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Run: 2026-09-10-01M25DNH4KWNCH9CRP5KCHEGP6
Run Details
Model:
DeepSeek V4.1 Flash (Reasoning, High)
Test:
Bad Writing Habits
Scenario:
Romance: separated couple reunites
Duration:
42.2s
Cost:
$0.004253
Provider:
DeepSeek
Evaluation summary
Score
Evaluator
Details Link
100.00%
Adverbs in dialogue tags
(details)
95.95%
AI-ism adverb frequency
(details)
100.00%
AI-ism character names
(details)
100.00%
AI-ism location names
(details)
79.76%
AI-ism word frequency
(details)
100.00%
Cliché density
(details)
100.00%
Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
(details)
98.21%
Filter word density
(details)
100.00%
Gibberish response detection
(details)
100.00%
Markdown formatting overuse
(details)
100.00%
Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
(details)
100.00%
Name drop frequency
(details)
100.00%
Narrator intent-glossing
(details)
100.00%
"Not X but Y" pattern overuse
(details)
100.00%
Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
(details)
100.00%
Paragraph length variance
(details)
100.00%
Passive voice overuse
(details)
100.00%
Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
(details)
100.00%
Em-dash & semicolon overuse
(details)
100.00%
Purple prose (modifier overload)
(details)
100.00%
Repeated phrase echo
(details)
100.00%
Sentence length variance
(details)
66.38%
Sentence opener variety
(details)
100.00%
Adverb-first sentence starts
(details)
31.32%
Pronoun-first sentence starts
(details)
73.21%
Subject-first sentence starts
(details)
0.00%
Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
(details)
63.49%
Technical jargon density
(details)
98.68%
Useless dialogue additions
(details)
100.00%
Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
(details)
90.2336%
Overall
Model input
System
You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Romance genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>
Model response
Messages
Meta
AI
Lucien Moreau turned up at
her flat with a bottle of Malbec and a cut on his lip. Rory left the chain on. "You kept the deadbolt." "You kept breathing. Funny how these things work out."
He smiled at that, the
way he smiled at everything, like the world was a joke he'd heard before and still enjoyed. Eleven weeks of
silence
, and here he stood on her landing in a tailored charcoal suit, one eye amber and one eye black, both of them on her. "I brought wine," he said. "I've got wine." "You've got cooking wine. This is from a vineyard that has opinions about its soil." "Wrong flat." "I'm certain it isn't."
He glanced past her, through
the four-inch gap the chain allowed. "You moved the coat rack." "It's my coat rack." "It was my coat." "Your coat's in a charity shop in Whitechapel. Write them a letter."
He absorbed the blow without
flinching. That was his gift.
You could put a knife
in Lucien Moreau and he would compliment the blade. "The apology," she said. "Get to it." "I'm sorry about the money." "Not the leaving. The money." "The leaving had reasons." "So did the note. Two words, Lucien. Framed it."
She hadn't framed it
.
It sat in a shoebox
under her bed between old bank statements, which was somehow worse. "Two hundred quid on my kitchen counter like a receipt." "I didn't know what else to leave." "An explanation springs to mind." "Explanations are how people end up in the Thames."
He shifted the bottle to
his other arm. "Though I notice you didn't send the money back." "I spent it on gin. Took me a fortnight." "Good girl."
The words landed low in
her
stomach
and stayed there. She hated that.
She hated that eleven weeks
and a locked door had done nothing to blunt him, that he still stood on her landing with his ruined mouth and his expensive suit and the smell of cedar and something colder underneath, and that her
pulse
had the nerve to answer for her. "Who hit you?" "A man in Deptford with poor aim and excellent lawyers." "That's not an answer." "None of mine ever are."
He tilted his head
. "Are we conducting this through the gap, or will you be civil?" "No." "Fair." He stayed.
That was the thing about
Lucien. Refusal never moved him.
It only gave him somewhere
to lean.
He settled a shoulder against
the doorframe, and the whole building
seemed to
fold around him, the floorboards overhead creaking, the bass from Silas' bar bleeding up through the boards like a heartbeat under the floor. She unhooked the chain.
He walked in as though
he'd never left. Coat on the hook by the door. Bottle on the counter. Cuffs rolled to the elbow, and she watched his forearms and hated herself for watching. "You redecorated." "I bought a lamp." "It's a tragedy." She pulled two glasses down.
