Run: 2026-09-10-01M25DR5FBADM4RD1XH44G6FQ7

Run Details

Duration:
21.8s
Cost:
$0.001872
Provider:
DeepSeek

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4417" name="Tomás Herrera" aliases="Tommy, Tomás, Herrera" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Support"> <eyeColor>warm brown</eyeColor> <hair>short curly dark brown</hair> <height>5'10"</height> <age>29</age> <skinTone>olive skin</skinTone> <scar>scar running along his left forearm from a knife attack</scar> <medallion>Saint Christopher medallion around his neck</medallion> <birthplace>Seville, Spain</birthplace> <description>A former paramedic who provides off-the-books medical care for the clique.</description> <backstory>Born in Seville, Spain. He moved to London to work for the NHS but lost his license after administering unauthorized treatments to supernatural patients.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the thriller genre. A detective is pursuing a suspect through rain-soaked city streets at night. The chase takes them from the street level down into an underground market. The detective must decide whether to follow the suspect into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The rain had been falling since six, a thin, determined drizzle that turned the neon on Old Compton Street into a smear of green and pink on the wet asphalt. Harlow Quinn had been standing in the doorway of a shuttered dry cleaner's for forty minutes, collar up, hands in her pockets, watching the sign above the bar across the street throw its light across the puddles like something bleeding. The Raven's Nest. Maps on the walls, photographs gone grey with age, and a clientele that Quinn had run through the system twice without finding a single one of them clean. She'd been building the file for eleven months. Tonight it finally had a name on it. At 11:14 the door opened and Tomás Herrera stepped out. She knew him from the photograph on her desk, but the photograph was a poor thing compared to the man. He was smaller than she'd expected, compact, dark curls flattened to his skull by the weather, and he moved like someone who'd spent years walking into rooms where people were dying. No hurry in it. Just economy. He pulled his jacket collar up and stood for a moment under the awning, and when the sleeve rode back she caught the pale seam of scar tissue along his left forearm, running wrist to elbow like a pulled thread. Then his head came up, and he looked directly at her doorway. Quinn had made her living on the fact that people didn't look. They looked at phones, at shoes, at the ground in front of them. Herrera scanned, left to right, slow, and when his eyes reached her they stopped and stayed. She pushed off the wall. He was gone before her second step. Not running, not yet. He went sideways, fast, into the mouth of an alley beside the bar, and Quinn broke into a jog and then a run, boots slapping through standing water. Her watch caught the light as she pumped her arms. Eighteen years. Eighteen years and she could still feel the exact moment the chase tipped over from procedure into appetite. The alley narrowed and stank of old grease and cat piss. Fire escapes climbed the brickwork above her. Herrera took a hard left through a service yard, vaulted a stack of pallets with a hand flat on the top board, and Quinn went through the gap rather than over, shoulder clipping the wall hard enough to numb it. Her radio was dead weight on her hip. She didn't key it. If she called it in, the Met would arrive and whatever this was would become a warrant and a lawyer and a man walking out of a station at dawn with his tie straightened. She wanted to see where he went first. He crossed Shaftesbury Avenue against the lights. A taxi braked and slid, horn blaring, and Quinn went through the spray behind it, close enough to feel the heat of the bonnet on her thigh. Herrera was thirty yards ahead and losing ground, and he knew it, because he was looking for something now. Not escape. A door. They ran north, through Bloomsbury, the streets emptying as the rain thickened. Quinn was fifty yards back, then forty. Her lungs burned. Her hair was flat to her scalp and water ran into her eyes and she didn't wipe it away because wiping it would cost her half a stride and half a stride was all he needed. At Mornington Crescent he turned east. At Camden he turned north again, and Quinn understood, somewhere in the animal part of her brain that did the maths before the analysis caught up, that he wasn't fleeing anymore. He was heading somewhere specific. He turned down a service road behind the lock and stopped in front of a hoarding of plywood sheets, weathered and tagged and entirely unremarkable except for the door cut into the middle of it. Green paint, three coats, flaking. No handle that she could see. Herrera put his hand flat on the wood and looked back at her. He was breathing hard. So was she. Twenty yards between them, rain hissing on the hoarding, and the Saint Christopher medallion swinging free of his collar, dull gold against his wet shirt. "Don't," he said. Quinn walked toward him, slow, hand open at her side. "Tomás Herrera. You're a hard man to find." "You're not going to arrest me." "I might." "Then you'd have to explain what you were doing here." His accent still sat on the vowels after eight years in London, a soft Seville roll he'd never bothered to sand off. "You don't have a warrant. You don't have a partner. You've been standing in that doorway for an hour like a woman waiting for a bus that doesn't stop here." The door opened behind him. Quinn hadn't seen anyone touch it. It simply swung inward onto a black rectangle of stairwell, and the smell that came out of it was wrong. Wet stone, and candle wax, and underneath that something mineral and cold, like