Run: 2026-09-10-01M25DRNTA37VGGV3930BM1RHW

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You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Romance genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The knock came in a pattern. Two slow, three quick. Rory set the pen down beside the half-drawn map. On the windowsill, Ptolemy lifted his head, ears flattening, then slid off the cushion onto the floorboards without a sound. Not Eva. Eva knocked with her elbow, or with her keys, or not at all. Not the landlord, who rang the bell twice and hammered the third time. Not the delivery boys from the Golden Empress, who never made it past the intercom. Two slow. Three quick. She crossed the flat in four steps and pressed her eye to the peephole. Charcoal wool. Platinum hair slicked back off a pale forehead. An ivory-handled cane hooked over one wrist. Her palm flattened against the door. She stayed there long enough for him to hear her breathing. "Eva's not here." "I know." His voice came through the oak as though the oak had been cut for it. "I came to see you." Cumin and scorched ghee bled up through the floorboards from the curry house below. In the corner, the radiator clanked. Ptolemy sat down in front of the door, tail curled, and stared at the wood with the focus of a cat who had decided something. "Go away, Lucien." "I would. In fact I planned to." A pause. The soft tap of the cane's tip against the lino. "Then I looked down." She opened the top deadbolt. The middle one. The bottom one. The chain stayed on, holding the door to a two-inch gap, and through that gap she took him in properly: the tailored lines of the suit, the ivory handle worn smooth, the shirt cuff turned back. The cuff was dark. Red, mostly, and drying. "May I bleed inside," he said, "or would you rather I did it in the corridor? Mrs. Bhattacharya on the second floor has been complaining about the smell of the stairwell for weeks. I hate to give her ammunition." Rory unhooked the chain. He stepped in with the economy of a man who never touched anything he did not intend to, set the cane against the wall, and surveyed the flat. He took in the books stacked two deep along the skirting board. The scrolls pinned to the back of the door. The maps on the floor, the teacups growing rings of mould on Eva's desk. A quarter-second on the unmade sofa bed, sheets twisted, a single pillow. "You've made it a home." "Say the thing you came to say." "First, a chair. Second, a towel. Third, some discretion." He touched his jaw. There was a line there, thin and neat, an inch long, not yet closed. "They took my jacket in Deptford. I had to walk from the station." She pulled the tea towel off the oven rail and threw it at him. He caught it one-handed and pressed it to the wound without flinching. "There is no chair," she said. "There is a floor. I've done worse." He folded down onto the boards by the radiator, back against the wall, and tipped his head to look up at her. Up close the eyes were the problem they had always been, one amber, one black, and neither of them anywhere she wanted to be caught looking. "You changed your hair." "It's the same hair." "The colour's holding well. Last time it was coming through at the roots." "Careful." She crouched two feet away, forearms on her knees. Ptolemy padded over and sniffed the cane where it leaned, then the hem of Lucien's trousers, then sat and stared at him with flat contempt. "He doesn't like you." "Few do. It's the eyes." He reached inside the ruined jacket, pulled out a stiff brown envelope, and slid it across the floorboards. "Open it." She did. A photograph, printed on cheap glossy paper. Her, three days ago, standing in the alley behind the Golden Empress with a box of dumplings balanced on one hip, the back door propped open on a brick. Shot from above, from a window opposite, from the fourth floor of the council block that overlooked the yard. The angle was exact. Focused. The sort of photograph a man takes when he wants to prove he was patient. The floorboards creaked under her weight as she stood. "Who." "Not mine. I want to be very clear about that." He watched her face, and whatever he saw there made him add, "I was asked to find you. I declined the commission." "You've declined before." The towel went still against his jaw. "Calais," she said. "Yes." "I waited eleven hours. I ate a chocolate bar and a packet of crisps and I watched the same four lorries come in and out, and at three in the morning you sent me four words." She set the photograph face down on the desk, carefully, as though it were hot. "Don't wait. Go. Four words. I counted them about two hundred times on the crossing." "I know." "So don't sit in my friend's flat and tell me you declined." He got up. Slowly, favouring the left wrist, which she now saw was also wrapped, badly, in a strip of torn silk. He crossed the room and she did not move back, because the space behind her was Eva's desk and because moving back was a thing she had stopped doing. "They had your name on a list," he said. "Seventeen names. Men with cargo and men with debts and one girl on a ferry out of Ireland. The buyer wanted the girl. I paid him in something else." "What something else?" "Myself. Two years of my time, on terms." He shrugged one shoulder. "It cost less than you think. It cost more than I'd pay again." "That's not an answer." "It's the only one I have that you'd accept." She looked at his wrist, at the silk going black in the middle, and something in her chest tightened like a fist closing on a coin. "Sit down," she said. "You're dripping on Eva's books." He sat. She dragged the desk chair over and straddled it backwards, facing him, and worked the knot loose on the silk. Underneath, the cut ran long and shallow down the inside of his forearm, deliberate, neat, the kind of cut that says something rather than kills. She pressed the towel to it and his fingers closed around her wrist, thumb landing over the pulse point, light, not holding, just there. The flat went quiet. The radiator clanked once and gave up. Below them, someone in the curry house dropped a tray of steel bowls and the whole floor rang like a bell. "Three days ago," he said. "How many times did you leave the flat?" "Define leave." "Rory." "Twice. Deliveries. Both to addresses I've done a hundred times." She lifted her chin. "Same route, same times, same bag. Nothing new. Nothing I wouldn't do again tomorrow." "Then they've had three days to look at the rest of it. Every door you knock on. Every name on the docket at the restaurant." He turned her wrist over, examining it as though the answer were written on the inside of her arm beside the small crescent scar she'd had since she was seven. "Do you still keep your documents at the bar?" "Silas keeps a safe." "Empty it tonight." "You don't get to walk in here and give me orders." "No." He released her wrist. "I get to walk in here and tell