Run: 2026-09-10-01M25DX4MDVSC2YPJ3NTJCA9HY

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23.6s
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$0.002079
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DeepSeek

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You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The stairs down to Camden North had been condemned since before Quinn was born, but the yellow tape at the top of them was fresh, and the plastic still smelled of the factory. She ducked under it and started down. Forty-two steps. She counted them the way she counted everything, a habit that had kept her alive and made her insufferable at parties. The air thickened as she went. Damp grit, old iron, and beneath it something she couldn't name — a clean, sharp smell, like the air after a lightning strike, or the inside of a machine. She had smelled it once before, three years ago, in a stairwell off Commercial Road, standing over what was left of DS Morris. Nobody had ever satisfactorily explained that smell to her. She had stopped asking. She had not stopped noticing. The platform opened out below her. Victorian tile, cracked and furred with mould, the ghost of a station name in cream and maroon. Someone had strung work lamps along the tunnel mouth, and their light lay flat and orange across the scene, making everything look like a photograph of itself. "Ma'am." DS Reyes straightened up from where he'd been crouching by the body. He was thirty-one, keen, and had a habit of telling her things she already knew in a tone that suggested he was doing her a favour. "SOCO's ten minutes out. I kept everyone back." "Good." Quinn pulled on her gloves. The latex snapped at her wrist, just past the worn leather watch, and she noted the time out of habit. Twenty past four. "What've we got?" "Male, forty-five to fifty. No wallet, no phone, no tags in the clothing. Throat cut." Reyes gestured with his chin. "Ritual, by the look of it." She walked the platform edge before she looked at the man. That was the discipline. The body would still be there in a minute, and the body was the loudest thing in any room; you had to hear the quiet things first. The quiet things. Dust, an inch of it in places, decades of it, undisturbed — except for a clean rectangle, two metres by three, about four feet from the body. No dust at all inside it. The edges of the clean patch were sharp, almost ruled. Something had stood there, and recently, and it had been lifted away rather than dragged. She crouched and put her face near the tile. The smell was stronger here. Ozone, and under it, faint and sweet, something like burnt sugar. "Three nights ago was the full moon," she said. "Sorry, ma'am?" "Nothing." She stood. "Show me the sigils." They were chalked on the tile in a rough circle around the man — or the beginning of a circle. The arc ran from his left shoulder up and over and broke off forty degrees short of closing. A scuff mark crossed the last line, as though someone had stepped through it leaving, and hadn't cared. Reyes had already photographed them; the flash had left little white ghosts floating in front of her eyes. "Pentagram-ish," Reyes said. "Mixed with some kind of script. There's a specialist at the Yard who thinks it's — " "It's not a pentagram." Quinn crouched at the arc's terminus. "It's a boundary. And it's not closed." "Right, yes. That's what I mean. Whoever did this didn't finish the rite. Got disturbed, maybe." "He finished it." She traced the air above the chalk without touching it. "The scuff's the finish. He broke his own line on the way out. You don't do that by accident and you don't do that if you're afraid of what's inside it." Reyes said nothing. She could feel him deciding whether to argue or to write it down. He'd write it down. They always wrote it down, and then they went home and closed the case as a cult killing, and the file went in a drawer with a hundred other files, all of them wrong in the same way. She turned to the man. He was laid out neatly, on his back, hands folded on his chest. Grey at the temples, good shoes, a coat that had cost somebody four hundred pounds. His throat was open from ear to ear, a clean drawn line, the kind of cut that takes either great rage or great calm, and there was no blood. Not a smear. Not a spatter. Not the dark bloom the tile should have worn under his head. The wound was dry as a paper cut, the edges of it pale and drawn. "He was drained," she said. "Exsanguinated, yes, the pathologist will confirm — " "He was drained somewhere else." She pointed at the shoes. New-looking soles, no grit in the welt, no dust on the uppers despite the inch of it on the platform. "He walked down forty-two steps of filth and his shoes are clean. He didn't walk anywhere. He was carried." "Carried by who?" Reyes spread his hands. "We've got one set of footprints coming down and none going back — and they're not his." That stopped her. "Show me." He walked her to the far end of the platform, past the lamps, into the dark where their torches made a narrow yellow room around them. The dust there held a single line of prints. A woman's boots, size five, heel worn uneven on the left. Coming in. No line going out. "That's the thing, ma'am," Reyes said. "Whoever did this is still down here. I've got two uniforms on the tunnel mouth and a dog coming." Quinn looked at the prints for a long moment. Then she looked past them, at the platform edge, at the drop to the track bed. The dust on the rail was disturbed — a long, low furrow, like something heavy had been slid along it. And at the far end of the furrow, where the torchlight gave out, the dark went somewhere. She could feel it, the way you feel a door open behind you. "Not still down here," she said. "She left. Just not the way she came." She went back to the body. Reyes followed, and she heard him breathe through his teeth the way he did when he was being patient. "Ma'am. With respect. We've had three of these in eighteen months. All of them in places like this — dead stations, crypts, that warehouse in Deptford. All of them with the chalk, all of them with the throat. It's a cult. It's ritual. There'll be a group of them somewhere with the blood in a jar and we'll find the jar and we'll find them. That's