the air in a church crypt. "Come on, then," said a voice from the dark. Female, old. "You're letting the weather in." Herrera stepped back through the doorway. He did not turn around. He went down backwards, watching her, and the dark took him in three steps. Quinn stood at the threshold with the rain running off her chin and every instinct she'd spent eighteen years sharpening telling her to stop, to mark the location, to come back with a team and lights and a lawful reason. She took out her phone. No signal. Not even one bar. She looked at the stairs. They were iron, worn concave at the centres, descending further than the hoarding suggested. The rain had stopped falling on her. She was already, technically, inside. A hand came out of the dark and flattened against her sternum. It was small and dry and strong, and when Quinn's eyes adjusted she found a woman standing on the second step, wrapped in a coat that had once been a horse blanket, grey braid down to her waist, eyes milky with cataract. "Token," the woman said. "I'm police." "Then you'll know what a warrant's worth down there, which is nothing." The woman's hand didn't move. Behind her, the stairwell breathed. "Token or turn around. I've no interest in the second one and neither do you." Quinn reached inside her coat. Not for the badge. Her fingers found the inside pocket, the one she'd sewn shut and cut open again, and closed around something small and hard and oily that she had carried for three years without ever once being able to explain to herself why. She put it in the woman's palm. It was a knuckle bone, human, drilled through and strung on a leather cord gone black with handling. It had been logged as Exhibit 44-C in the matter of the death of DS Alan Morris, and it had gone missing from the evidence bag the same night, and the only person who had ever touched that bag between the scene and the property room was the detective sergeant who had knelt in the blood beside him and closed his eyes and put her hand in his coat pocket and felt the shape of it there, smooth and wrong, like a key to a house that wasn't on any map. She had never told anyone. She had never been able to say the sentence out loud. The woman turned it over in her fingers, once, twice. Her milky eyes came up. "Where did you get this." "Off a dead man." "Which dead man." Quinn's jaw set. The rain ran down the back of her neck. "Mine." The old woman looked at her for a long moment, and something moved behind the cataract, and she stepped aside. "Then you'd better come and find out what he died for," she said. The stairs went down forty-two steps before they turned. Quinn counted them, because counting was what she did, and at the turn the light changed, and the sound changed, and the smell of candle wax and wet stone and cold minerals came up around her like water closing over her head. At the bottom there was a ticket hall that had been bricked up in 1927 and had not been empty since. The ceiling arched away into darkness, tiled and soot-black, and beneath it a market sprawled where the turnstiles used to be. Stalls of dark wood. Lanterns hung on butchers' hooks. Glass jars full of things that floated. A woman selling keys, hundreds of them, on a string. A man with no shoes and silver eyes weighing out powder on a brass scale and not looking at it. Nobody looked at her. That was worse than if they had. Quinn stood at the foot of the stairs and let her eyes run the length of the hall, past the lanterns, past the aisles, hunting for one compact figure with wet dark curls and a scar on his arm. She found him a hundred feet away, standing at a stall that sold nothing she could identify, and he was looking back at her, and he wasn't running. He raised one hand. Not a wave. An invitation. Somewhere behind her, up in the world, the rain was still falling on the empty service road, and her phone had no signal, and no one on earth knew where she was. Quinn took out her warrant card and looked at it, and then put it away, because the old woman had been right. It wasn't worth anything down here. She walked into the market.
created_at"2026-09-10T10:27:54.479Z" 9/10/2026, 10:27:54 AM
model"deepseek/deepseek-v4.1-flash-20260910"
app_id182717
external_user(null)
streamedtrue
cancelledfalse
latency780
moderation_latency(null)
generation_time21434
tokens_prompt888
tokens_completion3407
native_tokens_prompt853
native_tokens_completion3063
native_tokens_completion_images(null)
native_tokens_reasoning1082
native_tokens_cached640
num_media_prompt(null)
num_input_audio_prompt(null)
num_media_completion0
num_search_results(null)
num_fetches(null)
web_search_engine(null)
origin"https://ncbench.com/"
is_byokfalse
finish_reason"stop"
native_finish_reason"stop"
service_tier(null)
usage0.00187167
router(null)
user_agent"langchainjs-openai/1.0.0 ((node/v24.20.0; linux; x64))"
http_referer(null)
request_id"req-1789036074-cEQRhha0L6viQ8mGhxJn"
session_id(null)
preset_id(null)
api_type"completions"
id"gen-1789036074-RR3HCyZ2pfWrMfsSluN2"
upstream_id"1045b7b3-9785-4686-821a-23c7faa62d2b"
provider_responses
0
endpoint_id"fd104bc8-535a-4d31-a847-a8e402e86a02"
id"1045b7b3-9785-4686-821a-23c7faa62d2b"
is_byokfalse
latency338
model_permaslug"deepseek/deepseek-v4.1-flash-20260910"
provider_name"DeepSeek"
status200
total_cost0.00187167
cache_discount0.00009408
upstream_inference_cost0
provider_name"DeepSeek"
response_cache_source_id(null)
data_region"global"
workspace_id"97e315e5-d303-487d-83c1-83180e8a13d4"

Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags6
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences17
tagDensity0.353
leniency0.706
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1618
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
90.73% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1618
