Run: 2026-09-10-01M25DS1X8EDE2K5VZZ0JCF8YP

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Duration:
44.1s
Cost:
$0.004306
Provider:
DeepSeek

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rain came off Dean Street sideways. The green neon over the door stuttered — RAVEN'S, RAVEN'S, RAVEN'S — a bad connection Silas had left alone for three winters. Tuesday. Quarter to ten. Four drinkers, all cash, none of them talking. Rory had the week's receipts fanned along the far end of the bar, pencil behind her ear, her phone face down on Yu-Fei's delivery sheet. Forty-three Bridge Street. No buzzer. Leave it with the neighbour. She'd read the line four times and taken none of it in. Silas worked the pumps. Slow hands, sleeves rolled. He'd told her once that a man behind a bar learns everything worth knowing about a customer in ninety seconds, and he'd been right often enough that she'd stopped arguing with him about it. The door swung. Weather came in first, then the man: dark jacket soaked black across the shoulders, grey through the temples, brown lace-ups resoled twice. He stood dripping on the boards and did not wipe his feet. Silas's right hand found the silver ring on his finger and turned it a quarter turn. "Francis." "Si." The door eased shut. Water spread from the man's shoes in a slow map. "You kept the maps up." "They don't need changing. The world's still the same shape." "Bloody isn't." He crossed to the middle of the bar and took the stool that didn't creak, which told Rory he'd sat in it before. Silas reached for the Lagavulin. The man laid his hand flat on the wood. "Soda. Lime, if there's one going." The bottle hung in Silas's fist. He put it back, pulled soda from the gun, cut a wedge, set the glass down square. "Twelve years," the man said, "and the first thing you do is pour me a drink I stopped taking in 2016." "You stopped taking it." "I stopped taking it." "Lisbon," Silas said. "And the tortoise." "You got that one, then." "I got that one." The man drank half the glass and set it down on the coaster with no ring of wet left behind. Rory tore a receipt off the spike and pretended to read it. "You're a long way from anywhere," Silas said. "Frome." "Frome." "Forty-one Chessels Road, if you want it on the board. I fit washing machines. Faulty seals, drums that scream, filters blocked with coins and hairgrips. Twenty-two years of tradecraft and I can diagnose a dead pump in nine seconds." "Somebody has to." "Somebody does." Silas picked up a cloth and worked at a spot on the bar that had come off ten minutes earlier. Frankie watched him do it. "How's the knee?" "It knows when it's going to rain." "It knew in Prague." "We don't do Prague." "No. We never did." He turned the glass a half-inch, then back. "Where'd they put you, after?" "Here." "Here." Frankie looked at the maps, the photographs, the black-and-white faces with their names written on the back where nobody could read them. "You built yourself a museum and you call it a pub." "Careful. The pension doesn't cover sarcasm." Frankie laughed, one note, and it landed wrong in the quiet room, and he swallowed the rest of it. Rory had seen that laugh before — men who came in through the bookshelf at the back, who sat in the hidden room with their coats still on and came out an hour later looking older. Frankie hadn't touched the bookshelf. He'd walked in the front door like a civilian, which meant he'd chosen the front door, which meant something. "The girl's at Leeds," Frankie said. Silas's cloth stopped on the wood. "Zora's girl. Dentistry. Second year." Frankie picked a piece of lime out of his glass and put it on the coaster. "She's got her mother's chin and her own everything else. Doesn't know me from a gas man. I stood outside the dental school in November for forty minutes. Rain like this. Went home on the 16:07." Silas said nothing. "You want to know why I told you." "I know why you told me." "Say it." "No." Frankie's jaw worked. "You gave me the address. You gave me the address and you gave me six hours to get her out of that flat, and you knew the window was four." "Six was what there was." "Six was what you had." "I was on my back in a stairwell off Karmelitská with my knee inside out. I couldn't have walked the block, Frankie. I couldn't have crawled it. The man who could have gone up those stairs was sitting on a stool in a café with my blood on his shirt, and he went. He went." Frankie took that like a slap and held it. "I know you couldn't walk. That's the whole problem. I know." Behind the bottles, the mirror showed Silas's face and Rory watched it in the glass because she couldn't watch it head on. The ring went round again. Quarter turn. Quarter turn. "It went tits up," Frankie said, "and I've had twelve years to decide whose fault it was, and every year I decide different, and I'm no closer now than I was on the plane." "You should have come back." "You should have come after me." "I tried. Twice." Silas set the cloth down and folded it. "Lisbon, 2015. I had a man on the ground for nine days. You'd moved on. Then the postcard with the tortoise, and I thought — he's alive, he's got a sense of humour, that's a man who doesn't want finding." "I didn't want finding." "I worked that out." Frankie drained the soda. He looked at the empty glass a while, and then down the bar, at Rory, at the pencil behind her ear, at the rent book open under her elbow. "You're collecting them again," he said. "She rents the flat." "She's what, twenty-five?" "Twenty-five." "And she knows what's behind the bookshelf?" Silas didn't answer that. Frankie got off the stool. He reached into his jacket — and for a moment Rory's hand went flat on the bar under the lip where Silas kept the bat — and he came out with a card, plain, no logo, one mobile number in pencil on the back, because pencil wears to nothing if you don't want it found. "Forty-one Chessels Road. If the pension runs out." He set it next to the coaster. "Or if it doesn't." "Frankie." "Don't." "It wasn't six hours. It was four hours and eleven minutes. I gave you everything I had." Frankie stood with his hand on the door and the rain behind him and the green light coming through the glass so his face went RAVEN'S, RAVEN'S, RAVEN'S. "That's the thing, Si. I always knew that." The door shut. Cold came in and went, and the neon buzzed on over the puddled floor, and Rory looked at the card on the bar and then at Silas, who had picked up the Lagavulin again — not to pour, just to hold — and who said nothing at all for the rest of the hour.