the case. That's all it is." "It's not a cult," Quinn said, "and it isn't ritual." She knelt by the dead man's head and opened his jaw with two fingers. Under his tongue, wedged there, was a small disc of bone, carved all over with a pattern so fine she needed the torch up close to make it out. A hole drilled through the centre. It smelled, faintly, of tallow. Reyes leaned in. "What is that?" "Currency," Quinn said, though she couldn't have said how she knew. It was a thing she recognised the way you recognise a coin from a country you've never visited — by the weight of it, the intent of it. "This is what you pay to get in." "In where?" She didn't answer. She looked at the man's folded hands, and then at his right one. The fingers were arranged neatly, index over middle, the way a mortician would do it. But the nail of the right index finger was broken, down past the quick, and there was blood under it — real blood, this time, dried and dark. He had scratched at something before he died. Or someone had. "The killer's a left-hander," she said. Reyes blinked. "How do you — " "Look at the chalk." She stood and walked the arc again, torch low, grazing the floor so the lines threw shadow. "Every stroke runs right to left. The hook on the sigils opens the wrong way. If you'd copied them out of a book, and you were right-handed, you'd start here." She put her finger to the arc's origin. "He started there. It's backwards." "So he's left-handed. So what?" "So the boots at the far end are size five with the *left* heel worn uneven." She straightened and looked at Reyes. "Left-handed, left-sole wear. Same person. She came in, cut him, laid him out, drew these marks copying from something she was reading, broke her own line, and walked to the edge and got out along the rails. That's not a cult. That's not ritual. That's someone who needed the body *found*, by us, in exactly this arrangement, with exactly these marks. It's a stage." Reyes was quiet. She liked him better quiet. "A stage for who?" he said. Quinn didn't have an answer for that. She walked the platform a last time, slow, torch sweeping, and it was the torch being low that caught it — a glint in the drain grating at the platform's edge, a small green wink under thirty years of silt. She fished it out with the tip of her pen. A brass compass, no bigger than a florin, its casing gone soft with verdigris. The face wasn't numbered. It was etched with marks she didn't recognise, ring on ring of them, and the needle inside was trembling, alive, twitching against its pin. "Ma'am, that's — " Reyes stopped. He was staring at it, and his face had gone the colour of the tile. "That's from the market." Quinn looked at him. "What market?" But the needle had swung while she held it, and it wasn't pointing north. It was pointing past Reyes, past the lamps, into the dark mouth of the tunnel where the furrow ran and the dust had been dragged — and then, as Quinn turned slowly on the spot, it followed her, patient and certain, as though it had been waiting down here in the wet dark a long time for someone to pick it up who would know what it meant. Behind her, up the forty-two steps, a siren started. She heard it and did not move. "Reyes," she said, very quietly. "How did you know what market?"
created_at"2026-09-10T10:30:37.459Z" 9/10/2026, 10:30:37 AM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags22
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences48
tagDensity0.458
leniency0.917
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
94.15% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1710
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"slowly"
count1
1
adverb"very"
count1
highlights
0"slowly"
1"very"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
82.46% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1710
totalAiIsms6
found
0
word"traced"
count1
1
word"could feel"
count2
2
word"weight"
count1
3
word"glint"
count1
4
word"etched"
count1
highlights
0"traced"
1"could feel"
2"weight"
3"glint"
4"etched"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences106
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount3
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences106
filterMatches
0"look"
1"watch"
2"feel"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences132
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen71
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans2
markdownWords2
totalWords1728
ratio0.001
matches
0"left"
1"found"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions12
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
83.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions29
wordCount1261
uniqueNames8
maxNameDensity1.11
worstName"Reyes"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Reyes"
discoveredNames
Camden1
North1
Quinn9
Commercial1
Road1
Morris1
Reyes14
New-looking1
persons
0"North"
1"Quinn"
2"Morris"
3"Reyes"
places
0"Camden"
1"Commercial"
2"Road"
globalScore0.945
windowScore0.833
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences67
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"something like burnt sugar"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1728
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences132
matches
0"explained that smell"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs50
mean34.56
std27.66
cv0.8
sampleLengths
063
176
250
347
432
526
642
786
89
92
107
1174
1220
1317
1416
1544
1658
175
1890
195
208
2149
2224
235
2452
2525
2675
2714
2825
2972
3010
3154
326
3347
342
3570
366
377
3864
395
4086
418
426
4357
4442
4525
466
4782
4816
4911
75.47% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount9
totalSentences106
matches
0"been condemned"
1"been lifted"
2"were chalked"
3"was laid"
4"was disturbed "
5"been slid"
6"were arranged"
7"was broken"
8"was etched"
9"been dragged "
34.98% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount5
totalVerbs202
matches
0"was doing"
1"was being"
2"was staring"
3"wasn't pointing"
4"was pointing"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount8
semicolonCount2
flaggedSentences10
totalSentences132
ratio0.076
matches
0"Damp grit, old iron, and beneath it something she couldn't name — a clean, sharp smell, like the air after a lightning strike, or the inside of a machine."
