Run: 2026-09-10-01M25DS0R1R64FJM0VXPK3CXG4

Run Details

Duration:
23.9s
Cost:
$0.002165
Provider:
DeepSeek

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The first knock landed at twenty past eleven, three fast raps and then nothing. Rory put the mug down on a stack of Eva's research notes. The tea slopped over the rim. Downstairs, the curry house had shut its doors an hour ago, but the building still smelled of cardamom and burnt onion, the smell soaked into the plaster so deep you could taste it in the mornings. The second knock. She crossed the flat, past the tower of scrolls on the armchair, past Ptolemy, who had lifted his head off the windowsill and fixed the door with the flat yellow stare of a cat who knew exactly who stood on the other side and had opinions. "Eva's out," Rory called through the wood. "Come back Thursday." Rain hammered the window behind her, hard enough to blur the sodium glow of Brick Lane into a long orange smear. "I'm not here for Eva." She knew the voice before the last syllable settled. French vowels sitting oddly under English consonants, like a man wearing a coat cut for someone else. Rory checked the peephole. Platinum hair flattened dark by rain. One eye amber, one black, both fixed on the lens as though he could see through the fisheye to the shape of her. "Open the door, Rory." She slid the top bolt. The middle one. Left the chain on and pulled the door back six inches. Lucien Moreau stood in the corridor's flickering green light with rain running off his jaw and into his collar. His suit had gone the colour of wet slate. The ivory handle of the cane rested under his hand, thumb hooked over the curve of it, and he did not smile, which she appreciated, because if he had smiled she would have shut the door in his face. "You're dripping on the landing." "I am." "Mrs. Farouk will have words." "Mrs. Farouk and I are acquainted. She let me in." "You charmed a seventy-year-old woman into unlocking the front door for a demon." "Half." Water ticked off his sleeve onto the lino. "She took more issue with my shoes." Ptolemy abandoned Rory entirely, trotted to the gap, and shoved his head through it to sniff the hem of Lucien's trousers. The cat had standards. The cat had, until three months ago, slept in the man's lap every Tuesday. "Traitor," Rory told him. "Animals are honest. It's why I prefer them." Lucien's gaze moved past her, into the flat, over the avalanche of Eva's books, the scrolls stacked against the radiator, the map pinned to the wall with six different colours of thread running across it. "You've been busy." "You've been gone." The corridor's bulb buzzed. Neither of them moved. "I brought you something." He reached inside his jacket and produced a slim folder, manila, sodden at one corner. He held it up to the gap. "The papers. Laila Ahearne. Bank card, national insurance, tenancy in Margate if you want it. It's clean. I checked it twice." Rory looked at the folder in his hand and felt the old familiar drop in her stomach, like the first second of a fall. "Eleven weeks," she said. "Eleven weeks and four days." "Don't do that. Don't count." "You paid for these in March." He kept his voice level, the same voice he used when he was buying information off a man he intended to ruin. "I told you I would deliver them in six. I am late." "You're not late. You vanished." "I was detained." "By who?" Rain filled the gap where his answer should have gone. "That's what I thought," Rory said. She unclipped the chain, and the door swung wide before she had decided to let it, which was, she noticed with some irritation, the way most things went with him. He stepped over the threshold and stood dripping in Eva's hallway with the folder held out, and Ptolemy wound twice through his ankles and purred like a kettle coming up to boil. She took the folder. Their fingers did not touch, and she was aware of the careful inch he had left between them, aware of it the way you are aware of a hand held back from a bruise. "Where were you?" she said. "Here and there." "Try again." "Rory." "That's my name. You've used it twice tonight. Third time it stops working." Lucien set the cane against the wall and loosened his top button with one hand, and she watched him do it and hated how much of the movement she remembered. The wrist, the turn of the fingers. She had mapped that hand once in the dark of his flat in Whitechapel while he was telling her about Marseille, about the harbour there, about a mother who thought her son had died at nineteen. "Who told you I ran?" he said. "Nobody told me anything. I came to the address you gave me. Your door was open. Your desk had been emptied. There was blood on the rug and a man downstairs who said the Frenchman had sold his book and gone." "Ah." He said it the way a man says a word he has been expecting for a long time. "Tobias." "Tobias." "Tobias is a liar with a debt and an inflated sense of his own memory." "He knew your name." "My name is cheap." Lucien picked up the cane again, turning the ivory handle over in his palm. "Tobias owed four men in this city. He sold them a story about me because a story was all he had left. That story included an address. Yours." Rory's hand went to her left wrist without meaning to, thumb pressing the small crescent scar, a habit older than Lucien and, until tonight, easier to keep to herself. His mismatched eyes dropped to the movement and stayed there a beat too long. "Say the rest," she said. "I went to Tobias first. Then I went to the men who bought his story." He turned the handle again. "It took eleven weeks. It would have taken four if I had been better at my job." "And you didn't think to send a message." "A message would have told them I cared." "So you thought I'd sit here and assume the worst." "I expected you to assume the worst and leave the city, which was the point." He looked at the stack of papers on the armchair, the map, the threads. "You didn't leave." "No." "Why not?" The kettle in the kitchen clicked off. Somewhere below, a delivery bike rattled over the cobbles on Brick Lane. "Because I've been running from one man for two years and I'm tired," Rory said. "And because I kept a key to your flat in my coat pocket the whole time, which is a stupid thing to do to a man who might have sold me." The rain slackened. Lucien's jaw