Run: 2026-09-10-01M25DMGNV5ZW3Q36P803Y4HKD

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Duration:
31.9s
Cost:
$0.001638
Provider:
DeepSeek

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System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The green neon sign above the door buzzed with a tired, electrical hum, the letters of The Raven's Nest flickering just enough to cast the rain-slicked pavement in a sickly, pulsating glow. Rory shouldered the heavy door open, a blast of warm, stale air and muted jazz washing over her. She shook the water from her jacket, the worn leather slick under her fingers. The delivery run for the Golden Empress had been a sodden disaster, and her final drop-off was just two streets over. A drink was necessary. Just one. The Nest was quiet for a Thursday. A few regulars nursed pints in the deep, leather-bound booths, their faces half-hidden in shadow. Old maps, their edges yellowed and curling, papered the walls, alongside grainy photographs of men in uniform who stared out with expressions Rory couldn't quite read. Silas was behind the bar, polishing a glass with a slow, deliberate rhythm. He gave her a single, sharp nod. She slid onto a stool at the far end of the bar, away from the other patrons. A haven of shadow. Silas was already pouring a measure of whiskey, the good stuff, not the swill he served to the tourists. He placed the glass in front of her without a word. "Rough night?" The question was a low rumble. "You could say that." She wrapped her fingers around the glass, the crystal cold against her palm. The scar on her left wrist, a pale crescent, seemed to ache in the damp weather. He grunted, returning to his glassware. "The rain brings out the worst in people. And the best in whiskey." Rory took a sip, the liquid a slow, burning path down her throat. She let her gaze drift across the room, over the maps of long-vanished empires and the frozen faces of history. It was a place that felt suspended in time, a bunker against the relentless churn of the city outside. She was just starting to feel the tension in her shoulders unknot when the door opened again. A figure stepped inside, shaking off an umbrella with an efficient, almost military snap. A woman. She wore a sharply tailored charcoal trench coat, cinched tight at the waist. Her hair was a sleek, blonde bob, not a strand out of place, a stark contrast to the damp, chaotic mess of Rory's own black hair. The woman's eyes swept the room, a swift, practised assessment, before they landed on Rory. And stopped. The air in Rory's lungs solidified. She knew that face. The high cheekbones, the pale, intelligent eyes. It was a face she'd last seen across a sticky table in a student union bar, tears streaming down it as they'd pledged to escape their small town and conquer the world. Eva. The woman’s expression didn't crack into a smile. It didn't register surprise, not exactly. It was something more guarded. A flicker of recognition, followed by a careful, almost calculated blankness. She handed her coat and umbrella to Silas, who took them with the same impassive nod he'd given Rory. Eva walked towards her. The click of her heels on the wooden floor was the only sound in the sudden silence of Rory's world. She stopped a few feet away, her expensive perfume—sandalwood and something citrusy—arriving a moment before she did. "Rory." Her voice was the same, but different. The Welsh accent was still there, but clipped, refined, as if she'd sanded down the rough, familiar edges. "Eva." Rory's own voice sounded coarse to her ears. "It's been a while." "A while," Eva repeated, the words tasting like a foreign language. "You could say that." Her gaze dropped to Rory's damp delivery jacket, the faded jeans, the scuffed boots. It wasn't judgement, not overtly, but a simple, swift assessment. A calculation. Rory gestured to the empty stool next to her. "Sit. Or are you meeting someone?" "No. No one." Eva sat, placing her phone, a sleek, black rectangle, face-down on the bar. She kept her back straight, her hands folded neatly in her lap. "I was just… passing through. This was… recommended." "Small world," Rory said, the cliché tasting like ash. "Isn't it." Eva’s eyes swept the bar again. "What are you doing here? I thought you were at Cardiff. Law." The last word was pointed. Rory took a long, slow drink. "I left. I'm in London now." "London." Eva nodded slowly. "Doing what?" "Delivery. For now." Rory met her gaze. "Pays the bills." Silas appeared, silent as a ghost. He placed a glass of white wine in front of Eva without being asked. She looked at him, a quick, sharp glance of inquiry. He simply raised an eyebrow, his silver signet ring glinting under the low light, and moved away. Eva picked up the glass, her movements precise. "He seems to know you." "He's my landlord. And my boss. In a way. I live upstairs." Something flickered in Eva's eyes then. Pity, or maybe disappointment. It was gone before Rory could be sure. "Right." She sipped her wine. "You look… well." "You're a terrible liar, Eva." The words came out sharper than Rory intended. Eva had the decency to look away, her gaze fixing on one of the grainy photographs on the wall. "I'm not lying. You look like you. Just… a different version." "And you look like a director of a hedge fund." A small, tight smile played on Eva's lips. "Close. Private equity." "Right. Of course." Rory finished her whiskey. The warmth had fled, leaving only a hollow