Run: 2026-09-10-01M25DVMA44S8KJD5R6VX7F942

Run Details

Duration:
11.8s
Cost:
$0.000000
Provider:
DeepSeek

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The gate at the Roehampton end of Richmond Park was meant to be locked after dark. Rory put both palms on the ironwork and pushed. The hinge gave with a long complaint that travelled down the railings and out into the dark on either side, and she stood in the gap with the cold of the metal still on her hands, listening to it finish. Nothing answered. No dog, no cyclist, no night guard. Just the trees, standing in rows, and the road behind her with a single lamp burning over an empty bus stop. She pulled the gate to behind her and left it unlatched. Six months of climbing fire escapes for Yu-Fei had taught her that a clean exit mattered more than a tidy one. The pendant sat warm under her jumper. It had hummed like that since Clapham, a steady heat that grew when she turned east and cooled when she turned west, so she had walked the whole way with her palm flat against her sternum, steering by it, and now, past the gate, it burned. Eva's text sat unread at the top of her phone. Two lines, sent at half nine. Grove is a pocket. It's not always where it was. Don't go alone. Rory had gone alone. Eva worked nights and Rory was not going to stand in a doorway with a mug of tea and wait for permission to follow a stone that had been leading her halfway across London for a week. The path past the pond ran straight. She could see maybe ten yards of it before the dark closed the rest. Gravel, a bin, the low black shoulder of a bench. Her boots made a sound she liked — crunch, crunch, an anchor — and she fixed her eyes on the pale strip of trail and counted gates. The first wrong thing was the quiet. Richmond Park at night sounded like a city pretending to be a field. Planes, always, stacked over Heathrow, one after another, a low growl that never quite stopped. Foxes shrieking. The wind through a hundred thousand leaves. She had walked it before, with Eva, in summer, and it had been noisy as a motorway with a deer problem. Now the sky was empty. No planes. No wind. Her own steps, and the blood in her ears, and that was all. She stopped. A bird would have been a comfort. Even a pigeon. She tilted her head back and looked for the orange smear of light pollution over the city to the east, and it was there, dim and low, so the city was still there, so this was only a park being a park, and a park at two in the morning could be quiet. Except it was only half eleven. She checked. 11:47, said the phone, and the clock had said 11:47 when she unlatched the gate, and she had been walking for longer than a minute. She took four steps and looked again. 11:47. Rory slid the phone into her jacket and kept walking. On her left, thirty feet off the path, something moved at the top of a hawthorn bush — a black shrug of motion, gone as soon as her eye went to it, the way a deer's ear goes, the way a coat on a hook is only a coat. She watched the bush for twelve steps. It did not move again. The pendant was hot enough now to feel through wool and cotton, a small round coin of heat, and it had stopped steering her. It only burned. The standing stones stood further in than she had expected, past a rise and down into a bowl of land that shouldn't have existed in the middle of the park, because she had come in low along the pond and she had not climbed. She stopped at the lip
created_at"2026-09-10T10:29:47.976Z" 9/10/2026, 10:29:47 AM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount645
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount645
totalAiIsms0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences48
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences48
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences48
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen53
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords648
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions0
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions16
wordCount648
uniqueNames9
maxNameDensity0.62
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Eva"
discoveredNames
Roehampton1
Richmond2
Park2
Yu-Fei1
Clapham1
Rory4
London1
Heathrow1
Eva3
persons
0"Yu-Fei"
1"Rory"
2"Eva"
places
0"Roehampton"
1"Richmond"
2"Park"
3"London"
globalScore1
windowScore1
74.24% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences33
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"sounded like a city pretending to be a fie"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount648
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences48
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs15
mean43.2
std23.28
cv0.539
sampleLengths
065
130
232
353
429
541
658
77
858
922
1065
1133
128
1398
1449
97.95% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences48
matches
0"was meant"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs95
matches(empty)
23.81% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount3
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences2
totalSentences48
ratio0.042
matches
0"Her boots made a sound she liked — crunch, crunch, an anchor — and she fixed her eyes on the pale strip of trail and counted gates."
1"On her left, thirty feet off the path, something moved at the top of a hawthorn bush — a black shrug of motion, gone as soon as her eye went to it, the way a deer's ear goes, the way a coat on a hook is only a coat."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount646
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount18
adverbRatio0.02786377708978328
lyAdverbCount4
lyAdverbRatio0.006191950464396285
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences48
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences48
mean13.5
std13.63
cv1.009
sampleLengths
016
19
240
32
47
521
611
721
87
946
1010
116
124
136
143
154
1637
177
1814
1910
2027
217
2213
2315
242
257
2621
275
282
292
3013
312
327
333
3453
356
362
3725
387
391
4010
4149
427
435
4424
453
4644
475
79.43% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats1
diversityRatio0.48936170212765956
totalSentences47
uniqueOpeners23
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences41
matches
0"Just the trees, standing in"
1"Even a pigeon."
ratio0.049
93.17% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount13
totalSentences41
matches
0"She pulled the gate to"
1"It had hummed like that"
2"It's not always where it"
3"She could see maybe ten"
4"Her boots made a sound"
5"She had walked it before,"
6"Her own steps, and the"
7"She tilted her head back"
8"She took four steps and"
9"She watched the bush for"
10"It did not move again."
11"It only burned."
12"She stopped at the lip"
ratio0.317
94.15% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount30
totalSentences41
matches
0"The gate at the Roehampton"
1"Rory put both palms on"
2"The hinge gave with a"
3"She pulled the gate to"
4"The pendant sat warm under"
5"It had hummed like that"
6"Eva's text sat unread at"
7"Grove is a pocket."
8"It's not always where it"
9"Rory had gone alone."
10"Eva worked nights and Rory"
11"The path past the pond"
12"She could see maybe ten"
13"Gravel, a bin, the low"
14"Her boots made a sound"
15"The first wrong thing was"
16"Richmond Park at night sounded"
17"The wind through a hundred"
18"She had walked it before,"
19"Her own steps, and the"
ratio0.732
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences41
matches
0"Now the sky was empty."
ratio0.024
74.83% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences21
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"The hinge gave with a long complaint that travelled down the railings and out into the dark on either side, and she stood in the gap with the cold of the metal …"
1"It had hummed like that since Clapham, a steady heat that grew when she turned east and cooled when she turned west, so she had walked the whole way with her pa…"
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags0
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
94.5862%