Run: 2026-09-10-01M25DX9RRASGQEEMVGDSRB6HB

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Duration:
49.5s
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$0.005048
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DeepSeek

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System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The maintenance shaft went down further than any shaft had a right to. Quinn counted the rungs on the way — forty-two, then a landing, then thirty more — and by the bottom her breath had gone thin and cold and the smell had started: wet stone, candle grease, and under both of those something sweetish she couldn't name and didn't like. "Mind the third step," DS Reid called up from somewhere below. "It's gone." She minded the third step, and then the fourth and fifth, because Callum Reid's idea of a warning was a courtesy, not a survey. Ashcombe Street station had shut in 1933 and been sealed with concrete and good intentions. The platform was tiled cream and oxblood, and the tiling was still there under a skin of dust so old it had gone the colour of porridge. Somebody's torch beam swung across it and the dust glittered. Ninety years of it, unbroken, from the wall to the platform edge, from the edge to the track bed where the rails had been lifted and the sleepers pulled and the tunnel ran off into the dark like the throat of something asleep. Unbroken except in two places. The body lay between the rails, forty feet along. A man. Mid-fifties, thick through the chest, in a suit that had cost somebody money — navy worsted, good stitching, silk tie knotted with care. His shoes were patent leather and polished to a mirror. He lay on his back with his right hand up near his face, fingers curled, thumb and forefinger pinched together around nothing at all. He looked like a man who had died holding something and had it taken off him afterwards. "Morning, guv," Reid said. He had a soft, pink, apologetic face and the manner of a man who had stopped being surprised at thirty and had never once regretted it. "Happy New Year." "It's November." "Feels like it down here." He offered her his torch. She didn't take it. She had her own, and she checked her watch first — quarter past six, the worn leather strap loosened a notch — because time of death was going to matter and she wanted to know exactly how long she'd been in the dark. She walked the platform before she walked the body. Crouched, put the beam low and flat along the surface, the way you do at a burglary to find the second set of prints. The dust told her about the dead man — one set of prints, size ten, walking in from the tunnel mouth, stopping, then a scuff and a slide where he'd gone down. It told her about Reid and the techs, and about the two paramedics who'd come, turned him, and gone home. It told her nothing else. Nobody else had walked that platform. Not for a very long time. "Right," Reid said, coming up behind her. "So. He's a dosser, or he's a toff who's had a bad night. He's found the old vent shaft off Ashcombe Road, come down for a kip or a bottle, and his heart's packed up. Sixty seconds, guv. We'll have the post-mortem by Friday." "You've been here an hour and you've got a story." "I've got a likely story." She went to the second unbroken place in the dust, twenty feet back along the platform, and stood in it. It was a circle. Six feet across, swept clean — not scuffed, swept, with the neat overlapping arcs a broom leaves — and inside the circle the tiles had been scrubbed until the cream showed through the grime. On the bare tiles, in chalk, was a drawing: a ring with a smaller ring inside it, eight lines through both like the spokes of a wheel, and between the spokes, writing. Not English. The letters had shapes she half-recognised and couldn't place, and the chalk had been laid down thick, four or five passes, the way a man writes when he wants something to last. Candles stood at the eight points of the inner ring, burned down to stubs and then below the stubs, and the wax had pooled and set and pooled again in layers like sediment. Somebody had burned a great deal of wax down here. "How many candles?" she said. Reid squinted. "What, altogether? Dozens." "Ninety-one stubs," the scene tech said. "And a lot of plain wax. Two hundred, give or take." "And how many footprints in the circle?" Reid looked. He wasn't a stupid man. He simply preferred the answer he already had. "Nothing much," he said. "Nothing at all," Quinn said. "Two hundred candles and a swept floor, and there isn't one print inside that ring. Not one. But there are three sets of prints in the dust at the bottom of the shaft, and they're ours." "Somebody cleaned up." "Somebody cleaned up meticulously, then walked out of a sealed station four hundred yards of tunnel in either direction