Run: 2026-09-10-01M25DVK968RMCWFCGR7HVVXJH

Run Details

Duration:
26.4s
Cost:
$0.000000
Provider:
DeepSeek

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rain had followed Aurora Carter down Dean Street and shook itself loose from her jacket when she shouldered through the door of the Raven's Nest. She carried the paper bag from the Golden Empress under one arm, elbow clamped to her ribs, the way she'd once carried a mooting trophy through the corridors at Cardiff. Silas stood behind the bar with a rag over one shoulder. The radio murmured beside the till like a man talking in his sleep. "You're late." "Yu-Fei added a second bag." Rory set it on the counter. "She thinks you're wasting away." "She's right. Sit. Dry off." Rory turned towards the wall of maps — Lisbon, Trieste, a coastline she'd never learned the name of — and stopped. The woman at the far end of the bar had her phone face down and both elbows on the wood. Navy suit, cream blouse, a jeweller's shine to her hair. Cut exactly as long as it had been in first year, when both of them had found the same hairdresser, the same two-for-one gin, the same hangover. Rory's fingers went to the paper bag and pressed the fold flat. She knew the run out of there. Door, left, the alley behind the noodle place, the bike. "Rory?" Nia had already turned. Recognition arrived slow and mechanical, like a lift reaching the right floor. "Rory Carter." Nia's glass came down hard enough to leave a wet ring. "Someone told me you were dead." "Someone told me you married a Davies." "Someone was half right." Nia slid off the stool and stopped, unsure of the distance, then crossed it anyway. They hugged. Rory stood inside it with her hands at her sides for a heartbeat before she remembered to put them somewhere, and by then Nia had stepped back. "Five years," Nia said. "About that." "You look—" Nia's eyes went down Rory's jacket, the waterproof trousers, the helmet hooked on her belt. "You cut your hair." "It grew back first." "Ha." Nia sat again, and Rory took the stool beside her, and Silas poured a pint without being asked and set it down with his signet ring tapping the glass. "He knows your order," Nia said. "He knows everyone's order." "That's either very good service or very bad manners." Silas limped back down the bar and picked up his rag. "Both," he said, and the radio swallowed the rest. Nia drank. Rory watched her do it — the precise, unhurried tilt of the wrist, the way she checked the room once over the rim of the glass and filed everything she saw. "You're in London," Rory said. "Disclosure hearing. Rolls Building. Four days of barristers reading each other's emails aloud." Nia set the glass down. "The firm put me in a hotel in Shoreditch with a window over a building site. I walked forty minutes to find somewhere that wasn't a wine bar with a queue." "Lucky you found this one." "I found it because a man on the corner told me to keep walking." Nia glanced at the maps, the black-and-white photographs, the bookshelf behind the bar with its strange, wrong hinge. "It's a strange place. What is it?" "It's a bar." "That bookshelf doesn't close properly." "Then don't close it." Nia laughed, and just as quickly stopped. "God. You always did that. Answer a different question than the one anybody asked." "Do I?" "So what is it you do now? You never said. Nobody's said. I asked your mother at Christmas two years running and she handed me a mince pie and asked about my mother." Rory turned the pint a quarter-turn on the coaster. Rain ticked against the window behind her. "I deliver food," she said. "Deliver." "On a bike. Mostly noodles. Occasionally a birthday cake, which is nerve-racking." Nia's mouth opened and closed. She picked up her gin, put it down. "You got a two-one from Cardiff. You had a training contract interview with—" "I remember." "You took Ogilvie apart in the moot in front of the entire hall. Do you remember that? You stood up, you did the whole thing without notes, and he went red from the collar up. And afterwards you told me you were getting out of Cardiff before you were thirty." "I got out at twenty-two." "Lucky you." Nia said it flat, no edge on it anywhere, which was somehow worse. Rory drank. Behind her, a group came in shaking umbrellas, and Silas moved along the bar to meet them. "Your dad still rings mine," Rory said. "Apparently." "He does. Every March. He asks if we've heard anything." Nia traced the wet ring on the wood with one finger. "I told him once I'd seen you on the tube. I hadn't. I made it up so he'd stop looking at me like that." Rory said nothing. "Do you want to know what I did that night?" Nia's finger stopped. "You'd gone. The flat was half empty. The kettle was still warm, which I've thought about a
