"Quinn counted the rungs on the way — forty-two, then a landing, then thirty more — and by the bottom her breath had gone thin and cold and the smell had started: wet stone, candle grease, and under both of those something sweetish she couldn't name and didn't like."
1
"Mid-fifties, thick through the chest, in a suit that had cost somebody money — navy worsted, good stitching, silk tie knotted with care."
2
"She had her own, and she checked her watch first — quarter past six, the worn leather strap loosened a notch — because time of death was going to matter and she wanted to know exactly how long she'd been in the dark."
3
"The dust told her about the dead man — one set of prints, size ten, walking in from the tunnel mouth, stopping, then a scuff and a slide where he'd gone down."
4
"Six feet across, swept clean — not scuffed, swept, with the neat overlapping arcs a broom leaves — and inside the circle the tiles had been scrubbed until the cream showed through the grime."
5
"She got down on her knees beside him — at forty-one that took a moment longer than it used to — and laid her torch flat on the floor and shone it across the palm at a shallow angle, and there it was, plain as day."
6
"She looked down the tunnel — the black mouth of it, funnelling away and away and going on being dark."
7
"She walked the platform the other way, past the circle, past the body, out to where the tiling stopped and the tunnel began — and there, in the dust at the tunnel mouth, she crouched again and put her torch down flat."
8
"She stayed there a moment, and she counted backwards from it — the powder, the candles, the circle, the bone, the water in the lungs — and at the end of the count she stood up and said, \"Bag four. The compass off his neck. I want it on my desk tonight.\""
9
"It slid, slow and deliberate, and settled east — toward the river, toward the low dawn coming up grey over the roofs — and when she turned the casing again, and again, it went back to east."
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences
46
technicalSentenceCount
5
matches
0
"Mid-fifties, thick through the chest, in a suit that had cost somebody money — navy worsted, good stitching, silk tie knotted with care."
1
"He had a soft, pink, apologetic face and the manner of a man who had stopped being surprised at thirty and had never once regretted it."
2
"Fine and grey and dry, and it had run, the way a liquid dries, in a thin tongue out of the tunnel and onto the platform, as though something had poured out of t…"
3
"She looked up when Quinn's feet hit the tiles and tucked a curl of red hair behind her left ear, and her green eyes behind the round glasses were steady in a wa…"
4
"Then she started the engine and drove east, because that was the way home anyway, and because she had spent eighteen years learning to follow the thing that did…"