Run: 2026-09-10-01M25DJAA6DE40DFDD4WHEPXX5

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Duration:
33.1s
Cost:
$0.003890
Provider:
DeepSeek

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The pendant warmed against Rory's sternum before she reached the gates. Forty minutes from Richmond station, past the dark bulk of the park, along the road that curved and curved and gave nothing back. The gates were padlocked. A maintenance gap in the fence on the Roehampton side stood open, or she'd found one that had always been open. She couldn't remember which. She climbed through, coat snagging on wire, and started across the grass. Her phone read 11:47. The screen lit her face, then died. She pocketed it. Somewhere left of her, bracken shook. Deer, most likely. Richmond Park at night ran thick with deer. She waited for hooves, for the wet cough of them tearing at grass. Nothing came. The bracken went on shaking long after the animal should have moved on. She kept walking. The Grove sat in a hollow north of Pen Ponds, though no map marked it. She'd been twice before, once with Eva, once alone, both times in daylight. Wildflowers had carpeted the ground in February. The air had tasted of honey and cold iron. The six standing stones at its edge were oak, not stone, though everyone called them stones anyway: trunks blackened and gnarled, grown in a ring no one could explain. The pendant pulsed. Warm, then warmer. "Alright," she said. Her voice sounded thin in all that open dark. "Alright." Then the trees. They rose ahead, shapes she knew even in the dark. The bent one on the left like a man with a broken back. The tall one on the right that split into three at the crown. The ring of oaks. She walked toward it and the grass changed under her feet. Softer. Springy, like moss over stone. She stopped at the boundary. Inside the ring, the wildflowers stood open. Bluebells. Wood anemones. Something pale and trumpet-shaped she'd never named. They gave off a faint light, or seemed to. Moonlight, she told herself, though the moon sat behind cloud. The air inside the ring ran warmer than the air outside. She felt it on her cheeks, on her hands, the way you feel a doorway in winter. The pendant burned. Rory stepped through. The quiet came first. Richmond Park at night was always quiet. This was something else. Wind had moved through the trees all evening. She'd heard it on the walk over, that long low shush. Now the wind was gone, and the trees still moved. Not all of them. The ones at the edge of the ring swayed as if a breeze passed through, though nothing touched her hair, her coat, her face. Leaves whispered. She heard them. She did not feel them. She turned a slow circle. The path back to the fence had vanished. Grass stretched away from the ring in every direction, silver under cloud, flat and featureless. No bracken. No deer trails. No road beyond. Just grass, and the dark line of trees farther off, and above them a sky with too many stars. "Okay." The word fell into the quiet and didn't come back. The pendant pulsed. A slow heat against her chest, a second heartbeat. She lifted it clear of her collar. The crimson stone glowed, red light spilling through the cracks in her fingers, and she felt it pull. No visible mechanism. Just a tug at the sternum, toward the far side of the ring. She followed. Something moved behind her. Rory stopped. Turning meant confirming. She stood with the pendant hot in her fist and listened, and heard bare feet on moss. Soft. Wet. One. Two. Three. Then nothing. She counted to ten. To twenty. Her heart worked at her ribs. She turned. The ring stood empty. No flower bent. No print in the moss. Just the six oaks in their slow sway, and beyond them the endless silver grass. "Hello." Her voice held steadier than she did. "I know someone's there." The trees didn't answer. The wind picked up instead. Hard, sudden, a gust that threw her hair across her face and stung her eyes. She raised an arm. The wildflowers flattened around her, and in the gust she heard a woman laugh. Low. Close. Just behind her left shoulder. Rory drove her elbow backward. Hit air. The wind died. The flowers stood back up, one by one, as if nothing had touched them. She needed to leave. The thought sat in her chest, heavy and cold. Leaving the ring was the sensible thing. But she'd come for a reason. The pendant had led her here, and the pendant had come from someone, and the note with it said find me where the flowers never die. She'd kept the note. One line, in ink that never dried. She took a breath. "I'm here." The grove answered. A sound rose from the far edge of the ring, out past the flowers and the oaks, in the dark grass. Footsteps. This time they didn't stop. They came. Slow, bare, deliberate. One. Two. Three. Closer. Rory backed toward the centre of the ring. The pendant blazed. Heat enough to sting her palm, red light spilling between her fingers. The light reached the flowers, and the flowers reached back, pale petals tilting toward it like sunflowers tracking the sun. She held it up. The footsteps stopped. Long moment. Nothing. She stood with her arm raised, the pendant lighting a small red circle around her, and watched the grass beyond the ring. Then she saw it. At the very edge of the light. A shape. Tall. Thin. Standing at the boundary of the six oaks. Not human. Too narrow. The head was wrong. Too small, or too large. She couldn't fix it. Every time she looked straight at it, it slid to a different proportion. "Who are you?" The shape tilted its head. And the head wasn't there. It had never been there. What she'd taken for a head was the dark space where her eye expected one, and inside that space something moved. Slow. White. Wrong. The underside of a mushroom, turning. Her legs quit. She couldn't make them go. The shape took one step forward. Onto the moss. Into the ring. The flowers under its feet didn't bend. They withered. Bluebells curled and blackened and slumped in a spreading ring around its step. The moss paled to grey. The pale trumpet-shaped flowers dissolved into white dust that hung in the air and did not fall. Rory stared at the dust. Then she ran. The ring went on forever. She ran east, toward where the fence should be, toward the road, toward the lights of Roehampton past the trees. She ran until her lungs gave out and her thighs locked, and when she stopped, gasping, the six oaks stood around her. The same bent one. The same three-crowned one. The same flowers. The pendant still glowed in her fist. And from the far side of the ring, the footsteps began again. Slow. Bare. Deliberate. "You're not real. You're a trick of the light. You're — " The footsteps stopped behind her. Close. Close enough for the wet of the moss under each one, the slight drag between them, the long slow breath that wasn't hers. A hand settled on her shoulder. Cold. Dry. Light. The fingers were wrong. Too many joints, bending where fingers didn't bend, the thumb curling back the way a thumb shouldn't. Every joint ticked as it closed, one after another, like a metal clasp being fastened. Rory stood without moving. The pendant burned against her palm, hot and useless. "I came. I came. Just like you asked." Behind her, the woman's voice, low and amused: "Not yet, love. You didn't come. You were brought." The fingers tightened. She tried to scream and found no air for it. Far off at the edge of the park, a siren started up, then stopped. The trees went on swaying. Rory stood in the ring of oaks with her mouth open and nothing left in her. The footsteps began again.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags3
