Run: 2026-09-10-01M25DVV26Q7FH8W2AA3B6H9QC

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Duration:
40.3s
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$0.003634
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DeepSeek

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System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The ladder down to Blenheim Deep ended in a gap where three rungs had rusted through, and Detective Harlow Quinn took the final drop with a hand on either rail, landing on the platform in a crouch that sent up a puff of brick dust. The station had been closed since 1957, or the council said so. Somebody had kept the lights working. Sodium lamps, strung cable to cable by the SOCO team, threw the tiles into yellow and made every crack look deeper than it was. Frost hung on the vaulted brick overhead in a stubble of grey. The air smelled in two layers: wet iron off the tunnel mouth, and under it something sweet and burnt, the smell of a spoon forgotten in treacle. Constable Denny met her at the cordon tape with a log book held flat against his chest as though it might bite. "Two-forty this morning, guv. Response got an anonymous call from a payphone on Kentish Town Road. No voice, just breathing and the address." "And they rang the old station's number how?" "There isn't one." He handed her the log. "They rang the local nick and asked for Blenheim Deep by name." Quinn looked down the platform. Tapers of candle wax, pooled into discs, spaced in a rough spiral. Inside the spiral, a man lay on his back along the platform edge, arms folded across his chest like a man laid out for a funeral, a small brass compass resting in the knot of his fingers. "Nine tokens round him," Denny said. "Bone, we think. All the same shape." "I counted them." "Right. Sorry." The man was mid-forties, barefoot, wearing a suit cut for a heavier body. His throat had been opened from ear to ear with a blade thin as a wire, and the wound looked like a red-lipped mouth that had forgotten how to speak. Quinn walked the spiral first. Nine tiles of bone, each the length of a thumb joint, none of them chipped, none of them stained, set at equal intervals in a ring around the body like the numbers on a clock face. She crouched at one and turned it with a pencil. Clean on both faces. The edges sharp enough to catch the lamp. "Nobody's handled these," she said. "Ma'am?" "A token that gets used gets handled. You carry it in a pocket, you put your thumb on it at a door, it darkens. These came out of a bag." She stood, and looked at the candles. All nine had burned to the same height. Same soot line on the same wall of each glass. She put a knuckle beside one and felt no warmth at all. "Wicks are trimmed even," she said. "Lit at the same time, and lit hours ago. Denny, was he cold when your lads arrived?" "Cold as the tiles. Rigor had come and gone in the jaw. Pathologist's provisional was four to six hours." Four to six hours put the death between nine and eleven the previous evening. The candles had burned out somewhere near midnight and sat there since. Somebody had stood in this station with a box of candles and arranged a tableau, and they had done it after the man was already dead. "Footprints?" she asked. "Nothing on the platform that we can lift. The dust in the tunnel's a century old; it'll hold a print like plaster, and there's none." "No prints at all?" "Just the deceased's." That was the first crack in it, and Quinn felt it open slowly, like ice on a window. A man walks barefoot into an abandoned station, lies down on a platform, and cuts his own throat in a way that leaves no blood in the dust. She went to the body. The neck wound gaped, dry-walled, the tissue a pale grey-pink with no bruising at the margins. A cut made on a living man fights back. The skin holds the shape of the blade. This one had parted like paper. "No spray," she said. Denny came up beside her. "Sorry?" "A cut like that opens the carotid. The heart keeps beating after, for a minute at least. Finds pressure. You get a fan of blood across the tiles, up the wall, into the grout." She swept a hand along the platform. "I've got a clean floor and a dry wound." "Maybe he was drained first." "Drained men don't bleed into their shirts." She tilted the collar. The shirt front was stiff and black with dried blood, the stain running downward in long tongues, gravity's handwriting. "He wore this while he bled. Then somebody washed him and cut him after." Behind her, footsteps found the ladder. Heels, quick, an uneven rhythm in the left foot. Quinn knew the sound before she turned. Eva Kowalski came down the platform with her satchel banging against her hip and her glasses fogged from the climb, red hair springing loose from a plait. A museum lanyard hung out of her coat pocket and swung as she walked. "Constable