Run: 2026-09-10-01M25DP43J8V1ARS6K6K04GA6J

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Duration:
28.5s
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$0.003273
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You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The rain had stopped an hour ago, but London still smelled of it — wet stone and diesel and the sour breath of the Thames two streets south. Rory Carter sat at the end of the bar where the green neon bled through the window and threw her shadow crooked across the floorboards. Silas worked the far end, a cloth in his hand, turning a glass over and over like he was reading something in its curve. He didn't look at her. He never did when she was quiet. That was the thing about him — he let silence do its work. She was halfway through a whisky she hadn't ordered. She'd come in at the tail of her shift, still smelling of the Golden Empress — soy and ginger and fryer grease that never washed out of her hair — and Silas had poured it without asking. The door opened. A woman stepped in, shaking rain from a navy coat, and Rory's hand stopped on the glass. She knew that coat. She knew the way the woman tilted her head when she looked around a room, cataloguing exits. Rory had watched her do it a hundred times in lecture halls and cheap student kitchens. "Bethan." The name came out before Rory could stop it. Bethan turned. Her hair was shorter — a blunt bob gone silver at the temples — and she'd put on the kind of weight that came from wine and late nights and nobody to tell her to stop. But the eyes were the same. Sharp, grey, always reading. "Rory Carter." She said it like a verdict. The bar held its breath. Then Bethan crossed the room, heels loud on the boards, and sat two stools down. Not close. Not far. "You're a hard woman to find." "I wasn't hiding." "You weren't answering either." Rory turned back to her glass. The whisky had gone warm. Silas set a fresh glass down in front of Bethan, no question asked, and retreated to his maps. Bethan picked it up. Drank. "Still the same drink, then." "Still gin." "Some things stick." The neon flickered. Outside, a taxi horn blared and died. Bethan set the glass down. "I went to your mum's. Two years ago. She said you were in London. Wouldn't say where. Looked at me like I was supposed to know something." "You weren't supposed to know anything." "Clearly." Rory breathed. The scar on her left wrist itched — the old childhood one, the crescent — and she rubbed it with her thumb the way she always did when something was coming. "You look different," Bethan said. "So do you." "I mean it. You look — " Bethan stopped. Started again. "You used to walk into a room like you owned the mortgage. Now you sit at the end of a bar with your back to the wall." Rory's jaw tightened. "I like the wall." "Do you." Another silence. Longer. The kind that grew teeth. "I'm not here to interrogate you," Bethan said, though her voice said otherwise. "I was in Soho for a case and I saw the sign and I thought — that's the kind of place Rory would find. And here you are." "Here I am." "Six years, Rory." "I know how long it's been." Bethan laughed, short and ugly. "Do you? Because I sent you cards. Letters. I called your dad's office and got told — and I quote — that you were 'not taking visitors.' I thought you'd died." "Sometimes you do." "That's not an answer." "It's the only one I've got." Bethan's fingers tightened around the glass. The ice cracked. Rory watched her — the set of her shoulders, the line between her brows. The old Bethan would have pushed harder. The old Bethan would have grabbed her by the wrist and dragged her into the street and shouted until Rory told her everything. This Bethan sat still. This Bethan had learned something in six years, too. "I went to work for your father." Rory looked up. "After graduation. Article, then tenancy. He doesn't talk about you. I asked once. He looked at me like I'd asked him to cut off his own hand." "That sounds like him." "He's proud of you, you know. In the way that means he can't say it." "No. He's not." "He is. He just doesn't know what you've become. Neither do I." Rory drained the whisky. It burned going down and settled somewhere behind her ribs. "You don't want to know." "Try me." The door opened again — a couple, laughing, shaking umbrellas. Silas moved to serve them. The bar swallowed the sound. Rory looked at Bethan and saw, for a second, the girl she'd shared a flat with, the one who'd held her hair back the night she'd cried over Evan, the one who'd said, It's not love if it feels like that. The one who'd been right. "You were right about him." Bethan went very still. "Evan." "I know what he was." "You never said." "He made sure I couldn't." Bethan's face did something complicated — grief and fury and something like guilt, all of it landing at once. "I should have —" "Don't." "I should have called the police. I should have —" "Bethan." Rory's voice came out flat. The kind of flat that had been sanded down by months of practice. "I left Cardiff because of him. I left everything. I didn't tell you because I didn't want to be somebody's project. I didn't want to be the thing you saved. I wanted to disappear." "And did you?" Rory looked around the bar — the maps, the photographs, the green light, the man with the limp and the signet ring who never asked her a question she couldn't answer. "I don't know." Bethan finished her drink. Set the glass down with a click that sounded final, though nothing was. "You're a delivery girl. For a restaurant." "That's what I am." "You were top of the class. You had an offer from —" "I know what I had." Bethan shook her head. "You threw it." "I put it down. There's a difference." "Is there?" Rory didn't answer. The neon hummed. Rain started again, soft against the window, and the bar filled with the smell of wet wool and old wood and whisky going warm in the glass. Bethan reached into her coat and pulled out a card. She placed it on the bar between them — not sliding it, not pushing it. Just leaving it there. "Tenancy. If you ever want to talk. About anything. Not just the law." Rory looked at the card. Didn't touch it. "You could have just given me your number." "I didn't want you to feel cornered." "Too late." Bethan stood. Pulled on her coat. She looked down at Rory for a long moment — the way you look at a house you used to live in. "Your dad asks about you. Every time he's drunk enough." "Then he should call." "He doesn't know where to." Rory's throat closed. She said nothing. Bethan walked to the door. Paused with her hand on the handle. Didn't turn around. "Take care of yourself, Carter. Or let someone else do it. It counts." The door swung shut behind her. The bell above it chimed once and went quiet. Rory sat with the card in front of her, and the whisky gone warm, and the rain coming down. Silas came over. He didn't say anything. He picked up her glass, refilled it, set it back down, and walked away. Rory picked up the card. Turned it over. Her father's chambers were printed on the front, and beneath the address, in Bethan's tight hand — a mobile number that didn't belong to any office. She put it back down. Face up this time.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags3