you what's true, which is worse. The men with the camera are downstairs, and they aren't mine, and they have been sitting in a back booth since Tuesday eating a great deal of lamb." Rory stood up so fast the chair skidded. "You knew that and you came up anyway?" "I came up because of it. They watched me come in. If I'd turned around at the door, they'd have followed me and learned nothing. If I come in and stay, they learn exactly what I want them to learn." He smiled, and it did not reach the amber eye or the black one. "That a Frenchman with a cane is sleeping with the delivery girl. It's a useful story. It buys you a night." "You smug, presumptuous, well-dressed-" "Swear at me in Welsh. You're better at it." She grabbed the towel off the floor where it had fallen and pressed it back to his arm hard enough to hurt. He let her. "The photograph," she said. "Who paid for it?" "That's the part I'd rather have told you on a train." "There isn't going to be a train." "There is." His hand came up and closed over hers on the towel, and for the first time his voice dropped out of its courtly register into something quieter and much worse. "Because the name on the commission, Rory, the name that paid two thousand in cash for a picture of you carrying dumplings in an alley, is Evan Pryce." Every square inch of the flat went cold. "That's not possible." "It's been possible for eleven weeks." "He's in Cardiff. He has a bail condition. He has-" Then the knock. Two slow. Three quick. And Lucien, still holding her hand against the wound, went so completely still that she heard the second-floor door open below them, and the low flat murmur of two men's voices on the stairs, and Ptolemy's low growl starting up from somewhere deep in his chest.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags20
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences65
tagDensity0.308
leniency0.615
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
87.31% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1576
totalAiIsmAdverbs4
found
0
adverb"very"
count1
1
adverb"carefully"
count1
2
adverb"slowly"
count1
3
adverb"completely"
count1
highlights
0"very"
1"carefully"
2"slowly"
3"completely"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
84.14% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1576
totalAiIsms5
found
0
word"weight"
count1
1
word"silk"
count3
2
word"pulse"
count1
highlights
0"weight"
1"silk"
2"pulse"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences86
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences86
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"tend to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences130
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen55
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1576
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions16
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions21
wordCount978
uniqueNames8
maxNameDensity0.41
worstName"Ptolemy"
maxWindowNameDensity1
worstWindowName"Ptolemy"
discoveredNames
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Eva4
Golden2
Empress2
Cumin1
Rory3
Lucien2
Two3
persons
0"Ptolemy"
1"Eva"
2"Rory"
3"Lucien"
places
0"Golden"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences53
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1576
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences130
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
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617
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1339
144
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165
177
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224
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289
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3712
3851
3938
403
4125
424
439
4426
459
4671
4732
4813
492
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences86
matches
0"were written"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs158
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences130
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount984
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount35
adverbRatio0.03556910569105691
lyAdverbCount7
lyAdverbRatio0.007113821138211382
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences130
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences130
mean12.12
std11.46
cv0.945
sampleLengths
06
14
29
320
42
513
613
715
82
92
1014
112
128
137
146
1511
163
1717
185
1914
206
2125
223
239
2410
254
265
273
283
2936
304
314
3239
334
3428
3512
369
3714
3812
395
407
4113
4214
4313
4414
4512
466
4729
4826
494
67.18% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats11
diversityRatio0.45384615384615384
totalSentences130
uniqueOpeners59
96.62% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences69
matches
0"Slowly, favouring the left wrist,"
1"Then the knock."
ratio0.029
51.88% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount29
totalSentences69
matches
0"She crossed the flat in"
1"Her palm flattened against the"
2"She stayed there long enough"
3"His voice came through the"
4"She opened the top deadbolt."
5"He stepped in with the"
6"He took in the books"
7"He touched his jaw"
8"She pulled the tea towel"
9"He caught it one-handed and"
10"He folded down onto the"
11"She crouched two feet away,"
12"He reached inside the ruined"
13"Her, three days ago, standing"
14"He watched her face, and"
15"She set the photograph face"
16"He got up."
17"He crossed the room and"
18"He shrugged one shoulder"
19"She looked at his wrist,"
ratio0.42
61.45% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount55
totalSentences69
matches
0"The knock came in a"
1"Rory set the pen down"
2"Eva knocked with her elbow,"
3"She crossed the flat in"
4"Platinum hair slicked back off"
5"An ivory-handled cane hooked over"
6"Her palm flattened against the"
7"She stayed there long enough"
8"His voice came through the"
9"Cumin and scorched ghee bled"
10"Ptolemy sat down in front"
11"The soft tap of the"
12"She opened the top deadbolt."
13"The middle one."
14"The bottom one."
15"The chain stayed on, holding"
16"The cuff was dark."
17"Rory unhooked the chain."
18"He stepped in with the"
19"He took in the books"
ratio0.797
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences69
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences32
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"Underneath, the cut ran long and shallow down the inside of his forearm, deliberate, neat, the kind of cut that says something rather than kills."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags20
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"He watched, and whatever he saw there made him add,"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags7
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences65
tagDensity0.108
leniency0.215
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
91.6193%