| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 16 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "their form going briefly [briefly]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 30 | | tagDensity | 0.533 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.063 | | effectiveRatio | 0.063 | |
| 87.16% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1558 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 4 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "quickly" | | 1 | "slowly" | | 2 | "very" | | 3 | "perfectly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 87.16% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1558 | | totalAiIsms | 4 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "whisper" | | 1 | "footsteps" | | 2 | "warmth" | | 3 | "weight" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 92 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 1 | | narrationSentences | 92 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 106 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 74 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1568 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 12 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 85.30% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 42 | | wordCount | 1391 | | uniqueNames | 10 | | maxNameDensity | 1.29 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Rory | 18 | | Veil | 1 | | Nyx | 14 | | December | 1 | | Kingston | 1 | | November | 1 | | June | 1 | | Isolde | 3 |
| | persons | | | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "Kingston" | | 3 | "November" |
| | globalScore | 0.853 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 71.88% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 64 | | glossingSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "glow that seemed to come from everywhere and nowhere at once" | | 1 | "seemed wrong to use her full voice" |
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| 8.67% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 3 | | per1kWords | 1.913 | | wordCount | 1568 | | matches | | 0 | "not carved into the shape of trees, but oak itself, black" | | 1 | "not standing in a circle but leaning inward, like men who had bowed forward to hear somet" | | 2 | "not silver but white" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 106 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 44 | | mean | 35.64 | | std | 33.31 | | cv | 0.935 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 61 | | 1 | 4 | | 2 | 34 | | 3 | 41 | | 4 | 85 | | 5 | 12 | | 6 | 7 | | 7 | 88 | | 8 | 12 | | 9 | 4 | | 10 | 125 | | 11 | 18 | | 12 | 5 | | 13 | 4 | | 14 | 36 | | 15 | 84 | | 16 | 14 | | 17 | 8 | | 18 | 72 | | 19 | 21 | | 20 | 4 | | 21 | 7 | | 22 | 31 | | 23 | 84 | | 24 | 103 | | 25 | 14 | | 26 | 59 | | 27 | 32 | | 28 | 4 | | 29 | 45 | | 30 | 10 | | 31 | 4 | | 32 | 5 | | 33 | 89 | | 34 | 8 | | 35 | 1 | | 36 | 54 | | 37 | 4 | | 38 | 59 | | 39 | 43 | | 40 | 27 | | 41 | 60 | | 42 | 6 | | 43 | 80 |
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| 97.64% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 92 | | matches | | 0 | "was stippled" | | 1 | "was gone" |
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| 0.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 7 | | totalVerbs | 219 | | matches | | 0 | "was walking" | | 1 | "was walking" | | 2 | "was leaving" | | 3 | "were not standing" | | 4 | "was glowing" | | 5 | "was looking" | | 6 | "was staring" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 10 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 9 | | totalSentences | 106 | | ratio | 0.085 | | matches | | 0 | "Rory saw it — the way you sometimes saw heat over summer tarmac, a shiver of distortion running up from the ground like a seam in glass." | | 1 | "Then the sound — or the absence of it." | | 2 | "The sky was violet, and not in a way the sky should be violet — this was the violet of something seen through deep water, bruised and luminous, with no sun and no moon in it, only a diffuse glow that seemed to come from everywhere and nowhere at once." | | 3 | "The stones were oak — not carved into the shape of trees, but oak itself, black and root-crowned, growing up out of the ground without branches, their bark silvered over with something Rory first took for lichen and then realized was script." | | 4 | "For one paralyzing second she had not been herself — she had been old, she had been a ring of women in grey cloaks with their hands joined, she had been a song sung in a language she had known once and had forgotten on purpose." | | 5 | "That was the thing Rory could not stop noticing — that she was walking through a meadow in boots and there was no crush of stem, no whisper of leaves." | | 6 | "The second ring — and there was a second ring, smaller, nested inside the first — was not." | | 7 | "This was a deep, pulsing crimson, bright enough to throw red light across her knuckles, and it beat — actually beat, steady and slow, like a second heart in her hand." | | 8 | "Rory turned in a full circle and saw nothing — no woman, no figure, only the leaning stones and the violet glow and the foxgloves standing perfectly still." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1387 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 49 | | adverbRatio | 0.035328046142754144 | | lyAdverbCount | 13 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.009372746935832732 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 106 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 106 | | mean | 14.79 | | std | 13.49 | | cv | 0.912 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 29 | | 1 | 32 | | 2 | 4 | | 3 | 2 | | 4 | 29 | | 5 | 3 | | 6 | 16 | | 7 | 25 | | 8 | 3 | | 9 | 27 | | 10 | 2 | | 11 | 28 | | 12 | 25 | | 13 | 5 | | 14 | 7 | | 15 | 7 | | 16 | 17 | | 17 | 9 | | 18 | 39 | | 19 | 23 | | 20 | 6 | | 21 | 6 | | 22 | 1 | | 23 | 3 | | 24 | 50 | | 25 | 36 | | 26 | 6 | | 27 | 33 | | 28 | 6 | | 29 | 3 | | 30 | 2 | | 31 | 7 | | 32 | 5 | | 33 | 4 | | 34 | 36 | | 35 | 9 | | 36 | 42 | | 37 | 5 | | 38 | 28 | | 39 | 14 | | 40 | 8 | | 41 | 5 | | 42 | 46 | | 43 | 21 | | 44 | 6 | | 45 | 15 | | 46 | 4 | | 47 | 7 | | 48 | 4 | | 49 | 20 |
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| 50.31% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 10 | | diversityRatio | 0.3584905660377358 | | totalSentences | 106 | | uniqueOpeners | 38 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 78 | | matches | | 0 | "Then the sound — or" | | 1 | "Then it was gone, and" | | 2 | "Then she looked down." |
| | ratio | 0.038 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 23 | | totalSentences | 78 | | matches | | 0 | "They reached the grove just" | | 1 | "They lifted one long hand," | | 2 | "She'd caught glimpses of it" | | 3 | "She was through, and standing" | | 4 | "It was warm." | | 5 | "It shifted when she looked" | | 6 | "She reached out, almost without" | | 7 | "She snatched her hand back." | | 8 | "She tucked it away inside" | | 9 | "They moved deeper." | | 10 | "She could hear her own" | | 11 | "It seemed wrong to use" | | 12 | "They stopped at the edge" | | 13 | "She reached into her collar" | | 14 | "She tucked it back under" | | 15 | "It had been quiet for" | | 16 | "It had never, not once," | | 17 | "It was low, unhurried, the" | | 18 | "Her own, in the grass," | | 19 | "She looked at Nyx's feet" |
| | ratio | 0.295 | |
| 56.15% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 63 | | totalSentences | 78 | | matches | | 0 | "They reached the grove just" | | 1 | "Rory had been walking for" | | 2 | "Nyx turned, and the faint" | | 3 | "They lifted one long hand," | | 4 | "The air resisted." | | 5 | "Rory saw it — the" | | 6 | "She'd caught glimpses of it" | | 7 | "Rory took a breath and" | | 8 | "The cold came first, a" | | 9 | "The crows, the distant traffic" | | 10 | "She was through, and standing" | | 11 | "Nyx said behind her" | | 12 | "Rory looked up." | | 13 | "The sky was violet, and" | | 14 | "The trees at the edge" | | 15 | "The grass was stippled with" | | 16 | "Clover, cornflower, foxglove, things that" | | 17 | "Rory crouched and touched a" | | 18 | "It was warm." | | 19 | "Nyx was walking ahead of" |
| | ratio | 0.808 | |
| 64.10% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 78 | | matches | | | ratio | 0.013 | |
| 71.43% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 40 | | technicalSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "She was through, and standing on grass that was greener than it had any business being in winter, and the light had changed." | | 1 | "The sky was violet, and not in a way the sky should be violet — this was the violet of something seen through deep water, bruised and luminous, with no sun and …" | | 2 | "Clover, cornflower, foxglove, things that should have been dead in November, all of them blooming as if it were June, and none of them moving in the wind, becau…" | | 3 | "The stones here were onyx-black and smooth as river glass, and they were not standing in a circle but leaning inward, like men who had bowed forward to hear som…" |
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| 93.75% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 16 | | uselessAdditionCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "Nyx said, without turning" |
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| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 10 | | fancyCount | 1 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Rory whispered (whisper)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 30 | | tagDensity | 0.333 | | leniency | 0.667 | | rawRatio | 0.1 | | effectiveRatio | 0.067 | |