1"The body would still be there in a minute, and the body was the loudest thing in any room; you had to hear the quiet things first."
2"Dust, an inch of it in places, decades of it, undisturbed — except for a clean rectangle, two metres by three, about four feet from the body."
3"They were chalked on the tile in a rough circle around the man — or the beginning of a circle."
4"Reyes had already photographed them; the flash had left little white ghosts floating in front of her eyes."
5"The dust on the rail was disturbed — a long, low furrow, like something heavy had been slid along it."
6"It was a thing she recognised the way you recognise a coin from a country you've never visited — by the weight of it, the intent of it."
7"But the nail of the right index finger was broken, down past the quick, and there was blood under it — real blood, this time, dried and dark."
8"She walked the platform a last time, slow, torch sweeping, and it was the torch being low that caught it — a glint in the drain grating at the platform's edge, a small green wink under thirty years of silt."
9"It was pointing past Reyes, past the lamps, into the dark mouth of the tunnel where the furrow ran and the dust had been dragged — and then, as Quinn turned slowly on the spot, it followed her, patient and certain, as though it had been waiting down here in the wet dark a long time for someone to pick it up who would know what it meant."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1257
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount35
adverbRatio0.02784407319013524
lyAdverbCount7
lyAdverbRatio0.005568814638027049
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences132
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences132
mean13.09
std12.17
cv0.93
sampleLengths
033
17
22
321
46
529
623
79
84
95
106
1117
1227
1313
1426
158
166
1720
183
193
2020
216
2211
234
2427
253
2627
276
2810
2915
309
315
3211
339
342
353
364
3720
3818
3918
4018
413
4217
4310
447
4516
4613
4731
483
4913
62.63% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats9
diversityRatio0.4166666666666667
totalSentences132
uniqueOpeners55
35.84% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences93
matches
0"Then she looked past them,"
ratio0.011
60.86% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount37
totalSentences93
matches
0"She ducked under it and"
1"She counted them the way"
2"She had smelled it once"
3"She had stopped asking."
4"She had not stopped noticing."
5"He was thirty-one, keen, and"
6"She walked the platform edge"
7"She crouched and put her"
8"They were chalked on the"
9"She traced the air above"
10"She could feel him deciding"
11"He'd write it down."
12"They always wrote it down,"
13"She turned to the man."
14"He was laid out neatly,"
15"His throat was open from"
16"She pointed at the shoes"
17"He walked her to the"
18"She could feel it, the"
19"She went back to the"
ratio0.398
46.02% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount77
totalSentences93
matches
0"The stairs down to Camden"
1"She ducked under it and"
2"She counted them the way"
3"The air thickened as she"
4"She had smelled it once"
5"Nobody had ever satisfactorily explained"
6"She had stopped asking."
7"She had not stopped noticing."
8"The platform opened out below"
9"Victorian tile, cracked and furred"
10"Someone had strung work lamps"
11"DS Reyes straightened up from"
12"He was thirty-one, keen, and"
13"Quinn pulled on her gloves"
14"The latex snapped at her"
15"Reyes gestured with his chin"
16"She walked the platform edge"
17"That was the discipline."
18"The body would still be"
19"The quiet things."
ratio0.828
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences93
matches(empty)
ratio0
97.26% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences47
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"She counted them the way she counted everything, a habit that had kept her alive and made her insufferable at parties."
1"His throat was open from ear to ear, a clean drawn line, the kind of cut that takes either great rage or great calm, and there was no blood."
2"It was pointing past Reyes, past the lamps, into the dark mouth of the tunnel where the furrow ran and the dust had been dragged — and then, as Quinn turned slo…"
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags22
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags10
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences48
tagDensity0.208
leniency0.417
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
82.4337%