Run: 2026-09-10-01M25DEGEWENASSZPCNKBBCZNH

Run Details

Duration:
15.7s
Cost:
$0.001406
Provider:
DeepSeek

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The pendant woke her at half eight, hot against her sternum like a coin left in the sun. Rory sat up in the narrow bed above Silas’s bar, thumbed the crimson stone through her shirt, and felt the heat crawl across her skin in a slow pulse. Three beats. A pause. Three more. She had spent two days mapping it. Warm in the flat. Warmer on the Victoria line. Hottest on the District, hottest of all at Richmond, and now the thing sat quiet against her ribs, patient, as if it had done its job and handed her the rest. She walked the last mile along the dark edge of the park with a torch off in her pocket and her phone at eleven percent. The gates shut at dusk. A sign on the railings told her so in three languages. She climbed them anyway, the iron cold through her gloves, and dropped onto wet grass on the other side with a sound like a held breath releasing. Deer stood in the dark of the long avenue. She counted six sets of eyes catching the last of the streetlight, then seven, and then she stopped counting because the seventh pair belonged to something taller that did not move when the others scattered. She kept walking. When she looked back, the avenue was empty and the grass was flat. The pendant warmed again when she turned west. She followed it past the pond, past the hollow where the old oaks stood in their ring, and the trees closed over her like a door. No wind here. The oaks should have moved in a wind; there was no wind, and still the leaves worked against each other, a dry papery shuffle high above her, going on without her. The Grove opened without warning. One step she was on the path, the next she stood in a clearing floored with grass so even it looked combed, and every flower in it was blooming. Bluebells in November. Foxgloves. A spread of white cow parsley standing straight up in the dark as if someone had arranged it that morning. The standing stones ringed the clearing, eleven of them, grey and wet-looking though no rain had fallen all week. She counted them once. She counted them again from the other side and got twelve. Rory put her hand in her pocket and found her keys, her lighter, a tram ticket. She did not find the torch she had left on the kitchen table. She held the pendant through her shirt and felt its warmth spread up her wrist to the crescent scar, which tingled the way it did when the weather turned. “Right,” she said out loud. Her voice did not carry. It landed on the grass two feet in front of her and stopped, as though the clearing had eaten it. She walked the ring. Each stone stood taller than her, damp to the touch, and each one carried a mark cut into the face at shoulder height — a spiral, worn shallow. She touched one. The stone was warm in patches, cool in others, warm and cool in a pattern like breathing. She pulled her hand back and wiped it on her jeans. The pendant pulled her towards the middle of the clearing. She let it. The centre was bare. A circle of grass pressed flat, no flowers, no stones. She crouched and laid her palm on the ground. Under her hand, deep down, something ran a slow current, the way a road runs a current when a lorry passes a mile off. She stayed crouched and listened. A branch broke on the far side of the ring. Clean snap, high up, where no deer could reach. She stood. Nothing moved between the trunks. The flowers did not stir. She turned a slow circle and counted the stones again on the way round. Eleven. She finished the circle and she was facing the gap she had entered through, and the gap was gone, filled with oak trunks so close together a fox could not have slipped between. Her phone said 23:41. She checked it again two breaths later. 23:41. “Okay,” she said. Same flat landing. Same no-carry. She took the pendant out of her shirt. It glowed now, a red so deep it looked like a coal under ash. It lit the grass at her feet and showed her a footprint. Bare. Long. Toes longer than any toes she had seen outside of a museum case, and set into the mud the way a bird sets a foot, three points down and one trailing back. She had been standing in the centre for ten minutes and had not made it. The grass around it was unmarked. She stepped away from it. When she looked again, the grass lay flat and even and there was no print at all. Somewhere behind her, at the height of her ear, a voice drew breath. Not a word. The intake only, the small wet catch of a mouth opening an inch from her neck. Rory did not turn. She walked, measured, towards the west edge of the ring with the pendant out in front of her like a lamp, and the breath followed at the same distance, neither closer nor further, drawing in and letting go, in and letting go, patient as a tide. She reached a stone and put her back to it. Her heart worked in her throat. The clearing stood empty under the dark. The flowers held still. And the breath kept on at her ear, and now she could hear the rest of it, underneath — a second sound, low, so low she felt it more than heard it, a hum at the base of the oaks that came from the ground and not the air. The mark on the stone behind her answered it. She felt the spiral turn against her spine, a slow grinding circle against the cloth, and she pushed off the stone and spun round. The mark was where it had been. Shallow, worn, dead. But the stone was warmer now, and the warmth was climbing. She counted the stones again. She counted slowly, pointing at each one, because counting kept her hands busy and her eyes moving. She got thirteen. The thirteen stones stood in a ring around her with no gap and no way through and no way she had entered, and the tall thing she had passed on the avenue was not on the avenue anymore. It stood between two oaks at the far edge of the clearing, its outline taller than the trunks, its head lower than the leaves, watching with no eyes she could find in the dark. The pendant went cold in her hand. Cold all at once, like a stone lifted out of a stream in winter, cold and heavy, and the cold ran up the silver chain to her fingers and through her fingers to the scar on her wrist, and the scar opened. Not blood. A line of cold, the shape of a crescent, bright as frost in the pendant’s dying light. The hum under the oaks rose by one note. The breath drew in at her ear and held.