Denny," Quinn said. "Who called the archives?" "Nobody rang anyone, guv. She says she had a tip." "I got a tip," Eva said. She tucked a curl behind her left ear and stopped a metre short of the spiral, eyes moving from the tokens to the candles to the body, tracking the whole arrangement at once like a scholar reading a page of text she already knew by heart. "Six o'clock this morning. A voice told me Blenheim Deep. Nothing else." "And you came down a hole in Camden on the say-so of a stranger." "I came down a hole in Camden because Blenheim Deep was the Market last month." She pointed at the tokens without touching them. "That's the toll. Nine pieces, one toll each. Somebody paid entry for eight people and left the ninth in the ring for the man on the floor." The sweet smell sharpened as she spoke, and Quinn registered it now for what it was: resin, burnt in a censer, the old way of opening a door that had been shut. "The Market moves on the full moon," Eva said. "This station sat empty the rest of the month. Somebody used the residue. This is a Shade collection." "Say the rest." "The chalk on the wall behind you. That's a binding ward, a bad one, but a real one. They charged him a debt and took the whole of him for it. You don't find a knife wound like that from a man with a blade. You find it from something that has hands and doesn't need them." Quinn turned to the wall. The chalk showed raw white against the brick, a knot of angles and half-hoops, two metres across, and she stood in front of it long enough for the details to separate themselves out. "Somebody drew this left to right," she said finally. Eva frowned. "What?" "Look at the stroke order. The chalk rounds off at the end of every line, where a right hand lifts. And here, and here—" she walked along the arc "—the marks are mirrored. The hoops open the wrong way. This isn't a ward. It's a copy of a picture of one, drawn by someone who read it in a book and never learned which hand to draw with." "That doesn't change what it's for." "It changes who drew it." Quinn stepped back from the wall. "Whoever killed him studied this. Bought the tokens, learned the shapes, laid the candles, put a coin in his hands. Then walked out and rang the police from a payphone to make sure we'd find it." Eva looked at the compass in the dead man's fingers, her face going still in a way Quinn had only seen once before, in the reading room of the British Museum, over a page of Old High German. "That's a Veil Compass. A Shade artisan makes them. The needle points at the nearest rift." "And where's the nearest rift?" "North end of the tunnel. There's a sealed arch in the brickwork down there. The Market closes it every time it leaves." Quinn lifted the compass from the man's hands. The brass was cold enough to bite, the casing furred with green along the underside, the face etched with sigils fine as a hair. The needle held steady. She walked the platform with it, north to south, ten paces and back. The needle did not waver by a degree. Then she walked to the wall. The needle tracked with her, holding true, and when she stopped, it pointed at a hoarding of nineteen-fifties circus posters pasted over the brick, layer on layer, curling at the corners. "Eva. Your rift." "It's further down. Forty metres." "It isn't." Quinn set the compass on the platform edge and peeled the hoarding back at the corner. Under the posters, the brick ran in a neat arch, and along its base, the mortar had been scraped away in a line two fingers wide. Grey dust lay on the floor in a fan where a hand had brushed it. She hooked her fingers into the arch's recess and pulled. It gave with a grunt of old timber, and the smell that came out of the dark was wet wool and cigarettes. A coat hung on a nail inside. Under it, a pair of shoes, laced. Beside them, a wallet with the corner of a driving licence showing. Denny put his torch through the gap. "That's his coat, guv. Monogram inside the collar." "He didn't walk in barefoot." Quinn took the coat off the nail. "He came in dressed, and someone undressed him after. Same someone who dragged him forty feet along this platform and left no marks doing it." She went through the pockets with two fingers. Keys. A folded tenner. A till receipt from a Hoxton grocer, dated two days before. Then her fingers found the shape in the inside breast pocket, flat and smooth, and she drew it out into the torchlight. A tenth token. Same bone, same size as the nine around the body. This one was dark at the grip, worn to a shine on both faces, the edges soft as a river stone. A thumb had worked at it for years. Eva leaned in close, and did not say anything at all. Quinn turned the token over, looked at the nine clean pieces lying on the platform, and rolled the tenth between her fingers where the dead man must have rolled it, night after night.