created_at"2026-09-10T10:28:23.597Z" 9/10/2026, 10:28:23 AM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags11
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences59
tagDensity0.186
leniency0.373
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1174
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
95.74% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1174
totalAiIsms1
found
0
word"sense of"
count1
highlights
0"sense of"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences59
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences59
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"tended to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences107
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen55
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1182
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions13
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
0.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions45
wordCount700
uniqueNames9
maxNameDensity2.14
worstName"Silas"
maxWindowNameDensity5
worstWindowName"Frankie"
discoveredNames
Dean1
Street2
Silas15
Yu-Fei1
Bridge1
Rory8
Lagavulin2
Frankie12
Quarter3
persons
0"Silas"
1"Yu-Fei"
2"Rory"
3"Frankie"
places
0"Dean"
1"Street"
2"Bridge"
globalScore0.429
windowScore0
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences32
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1182
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences107
matches
0"seen that laugh"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs74
mean15.97
std17.72
cv1.11
sampleLengths
028
112
247
342
437
516
61
71
814
95
1010
112
1237
136
1423
1521
164
174
186
195
204
2120
2212
238
241
251
2639
273
282
2920
308
317
324
334
3417
351
3634
376
3879
396
406
4157
423
438
446
452
461
4733
485
495
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences59
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs116
matches(empty)
36.05% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount7
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences4
totalSentences107
ratio0.037
matches
0"The green neon over the door stuttered — RAVEN'S, RAVEN'S, RAVEN'S — a bad connection Silas had left alone for three winters."
1"Rory had seen that laugh before — men who came in through the bookshelf at the back, who sat in the hidden room with their coats still on and came out an hour later looking older."
2"He reached into his jacket — and for a moment Rory's hand went flat on the bar under the lip where Silas kept the bat — and he came out with a card, plain, no logo, one mobile number in pencil on the back, because pencil wears to nothing if you don't want it found."
3"Cold came in and went, and the neon buzzed on over the puddled floor, and Rory looked at the card on the bar and then at Silas, who had picked up the Lagavulin again — not to pour, just to hold — and who said nothing at all for the rest of the hour."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount699
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount13
adverbRatio0.01859799713876967
lyAdverbCount0
lyAdverbRatio0
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences107
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences107
mean11.05
std12.11
cv1.096
sampleLengths
06
122
21
33
48
525
63
72
85
912
104
114
1234
133
1422
1512
1616
171
181
194
2010
215
2210
232
2423
255
269
276
286
2917
3021
314
324
333
343
355
364
3720
3812
398
401
411
4239
433
442
4520
465
473
487
494
58.57% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats9
diversityRatio0.40186915887850466
totalSentences107
uniqueOpeners43
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences50
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount10
totalSentences50
matches
0"She'd read the line four"
1"He'd told her once that"
2"He stood dripping on the"
3"He crossed to the middle"
4"He put it back, pulled"
5"He turned the glass a"
6"He'd walked in the front"
7"He looked at the empty"
8"He reached into his jacket"
9"He set it next to"
ratio0.2
20.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount44
totalSentences50
matches
0"Rain came off Dean Street"
1"The green neon over the"
2"Quarter to ten."
3"Rory had the week's receipts"
4"She'd read the line four"
5"Silas worked the pumps."
6"He'd told her once that"
7"The door swung."
8"Weather came in first, then"
9"He stood dripping on the"
10"Silas's right hand found the"
11"The door eased shut."
12"Water spread from the man's"
13"He crossed to the middle"
14"Silas reached for the Lagavulin."
15"The man laid his hand"
16"The bottle hung in Silas's"
17"He put it back, pulled"
18"the man said"
19"The man drank half the"
ratio0.88
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences50
matches(empty)
ratio0
40.82% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences21
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"Rory had seen that laugh before — men who came in through the bookshelf at the back, who sat in the hidden room with their coats still on and came out an hour l…"
1"He'd walked in the front door like a civilian, which meant he'd chosen the front door, which meant something."
2"Cold came in and went, and the neon buzzed on over the puddled floor, and Rory looked at the card on the bar and then at Silas, who had picked up the Lagavulin …"
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags11
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags6
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences59
tagDensity0.102
leniency0.203
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
81.7057%