Run: 2026-09-10-01M25DKRSSV38DQ335ZK5FK207

Run Details

Duration:
29.8s
Cost:
$0.003203
Provider:
DeepSeek

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The rain came off the rooftops of Soho in sheets, and Rory pushed through the door of the Raven’s Nest with her jacket over her head and the delivery bag still slung across her back. Water ran off her in ropes. The green neon in the window bled a sick colour onto the floorboards where she stood. Silas looked up from a glass he was drying. Nothing about him hurried. “You’re dripping on my floor.” “It’s raining.” “It’s London.” He set the glass down and tossed a towel across the bar. His signet ring knocked against the wood. “You look like a cat that lost an argument.” “Fourteen deliveries. The last one was a bloke in Frith Street who tipped me forty pence and asked if I did discounts.” “Did you take it?” “I took it.” She dragged the towel over her hair and dropped onto the end stool, the one with the split in the leather that nobody else wanted. The bar smelled the way it always did — old varnish, lemon peel, the ghost of Silas’s pipe drifting out of the back room. Maps covered the wall behind her, half of them wrong now, countries that had changed their names twice since anyone had run a thumb over them. It took her a minute to notice the woman at the far end. She was watching. Not the way men watched — not the up-and-down. The other way. The way you look at a photograph you can’t place. Rory looked back. Dark red coat, good wool, collar turned up despite the rain having stopped an hour ago. Hair pinned back. A glass of white wine she’d barely touched, and a handbag perched on the bar like it had somewhere better to be. Then the woman’s face did something, and Rory’s stomach dropped through the floor. “Rory Carter.” The voice landed like a key turning. Rory hadn’t heard it in three years, and she would have known it in a crowd, in the dark, under water. “Cerys.” “Cerys Llewellyn, as was.” The woman picked up her wine and walked the length of the bar, heels loud on the boards. She stopped two stools away and stood, coat still on, as though sitting down would be a commitment. “You’re — God. You’re actually here.” “Small world.” “That’s what you’re going with?” Cerys laughed, one short note, no warmth anywhere in it. “Three years, Rory. Three years and I get ‘small world.’” Rory wrung the towel out over her lap. “What brings you to Soho?” “Chambers dinner. I’m at Five Essex Court now, the set I told you about — the one I said I’d never get into.” She tipped the wine glass toward the window. “I walked out because my senior clerk was explaining his golf handicap to me. I wanted a drink that didn’t cost twenty-two pounds.” “And you found this place.” “I found this place.” Cerys looked around — the maps, the black-and-white photographs, the man behind the bar who wasn’t pretending not to listen. “It isn’t your sort of thing.” “You don’t know my sort of thing.” “I used to.” Silas moved down the bar, unhurried, and set a glass of water in front of Rory. He didn’t say anything. He stood there for a second, then limped back to the far end and lifted a crate of bottles like the whole room hadn’t just tilted. Cerys watched him go. “Do you work here?” “I live here. Upstairs.” “Above a bar.” “The rent’s cheap.” “The Rory Carter I knew didn’t care about rent.” Cerys’s jaw worked. “The Rory Carter I knew had a place at Cardiff, an offer from Gray’s, and a plan. And then she stopped answering her phone.” Rory drank the water. It was cold and it tasted of nothing. “I got busy.” “You got busy.” Cerys set her wine down hard enough to make the stem ring. “I got married, Rory. Two years ago. October. In Llandaff. You were supposed to be at the front holding the bloody bouquet, and you weren’t there. Your mother told my mother you’d gone to London. That was all anyone knew. That was all anyone *got*.” The rain hammered the window. Somebody fed the jukebox in the corner and it coughed out something slow and old. “I’m sorry,” Rory said. “Are you?” “Yes.” “That’s the first true thing you’ve said since I sat down.” Rory turned the glass a quarter turn. The scar on her wrist caught the light — that little crescent she’d had since she was nine, since the swing set in Roath Park, since she’d lied to her mother about how it happened. Cerys saw it. Rory knew she saw it. “I ran into Evan,” Cerys said. The room went thin. “Last spring. The pub by the cathedral, the one with the terrible beer. He asked after you.” Cerys swirled the wine without drinking it. “Said you’d walked out one morning and never came back. Said he didn’t know where you’d gone. He looked like a man who’d been left, Rory. He looked wrecked.” “Did he.” “He said he’d tried everything. He said your father wouldn’t take his calls.” Rory set the glass down. She did it carefully, the way you set down something full to the brim, because her hands had started to shake and she didn’t want Cerys to see. “He’s a good liar,” Rory said. “What does that mean?” “It means what it means.” Cerys leaned in. “Rory.” “Don’t.” “Rory, if something happened — if you need to talk to someone, I’m a solicitor, I know people, I can—” “I said don’t.” Silas’s voice came from the far end of the bar, mild, unhurried, a man commenting on the weather. “Everything all right down there?” “Fine,” Rory said, before Cerys could open her mouth. Cerys straightened. She picked up the wine, took a sip, put it down. Her face had changed. Something in it had closed, the way a door closes when you realise the room behind it isn’t the one you thought you were walking into. “You deliver food,” she said. “That’s what the bag is.” “Yes.” “You had a first in law. You had the Evans prize for advocacy. You stood up in the moot court and took Hargreaves apart in front of two hundred people and he couldn’t say a word back.” Cerys’s voice climbed and she pulled it down again. “You were the best cross-examiner in our year, and you’re carrying noodles around Soho.” “I’m carrying noodles around Soho.” “Don’t do that. Don’t just agree with me like it’s nothing.” “It isn’t nothing. It’s a job.” “It’s a waste.” The word cracked in the middle and Cerys covered it with a cough into her fist. “Three years I’ve wondered. I rang your mother twice. I drove to your dad’s chambers in Cathays and sat in the waiting room for an hour until his clerk told me he was in conference. Nobody would tell me anything. And now I find you here and you won’t—” “You found me here.” Rory’s voice came out flat and even, a voice from somewhere behind her own ribs. “That’s the difference, Cerys. I didn’t come looking for you.” Cerys went still. The jukebox finished its song and didn’t start another. Outside, a taxi laid on the horn in Wardour Street and somebody shouted something back at it. “That’s cruel,” Cerys said. “Yes.” “Is it true?” Rory looked at her — the good coat, the wedding ring, the woman who had done every single thing they’d ever sworn they’d do, standing in a dim bar in Soho with a stranger in front of her. “Yes,” Rory said. “It’s true.” Cerys put her hand on the bag.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags18
