Run: 2026-09-10-01M25DF6XE6W8PRMJ2V2WWJTH3

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Duration:
53.1s
Cost:
$0.005915
Provider:
DeepSeek

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The third deadbolt stuck the way it always did, and Rory had to put her shoulder to the door before it came free of the frame. She pulled it open six inches and stopped. Lucien Moreau stood on the landing. Charcoal suit, collar up, no umbrella. His hair was pushed back off his forehead as though the wind had never touched it, and his cane hung from one wrist by its ivory handle. Neither of them spoke. Below, the curry house was closing — turmeric, burnt cumin, old oil coming up the stairwell in one hot breath. "You cut your hair." He looked at her the way he looked at ledgers. "It suits you." "What do you want?" "To come in." "No." He nodded. He'd expected it. He'd come anyway. She should have shut the door. Three deadbolts and East London behind them and enough night traffic on Brick Lane to put a wall between this landing and whatever he'd come to say. She stood with her hand on the wood and her pulse gone somewhere she didn't want it. Ptolemy threaded himself between her ankles and out onto the landing, where he sat down in front of Lucien's shoes and stared up. "Traitor." She nudged the cat's tail with her toe. It flicked away from her and back again. "Cats know." Lucien crouched — careful, the cane angled out of the way — and offered the backs of his fingers. Ptolemy sniffed, then pushed his head into them and purred loud enough to rattle the floorboards. "They know who's lied and who hasn't. That's all they know." "Then he's confused." Something moved behind Lucien's eyes, the amber one catching the stairwell light. He stood. "I saw your Eva today." Her fingers curled into the door. "Eva's in Leeds." "Eva's in an interview room off Whitehall Road, giving a statement about a door that shouldn't be there. She asked me to look in on the flat." A pause. "She didn't say you were living in it." "I'm not living in it. I'm feeding the cat until Tuesday." Rory caught a fistful of her sleeve. "She's back Wednesday." "Tuesday." He filed it. "Then I came on the right night." Heat climbed her neck. "You came on the wrong one. Try again next century." "Rory." "Don't." The word came out harder than she meant it, and it stayed in the air, and Lucien — who negotiated with things that ate people, who had a voice built for closing rooms — stood on the landing and let it sit. She'd watched him do this to marks before. Give them rope. Stand with his hands folded until they hung themselves. He'd never once turned it on her. Not at the start. "You look well," she said, and meant it ugly. "Business good?" "Business is what brought me." "Business." "There's a man in the city asking after you. Not the polite kind." No theatre in it, no spin. "He has a photograph. You're in it, on Prince Regent Lane, in the rain, three days ago." Everything in her chest went tight. She remembered the rain. She remembered standing under the awning outside the Golden Empress with two bags of cold noodles because the van lock had jammed and Yu-Fei had sworn at her in Cantonese and told her to walk. Eleven minutes, she'd stood there. "Who?" "No name yet. I have a description, a district, and a question." His gaze held hers — one eye black as a keyhole, the other the colour of whisky, neither of them blinking. "The question is how he got the photograph." The flat smelled of old paper and cat. The radiator ticked behind her. "You said you'd never use me again." "I didn't." "Somebody did." "Somebody did." He didn't flinch. "Which is why I'm standing on a Tuesday instead of sending a card." A card. She almost laughed. Once he'd sent her one — heavy cream stock, no stamp, pushed under Silas's door — and she'd held onto it for three weeks and dropped it in the bin and then, at half two in the morning, taken it back out. It was in a drawer upstairs. She didn't think about it. "Say what you came to say." His thumb moved once against the ivory handle. "May I come in?" "No. You're asking nicely. You don't do nicely." "I do useful." "Which is it tonight?" "Both, if you'll have me." The stairwell bulb flickered — Eva had been meaning to change it since August — and in the half-dark his face did something complicated. The smile arrived and left. "I thought about you in Lisbon." "Don't." "You'll spend the next hour building me a motive out of old rope. This saves you the effort." He shifted his weight onto the cane. "I was there six weeks in the spring. I saw a woman on the tram with your walk and your shoulder, and I followed her four stops before I understood it wasn't you. I stood on the pavement afterwards for — " He stopped. "I don't know how long." The radiator ticked. "That's not an apology." "No." "It's not an explanation." "No." He turned the cane a quarter-turn on the boards. "Facts tonight. Nothing else. The last time I gave you the other thing, you left." The last time. Camden, a stairwell with broken tiles, a taxi waiting with its indicator on. She'd said don't. He'd said I'll find you. She'd gone anyway. The look on his face through the back window was the only photograph of him she'd ever kept. She stepped back and swung the door wide. Lucien came past her — cold air and cedar, and under that something older, like struck matches — and set the cane against the wall. "You don't get to leave that there." "It's a cane." "It's a sword." "It's a cane that happens to