pit in her stomach. "When did we become these people?" The question hung in the air, heavy and unanswerable. Eva turned back to her, her carefully constructed mask finally showing a hairline fracture. "It didn't happen all at once. You know that." "I don't know anything. You stopped calling." Rory's words were quiet, but they carried the full weight of five years. "You were the one who told me to come here. You said you'd be here." Eva flinched. It was a tiny movement, a tightening around her eyes, but Rory saw it. "I got an offer. An internship, then a job. It was what we always talked about, Rory. Getting out." "Getting out," Rory echoed. "I got out. I left Evan. I left law. I left everything. I came to London because you told me to. And you were gone. A text, Eva. That's all I got." Eva's fingers tightened around the stem of her wine glass, her knuckles turning white. "It wasn't that simple." "It is that simple. You made it simple." "I was in a different place. The pace… you don't understand. The hours, the pressure. I was drowning. I couldn't have saved you when I was trying to keep my own head above water." The words tumbled out, a rehearsed justification, but they lacked conviction. They were the right words, but the wrong person was saying them. "So you just let me drown," Rory said, her voice barely a whisper. The jazz from the speakers seemed to swell, the saxophone a mournful wail that filled the silence between them. Eva picked up her wine, her hand trembling slightly. She took a sip, then another. "I'm sorry, Rory." The apology was small, brittle. "I should have… I should have handled it better." Rory looked at the woman beside her. The sharp suit, the perfect hair, the polished surface. And underneath, she saw the ghost of the girl she'd once known. The girl who'd cried on her shoulder over a boy, who'd planned a future with Rory in a cramped, messy flat with too many books and not enough money. That girl was gone. In her place was this elegant, exhausted stranger who smelled of money and loneliness. "It's not about handling it," Rory said, the anger finally draining away, leaving a vast, empty sadness. "It's about being there. You weren't." "I know." Eva stared straight ahead, her reflection a faint ghost in the dark mirror behind the bar. "I know." They sat in silence for a long time, the chasm between them too wide to cross with a few words. The drinks in front of them grew warm. The rain outside had softened to a drizzle. "I should go," Eva said finally, placing her glass back on the bar. She didn't look at Rory. She pulled a sleek wallet from her coat, placing a card on the bar. "That's my number. It's… my direct line." Rory just looked at the embossed card. It was heavy, a stark contrast to the coasters it sat next to. Eva stood, her movements stiff. She buttoned her coat, preparing to step back into the world she'd built for herself. "It was good to see you, Rory." Rory didn't stand. She didn't offer a hug. She just looked up at the woman who had once been her entire world. "Goodbye, Eva." Eva's Adam's apple bobbed. She opened her mouth as if to say something more, then closed it. She turned and walked out the door, the little bell above it jingling with a cheerful, oblivious note. Rory was left alone with the cold whiskey glass and the business card. Silas appeared again, silent, and began to wipe down the bar. He didn't ask questions. He never did. After a long moment, Rory picked up the card. It was smooth and cool beneath her fingers. She stared at the name, the title, the phone number. Then, she slid off her stool, walked to the end of the bar, and dropped it into the bin. It fell with a soft, almost inaudible thud. "Another?" Silas asked. Rory slid back onto her stool, her shoulders set. "Please."
created_at"2026-09-10T10:26:08.754Z" 9/10/2026, 10:26:08 AM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags20
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"Eva nodded slowly [slowly]"
1"Eva said finally [finally]"
dialogueSentences51
tagDensity0.392
leniency0.784
rawRatio0.1
effectiveRatio0.078
87.62% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1615
totalAiIsmAdverbs4
found
0
adverb"sharply"
count1
1
adverb"slowly"
count1
2
adverb"carefully"
count1
3
adverb"slightly"
count1
highlights
0"sharply"
1"slowly"
2"carefully"
3"slightly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
25.70% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1615
totalAiIsms24
found
0
word"crystal"
count1
1
word"churn"
count1
2
word"tension"
count1
3
word"efficient"
count1
4
word"stark"
count2
5
word"chaotic"
count1
6
word"streaming"
count1
7
word"flicker"
count1
8
word"calculated"
count1
9
word"silence"
count3
10
word"familiar"
count1
11
word"eyebrow"
count1
12
word"glinting"
count1
13
word"flickered"
count1
14
word"warmth"
count1
15
word"stomach"
count1
16
word"constructed"
count1
17
word"weight"
count1
18
word"echoed"
count1
19
word"whisper"
count1
20
word"perfect"
count1
highlights
0"crystal"
1"churn"
2"tension"
3"efficient"
4"stark"
5"chaotic"
6"streaming"
7"flicker"
8"calculated"
9"silence"
10"familiar"
11"eyebrow"
12"glinting"
13"flickered"
14"warmth"
15"stomach"
16"constructed"
17"weight"
18"echoed"
19"whisper"
20"perfect"
66.67% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches2
maxInWindow2
found
0
label"hung in the air"
count1
1
label"flicker of emotion"
count1
highlights
0"hung in the air"
1"A flicker of recognition"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences121