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences10
tagDensity0.3
leniency0.6
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
96.26% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1336
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"very"
count1
highlights
0"very"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
73.80% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1336
totalAiIsms7
found
0
word"pulsed"
count2
1
word"footsteps"
count5
highlights
0"pulsed"
1"footsteps"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"hung in the air"
count1
highlights
0"hung in the air"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences190
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences190
filterMatches
0"feel"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"tried to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences197
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen29
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1338
ratio0
matches(empty)
62.50% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions4
unquotedAttributions1
matches
0"Moonlight, she told herself, though the moon sat behind cloud."
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions29
wordCount1296
uniqueNames12
maxNameDensity0.62
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity1
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Rory8
Richmond3
Roehampton2
Park2
Grove1
Pen1
Ponds1
Eva1
February1
One3
Close3
Slow3
persons
0"Rory"
1"Grove"
2"Eva"
3"One"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
2"February"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences77
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1338
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences197
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs59
mean22.68
std21.63
cv0.954
sampleLengths
011
164
214
345
43
573
66
713
83
962
1064
113
123
134
1440
1538
165
1750
1811
1953
202
214
2227
232
2414
2527
2612
2749
287
2917
3063
316
3239
3347
343
3525
3653
373
385
3940
408
4112
4244
435
443
455
4675
4712
4829
496
99.72% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount3
totalSentences190
matches
0"were padlocked"
1"was gone"
2"being fastened"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs214
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences197
ratio0
matches(empty)
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1299
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"pale trumpet-shaped flowers"
adverbCount41
adverbRatio0.03156274056966898
lyAdverbCount1
lyAdverbRatio0.0007698229407236335
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences197
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences197
mean6.79
std5.94
cv0.875
sampleLengths
011
123
24
321
44
512
64
77
83
96
103
118
1213
132
1413
153
1615
1713
187
199
2029
213
223
233
249
251
263
2710
2813
2913
304
3111
321
335
345
357
361
372
387
399
4010
4111
4217
433
443
454
467
474
488
4911
52.62% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats18
diversityRatio0.37055837563451777
totalSentences197
uniqueOpeners73
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount10
totalSentences146
matches
0"Somewhere left of her, bracken"
1"Then the trees."
2"Just grass, and the dark"
3"Just a tug at the"
4"Just the six oaks in"
5"Just behind her left shoulder."
6"Then she saw it."
7"Too small, or too large."
8"Then she ran."
9"Too many joints, bending where"
ratio0.068
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount35
totalSentences146
matches
0"She couldn't remember which."
1"She climbed through, coat snagging"
2"Her phone read 11:47."
3"She pocketed it."
4"She waited for hooves, for"
5"She kept walking."
6"She'd been twice before, once"
7"Her voice sounded thin in"
8"They rose ahead, shapes she"
9"She walked toward it and"
10"She stopped at the boundary."
11"They gave off a faint"
12"She felt it on her"
13"She'd heard it on the"
14"She heard them."
15"She did not feel them."
16"She turned a slow circle."
17"She lifted it clear of"
18"She stood with the pendant"
19"She counted to ten."
ratio0.24
90.14% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount108
totalSentences146
matches
0"The pendant warmed against Rory's"
1"The gates were padlocked."
2"A maintenance gap in the"
3"She couldn't remember which."
4"She climbed through, coat snagging"
5"Her phone read 11:47."
6"The screen lit her face,"
7"She pocketed it."
8"Deer, most likely."
9"Richmond Park at night ran"
10"She waited for hooves, for"
11"The bracken went on shaking"
12"She kept walking."
13"The Grove sat in a"
14"She'd been twice before, once"
15"Wildflowers had carpeted the ground"
16"The air had tasted of"
17"The six standing stones at"
18"The pendant pulsed."
19"Her voice sounded thin in"
ratio0.74
34.25% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences146
matches
0"Now the wind was gone,"
ratio0.007
80.75% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences46
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"The ones at the edge of the ring swayed as if a breeze passed through, though nothing touched her hair, her coat, her face."
1"Hard, sudden, a gust that threw her hair across her face and stung her eyes."
2"The pale trumpet-shaped flowers dissolved into white dust that hung in the air and did not fall."
3"Close enough for the wet of the moss under each one, the slight drag between them, the long slow breath that wasn't hers."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags3
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags1
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences10
tagDensity0.1
leniency0.2
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
92.8011%