He filled his to the
halfway line, then filled hers to the same, watching her over the rim. The kitchen was small and the ceiling sloped and her one good lamp threw everything in amber, and he took it all in the way he took in everything, filing it. "Eleven weeks," she said. "You could have sent a postcard." "Postcards have return addresses. Mine move." "And now?" "Now I have a client who wants a woman with black hair and a scar on her left wrist." The glass stopped halfway to her mouth. "Bright blue eyes,"
Lucien went on, conversational
. "Five foot six, give or take. Last seen running noodles up Old Compton Street on a pushbike." "Someone's been watching me." "Someone's been paying me to. Two months ago. Quiet man, no accent I could place. He paid a retainer and asked me to find you. I took the money, told him you'd gone to Glasgow, and sent him a photograph of a woman with your hair outside a chip shop in Partick." "And he believed you?" "I'm
very
good at my job." "Then what changed?" He drank. The wine left his cut lip glossy and he didn't wince, and she noticed that too, the way she noticed his hands, the way she had always noticed his hands. "He did."
He set the glass down
. "A second client. Same photograph. Different money. Better money. That was last night." "You took it?" "I don't turn down money twice in a week, Rory. Not twice, from two men, both of whom know your shift pattern and your postcode and the name of the cat that sleeps on your windowsill." "I don't have a cat." "Exactly."
His jaw went tight
. "They described one. A tabby." Something cold walked
down her spine
.
She crossed to the sink
and gripped the edge of it and looked out at the brick wall of the building opposite, where somebody's shirt hung on a line and a satellite dish pointed at nothing. In the glass she could see him behind her, standing still, the way he stood when he
was waiting
for something that mattered. "You got me out of Cardiff," she said. "I bought the ticket." "You put me on the coach. You gave me three names to call and none of them were yours." "I know." "So don't stand in my kitchen now and pretend the leaving was noble. I know what noble looks like, Lucien. It doesn't leave cash on the counter and change its number." For a moment he said nothing. Then he crossed the room, and she felt him arrive the way you
feel
a door open in a cold house. "My father sent men,"
he said quietly
. "They came to London in September. They asked around Soho, and a barman remembered a girl with a Welsh accent who drank with the Frenchman twice a week. They had your description before they had my name." He paused. "The safest thing I have ever done for you was leave. I'd do it again tomorrow. And I'd hate every hour of it, the way I've hated these ones." She turned. He was close now, close enough that she could see the small pale seam in the black eye, close enough that if she tipped her chin the way her body wanted, they would be breathing the same air. "You should go," she said. "I should." Neither of them moved.
Then he looked at her
wrist. Not her eyes. Not her mouth. Her wrist. Her sleeve had rucked up, and the crescent of pale scar sat in the lamplight like a question nobody had asked yet. "Rory," he said, and this time there was no joke inside it. "Pack a bag." "Why would I go anywhere with you?" "Because the second client isn't a client." He reached for his coat. "He's a collector. And he landed in London this morning." Heavy
footsteps
broke on the landing. Too many for one man.
Then three slow knocks, polite
as a waiter. Lucien went still. He looked at the door, then at her, and in the black eye and the amber one she watched the same thought finish twice. "Don't answer it," he said. The chain she'd left hanging swung a half-inch on its own. "Aurora," a voice said through the wood, warm and courteous, and it knew her real name. "Aurora Carter. Open up. We only want to talk."
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Evaluation details
Result
Evaluator
Details
Meta Data
100.00%
Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags
19
adverbTagCount
1
adverbTags
0
"he said quietly [quietly]"
dialogueSentences
71
tagDensity
0.268
leniency
0.535
rawRatio
0.053
effectiveRatio
0.028
95.95%
AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount
1235
totalAiIsmAdverbs
1
found
0
adverb
"very"
count
1
highlights
0
"very"
100.00%
AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
100.00%
AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
79.76%
AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount
1235
totalAiIsms
5
found
0
word
"silence"
count
1
1
word
"stomach"
count
1
2
word
"pulse"
count
1
3
word
"down her spine"
count
1
4
word
"footsteps"
count
1
highlights
0
"silence"
1
"stomach"
2
"pulse"
3
"down her spine"
4
"footsteps"
100.00%
Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches
0
maxInWindow
0
found
(empty)
highlights
(empty)
100.00%
Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells
0
narrationSentences
64
matches
(empty)