totalAiIsms3
found
0
word"determined"
count1
1
word"scanned"
count1
2
word"weight"
count1
highlights
0"determined"
1"scanned"
2"weight"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences108
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences108
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences119
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen92
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1618
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions7
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
93.22% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions45
wordCount1497
uniqueNames24
maxNameDensity1.14
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Old1
Compton1
Street1
Quinn17
Raven1
Nest1
Tomás1
Herrera6
Met1
Shaftesbury1
Avenue1
Bloomsbury1
Mornington1
Crescent1
Camden1
Saint1
Christopher1
London1
Seville1
Female1
Exhibit1
Alan1
Morris1
Glass1
persons
0"Quinn"
1"Raven"
2"Tomás"
3"Herrera"
4"Saint"
5"Christopher"
6"Alan"
7"Morris"
places
0"Old"
1"Compton"
2"Street"
3"Shaftesbury"
4"Avenue"
5"Bloomsbury"
6"Mornington"
7"Crescent"
8"Camden"
9"London"
10"Seville"
globalScore0.932
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences69
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1618
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount2
totalSentences119
matches
0"up, that he"
1"touched that bag"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs51
mean31.73
std26.12
cv0.823
sampleLengths
070
147
210
397
412
541
65
77
862
958
1054
1157
1258
1342
1446
1545
163
1718
186
192
2062
2150
2216
2325
2440
2511
2631
2754
284
292
3037
3150
327
33109
3416
3515
365
374
383
3913
4020
4113
4251
4388
4411
4539
4628
479
4832
4928
95.52% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount3
totalSentences108
matches
0"was gone"
1"been logged"
2"been bricked"
0.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount8
totalVerbs240
matches
0"were dying"
1"was looking"
2"wasn't fleeing"
3"was heading"
4"was breathing"
5"was looking"
6"wasn't running"
7"was still falling"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences119
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1311
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount38
adverbRatio0.028985507246376812
lyAdverbCount7
lyAdverbRatio0.005339435545385202
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences119
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences119
mean13.6
std13.51
cv0.994
sampleLengths
030
140
23
328
48
58
610
720
831
94
102
1140
1212
1312
1413
1516
165
177
184
1928
2010
212
2218
2311
247
2540
268
274
2834
298
307
3127
3219
332
342
3512
367
373
3836
396
4031
415
4235
435
446
4513
464
473
4825
493
53.50% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats8
diversityRatio0.36134453781512604
totalSentences119
uniqueOpeners43
67.34% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences99
matches
0"Then his head came up,"
1"Somewhere behind her, up in"
ratio0.02
62.42% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount39
totalSentences99
matches
0"She'd been building the file"
1"She knew him from the"
2"He was smaller than she'd"
3"He pulled his jacket collar"
4"They looked at phones, at"
5"She pushed off the wall."
6"He was gone before her"
7"He went sideways, fast, into"
8"Her watch caught the light"
9"Her radio was dead weight"
10"She didn't key it."
11"She wanted to see where"
12"He crossed Shaftesbury Avenue against"
13"They ran north, through Bloomsbury,"
14"Her lungs burned."
15"Her hair was flat to"
16"He was heading somewhere specific."
17"He turned down a service"
18"He was breathing hard."
19"His accent still sat on"
ratio0.394
66.06% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount78
totalSentences99
matches
0"The rain had been falling"
1"Harlow Quinn had been standing"
2"The Raven's Nest."
3"Maps on the walls, photographs"
4"She'd been building the file"
5"Tonight it finally had a"
6"She knew him from the"
7"He was smaller than she'd"
8"He pulled his jacket collar"
9"Quinn had made her living"
10"They looked at phones, at"
11"Herrera scanned, left to right,"
12"She pushed off the wall."
13"He was gone before her"
14"He went sideways, fast, into"
15"Her watch caught the light"
16"The alley narrowed and stank"
17"Herrera took a hard left"
18"Her radio was dead weight"
19"She didn't key it."
ratio0.788
50.51% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences99
matches
0"If she called it in,"
ratio0.01
55.39% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences49
technicalSentenceCount6
matches
0"The rain had been falling since six, a thin, determined drizzle that turned the neon on Old Compton Street into a smear of green and pink on the wet asphalt."
1"Harlow Quinn had been standing in the doorway of a shuttered dry cleaner's for forty minutes, collar up, hands in her pockets, watching the sign above the bar a…"
2"He was smaller than she'd expected, compact, dark curls flattened to his skull by the weather, and he moved like someone who'd spent years walking into rooms wh…"
3"At Camden he turned north again, and Quinn understood, somewhere in the animal part of her brain that did the maths before the analysis caught up, that he wasn'…"
4"It was small and dry and strong, and when Quinn's eyes adjusted she found a woman standing on the second step, wrapped in a coat that had once been a horse blan…"
5"It had been logged as Exhibit 44-C in the matter of the death of DS Alan Morris, and it had gone missing from the evidence bag the same night, and the only pers…"
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags6
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags3
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences17
tagDensity0.176
leniency0.353
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
87.8230%