created_at"2026-09-10T10:22:38.051Z" 9/10/2026, 10:22:38 AM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags2
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences2
tagDensity1
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
95.86% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1207
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"slowly"
count1
highlights
0"slowly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
83.43% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1207
totalAiIsms4
found
0
word"pulse"
count1
1
word"warmth"
count2
2
word"measured"
count1
highlights
0"pulse"
1"warmth"
2"measured"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences97
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences97
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences97
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen48
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1209
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions2
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions9
wordCount1207
uniqueNames7
maxNameDensity0.25
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity0.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Silas1
Victoria1
District1
Richmond1
Grove1
November1
Rory3
persons
0"Silas"
1"Victoria"
2"Grove"
3"Rory"
places
0"Richmond"
1"November"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences59
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"looked like a coal under ash"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.827
wordCount1209
matches
0"neither closer nor"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences97
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs28
mean43.18
std25.1
cv0.581
sampleLengths
053
147
268
360
48
560
658
734
858
930
1063
1113
1252
1319
1460
1512
168
1789
1822
1913
2069
2176
2233
2321
2497
2549
2619
2718
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences97
matches
0"was gone"
84.39% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount3
totalVerbs173
matches
0"was blooming"
1"was facing"
2"was climbing"
54.49% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount2
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences3
totalSentences97
ratio0.031
matches
0"The oaks should have moved in a wind; there was no wind, and still the leaves worked against each other, a dry papery shuffle high above her, going on without her."
1"Each stone stood taller than her, damp to the touch, and each one carried a mark cut into the face at shoulder height — a spiral, worn shallow."
2"And the breath kept on at her ear, and now she could hear the rest of it, underneath — a second sound, low, so low she felt it more than heard it, a hum at the base of the oaks that came from the ground and not the air."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1207
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount26
adverbRatio0.021541010770505385
lyAdverbCount2
lyAdverbRatio0.0016570008285004142
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences97
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences97
mean12.46
std11.25
cv0.903
sampleLengths
018
129
22
32
42
57
64
75
831
925
105
1111
1227
139
1435
153
1613
178
1826
193
2031
215
2229
233
241
2520
2619
274
2811
2916
3013
3129
325
335
3420
354
3628
373
3817
3911
4010
413
424
4310
449
4524
465
4710
489
492
45.83% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats11
diversityRatio0.34375
totalSentences96
uniqueOpeners33
39.22% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences85
matches
0"Somewhere behind her, at the"
ratio0.012
50.59% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount36
totalSentences85
matches
0"She had spent two days"
1"She walked the last mile"
2"She climbed them anyway, the"
3"She counted six sets of"
4"She kept walking."
5"She followed it past the"
6"She counted them once."
7"She counted them again from"
8"She did not find the"
9"She held the pendant through"
10"she said out loud"
11"Her voice did not carry."
12"It landed on the grass"
13"She walked the ring."
14"She touched one."
15"She pulled her hand back"
16"She let it."
17"She crouched and laid her"
18"She stayed crouched and listened."
19"She turned a slow circle"
ratio0.424
54.12% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount69
totalSentences85
matches
0"The pendant woke her at"
1"Rory sat up in the"
2"She had spent two days"
3"She walked the last mile"
4"The gates shut at dusk."
5"A sign on the railings"
6"She climbed them anyway, the"
7"Deer stood in the dark"
8"She counted six sets of"
9"She kept walking."
10"The pendant warmed again when"
11"She followed it past the"
12"The oaks should have moved"
13"The Grove opened without warning."
14"Bluebells in November."
15"A spread of white cow"
16"The standing stones ringed the"
17"She counted them once."
18"She counted them again from"
19"Rory put her hand in"
ratio0.812
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences85
matches(empty)
ratio0
77.92% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences44
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"Hottest on the District, hottest of all at Richmond, and now the thing sat quiet against her ribs, patient, as if it had done its job and handed her the rest."
1"She held the pendant through her shirt and felt its warmth spread up her wrist to the crescent scar, which tingled the way it did when the weather turned."
2"And the breath kept on at her ear, and now she could hear the rest of it, underneath — a second sound, low, so low she felt it more than heard it, a hum at the …"
3"She counted slowly, pointing at each one, because counting kept her hands busy and her eyes moving."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags2
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags2
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences2
tagDensity1
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
86.1950%