98.21%
Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount
1
hedgeCount
1
narrationSentences
64
filterMatches
0
"feel"
hedgeMatches
0
"seemed to"
100.00%
Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences
117
gibberishSentences
0
adjustedGibberishSentences
0
longSentenceCount
0
runOnParagraphCount
0
giantParagraphCount
0
wordSaladCount
0
repetitionLoopCount
0
controlTokenCount
0
repeatedSegmentCount
0
maxSentenceWordsSeen
52
ratio
0
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans
0
markdownWords
0
totalWords
1235
ratio
0
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions
14
unquotedAttributions
0
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions
9
wordCount
666
uniqueNames
4
maxNameDensity
0.75
worstName
"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity
1
worstWindowName
"Moreau"
discoveredNames
Moreau
2
Malbec
1
Lucien
5
Heavy
1
persons
0
"Moreau"
1
"Lucien"
places
(empty)
globalScore
1
windowScore
1
100.00%
Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences
34
glossingSentenceCount
0
matches
(empty)
100.00%
"Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches
0
per1kWords
0
wordCount
1235
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount
0
totalSentences
117
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs
76
mean
16.25
std
17.1
cv
1.052
sampleLengths
0
23
1
4
2
9
3
50
4
5
5
3
6
15
7
2
8
20
9
4
10
4
11
12
12
24
13
7
14
5
15
5
16
4
17
39
18
7
19
5
20
26
21
9
22
2
23
63
24
3
25
10
26
4
27
21
28
1
29
1
30
55
31
4
32
34
33
2
34
4
35
3
36
54
37
10
38
6
39
2
40
19
41
7
42
24
43
4
44
52
45
4
46
6
47
3
48
32
49
20
100.00%
Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount
0
totalSentences
64
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount
1
totalVerbs
115
matches
0
"was waiting"
100.00%
Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount
0
semicolonCount
0
flaggedSentences
0
totalSentences
117
ratio
0
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount
549
adjectiveStacks
0
stackExamples
(empty)
adverbCount
14
adverbRatio
0.025500910746812388
lyAdverbCount
2
lyAdverbRatio
0.0036429872495446266
100.00%
Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences
117
echoCount
0
echoWords
(empty)
100.00%
Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences
117
mean
10.56
std
10.45
cv
0.99
sampleLengths
0
18
1
5
2
4
3
9
4
22
5
28
6
5
7
3
8
15
9
2
10
15
11
5
12
4
13
4
14
12
15
6
16
4
17
14
18
4
19
3
20
5
21
5
22
4
23
13
24
16
25
10
26
7
27
5
28
17
29
9
30
9
31
2
32
10
33
3
34
50
35
3
36
10
37
4
38
9
39
12
40
1
41
1
42
2
43
6
44
4
45
7
46
36
47
4
48
8
49
7
66.38%
Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats
9
diversityRatio
0.4444444444444444
totalSentences
117
uniqueOpeners
52
100.00%
Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount
4
totalSentences
53
matches
0
"Then he crossed the room,"
1
"Then he looked at her"
2
"Too many for one man."
3
"Then three slow knocks, polite"
ratio
0.075
31.32%
Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount
25
totalSentences
53
matches
0
"He smiled at that, the"
1
"He glanced past her, through"
2
"He absorbed the blow without"
3
"You could put a knife"
4
"She hadn't framed it"
5
"It sat in a shoebox"
6
"He shifted the bottle to"
7
"She hated that."
8
"She hated that eleven weeks"
9
"He tilted his head"
10
"It only gave him somewhere"
11
"He settled a shoulder against"
12
"She unhooked the chain."
13
"He walked in as though"
14
"She pulled two glasses down."
15
"He filled his to the"
16
"He set the glass down"
17
"His jaw went tight"
18
"She crossed to the sink"
19
"he said quietly"
ratio
0.472
73.21%
Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount
41
totalSentences
53
matches
0
"Lucien Moreau turned up at"
1
"Rory left the chain on."
2
"He smiled at that, the"
3
"He glanced past her, through"
4
"He absorbed the blow without"
5
"That was his gift."
6
"You could put a knife"
7
"She hadn't framed it"
8
"It sat in a shoebox"
9
"He shifted the bottle to"
10
"The words landed low in"
11
"She hated that."
12
"She hated that eleven weeks"
13
"He tilted his head"
14
"That was the thing about"
15
"Refusal never moved him."
16
"It only gave him somewhere"
17
"He settled a shoulder against"
18
"She unhooked the chain."
19
"He walked in as though"
ratio
0.774
0.00%
Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount
0
totalSentences
53
matches
(empty)
ratio
0
63.49%
Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences
18
technicalSentenceCount
2
matches
0
"It sat in a shoebox under her bed between old bank statements, which was somehow worse."
1
"In the glass she could see him behind her, standing still, the way he stood when he was waiting for something that mattered."
98.68%
Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags
19
uselessAdditionCount
1
matches
0
"Lucien went on, conversational"
100.00%
Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags
9
fancyCount
0
fancyTags
(empty)
dialogueSentences
71
tagDensity
0.127
leniency
0.254
rawRatio
0
effectiveRatio
0
90.2336%