Run: 2026-09-10-01M25DKKYG6KD6YDX8XVJC8HCR

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Duration:
24.4s
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$0.002108
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DeepSeek

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System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The stairs down to the old Camden South platform were slick with something Quinn didn't want to name, and her torch beam kept sliding off the glazed bricks like they were refusing the light. Eighteen years on the job and she still counted the steps out of habit. Sixty-two down. Morris had counted them too, the night they'd gone into the tunnels off the old goods yard. He'd said sixty-two. She'd never checked. At the bottom, the platform opened out like the throat of something sleeping. Cream tiles, brown with seepage, a ghost sign for Player's cigarettes still legible above the ticket hall arch. The place stank of iron and wet salt and, underneath it, something sweeter — like a struck match, like a storm about to break. The body lay between the tracks. DS Callum Reid met her at the platform edge, clipboard tucked under his arm, high-vis collar turned up against the damp. He was thirty-one, keen, and had been hovering near a promotion for eleven months. Quinn had seen the type before. They hovered until they flew, or until they crashed. "Morning, guv. Scene's secure. SOCO's on the way down but it's slow going — the access shaft's half-flooded." "Who found him." "Night watchman, council contractor. Checking the pumps. Called it in at four-fifty-six." Quinn crouched, steadying herself on the rail with two fingers. The man on the tracks was in his mid-fifties, grey at the temples, good wool overcoat gone black with tunnel water. Pocket square. Proper shoes. He lay on his back with his arms out and his palms turned up like a man caught mid-fall, or mid-surrender. No blood. None at all. "What's the cause." "Pending, obviously. First look says cardiac. No wounds, no defensive marks, nothing under the nails." Reid flipped a page. "Looks like he wandered down here. Bit of a toff, disoriented, maybe a drinker, missed his step off the platform." Quinn looked at the shoes. Black oxfords, hand-stitched, the leather gleaming despite the wet. She took her pen and lifted the trouser cuff an inch. The soles were clean. Not scuffed, not silted, not so much as a grain of the tunnel's ubiquitous black grit. "Reid. How do you get down here without walking through this place." "Pardon?" "Look at the floor." The dust on the platform was a fine, undisturbed grey, decades deep, marked in three distinct trails: hers, Reid's, and the night watchman's, wandering in from the eastern tunnel. Nowhere else. Not so much as a scuff around the body. Reid considered it for a moment and found his answer. "He came in on the tracks, then. Walked the line in." "The line comes from a tunnel that's been sealed since eighty-nine. He'd have had to walk through a mile of standing water in two hundred quid shoes." "Then he came off a maintenance trolley." "There's no trolley." "All right, guv, then I don't know." He said it pleasantly, which was somehow worse. "Point is, we've got a dead man with no wounds on him in a closed station. Could be natural, could be the drink. I've got a call into Missing Persons — if he's a toff, someone's reported him. We'll have a name by lunch." Quinn stood. She checked her watch — the old leather one, the one Morris had given her, the strap worn to the colour of tea — and made herself let go of the numbers. Quarter past six. Two hours until the press sniffed the shaft. "What's in his hands." They'd bagged them, but she could see the shape. Left fist closed tight around something the size of a knucklebone. She had the SOCO bag opened on the rail and tipped it into her glove. It was bone. A knuckle, in fact — human, by the look, polished and yellowed and carved with a small symbol on one face, a spiral with a line through it. Warm in her palm, though the tunnel was nine degrees. And in the right hand, the bagged second item. A compass. Small, brass, green with verdigris at the seams. The glass face was etched with a wheel of fine sigils so small she had to tilt it to the light. The needle did not point north. It swung lazily, as if looking for something, and every time it neared the bricked-up arch at the far end of the platform it strained, quivered, and pulled. Reid watched her turn it. "That's a prop, surely. Some occult shop rubbish." "Toffs don't carry occult shop rubbish in their overcoat. He was holding one and wearing the other." "Guv—" "Reid, I want you to find out what kind of man carries a carved bone to a disused Tube station at four in the morning. And I want the name of every missing persons report filed in the last week where the subject's described as well-dressed and over fifty." He went, and Quinn was alone with the smell of the place, which was getting stronger. Struck match. Storm about to break. She heard the ladder before she heard the voice — someone coming down who had no business coming down, and Reid's constable at the top failing, audibly, to stop her. "Detective Quinn? I was told — they said you'd want someone who'd know what that is." Eva Kowalski was small and freckled and had clearly run here, red curls escaping a pinned mess, glasses fogged. She was carrying the leather satchel she never went anywhere without, and she started tucking her hair behind her left ear before she'd even finished the sentence. "And you are." "Eva Kowalski. British Museum, restricted archives. A colleague of mine — well, of Aurora's — flagged the call. The bone token, the compass." She stopped at the platform edge and looked down at the body, and something in her face went carefully still, the way a person's does when they recognise a thing they wish they hadn't. "May I see the token?" Quinn held it up. "It's an entry token," Eva said quietly. "For the Veil Market. You need one to get in. They're made from — from the remains of someone who agreed to it, and they're carved with a mark, and when the mark's fresh the bone holds a charge." "How fresh." Eva leaned in, and Quinn watched her eyes, not the bone. "Yesterday. A