contain a sword. There's a distinction, and I've explained it." He turned. In the lamplight, up close, he looked tired — the skin under his eyes gone the colour of weak tea, the suit not sitting on his shoulders the way it had in March. Four months was four months, on him too. "Tea?" "I'd rather you didn't." "Why not?" "Because you'll stand with your back to me for two minutes and find sixteen reasons to throw me out, and I'd rather you did it to my face." Rory folded her arms. The microwave clock read 9:41. "Fine. Talk." He did. "Three months ago I brokered a truce between two houses in Avaros. It cost more than I had, and part of the cost was a ledger. Names of people who'd crossed them, people who were owed, people who were owed by me." He let it sit. "Your name was in the ledger. I put it there two years ago, when I needed to keep you off a list that was considerably worse." "You put me on a list." "I put you on the safer list." "There's no such thing." "No." A pause. "There isn't." Rory was aware of the chair, four feet away, of Ptolemy winding between Lucien's ankles now, of her own bare feet on Eva's cold floor. "When did you lose it?" "The fourteenth of March." Her hand came up to her mouth and stayed there. The fourteenth of March. A lock-up in Bermondsey, a man in a grey overcoat, her wrists zip-tied behind her, the question asked four times — who is Lucien Moreau to you — and her answer the same every time. Nobody. He'd broken two fingers finding out if that was true. Eva had come through the door ten minutes later with a tyre iron and a scream like a siren. She still couldn't bend the ring finger all the way. "You didn't come." "I didn't know." "You didn't come." "I found out in June. From a barman." He looked at the floor. "A barman who was frightened of you." She laughed. It came out wrong, but it came out. "You were in Lisbon." "I was in Lisbon." He raised his head. "Following a stranger down a tram line, because I'm a coward, and because if I'd come here in June you'd have opened that door and I'd have deserved whatever you did with it." The clock turned over. The flat breathed. Ptolemy jumped onto the desk and knocked a scroll to the floor with the deliberateness of an animal who knew exactly what he was doing. "Get out." Lucien didn't move. "In a minute." "Now." "You've got your hand on the back of the chair." She looked down. She had. Her fingers were curled round the rail of it, the wood gone warm under her palm, and she didn't remember crossing the room. He looked up at her from the seat — lamp behind him, shadow down one side of his face. Nothing like the fixer in the charcoal suit. He looked like a man who'd walked across a city to be told no. "Sit," he said. "Or don't. But stop standing behind me. It's the only thing in this room I can't take." Rory didn't sit. She came round the side of the chair instead, close enough to see the stubble on his jaw, the seam where the black of his eye met the amber, the pulse going in his throat. "Say my name." "Rory." "Not that one." For a long moment he said nothing at all. Then, low, like something he'd been carrying a while — "Aurora."
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags15
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences86
tagDensity0.174
leniency0.349
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1572
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
84.10% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1572
totalAiIsms5
found
0
word"pulse"
count2
1
word"flicked"
count1
2
word"flickered"
count1
3
word"weight"
count1
highlights
0"pulse"
1"flicked"
2"flickered"
3"weight"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences97
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences97
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences165
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen46
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1591
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions14
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions37
wordCount997
uniqueNames18
maxNameDensity0.9
worstName"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Rory5
Moreau2
East1
London1
Brick1
Lane1
Lucien9
Ptolemy4
Heat1
Golden1
Empress1
Yu-Fei1
Cantonese1
Silas1
Eva3
August1
March2
Bermondsey1
persons
0"Rory"
1"Moreau"
2"Lucien"
3"Ptolemy"
4"Heat"
5"Yu-Fei"
6"Silas"
7"Eva"
places
0"East"
1"London"
2"Brick"
3"Lane"
4"Golden"
5"Cantonese"
6"March"
7"Bermondsey"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences55
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"looked like a man who'd walked across a c"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1591
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences165
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs100
mean15.91
std17.99
cv1.131
sampleLengths
026
18
263
317
44
53
61
78
850
923
1017
1148
123
1314
145
159
1637
1721
1811
1914
201
211
2242
2331
2411
255
261
2736
2850
291
3041
3113
327
332
342
3518
3658
376
388
394
408
413
424
435
4429
456
461
4774
483
494
98.03% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences97
matches
0"was pushed"
1"were curled"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs169
matches
0"was doing"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount17
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences11
totalSentences165
ratio0.067
matches
0"Below, the curry house was closing — turmeric, burnt cumin, old oil coming up the stairwell in one hot breath."