with no exit, in shoes that would have left prints in nine-decade-old dust." She straightened. "Where's his coat?" They brought her his coat. A good coat. She went through it with gloves on. Wallet: two hundred and forty in twenties, three cards, a licence in the name of Martin Ellery Chubb, aged fifty-four, an address in Highgate. A dead phone. A key fob. A receipt from a restaurant in Soho, last Tuesday. Half a tube of mints. And in the left inside breast pocket, stitched in, a small pouch of grey leather gone soft with handling, and inside the pouch, a knuckle bone. Just a bone. Cleaned and hollow, smaller than her thumb joint, carved all over with those same half-familiar shapes. Oiled. Handled a great deal. "Teeth?" Reid asked hopefully. "Not teeth." "Keepsake, then." She turned it in the beam. On the flat, small and neat, someone had engraved a single word in English. She had to tip it to read it. ADMIT. "Keepsake," she said. "Right." The pathologist's assistant came over, stripping her gloves. "Preliminary. No external injury. No defence marks. No soot in the airways. But the lungs, guv—" She looked uncomfortable. "Full of water. Salt water. Very salt. I'd say he drowned, except he's been dead four hours and there's nowhere down here for him to have drowned in. And his trouser cuffs are soaked. And his shoes." "Both shoes?" "Both. Inside and out. There's sand in the uppers." Reid laughed, not unkindly. "Sand. In Camden." "Sand," the girl said, "and salt." Quinn looked at the man's left hand: clean nails, the palm unmarked. Then the right, the one that had curled around nothing. She got down on her knees beside him — at forty-one that took a moment longer than it used to — and laid her torch flat on the floor and shone it across the palm at a shallow angle, and there it was, plain as day. A pressed indentation. A shallow arc in the pad of the thumb. A bright ring of rubbed skin where the heel of the hand had gripped something small and round and about the size of a two-pound coin, and held it for a very long time. "He was holding something when he died," she said. "Round. Small. Held it hard enough to leave a mark. Somebody took it off him afterwards." "Or it rolled." "A thing that rolls doesn't leave a ring." She stood. Her knees clicked. She looked down the tunnel — the black mouth of it, funnelling away and away and going on being dark. Somewhere behind her ribs, in the place she kept Morris, something turned over and settled. Morris would have laughed at the candles. Morris would have laughed right up until he didn't. "You've sealed the other end?" "Both ends. Vent shaft too. It's a dead end, guv. Literally." Above them a radio crackled. Reid put his head up like a dog hearing a whistle. "That'll be the museum girl. She's the one phoned it in. Uniform's got her up in the old booking hall — says she won't leave." Quinn's hands went still on the coat. "Museum girl," she said. "Research assistant, British Museum, something in the archives. Says she was walking back from a lock-in at the—" He squinted at his notebook. "Kowalski. Eva Kowalski." Quinn knew the name. She knew it off a surveillance log and a photograph in a file three inches thick: a woman of twenty-six, red hair, round glasses, photographed eleven times in twelve weeks in the company of people Quinn badly wanted to put in a room with no windows. She put her hands in her pockets and looked at the swept circle and the chalk spokes and the two hundred candles, and at the wet sand in a dead man's shoes, and she said none of it out loud. "Guv? It's an odd one, but it's a natural. Bad heart. We'll have it wrapped by Tuesday." "There's no water in this station," Quinn said. "There's no sea within forty miles. There's a man who drowned in salt water on a dry platform in a sealed tunnel with no footprints in the dust and no way out, and two hundred candles burned down around a drawing that nobody stood inside to light. You want to call that natural, Callum, you go ahead. I'll be here." She walked the platform the other way, past the circle, past the body, out to where the tiling stopped and the tunnel began — and there, in the dust at the tunnel mouth, she crouched again and put her torch down flat. The dust at the very lip was not dust. It was powder. Fine and grey and dry, and it had run, the way a liquid dries, in a thin tongue out of the tunnel and onto the platform, as though something had poured out of the dark and then stopped. She touched it with a gloved finger and rolled it. Slick. Faintly greasy. Not ash. Something else. She stayed there a moment, and she counted backwards from it — the powder, the candles, the circle, the bone, the water in the lungs — and at the end of the count she stood up and said, "Bag four. The compass off his neck. I want it on my desk tonight." "Broken