Run: 2026-09-10-01M25DTWYGASZ1NDS5CWCE1G91

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14.2s
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$0.001201
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DeepSeek

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You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The oak trees stood like sentinels, their branches knitted together so tight the February sky vanished. Rory stopped at the edge of the clearing where the standing stones waited. Eight of them, rough-hewn granite, each one taller than her flat back home. Moss crept up their sides in patterns that looked deliberate. Like script. "You feel that?" Eva's voice dropped to a whisper. Rory felt it. A pressure against her skin, the same sensation as stepping into a warm bath. The air smelled wrong. Too sweet. Like honey left out in summer, but underneath, something older. Damp earth. Crushed flowers. A fire that had burned down to embers centuries ago. Nyx drifted past her, their shadow-form bleeding into the space between the stones. No footsteps. They never made any. "The boundary," Nyx said, their voice riding the breeze. "Thin here. Thinner than I remember." "You've been here before?" Rory asked. "Once. Long ago. The grove remembers." Eva pulled her coat tighter. "That's not creepy at all." Isolde waited for them at the center of the circle. Her silver hair caught light that didn't exist. No sun. No moon. Just a pale luminescence rising from the wildflowers that carpeted the ground. Bluebells and foxgloves and something with petals the color of bruised plums. They bloomed in February. They bloomed like they'd never known winter. "Come," Isolde said. "Step through. But leave your expectations at the threshold. They will only weigh you down." Rory crossed first. The world shifted. Not a jolt. A sigh. Her stomach turned over once, then settled. The trees beyond the standing stones were still oaks, but their bark had turned silver, smooth as river stones. Leaves rustled overhead though no wind blew. Each one shimmered, translucent, catching that same sourceless light. "Breathe," Isolde said. "The air here is older than your lungs are used to." Rory inhaled. The sweetness from before flooded her mouth. She tasted peaches and rain and something metallic underneath. The ground under her boots felt springy. She looked down. Grass, yes, but it moved. Slow, like kelp in a current. Reaching for her ankles. She stepped back. "It won't hurt you," Eva said, but her voice had gone thin. "Right?" Isolde walked ahead, leaving no footprints. The grass didn't bend for her. It parted. "The grove tests those who enter," Isolde said. "It tastes your intentions. Your fears. It will show you what you carry." "Lovely," Rory muttered. A path wound between the silver trees. Not a path made of dirt or stone. Something pale and smooth, like bone, that stretched ahead into the gloom. The trees grew thicker as they walked. Their branches wove together overhead, forming a tunnel. The light dimmed. The wildflowers gave way to mushrooms. Red caps. Purple stalks. Things that glowed faintly and pulsed like slow hearts. Rory's pendant warmed against her chest. She pressed her palm to it. The Heartstone thrummed. Not painful. Just there. Alive. "What is this place?" Eva asked. "Really?" Isolde didn't turn around. "A pocket. A fold. When the Fae retreated from your world, they left seams behind. Places where their realm still bleeds through. This grove is one such seam." "Bleeds through," Rory repeated. "Comforting word choice." "You wanted answers." Isolde stopped walking. The path forked ahead. One branch veered left, downhill, toward the sound of running water. The other climbed right, up a gentle slope where the trees thinned and the sky opened into something Rory couldn't name. Not blue. Not gray. A color between. Like twilight frozen in amber. "Which way?" Eva asked. "Both lead somewhere. Neither leads back." Isolde's pale eyes found Rory. "Choose." Rory looked at Nyx. They hovered at the fork, their form flickering. Solid. Then smoke. Back again. The shadows around them pooled and stretched like spilled ink. "The water," Nyx said. "It's singing." Rory heard it then. Under the rush of the stream, a melody. High and thin. Like glass rubbed on glass. It pulled at something behind her ribs. "Left," she said. They walked downhill. The sound grew. Not a stream. A river. Wider than any Rory had seen in London. The water ran clear, but things moved beneath the surface. Shapes. Long and sinuous. Glimpses of scales that caught the amber light and threw it back in rainbows. "Don't touch the water," Isolde said. Eva laughed. Nervous. "Wasn't planning on it." "Don't touch anything." Rory kept her hands at her sides. The pendant burned now. Warm enough to sting. She pulled it out from under her shirt. The crimson stone pulsed. A slow rhythm. Like a heartbeat. "It senses something," Rory said. "Hel," Nyx whispered. They had drifted closer to her, their presence cold against her shoulder. "There's a rift here. Old. Dormant. But the stone remembers." Isolde turned. For the first time, her expression shifted. Not surprise. Recognition. "The pendant was forged in Dymas. The Prince's realm. It was made to find doorways." Rory closed her hand around it. "You knew?" "I suspected." Isolde's lavender eyes didn't blink. "The benefactor who gave it to you wanted you to find something. Or be found." The river rushed on. The shapes beneath the surface moved faster now. Churning. Waiting. Eva stepped between Rory and the water. "We should go back." "No," Rory said. The word came out before she'd decided anything. "We came here for answers. We're not leaving with half of them." Isolde smiled. Faint. Sad. "Then follow me. And keep your blade close. The grove grows more honest the deeper you go." They walked along the riverbank. The trees leaned in. Whispering. Rory couldn't make out words, but the tone was clear. Warning. Welcome. Both. The grass underfoot grew taller, brushing her knees, her waist. It clung to her jeans like fingers. Ahead, the river bent around a stone arch. Not built. Grown. The trees had twisted themselves into a doorway, branches laced tight, roots braided deep. Beyond the arch, the light changed. Golden. Warm. The air smelled of cinnamon and wine. "What's through there?" Rory asked. "The heart of the grove." Isolde paused at the arch. "What waits inside will speak to you. Each of you. It will show you what you need. Not what you want." Eva's hand found Rory's. Cold. Sweaty. "Together?" Rory squeezed back. "Together." Nyx drifted ahead, their shadow-form slipping through the arch like smoke through a keyhole. No sound. No ripple. Isolde stepped through next. The light swallowed her. Rory looked at Eva. Eva nodded. They walked through together.