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"Cerys looked around [around]"
dialogueSentences66
tagDensity0.273
leniency0.545
rawRatio0.056
effectiveRatio0.03
96.10% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1283
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"carefully"
count1
highlights
0"carefully"
80.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found
0"Evans"
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
92.21% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1283
totalAiIsms2
found
0
word"stomach"
count1
1
word"warmth"
count1
highlights
0"stomach"
1"warmth"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"stomach dropped/sank"
count1
highlights
0"stomach dropped"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences67
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences67
filterMatches
0"look"
hedgeMatches
0"started to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences115
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen50
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans1
markdownWords1
totalWords1291
ratio0.001
matches
0"got"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions23
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
0.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions45
wordCount758
uniqueNames10
maxNameDensity2.24
worstName"Cerys"
maxWindowNameDensity5.5
worstWindowName"Cerys"
discoveredNames
Soho2
Rory16
Raven1
Nest1
Silas4
Cerys17
Roath1
Park1
Wardour1
Street1
persons
0"Rory"
1"Raven"
2"Silas"
3"Cerys"
places
0"Soho"
1"Roath"
2"Park"
3"Wardour"
4"Street"
globalScore0.379
windowScore0
91.86% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences43
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"as though sitting down would be a commitment"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1291
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences115
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs71
mean18.18
std19.37
cv1.065
sampleLengths
057
113
25
32
430
522
64
73
875
913
1025
1144
1213
132
1428
151
1646
172
1825
1913
2054
215
2230
237
243
2546
268
274
283
293
3036
3112
323
3360
3420
354
362
371
3811
3950
406
414
4253
432
4413
4533
466
474
485
494
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences67
matches(empty)
0.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount4
totalVerbs131
matches
0"was drying"
1"was watching"
2"wasn’t pretending"
3"were walking"
18.63% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount5
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences5
totalSentences115
ratio0.043
matches
0"The bar smelled the way it always did — old varnish, lemon peel, the ghost of Silas’s pipe drifting out of the back room."
1"Not the way men watched — not the up-and-down."
2"“I found this place.” Cerys looked around — the maps, the black-and-white photographs, the man behind the bar who wasn’t pretending not to listen."
3"The scar on her wrist caught the light — that little crescent she’d had since she was nine, since the swing set in Roath Park, since she’d lied to her mother about how it happened."
4"Rory looked at her — the good coat, the wedding ring, the woman who had done every single thing they’d ever sworn they’d do, standing in a dim bar in Soho with a stranger in front of her."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount757
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount22
adverbRatio0.02906208718626156
lyAdverbCount2
lyAdverbRatio0.002642007926023778
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences115
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences115
mean11.23
std10.53
cv0.938
sampleLengths
035
16
216
39
44
55
62
714
87
99
1022
114
123
1325
1424
1526
1613
173
189
193
2010
213
2216
233
2422
2513
262
277
2821
291
3022
3118
326
332
3415
3510
368
375
3831
3923
405
4124
426
437
443
4516
464
4726
484
494
51.01% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats8
diversityRatio0.34782608695652173
totalSentences115
uniqueOpeners40
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences60
matches
0"Dark red coat, good wool,"
1"Then the woman’s face did"
ratio0.033
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount13
totalSentences60
matches
0"He set the glass down"
1"His signet ring knocked against"
2"She dragged the towel over"
3"It took her a minute"
4"She was watching."
5"She stopped two stools away"
6"She tipped the wine glass"
7"He didn’t say anything."
8"He stood there for a"
9"It was cold and it"
10"She did it carefully, the"
11"She picked up the wine,"
12"Her face had changed."
ratio0.217
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount56
totalSentences60
matches
0"The rain came off the"
1"Water ran off her in"
2"The green neon in the"
3"Silas looked up from a"
4"Nothing about him hurried."
5"He set the glass down"
6"His signet ring knocked against"
7"She dragged the towel over"
8"The bar smelled the way"
9"Maps covered the wall behind"
10"It took her a minute"
11"She was watching."
12"The other way."
13"The way you look at"
14"Rory looked back."
15"Hair pinned back."
16"A glass of white wine"
17"The voice landed like a"
18"Rory hadn’t heard it in"
19"The woman picked up her"
ratio0.933
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences60
matches(empty)
ratio0
80.75% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences23
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"Maps covered the wall behind her, half of them wrong now, countries that had changed their names twice since anyone had run a thumb over them."
1"Rory looked at her — the good coat, the wedding ring, the woman who had done every single thing they’d ever sworn they’d do, standing in a dim bar in Soho with …"
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags18
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags8
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"Cerys laughed (laugh)"
dialogueSentences66
tagDensity0.121
leniency0.242
rawRatio0.125
effectiveRatio0.03
80.3521%