worked once. He looked, for the first time since she had opened the door, like a man who had miscalculated a sum and found the error in his own column. "Rory," he said, and this time the name came out low, without polish, without the broker's coating over it. She reached past him for the top deadbolt. Her shoulder came within an inch of his chest, close enough that the wet wool of his suit and the rain in his hair reached her, cold and familiar, and Ptolemy chose that exact moment to sit down on the mat between their feet and refuse to move. "Give me the folder properly," she said. "You've soaked the corner." He turned it over in his hands, and instead of handing it across, he put it on the hall table and kept his palm flat on top of it. "Before you read it," he said, "there is a second thing I came to say, and it does not fit in a folder." "Then say it." "I will." His fingers curled on the manila. "When you've stopped holding the edge of the door like you're deciding whether to throw me out." Rory let go of the door.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags20
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences59
tagDensity0.339
leniency0.678
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1353
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
85.22% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1353
totalAiIsms4
found
0
word"familiar"
count2
1
word"stomach"
count1
2
word"sense of"
count1
highlights
0"familiar"
1"stomach"
2"sense of"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences64
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences64
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"tended to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences103
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen48
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1353
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions18
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
95.12% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions35
wordCount911
uniqueNames12
maxNameDensity1.1
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Eva3
Ptolemy4
Rain2
Brick2
Lane2
English1
Moreau1
Rory10
Lucien7
Tuesday1
Whitechapel1
Marseille1
persons
0"Eva"
1"Ptolemy"
2"Rain"
3"Moreau"
4"Rory"
5"Lucien"
places
0"Brick"
1"Lane"
2"Whitechapel"
3"Marseille"
globalScore0.951
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences43
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1353
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences103
matches
0"mapped that hand"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs69
mean19.61
std18.65
cv0.951
sampleLengths
014
154
23
346
410
521
65
726
833
94
1019
1167
125
132
145
1510
1613
1716
1839
194
2046
213
228
2347
2424
254
265
275
2840
295
303
312
3210
336
3462
3538
365
373
382
391
4013
4173
427
4341
4420
451
4615
474
4846
4943
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences64
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs145
matches
0"was buying"
1"was telling"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences103
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount911
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount22
adverbRatio0.024149286498353458
lyAdverbCount3
lyAdverbRatio0.003293084522502744
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences103
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences103
mean13.14
std11.59
cv0.882
sampleLengths
014
112
26
336
43
546
67
73
821
95
109
1117
124
136
1423
154
165
173
1811
1919
209
2139
225
232
245
2510
2613
279
287
2921
304
3114
324
3343
343
353
364
374
3819
397
4021
4124
424
435
445
4528
4612
475
483
492
75.08% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats6
diversityRatio0.4854368932038835
totalSentences103
uniqueOpeners50
59.52% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences56
matches
0"Somewhere below, a delivery bike"
ratio0.018
62.86% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount22
totalSentences56
matches
0"She crossed the flat, past"
1"She knew the voice before"
2"She slid the top bolt."
3"His suit had gone the"
4"He reached inside his jacket"
5"He held it up to"
6"He kept his voice level,"
7"She unclipped the chain, and"
8"He stepped over the threshold"
9"She took the folder."
10"Their fingers did not touch,"
11"She had mapped that hand"
12"He said it the way"
13"His mismatched eyes dropped to"
14"He turned the handle again"
15"He looked at the stack"
16"He looked, for the first"
17"he said, and this time"
18"She reached past him for"
19"Her shoulder came within an"
ratio0.393
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount52
totalSentences56
matches
0"The first knock landed at"
1"Rory put the mug down"
2"The tea slopped over the"
3"Downstairs, the curry house had"
4"The second knock."
5"She crossed the flat, past"
6"Rory called through the wood"
7"She knew the voice before"
8"French vowels sitting oddly under"
9"Rory checked the peephole."
10"Platinum hair flattened dark by"
11"She slid the top bolt."
12"The middle one."
13"Lucien Moreau stood in the"
14"His suit had gone the"
15"The ivory handle of the"
16"Water ticked off his sleeve"
17"Ptolemy abandoned Rory entirely, trotted"
18"The cat had standards."
19"The cat had, until three"
ratio0.929
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences56
matches(empty)
ratio0
57.14% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences25
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"She crossed the flat, past the tower of scrolls on the armchair, past Ptolemy, who had lifted his head off the windowsill and fixed the door with the flat yello…"
1"She unclipped the chain, and the door swung wide before she had decided to let it, which was, she noticed with some irritation, the way most things went with hi…"
2"She had mapped that hand once in the dark of his flat in Whitechapel while he was telling her about Marseille, about the harbour there, about a mother who thoug…"
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags20
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"He looked, the map, the threads"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags12
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences59
tagDensity0.203
leniency0.407
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
87.8313%