day, maybe two. The carving's still white in the groove." "And this market." "It moves. Every full moon it's somewhere else." She glanced up at the tunnel roof. "Last night was the full moon, Detective. So if he had a token for here — he came to where the market was, and it isn't here anymore." Reid came back down the ladder in time to hear the last of it, and Quinn saw the whole thing settle over his face like a lid. He looked at Eva with the particular flatness the Met reserved for civilians, women, and anyone who'd ever read a book. "With respect, guv, the museum's not our forensic provider." He turned his clipboard round so Quinn could see. "I've got a preliminary. Uniform found a stash pad two tunnels east — sleeping bags, a paraffin stove, needles. There's your answer. He's a user. He came down looking for the squat, took something stronger than he was used to, and his heart stopped. The compass and the knuckle are the kind of thing people carry when they've gone a bit religious. It's a sad one but it's a simple one." Quinn looked at the platform. At the dust. At the trails. At the body whose shoes were clean and whose palms were turned up. "No," she said. "Guv—" "The squat's east. The body's west, past the sealed arch. That's two hundred yards in the opposite direction from the only door a living man could use. He didn't walk here, Callum. Nobody walked here." She crouched again, and this time she put her glove flat on the dust a foot from the body's head, and everyone watched her do it and nobody understood. "Look at what isn't here." Reid looked. Eva looked. "The dust," Quinn said. "It's deep everywhere. It's deep right up to the body. But not under it. He's lying on top of the dust, and the dust hasn't settled around him at all. This is four inches of twenty years of soot and there isn't a single crater where he landed." Eva said it first, softly. "He was set down." "He was carried," Quinn said, "and the bastard who carried him didn't walk." Reid opened his mouth and shut it. Above them, water dripped somewhere off the tiled arch, counting off a rhythm of its own. Quinn stood and held up the compass, and the needle swung, trembling, past north, past the platform, and came to rest pointing at the bricked-up arch — the arch that had been sealed since 1989, that had been photographed and surveyed and catalogued, and that now, she noticed for the first time, had no dust on it at all. Not one mote. The bricks were dry as a bone in a place that was weeping damp from every other surface. She checked her watch. Six twenty-nine. "Reid," she said. "Get me a lamp, a chisel, and a warrant, and don't tell anyone upstairs why." She turned to Eva, who had gone very pale and was tucking her hair behind her ear again and again, as if the gesture might keep her hands from shaking. "Miss Kowalski. You said the Market moves. Does it ever leave anything behind?" Eva looked at the arch, and then at Quinn, and said, "Not on purpose." "No," Quinn agreed. "But sometimes things get left." She walked to the brickwork with the compass open in her palm, and the needle didn't move at all now. It had found what it was looking for. It pointed straight through the wall, steady as a held breath, at whatever was on the other side, waiting to be counted.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags14
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"Eva said quietly [quietly]"
1"She crouched again [again]"
dialogueSentences47
tagDensity0.298
leniency0.596
rawRatio0.143
effectiveRatio0.085
87.94% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1658
totalAiIsmAdverbs4
found
0
adverb"lazily"
count1
1
adverb"carefully"
count1
2
adverb"softly"
count1
3
adverb"very"
count1
highlights
0"lazily"
1"carefully"
2"softly"
3"very"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
90.95% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1658
totalAiIsms3
found
0
word"gleaming"
count1
1
word"etched"
count1
2
word"quivered"
count1
highlights
0"gleaming"
1"etched"
2"quivered"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences88
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount2
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences88
filterMatches
0"watch "
1"watch"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences121
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen70
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1672
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions18
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
33.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions41
wordCount1038
uniqueNames10
maxNameDensity1.54
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity4
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Camden1
South1
Quinn16
Player1
Callum1
Reid9
Morris2
Kowalski1
Eva8
Met1
persons
0"Quinn"
1"Player"
2"Callum"
3"Reid"
4"Morris"
5"Kowalski"
6"Eva"
7"Met"
places(empty)
globalScore0.729
windowScore0.333
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences54
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"as if looking for something, and every time it neared the bricked-up arch at the far end of the platform it strained, quivered, and pulled"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1672
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences121
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs59
mean28.34
std24.21
cv0.854
sampleLengths
073
155
26
350
418
53
612
756
85
93
1039
1145
1212
131
144
1540
1621
1727
187
193
2059
2145
224
2335
2441
2574
2613
2717
281
2949
3022
3130
3216
3346
343
3562
364
3746
382
3923
403
4143
4248
4389
4424
453
461
4769
484
4952
93.30% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount3
totalSentences88
matches
0"was etched"
1"were turned"
2"been sealed"
3"been photographed"
0.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount6
totalVerbs182
matches
0"were refusing"
1"was getting"
2"was carrying"
3"was weeping"
4"was tucking"
5"was looking"
24.79% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount6
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences5
totalSentences121
ratio0.041
matches
0"The place stank of iron and wet salt and, underneath it, something sweeter — like a struck match, like a storm about to break."