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences61
tagDensity0.049
leniency0.098
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
96.12% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1290
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"very"
count1
highlights
0"very"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
84.50% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1290
totalAiIsms4
found
0
word"silence"
count2
1
word"weight"
count1
2
word"flickered"
count1
highlights
0"silence"
1"weight"
2"flickered"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences92
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences92
filterMatches
0"look"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences150
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen41
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1310
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions18
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
0.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions55
wordCount862
uniqueNames10
maxNameDensity2.67
worstName"Bethan"
maxWindowNameDensity6.5
worstWindowName"Bethan"
discoveredNames
London1
Thames1
Carter1
Golden1
Empress1
Silas5
Rory20
Bethan23
Started1
Evan1
persons
0"Carter"
1"Silas"
2"Rory"
3"Bethan"
4"Evan"
places
0"London"
1"Thames"
globalScore0.166
windowScore0
90.48% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences42
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"something like guilt, all of it landing at o"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1310
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences150
matches
0"knew that coat"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs95
mean13.79
std13.94
cv1.011
sampleLengths
053
149
246
33
417
537
61
79
848
92
106
1124
126
133
144
1511
1618
1710
182
193
2010
2132
226
231
2433
255
263
2738
287
292
308
3141
323
333
346
3536
363
374
386
399
4057
417
423
4327
444
4515
463
4712
4814
495
97.64% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences92
matches
0"been sanded"
1"were printed"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs161
matches
0"was reading"
1"was coming"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount15
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences12
totalSentences150
ratio0.08
matches
0"The rain had stopped an hour ago, but London still smelled of it — wet stone and diesel and the sour breath of the Thames two streets south."
1"That was the thing about him — he let silence do its work."
2"She'd come in at the tail of her shift, still smelling of the Golden Empress — soy and ginger and fryer grease that never washed out of her hair — and Silas had poured it without asking."
3"Her hair was shorter — a blunt bob gone silver at the temples — and she'd put on the kind of weight that came from wine and late nights and nobody to tell her to stop."
4"The scar on her left wrist itched — the old childhood one, the crescent — and she rubbed it with her thumb the way she always did when something was coming."
5"Rory watched her — the set of her shoulders, the line between her brows."
6"The door opened again — a couple, laughing, shaking umbrellas."
7"Bethan's face did something complicated — grief and fury and something like guilt, all of it landing at once."
8"Rory looked around the bar — the maps, the photographs, the green light, the man with the limp and the signet ring who never asked her a question she couldn't answer."
9"She placed it on the bar between them — not sliding it, not pushing it."
10"She looked down at Rory for a long moment — the way you look at a house you used to live in."
11"Her father's chambers were printed on the front, and beneath the address, in Bethan's tight hand — a mobile number that didn't belong to any office."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount693
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount22
adverbRatio0.031746031746031744
lyAdverbCount1
lyAdverbRatio0.001443001443001443
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences150
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences150
mean8.73
std8.71
cv0.997
sampleLengths
028
125
224
35
47
513
69
737
83
917
104
1117
1216
131
149
152
1636
176
184
192
206
215
2215
232
242
256
263
274
286
295
3018
314
321
335
342
353
363
377
385
3927
406
411
422
4331
445
453
469
472
4827
493
47.78% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats10
diversityRatio0.32666666666666666
totalSentences150
uniqueOpeners49
82.30% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences81
matches
0"Then Bethan crossed the room,"
1"Just leaving it there."
ratio0.025
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount16
totalSentences81
matches
0"He didn't look at her."
1"He never did when she"
2"She was halfway through a"
3"She'd come in at the"
4"She knew that coat."
5"She knew the way the"
6"Her hair was shorter —"
7"She said it like a"
8"It burned going down and"
9"She placed it on the"
10"She looked down at Rory"
11"She said nothing."
12"He didn't say anything."
13"He picked up her glass,"
14"Her father's chambers were printed"
15"She put it back down."
ratio0.198
34.07% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount69
totalSentences81
matches
0"The rain had stopped an"
1"Rory Carter sat at the"
2"Silas worked the far end,"
3"He didn't look at her."
4"He never did when she"
5"That was the thing about"
6"She was halfway through a"
7"She'd come in at the"
8"The door opened."
9"A woman stepped in, shaking"
10"She knew that coat."
11"She knew the way the"
12"Rory had watched her do"
13"The name came out before"
14"Her hair was shorter —"
15"She said it like a"
16"The bar held its breath."
17"Rory turned back to her"
18"The whisky had gone warm."
19"Silas set a fresh glass"
ratio0.852
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences81
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences27
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"Silas worked the far end, a cloth in his hand, turning a glass over and over like he was reading something in its curve."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags3
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"Bethan said, though her voice said otherwise"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags2
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences61
tagDensity0.033
leniency0.066
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
81.0963%