Run: 2026-09-10-01M25DJXX569WZK6NAD7X7BCE9

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Duration:
15.7s
Cost:
$0.001328
Provider:
DeepSeek

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The standing stones jutted from the earth like the knuckles of a buried giant, their surfaces rough with lichen and time. Rory pressed her palm against the nearest one. Cold. Not the cold of winter, but something older, something that had never known warmth. "Feel that?" she asked. Nyx drifted beside her, their form wavering at the edges. A silhouette of shadow against the midday sun, thin as smoke and twice as difficult to hold onto. "The Veil thins here. Pockets of elsewhere bleed through." "Elsewhere." Rory pulled her jacket tighter. The October air had no bite, yet goosebumps crawled up her arms. "That's specific." "Specificity is a mortal comfort." Nyx tilted their head, violet eyes flickering. "Shall we?" They passed between the stones. The world shifted. Rory's stomach lurched, that same dropping sensation from a dream where you fall and wake before hitting the ground. Except she didn't wake. The oak trees behind them, the ones she'd memorised on the walk from Richmond Park's main path, had vanished. In their place stood a forest that belonged in a painting, the kind hung in museums where guards watched you breathe too close. The trees were silver-barked, their leaves translucent, catching light that had no source. Wildflowers carpeted the ground in colours Rory had no names for. Not quite blue, not quite violet. Somewhere between the two and somehow more. They didn't sway in any breeze. They stood perfectly still, as if waiting. "Time moves differently here." Nyx's voice came as a whisper from everywhere and nowhere. "An hour inside could be minutes outside. Or days." "Days." Rory's hand went to the pendant at her throat. The Heartstone pulsed against her skin, warm and steady. A heartbeat that wasn't hers. "You could have mentioned that before we crossed." "Would it have changed your mind?" No. It wouldn't have. She'd come too far to turn back now. The path ahead wound through the silver trees, soft moss underfoot muffling their steps. Rory noticed something odd about the ground, about the way the moss seemed to glow faintly where her boots pressed down, then faded as she moved on. She looked behind them. No footsteps. No trace they'd ever walked this way. The forest swallowed their passage whole. "Footprints," she murmured. "Fae groves remember nothing of those who trespass." "Trespass." Rory glanced at the shadow beside her. "Is that what we're doing?" "We are uninvited guests in a place that predates invitation." They walked deeper. The trees grew taller, their silver bark twisting into spirals that hurt to follow with your eyes. Rory caught movements in her peripheral vision, shapes that darted between trunks, there and gone before she could focus. She didn't ask what they were. Some questions invited answers she wasn't ready to hear. The flowers changed as they walked. Now they grew in spirals around the tree bases, pulsing with a slow rhythm, like lungs breathing. Like hearts beating. Rory crouched beside one, watching the petals open and close. "How long?" she asked. "Long enough for the sun to move." Nyx hovered at the edge of her vision, solid one moment, translucent the next. "Or not at all. The sky here doesn't work the way you expect." Rory looked up. The canopy was thick, leaves overlapping like scales, but through the gaps she saw sky. Amber sky. The colour of honey held to candlelight. Not blue, not grey, not any sky she'd ever seen. "That's not Earth sky." "No." "Where are we, Nyx?" "A grove that exists in the spaces between. Not quite your world. Not quite the Fae realm. A pocket. A breath held too long." Rory stood, brushing moss from her knees. The pendant pulsed again, stronger now, warm enough to feel through her shirt. She wrapped her fingers around it. "There's Hel magic here. The Heartstone reacts to it." "The grove touches many things." Nyx drifted forward, their form stretching, thinning, reforming. "It is a crossroads of sorts. A place where boundaries grow thin." They pressed on. The air grew thicker, heavy with the scent of things blooming and rotting in the same breath. Sweet and cloying, then sharp and sour, then sweet again. Rory's head swam. She blinked hard, focusing on the path, on putting one foot in front of the other. The trees thinned. The clearing opened before them. Rory stopped walking. Stopped breathing. Standing stones ringed a space no larger than her flat's living room, but the space inside felt infinite. The stones were white, not the grey of the ones outside, but pale as bone, smooth as river glass. They hummed. Not a sound, exactly. A vibration in the air, in her chest, in her teeth. Something ancient and aware, watching from the circle's edge. In the centre stood a pool. Not water. Something that moved like water but gleamed like mercury, reflecting light that wasn't there. Rory took a step toward it. The reflection shifted. She saw herself. Then she saw a version of herself that wasn't her. Older. Scarred. Eyes that had seen things Rory hoped she'd never see. "Don't touch it." Nyx's voice cut sharp for once, no whisper, no drift. "That pool shows what could be. What might have been. It will drive you mad if you stare too long." Rory looked away. Her hands were shaking. When had they started shaking? "What is this place?" "A prison." Nyx moved to the edge of the circle but didn't cross. "Or a sanctuary. Depends on who you ask." "Which is it?" "Both. Neither. The Fae don't think in such simple terms." Rory studied the stones. The hum grew louder, pressing against her ears, her skull, the space behind her eyes. She felt something brush against her thoughts. Not words. Impressions. Curiosity. Hunger. Patience worn thin over centuries. "Something's here," she whispered. "Someone." A figure stepped from between two stones. She hadn't been there a moment ago, Rory was certain. Yet she moved with the casual grace of someone who'd stood in that exact spot for eons. Silver hair fell to her waist, catching light and throwing it back. Pale lavender eyes regarded Rory with an expression that wasn't quite welcome, wasn't quite warning. Bare feet on moss that glowed where she stood. No footprints behind her to mark how she'd arrived. "You brought the mortal." The woman's voice sounded like wind through leaves, like water over stones, like the memory of a song you couldn't quite recall. "And the shadow. How quaint." "Isolde." Nyx inclined their head, a gesture that might have been respect or might have been mockery. "We've come for answers." "Answers." Isolde's lips curved. Not a smile. Something closer to an acknowledgment of an old joke. "Everyone comes for answers. No one comes for the questions." Rory found her voice. "I was told you could help." "Told by whom?" "A man. I don't know his name." "The most dangerous kind of man." Isolde circled her, bare feet silent on the moss. "Men without names carry the heaviest truths. What do you seek, mortal?" "The Heartstone." Rory touched the pendant again. "What is it? Why was it given to me?" Isolde stopped circling. Her eyes fixed on the gem at Rory's throat, and for a moment, something moved behind that ageless face. Recognition. Wariness. And something else. Something that looked almost like grief. "That," she said, "is a piece of a heart that should have stopped beating three hundred years ago."