1"She checked her watch — the old leather one, the one Morris had given her, the strap worn to the colour of tea — and made herself let go of the numbers."
2"A knuckle, in fact — human, by the look, polished and yellowed and carved with a small symbol on one face, a spiral with a line through it."
3"She heard the ladder before she heard the voice — someone coming down who had no business coming down, and Reid's constable at the top failing, audibly, to stop her."
4"Quinn stood and held up the compass, and the needle swung, trembling, past north, past the platform, and came to rest pointing at the bricked-up arch — the arch that had been sealed since 1989, that had been photographed and surveyed and catalogued, and that now, she noticed for the first time, had no dust on it at all."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1043
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount26
adverbRatio0.024928092042186004
lyAdverbCount7
lyAdverbRatio0.006711409395973154
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences121
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences121
mean13.82
std13.98
cv1.012
sampleLengths
034
114
22
317
43
53
613
718
824
96
1021
1114
126
139
1418
153
1612
1710
1821
192
202
2121
222
233
243
2519
2620
275
289
2911
304
3116
3212
331
344
3529
362
379
3810
3911
4027
417
423
4315
4444
452
4632
473
488
494
74.93% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats6
diversityRatio0.4793388429752066
totalSentences121
uniqueOpeners58
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences72
matches(empty)
ratio0
81.11% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount25
totalSentences72
matches
0"He'd said sixty-two."
1"She'd never checked."
2"He was thirty-one, keen, and"
3"They hovered until they flew,"
4"He lay on his back"
5"She took her pen and"
6"He said it pleasantly, which"
7"She checked her watch —"
8"They'd bagged them, but she"
9"She had the SOCO bag"
10"It was bone."
11"It swung lazily, as if"
12"He went, and Quinn was"
13"She heard the ladder before"
14"She was carrying the leather"
15"She stopped at the platform"
16"She glanced up at the"
17"He looked at Eva with"
18"He turned his clipboard round"
19"She crouched again, and this"
ratio0.347
71.11% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount56
totalSentences72
matches
0"The stairs down to the"
1"Morris had counted them too,"
2"He'd said sixty-two."
3"She'd never checked."
4"Cream tiles, brown with seepage,"
5"The place stank of iron"
6"The body lay between the"
7"DS Callum Reid met her"
8"He was thirty-one, keen, and"
9"Quinn had seen the type"
10"They hovered until they flew,"
11"Quinn crouched, steadying herself on"
12"The man on the tracks"
13"He lay on his back"
14"None at all."
15"Reid flipped a page"
16"Quinn looked at the shoes."
17"She took her pen and"
18"The soles were clean."
19"The dust on the platform"
ratio0.778
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences72
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences36
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"It swung lazily, as if looking for something, and every time it neared the bricked-up arch at the far end of the platform it strained, quivered, and pulled."
1"Quinn stood and held up the compass, and the needle swung, trembling, past north, past the platform, and came to rest pointing at the bricked-up arch — the arch…"
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags14
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags7
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"Quinn agreed (agree)"
dialogueSentences47
tagDensity0.149
leniency0.298
rawRatio0.143
effectiveRatio0.043
81.9157%