created_at"2026-09-10T10:29:24.06Z" 9/10/2026, 10:29:24 AM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags22
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences46
tagDensity0.478
leniency0.957
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
95.38% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1083
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"really"
count1
highlights
0"really"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
53.83% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1083
totalAiIsms10
found
0
word"sentinels"
count1
1
word"whisper"
count1
2
word"footsteps"
count1
3
word"stomach"
count1
4
word"shimmered"
count1
5
word"gloom"
count1
6
word"pulsed"
count2
7
word"comforting"
count1
8
word"churning"
count1
highlights
0"sentinels"
1"whisper"
2"footsteps"
3"stomach"
4"shimmered"
5"gloom"
6"pulsed"
7"comforting"
8"churning"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences164
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences164
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences188
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen28
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1083
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions13
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
10.61% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions62
wordCount825
uniqueNames8
maxNameDensity2.79
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity4.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
February2
Rory23
Eva10
Isolde14
Heartstone1
Nyx6
London1
Like5
persons
0"Rory"
1"Eva"
2"Isolde"
3"Heartstone"
4"Nyx"
5"Like"
places
0"February"
1"London"
globalScore0.106
windowScore0.167
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences60
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1083
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences188
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs56
mean19.34
std16.42
cv0.849
sampleLengths
054
19
247
319
415
56
66
710
857
918
103
1150
1214
1343
143
1513
1614
1721
183
1964
2020
217
2232
237
2454
254
2612
2727
286
2927
303
3147
326
337
343
3533
365
3725
3812
3915
408
4122
4214
4311
4423
4521
4640
4740
485
4931
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences164
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs158
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences188
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount828
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount20
adverbRatio0.024154589371980676
lyAdverbCount1
lyAdverbRatio0.0012077294685990338
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences188
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences188
mean5.76
std4.57
cv0.793
sampleLengths
016
113
213
310
42
59
63
714
84
92
1010
112
122
1310
1413
152
164
179
186
196
206
215
225
2310
248
252
262
2712
2812
294
307
313
3215
333
343
353
362
377
3819
397
409
413
4211
432
447
459
467
473
485
496
68.44% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats8
diversityRatio0.43617021276595747
totalSentences188
uniqueOpeners82
32.05% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences104
matches
0"Just a pale luminescence rising"
ratio0.01
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount18
totalSentences104
matches
0"They never made any."
1"Her silver hair caught light"
2"They bloomed in February."
3"They bloomed like they'd never"
4"Her stomach turned over once,"
5"She tasted peaches and rain"
6"She looked down."
7"She stepped back."
8"Their branches wove together overhead,"
9"She pressed her palm to"
10"They hovered at the fork,"
11"It pulled at something behind"
12"They walked downhill."
13"She pulled it out from"
14"They had drifted closer to"
15"They walked along the riverbank."
16"It clung to her jeans"
17"They walked through together."
ratio0.173
56.15% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount84
totalSentences104
matches
0"The oak trees stood like"
1"Rory stopped at the edge"
2"Moss crept up their sides"
3"Eva's voice dropped to a"
4"Rory felt it."
5"A pressure against her skin,"
6"The air smelled wrong."
7"A fire that had burned"
8"Nyx drifted past her, their"
9"They never made any."
10"Nyx said, their voice riding"
11"Eva pulled her coat tighter."
12"Isolde waited for them at"
13"Her silver hair caught light"
14"Bluebells and foxgloves and something"
15"They bloomed in February."
16"They bloomed like they'd never"
17"Rory crossed first."
18"The world shifted."
19"Her stomach turned over once,"
ratio0.808
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences104
matches(empty)
ratio0
49.69% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences23
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"Just a pale luminescence rising from the wildflowers that carpeted the ground."
1"Something pale and smooth, like bone, that stretched ahead into the gloom."
2"Glimpses of scales that caught the amber light and threw it back in rainbows."
79.55% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags22
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"Nyx said, their voice riding the breeze"
1"Eva said, but her voice had gone thin"
84.78% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags17
fancyCount3
fancyTags
0"Rory muttered (mutter)"
1"Rory repeated (repeat)"
2"Nyx whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences46
tagDensity0.37
leniency0.739
rawRatio0.176
effectiveRatio0.13
84.3495%