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags18
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences49
tagDensity0.367
leniency0.735
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
95.98% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1243
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"perfectly"
count1
highlights
0"perfectly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
59.77% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1243
totalAiIsms10
found
0
word"warmth"
count1
1
word"wavering"
count1
2
word"stomach"
count1
3
word"lurched"
count1
4
word"whisper"
count2
5
word"pulsed"
count2
6
word"footsteps"
count1
7
word"sanctuary"
count1
highlights
0"warmth"
1"wavering"
2"stomach"
3"lurched"
4"whisper"
5"pulsed"
6"footsteps"
7"sanctuary"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences118
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences118
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences148
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen27
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1243
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions11
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
34.09% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions37
wordCount949
uniqueNames7
maxNameDensity2.32
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Nyx8
October1
Richmond1
Park1
Rory22
Heartstone1
Isolde3
persons
0"Nyx"
1"Rory"
2"Isolde"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
globalScore0.341
windowScore0.667
5.07% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences69
glossingSentenceCount4
matches
0"Not quite blue, not quite violet"
1"not quite violet"
2"as if waiting"
3"quite welcome, wasn't quite warning"
4"quite warning"
5"quite recall"
6"sounded like wind through leaves, like wat"
39.10% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches2
per1kWords1.609
wordCount1243
matches
0"Not the cold of winter, but something older, something"
1"not the grey of the ones outside, but pale as bone, smooth as river glass"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences148
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs53
mean23.45
std19.44
cv0.829
sampleLengths
044
14
237
320
414
58
665
750
823
932
106
1112
1260
133
148
1513
1610
1754
1836
194
2034
2137
224
231
244
2524
2635
2725
2849
298
305
3163
3256
3333
3412
354
3621
373
3810
3936
404
411
4279
4331
4421
4526
4610
473
487
4927
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences118
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs168
matches
0"were shaking"
1"wasn't quite warning"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences148
ratio0
matches(empty)
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount950
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"louder, pressing against her"
adverbCount34
adverbRatio0.035789473684210524
lyAdverbCount3
lyAdverbRatio0.003157894736842105
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences148
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences148
mean8.4
std5.96
cv0.71
sampleLengths
021
18
21
314
44
510
618
79
86
912
102
1112
122
135
143
1519
164
1719
1823
1913
2011
216
227
236
247
2514
269
2710
289
295
308
316
321
333
348
3514
3627
374
382
397
406
413
428
438
445
4510
463
4717
4819
496
76.80% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats3
diversityRatio0.47297297297297297
totalSentences148
uniqueOpeners70
68.03% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences98
matches
0"Somewhere between the two and"
1"Then she saw a version"
ratio0.02
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount16
totalSentences98
matches
0"They passed between the stones."
1"They didn't sway in any"
2"They stood perfectly still, as"
3"It wouldn't have."
4"She'd come too far to"
5"She looked behind them."
6"They walked deeper."
7"She didn't ask what they"
8"She wrapped her fingers around"
9"They pressed on."
10"She blinked hard, focusing on"
11"She saw herself."
12"Her hands were shaking."
13"She felt something brush against"
14"She hadn't been there a"
15"Her eyes fixed on the"
ratio0.163
72.24% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount76
totalSentences98
matches
0"The standing stones jutted from"
1"Rory pressed her palm against"
2"Nyx drifted beside her, their"
3"A silhouette of shadow against"
4"Rory pulled her jacket tighter"
5"The October air had no"
6"Nyx tilted their head, violet"
7"They passed between the stones."
8"The world shifted."
9"Rory's stomach lurched, that same"
10"The oak trees behind them,"
11"The trees were silver-barked, their"
12"Wildflowers carpeted the ground in"
13"They didn't sway in any"
14"They stood perfectly still, as"
15"Nyx's voice came as a"
16"Rory's hand went to the"
17"The Heartstone pulsed against her"
18"A heartbeat that wasn't hers."
19"It wouldn't have."
ratio0.776
51.02% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences98
matches
0"Now they grew in spirals"
ratio0.01
58.82% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences34
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"Not the cold of winter, but something older, something that had never known warmth."
1"The trees were silver-barked, their leaves translucent, catching light that had no source."
2"Rory caught movements in her peripheral vision, shapes that darted between trunks, there and gone before she could focus."
3"Silver hair fell to her waist, catching light and throwing it back."
97.22% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags18
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"Nyx drifted, their form stretching, thinning, reforming"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags5
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"she murmured (murmur)"
1"she whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences49
tagDensity0.102
leniency0.204
rawRatio0.4
effectiveRatio0.082
85.0717%