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount3
narrationSentences121
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences148
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen45
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1613
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions12
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
16.67% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions63
wordCount1291
uniqueNames10
maxNameDensity2.32
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity4.5
worstWindowName"Eva"
discoveredNames
Raven1
Nest2
Golden1
Empress1
Thursday1
Rory30
Silas6
Welsh1
Eva19
Adam1
persons
0"Raven"
1"Nest"
2"Empress"
3"Rory"
4"Silas"
5"Eva"
6"Adam"
places(empty)
globalScore0.338
windowScore0.167
69.35% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences93
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"quite read"
1"appeared, silent as a ghost"
2"appeared again, silent and began to wipe down the bar"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.62
wordCount1613
matches
0"not overtly, but a simple, swift assessment"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences148
matches
0"knew that face"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs57
mean28.3
std20.35
cv0.719
sampleLengths
091
168
251
38
433
519
669
770
82
949
101
1149
1241
1326
1413
1541
1615
1736
189
1925
2012
216
2210
2347
2413
2512
2626
2713
2830
2910
3011
3125
3232
3335
3435
3536
3618
378
3857
3913
4034
4117
4275
4323
4420
4536
4639
4720
4820
497
96.56% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount3
totalSentences121
matches
0"being asked"
1"was gone"
2"was gone"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount3
totalVerbs203
matches
0"was already pouring"
1"was just starting"
2"was saying"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount2
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences1
totalSentences148
ratio0.007
matches
0"She stopped a few feet away, her expensive perfume—sandalwood and something citrusy—arriving a moment before she did."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1299
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"deep, leather-bound booths,"
adverbCount49
adverbRatio0.037721324095458045
lyAdverbCount15
lyAdverbRatio0.011547344110854504
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences148
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences148
mean10.9
std7.11
cv0.653
sampleLengths
032
118
214
321
44
52
67
715
826
913
107
1117
124
1319
1411
158
1617
1716
186
1913
2013
2120
2219
2317
2414
252
2613
2726
2815
292
306
314
327
3332
341
358
366
375
3811
3919
404
4120
4217
438
4418
459
464
4711
4818
4910
41.22% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats13
diversityRatio0.2635135135135135
totalSentences148
uniqueOpeners39
29.50% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences113
matches
0"Then, she slid off her"
ratio0.009
67.79% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount43
totalSentences113
matches
0"She shook the water from"
1"He gave her a single,"
2"She slid onto a stool"
3"He placed the glass in"
4"She wrapped her fingers around"
5"He grunted, returning to his"
6"She let her gaze drift"
7"It was a place that"
8"She was just starting to"
9"She wore a sharply tailored"
10"Her hair was a sleek,"
11"She knew that face."
12"It was a face she'd"
13"It didn't register surprise, not"
14"It was something more guarded."
15"She handed her coat and"
16"She stopped a few feet"
17"Her voice was the same,"
18"Her gaze dropped to Rory's"
19"It wasn't judgement, not overtly,"
ratio0.381
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount106
totalSentences113
matches
0"The green neon sign above"
1"Rory shouldered the heavy door"
2"She shook the water from"
3"The delivery run for the"
4"A drink was necessary."
5"The Nest was quiet for"
6"Silas was behind the bar,"
7"He gave her a single,"
8"She slid onto a stool"
9"A haven of shadow."
10"Silas was already pouring a"
11"He placed the glass in"
12"The question was a low"
13"She wrapped her fingers around"
14"The scar on her left"
15"He grunted, returning to his"
16"Rory took a sip, the"
17"She let her gaze drift"
18"It was a place that"
19"She was just starting to"
ratio0.938
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences113
matches(empty)
ratio0
86.83% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences51
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"Old maps, their edges yellowed and curling, papered the walls, alongside grainy photographs of men in uniform who stared out with expressions Rory couldn't quit…"
1"It was a place that felt suspended in time, a bunker against the relentless churn of the city outside."
2"She handed her coat and umbrella to Silas, who took them with the same impassive nod he'd given Rory."
3"The girl who'd cried on her shoulder over a boy, who'd planned a future with Rory in a cramped, messy flat with too many books and not enough money."
75.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags20
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"Rory said, her voice barely a whisper"
1"Rory said, the anger finally draining away, leaving a vast, empty sadness"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags6
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"Eva repeated (repeat)"
dialogueSentences51
tagDensity0.118
leniency0.235
rawRatio0.167
effectiveRatio0.039
78.5634%