created_at"2026-09-10T10:29:54.892Z" 9/10/2026, 10:29:54 AM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags16
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"she said finally [finally]"
1"Quinn stepped back [back]"
dialogueSentences52
tagDensity0.308
leniency0.615
rawRatio0.125
effectiveRatio0.077
97.16% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1761
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"slowly"
count1
highlights
0"slowly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
88.64% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1761
totalAiIsms4
found
0
word"warmth"
count1
1
word"footsteps"
count1
2
word"charged"
count1
3
word"etched"
count1
highlights
0"warmth"
1"footsteps"
2"charged"
3"etched"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences87
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences87
filterMatches
0"look"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences123
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen69
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1760
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions15
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
83.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions36
wordCount1176
uniqueNames15
maxNameDensity1.19
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Blenheim1
Deep1
Detective1
Harlow1
Quinn14
Denny4
Four1
Kowalski1
Eva6
British1
Museum1
Old1
High1
German1
Hoxton1
persons
0"Deep"
1"Harlow"
2"Quinn"
3"Denny"
4"Kowalski"
5"Eva"
places
0"Blenheim"
1"Hoxton"
globalScore0.905
windowScore0.833
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences65
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"looked like a red-lipped mouth that had f"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1760
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences123
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs69
mean25.51
std19.65
cv0.77
sampleLengths
063
163
222
323
48
520
654
713
83
92
1043
1163
125
131
1430
157
1630
1723
1819
1952
203
2125
224
233
2446
2544
264
276
2850
295
3044
3122
3241
338
3410
3564
3614
3750
3832
3927
403
4157
4238
439
443
4568
466
4747
4854
495
85.10% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount5
totalSentences87
matches
0"been closed"
1"been opened"
2"been shut"
3"are mirrored"
4"been scraped"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs177
matches(empty)
96.40% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount1
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences2
totalSentences123
ratio0.016
matches
0"\"Nothing on the platform that we can lift. The dust in the tunnel's a century old; it'll hold a print like plaster, and there's none.\""
1"\"Look at the stroke order. The chalk rounds off at the end of every line, where a right hand lifts. And here, and here—\" she walked along the arc \"—the marks are mirrored. The hoops open the wrong way. This isn't a ward. It's a copy of a picture of one, drawn by someone who read it in a book and never learned which hand to draw with.\""
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount899
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount16
adverbRatio0.017797552836484983
lyAdverbCount2
lyAdverbRatio0.002224694104560623
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences123
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences123
mean14.31
std12.14
cv0.848
sampleLengths
045
112
26
324
412
527
622
723
88
98
1012
115
1212
1337
146
157
163
172
1813
1930
205
2136
2210
234
248
255
261
2730
287
298
3010
3112
326
3317
3419
3514
3612
3726
383
3925
404
413
4218
4328
445
4516
469
478
486
494
69.65% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats6
diversityRatio0.44715447154471544
totalSentences123
uniqueOpeners55
86.58% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences77
matches
0"Then she walked to the"
1"Then her fingers found the"
ratio0.026
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount16
totalSentences77
matches
0"He handed her the log"
1"His throat had been opened"
2"She crouched at one and"
3"She stood, and looked at"
4"She put a knuckle beside"
5"She went to the body."
6"She swept a hand along"
7"She tilted the collar"
8"She tucked a curl behind"
9"She pointed at the tokens"
10"she said finally"
11"she walked along the arc"
12"She walked the platform with"
13"She hooked her fingers into"
14"It gave with a grunt"
15"She went through the pockets"
ratio0.208
50.91% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount63
totalSentences77
matches
0"The ladder down to Blenheim"
1"The station had been closed"
2"Somebody had kept the lights"
3"Sodium lamps, strung cable to"
4"Frost hung on the vaulted"
5"The air smelled in two"
6"Constable Denny met her at"
7"He handed her the log"
8"Quinn looked down the platform."
9"Tapers of candle wax, pooled"
10"The man was mid-forties, barefoot,"
11"His throat had been opened"
12"Quinn walked the spiral first."
13"She crouched at one and"
14"The edges sharp enough to"
15"She stood, and looked at"
16"She put a knuckle beside"
17"The candles had burned out"
18"Somebody had stood in this"
19"That was the first crack"
ratio0.818
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences77
matches(empty)
ratio0
74.83% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences42
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"Constable Denny met her at the cordon tape with a log book held flat against his chest as though it might bite."
1"His throat had been opened from ear to ear with a blade thin as a wire, and the wound looked like a red-lipped mouth that had forgotten how to speak."
2"Eva Kowalski came down the platform with her satchel banging against her hip and her glasses fogged from the climb, red hair springing loose from a plait."
3"The sweet smell sharpened as she spoke, and Quinn registered it now for what it was: resin, burnt in a censer, the old way of opening a door that had been shut."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags16
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags9
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences52
tagDensity0.173
leniency0.346
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
91.0867%