thing," Reid said. "I had a look. Needle's seized. Doesn't point north." "No," Quinn said slowly. "It doesn't." She went up through the booking hall, where the museum girl sat on an upturned crate with her worn leather satchel hugged in her lap. She looked up when Quinn's feet hit the tiles and tucked a curl of red hair behind her left ear, and her green eyes behind the round glasses were steady in a way that had been practised in a mirror. "Miss Kowalski," Quinn said. "Detective Quinn. You found the body." "I came down to look at the tilework," Eva said. "It's a beautiful station." "It's a sealed station." "So they tell me." She smiled, small and polite. "You should be careful how long you spend down there, Detective. Some places don't like to be visited." Outside, in the cold on Ashcombe Road, Quinn sat in the car with the heater labouring and opened the evidence bag. Brass, gone green with verdigris, the face engraved all over with tiny lines she had taken for decoration. She laid it on her palm. She turned the casing. The needle did not find north. It slid, slow and deliberate, and settled east — toward the river, toward the low dawn coming up grey over the roofs — and when she turned the casing again, and again, it went back to east. Every time. Like a hand pointing. Quinn sat and looked at it for a long moment. Then she started the engine and drove east, because that was the way home anyway, and because she had spent eighteen years learning to follow the thing that didn't add up, and because somewhere under the city a train that had not run since 1933 was very faintly, very patiently, running.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags24
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"Reid asked hopefully [hopefully]"
1"Quinn said slowly [slowly]"
dialogueSentences57
tagDensity0.421
leniency0.842
rawRatio0.083
effectiveRatio0.07
82.50% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount2000
totalAiIsmAdverbs7
found
0
adverb"very"
count6
1
adverb"slowly"
count1
highlights
0"very"
1"slowly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
95.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount2000
totalAiIsms2
found
0
word"silk"
count1
1
word"familiar"
count1
highlights
0"silk"
1"familiar"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences117
matches
0"looked uncomfortable"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences117
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences150
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen60
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords2017
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions25
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
83.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions40
wordCount1502
uniqueNames15
maxNameDensity0.8
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Reid11
Callum1
Street1
English2
Quinn12
Martin1
Ellery1
Chubb1
Highgate1
Soho1
Tuesday1
Morris3
Eva1
Ashcombe2
Road1
persons
0"Reid"
1"Callum"
2"Quinn"
3"Martin"
4"Ellery"
5"Chubb"
6"Morris"
7"Eva"
places
0"Street"
1"English"
2"Highgate"
3"Soho"
4"Ashcombe"
5"Road"
globalScore1
windowScore0.833
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences65
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"looked like a man who had died holding so"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount2017
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences150
matches
0"walked that platform"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs63
mean32.02
std32.98
cv1.03
sampleLengths
062
113
224
395
45
585
633
72
857
9102
1051
1110
125
1320
14147
155
165
1717
187
1915
204
2141
223
2337
2485
2524
264
272
282
2929
304
3164
322
339
347
356
36114
3725
383
3969
4011
4141
427
434
4426
4590
4617
4768
4842
4965
84.27% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount7
totalSentences117
matches
0"been sealed"
1"was tiled"
2"been lifted"
3"being surprised"
4"been scrubbed"
5"been laid"
6"been practised"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs229
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount16
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences10
totalSentences150
ratio0.067
matches
0"Quinn counted the rungs on the way — forty-two, then a landing, then thirty more — and by the bottom her breath had gone thin and cold and the smell had started: wet stone, candle grease, and under both of those something sweetish she couldn't name and didn't like."
1"Mid-fifties, thick through the chest, in a suit that had cost somebody money — navy worsted, good stitching, silk tie knotted with care."
2"She had her own, and she checked her watch first — quarter past six, the worn leather strap loosened a notch — because time of death was going to matter and she wanted to know exactly how long she'd been in the dark."