created_at"2026-09-10T10:29:46.922Z" 9/10/2026, 10:29:46 AM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags16
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"Nia sat again [again]"
dialogueSentences45
tagDensity0.356
leniency0.711
rawRatio0.063
effectiveRatio0.044
81.99% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount833
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"very"
count2
1
adverb"quickly"
count1
highlights
0"very"
1"quickly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
88.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount833
totalAiIsms2
found
0
word"mechanical"
count1
1
word"traced"
count1
highlights
0"mechanical"
1"traced"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences42
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences42
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences71
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen50
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords836
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions18
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
0.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions43
wordCount477
uniqueNames14
maxNameDensity3.35
worstName"Nia"
maxWindowNameDensity6
worstWindowName"Nia"
discoveredNames
Aurora1
Carter1
Dean1
Street1
Raven1
Nest1
Golden1
Empress1
Cardiff1
Rory12
Lisbon1
Trieste1
Nia16
Silas4
persons
0"Aurora"
1"Carter"
2"Raven"
3"Rory"
4"Nia"
5"Silas"
places
0"Dean"
1"Street"
2"Golden"
3"Cardiff"
4"Lisbon"
5"Trieste"
globalScore0
windowScore0
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences29
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount836
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences71
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs48
mean17.42
std15.48
cv0.889
sampleLengths
055
124
22
316
45
521
657
729
81
916
1019
117
1219
1329
144
152
1621
174
1830
196
204
219
2220
2333
245
2549
265
2739
283
295
304
3121
322
3333
3416
355
361
3712
3826
392
4050
415
4215
4319
448
4545
463
4730
96.91% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences42
matches
0"being asked"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs80
matches(empty)
62.37% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount3
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences2
totalSentences71
ratio0.028
matches
0"Rory turned towards the wall of maps — Lisbon, Trieste, a coastline she'd never learned the name of — and stopped."
1"Rory watched her do it — the precise, unhurried tilt of the wrist, the way she checked the room once over the rim of the glass and filed everything she saw."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount479
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount16
adverbRatio0.033402922755741124
lyAdverbCount2
lyAdverbRatio0.0041753653444676405
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences71
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences71
mean11.77
std10
cv0.849
sampleLengths
025
130
211
313
42
511
65
75
821
920
1010
1127
1212
137
1410
151
164
1712
1813
196
207
2119
222
2327
244
252
2617
274
284
2930
306
314
329
3311
349
352
3631
375
3818
3931
405
4132
427
433
445
454
467
4714
482
4933
69.01% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats6
diversityRatio0.4647887323943662
totalSentences71
uniqueOpeners33
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences34
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount4
totalSentences34
matches
0"She carried the paper bag"
1"She knew the run out"
2"he said, and the radio"
3"She picked up her gin,"
ratio0.118
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount32
totalSentences34
matches
0"Rain had followed Aurora Carter"
1"She carried the paper bag"
2"Silas stood behind the bar"
3"The radio murmured beside the"
4"Rory set it on the"
5"Rory turned towards the wall"
6"The woman at the far"
7"Navy suit, cream blouse, a"
8"Rory's fingers went to the"
9"She knew the run out"
10"Door, left, the alley behind"
11"Nia had already turned."
12"Recognition arrived slow and mechanical,"
13"Nia's glass came down hard"
14"Nia slid off the stool"
15"Rory stood inside it with"
16"Nia's eyes went down Rory's"
17"Nia sat again, and Rory"
18"Silas limped back down the"
19"he said, and the radio"
ratio0.941
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences34
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences16
technicalSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
93.75% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags16
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"he said, and the radio swallowed the rest"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags7
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences45
tagDensity0.156
leniency0.311
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
83.0678%