Run: 2026-09-10-01M25DXXCZA0R5YSMBBQEHAS77

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Duration:
25.7s
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$0.002287
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DeepSeek

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You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The knock came at three minutes past ten, flat and deliberate, four raps with no urgency in them at all. Rory sat cross-legged on Eva's floor with a mug of tea gone cold at her elbow and a scroll unrolled across her knees, and she did not move. Nobody knocked on that door after nine. The curry house below had shut its shutters an hour ago; the stairwell smelled of cardamom and wet brick, and the only people who climbed it were Eva, and the landlord, and men with clipboards who wanted to talk about the boiler. Ptolemy lifted his head from the arm of the sofa, ears swivelled forward, and made a low enquiring noise in his chest. The knock came again. Four raps. Same rhythm. Same patience. She set the scroll aside and stood, and her knees cracked, and she padded to the door in her socks with her heart doing something it had no business doing. The peephole gave her a fish-eye view of the landing: a charcoal shoulder, rain-darkened, and the pale curve of a collar, and above that, nothing of a face but the underside of a jaw she would have recognised in the dark, at distance, from the far side of a crowd. Rory closed her eyes for one second. Then she slid the first deadbolt, and the second, and the third, and pulled the chain free of its housing, and opened the door four inches, chain still taut across the gap. Lucien Moreau stood under the bare bulb with rain beading on his shoulders like glass shot. He was not carrying an umbrella. His hair was still slicked back, platinum and immaculate, the water not daring to ruin it, and his hand rested on the ivory handle of his cane with the easy ownership of a man who had never once in his life been rained on without choosing it. The amber eye caught the light. The black one caught nothing at all. "Aurora," he said. Nobody called her that. Not Eva, not Yu-Fei, not the man at the corner shop who had known her for a year as the girl who takes the late deliveries. He said it as though it were the whole of her, three syllables and a debt. "You've got the wrong door," she said. "I have the right door." He tipped his head a fraction, indicating the flat behind her, the noise of it, the static warmth. "Eva is in the Cotswolds until Thursday. You are minding the cat." A pause. "You have been crying, or you have been reading something with a sad ending. Given the state of this flat, I would bet on the reading." Rory's jaw tightened. "You've been watching the building." "I have been watching the building," he agreed, without shame, which was somehow worse than a denial. "May I come in? I would prefer not to say the rest of it in a stairwell that smells of curry and has two other doors on it." She should have closed the door. She knew that the way you know a step is rotten before your weight finds it. She unhooked the chain and stood aside, and he stepped past her into the flat, close enough that she caught rain and cedar and the faint mineral cold that came off him always, the whiff of somewhere that was not here. He surveyed the room the way he surveyed rooms: one sweep, fast, everything catalogued. The towers of Eva's books. The scrolls. The pinboard with its red string and its photograph of a bridge she'd been asked not to ask about. The mug of cold tea. The tabby cat, who had abandoned the sofa and was now crossing the floor with the shameless purpose of a creature who did not care whose side he was on, and who wound once around Lucien's ankles and stayed there. "Traitor," Rory said to the cat. "He remembers me." Lucien set the cane against the arm of the sofa and did not sit. He turned the ivory handle a quarter-turn, then back. It was the only tell he had, and she had spent four months learning to read it, and she hated that she still could. "Say it," she said. "Whatever it is. Say it and go." He watched her for a moment. Then he reached inside his coat and brought out an envelope, unsealed, unaddressed, and set it on the table beside the cold tea. "Evan has been making enquiries," he said. "In Cardiff, first, which is nothing. Then in London. He has been to three places he should not know to go to, which means someone has been talking, and I have not yet found out who. He has asked, twice, about a delivery girl with black hair who works for a restaurant on Gerrard Street." The room stayed exactly as it was. The radiator ticked. Somewhere below, a shutter rattled in the wind off Brick Lane. Rory heard all of it from a long way off, as if she were wearing a coat with the hood up. "Two weeks ago that would have been a text," she said. "Or one of your little couriers with a manila envelope and no manners." "It would have been." "So why the door, Lucien." He did not answer immediately, and the silence went on long enough that she heard herself breathe twice, and knew that he had heard it too, because he heard everything, that was the whole of him, a man built of other people's information. "Because I owed you a face," he said at last. "Because it is not news I should hand you through glass." "Now you develop a conscience." "Now I am standing in your doorway at ten at night in the rain, which I think you will agree is not the behaviour of a man with a conscience. It is the behaviour of a man who could not stay away, and I am not going to dress it up." The amber eye held hers. The black one gave her nothing, which was a lie, because she had seen it give plenty. Her left hand had found the crescent scar on her wrist without her permission, thumb pressing the small pale seam the way she did when she was eight and something had gone wrong in the kitchen. She made herself let go of it. "You had a key," she said. "Eight weeks ago. You stood in that doorway and told me that what I wanted didn't matter, that you knew what was good for me, that I'd thank you for it later. You want to know what I thought, standing there? I thought, *there it is. There it is again.