1"\"Cats know.\" Lucien crouched — careful, the cane angled out of the way — and offered the backs of his fingers."
2"The word came out harder than she meant it, and it stayed in the air, and Lucien — who negotiated with things that ate people, who had a voice built for closing rooms — stood on the landing and let it sit."
3"\"No name yet. I have a description, a district, and a question.\" His gaze held hers — one eye black as a keyhole, the other the colour of whisky, neither of them blinking."
4"Once he'd sent her one — heavy cream stock, no stamp, pushed under Silas's door — and she'd held onto it for three weeks and dropped it in the bin and then, at half two in the morning, taken it back out."
5"The stairwell bulb flickered — Eva had been meaning to change it since August — and in the half-dark his face did something complicated."
6"Lucien came past her — cold air and cedar, and under that something older, like struck matches — and set the cane against the wall."
7"In the lamplight, up close, he looked tired — the skin under his eyes gone the colour of weak tea, the suit not sitting on his shoulders the way it had in March."
8"A lock-up in Bermondsey, a man in a grey overcoat, her wrists zip-tied behind her, the question asked four times — who is Lucien Moreau to you — and her answer the same every time."
9"He looked up at her from the seat — lamp behind him, shadow down one side of his face."
10"Then, low, like something he'd been carrying a while —"
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount985
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"zip-tied behind her,"
adverbCount25
adverbRatio0.025380710659898477
lyAdverbCount3
lyAdverbRatio0.003045685279187817
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences165
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences165
mean9.64
std9.99
cv1.036
sampleLengths
026
18
26
36
427
54
620
714
83
94
103
111
122
133
143
156
1627
1717
1823
199
208
2121
2216
2311
243
2512
262
275
286
293
3029
318
3218
333
344
357
364
3710
381
391
4042
418
423
439
447
454
469
472
485
491
53.54% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats15
diversityRatio0.37575757575757573
totalSentences165
uniqueOpeners62
78.43% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences85
matches
0"Once he'd sent her one"
1"Then, low, like something he'd"
ratio0.024
31.76% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount40
totalSentences85
matches
0"She pulled it open six"
1"His hair was pushed back"
2"He looked at her the"
3"He'd expected it."
4"He'd come anyway."
5"She should have shut the"
6"She stood with her hand"
7"She nudged the cat's tail"
8"It flicked away from her"
9"Her fingers curled into the"
10"He filed it"
11"She'd watched him do this"
12"He'd never once turned it"
13"she said, and meant it"
14"She remembered the rain."
15"She remembered standing under the"
16"His gaze held hers —"
17"He didn't flinch"
18"She almost laughed."
19"It was in a drawer"
ratio0.471
30.59% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount73
totalSentences85
matches
0"The third deadbolt stuck the"
1"She pulled it open six"
2"Lucien Moreau stood on the"
3"Charcoal suit, collar up, no"
4"His hair was pushed back"
5"Neither of them spoke."
6"He looked at her the"
7"He'd expected it."
8"He'd come anyway."
9"She should have shut the"
10"She stood with her hand"
11"Ptolemy threaded himself between her"
12"She nudged the cat's tail"
13"It flicked away from her"
14"Lucien crouched — careful, the"
15"Ptolemy sniffed, then pushed his"
16"Something moved behind Lucien's eyes,"
17"Her fingers curled into the"
18"Rory caught a fistful of"
19"He filed it"
ratio0.859
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences85
matches(empty)
ratio0
89.95% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences27
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"His hair was pushed back off his forehead as though the wind had never touched it, and his cane hung from one wrist by its ivory handle."
1"A lock-up in Bermondsey, a man in a grey overcoat, her wrists zip-tied behind her, the question asked four times — who is Lucien Moreau to you — and her answer …"
91.67% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags15
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"His gaze held, the other the colour of whisky, neither of them blinking"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags2
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences86
tagDensity0.023
leniency0.047
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
85.0686%