3"The dust told her about the dead man — one set of prints, size ten, walking in from the tunnel mouth, stopping, then a scuff and a slide where he'd gone down."
4"Six feet across, swept clean — not scuffed, swept, with the neat overlapping arcs a broom leaves — and inside the circle the tiles had been scrubbed until the cream showed through the grime."
5"She got down on her knees beside him — at forty-one that took a moment longer than it used to — and laid her torch flat on the floor and shone it across the palm at a shallow angle, and there it was, plain as day."
6"She looked down the tunnel — the black mouth of it, funnelling away and away and going on being dark."
7"She walked the platform the other way, past the circle, past the body, out to where the tiling stopped and the tunnel began — and there, in the dust at the tunnel mouth, she crouched again and put her torch down flat."
8"She stayed there a moment, and she counted backwards from it — the powder, the candles, the circle, the bone, the water in the lungs — and at the end of the count she stood up and said, \"Bag four. The compass off his neck. I want it on my desk tonight.\""
9"It slid, slow and deliberate, and settled east — toward the river, toward the low dawn coming up grey over the roofs — and when she turned the casing again, and again, it went back to east."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1494
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"same half-familiar shapes."
adverbCount45
adverbRatio0.030120481927710843
lyAdverbCount9
lyAdverbRatio0.006024096385542169
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences150
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences150
mean13.45
std13.49
cv1.003
sampleLengths
013
149
211
32
424
515
627
710
843
95
109
112
1223
1310
1424
1517
164
1726
183
192
2010
214
2243
239
2424
2532
2620
275
286
296
307
3144
3210
335
3420
354
3634
3732
382
3932
4033
4110
425
432
443
456
4611
477
482
495
66.67% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats20
diversityRatio0.48
totalSentences150
uniqueOpeners72
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount4
totalSentences93
matches
0"Just a bone."
1"Then the right, the one"
2"Somewhere behind her ribs, in"
3"Then she started the engine"
ratio0.043
65.16% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount36
totalSentences93
matches
0"She minded the third step,"
1"His shoes were patent leather"
2"He lay on his back"
3"He looked like a man"
4"He had a soft, pink,"
5"He offered her his torch"
6"She didn't take it."
7"She had her own, and"
8"She walked the platform before"
9"It told her about Reid"
10"It told her nothing else."
11"She went to the second"
12"It was a circle."
13"He wasn't a stupid man."
14"He simply preferred the answer"
15"They brought her his coat."
16"She went through it with"
17"She turned it in the"
18"She had to tip it"
19"She looked uncomfortable"
ratio0.387
67.53% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount73
totalSentences93
matches
0"The maintenance shaft went down"
1"Quinn counted the rungs on"
2"DS Reid called up from"
3"She minded the third step,"
4"Ashcombe Street station had shut"
5"The platform was tiled cream"
6"Somebody's torch beam swung across"
7"The body lay between the"
8"His shoes were patent leather"
9"He lay on his back"
10"He looked like a man"
11"He had a soft, pink,"
12"He offered her his torch"
13"She didn't take it."
14"She had her own, and"
15"She walked the platform before"
16"The dust told her about"
17"It told her about Reid"
18"It told her nothing else."
19"Nobody else had walked that"
ratio0.785
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences93
matches(empty)
ratio0
65.22% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences46
technicalSentenceCount5
matches
0"Mid-fifties, thick through the chest, in a suit that had cost somebody money — navy worsted, good stitching, silk tie knotted with care."
1"He had a soft, pink, apologetic face and the manner of a man who had stopped being surprised at thirty and had never once regretted it."
2"Fine and grey and dry, and it had run, the way a liquid dries, in a thin tongue out of the tunnel and onto the platform, as though something had poured out of t…"
3"She looked up when Quinn's feet hit the tiles and tucked a curl of red hair behind her left ear, and her green eyes behind the round glasses were steady in a wa…"
4"Then she started the engine and drove east, because that was the way home anyway, and because she had spent eighteen years learning to follow the thing that did…"
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags24
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags16
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences57
tagDensity0.281
leniency0.561
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
86.7892%