"
18"The math didn't add up."
19"The grove was small —"
ratio0.892
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences111
matches(empty)
ratio0
73.17% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences41
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"Not the crisp cold of an autumn night — a cold that settled in her bones, that made her teeth ache."
1"The pendant blazed against her skin, its crimson light spilling through her shirt, illuminating the space around her in pulses."
2"The ground beneath her feet began to pulse, a slow rhythm that matched the pendant, matched her heart."
3"The stones leaned inward, their branches reaching, their faces turning."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags0
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
80.0354%