* Different suit. Better manners." She heard her own voice go flat and quiet, and did not stop it. "You didn't ask me. You arranged me. Like a piece on your board." "I know." "Do you." "I have thought about very little else." He turned the handle of the cane again. "I could tell you the reasons. There are nine of them and they are all good, and none of them will matter to you, because you were right. I took the decision out of your hands and I dressed it as protection. I have spent my life moving people without their permission. It is the only thing I am good at. I did it to you because I was afraid, and I have not made that mistake since, and I will not make it now." He indicated the envelope with two fingers. "That is why this is in your hands and not in mine. Read it or burn it. It is yours." Ptolemy had gone to sleep against his shoe. Rory looked at the envelope, and then at him, and the anger was still there, banked and hot, but underneath it was the other thing, the thing that had been sitting in her chest since the night she'd said *don't come back here* and watched him take her at her word with the composure of a man being told the weather. "You didn't come back," she said. "You told me not to." "I told you a lot of things." Her voice caught on the edge of it, and she made it flat again. "That was the one you chose to believe." Lucien was quiet. Then he did something she had never seen him do, not once, in four months of watching him work rooms like a man playing an instrument: he looked away from her, down at the cat, and his mouth moved as if he were assembling a sentence and finding the parts did not fit. "I believed it," he said, "because it was the only thing you said that I deserved." The rain ticked at the window. The radiator gave its small iron knock. Rory stepped back, and the door was still open behind him, and the cold was coming up the stairwell in a draught that moved the papers on the table, and none of that was a decision. She reached past him and closed the door, and threw the top deadbolt home, and then the second, and then the third — and then she stood with her hand flat on the door and her back to him, and said, to the wood, "Take off your coat. You're dripping on Eva's floor, and she'll have my head for it." There was a pause. Then the rustle of wet wool, and the knock of the cane against the arm of the sofa as he set his weight on it, and his voice, close behind her, lower than before. "Thank you." "Don't." She turned around. "This isn't forgiveness. This is me reading an envelope." "No," he agreed, and the amber eye was warm and the black one was not, and both of them were on her. "It isn't." She crossed to the table and picked up the mug of cold tea and drank it anyway, all of it, grimacing, and set it down, and tore the envelope open with her thumb.
created_at"2026-09-10T10:31:02.821Z" 9/10/2026, 10:31:02 AM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags20
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"She turned around [around]"
dialogueSentences41
tagDensity0.488
leniency0.976
rawRatio0.05
effectiveRatio0.049
97.03% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1685
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"very"
count1
highlights
0"very"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
88.13% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1685
totalAiIsms4
found
0
word"warmth"
count1
1
word"weight"
count2
2
word"silence"
count1
highlights
0"warmth"
1"weight"
2"silence"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences75
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences75
filterMatches
0"know"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences95
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen92
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans2
markdownWords11
totalWords1686
ratio0.007
matches
0"there it is. There it is again."
1"don't come back here"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions25
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions21
wordCount1165
uniqueNames8
maxNameDensity0.6
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity1
worstWindowName"Eva"
discoveredNames
Eva4
Moreau1
Yu-Fei1
Rory7
Lucien4
Brick1
Lane1
Ptolemy2
persons
0"Eva"
1"Moreau"
2"Rory"
3"Lucien"
4"Ptolemy"
places
0"Brick"
1"Lane"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences50
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1686
matches(empty)
61.40% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount3
totalSentences95
matches
0"knew that the"
1"hated that she"
2"knew that he"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs47
mean35.87
std31.56
cv0.88
sampleLengths
097
122
210
380
439
569
613
73
846
97
1063
118
1245
1363
1485
156
1650
1711
1891
1942
2024
214
225
2343
2421
255
2651
2722
2843
2987
302
312
32127
338
3461
356
365
3729
3856
3916
4013
4196
4238
432
4413
4524
4633
91.23% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount3
totalSentences75
matches
0"been rained"
1"been asked"
2"being told"
59.65% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount4
totalVerbs190
matches
0"was not carrying"
1"were wearing"
2"were assembling"
3"was coming"
82.71% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount1
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences2
totalSentences95
ratio0.021
matches
0"The curry house below had shut its shutters an hour ago; the stairwell smelled of cardamom and wet brick, and the only people who climbed it were Eva, and the landlord, and men with clipboards who wanted to talk about the boiler."
1"She reached past him and closed the door, and threw the top deadbolt home, and then the second, and then the third — and then she stood with her hand flat on the door and her back to him, and said, to the wood, \"Take off your coat. You're dripping on Eva's floor, and she'll have my head for it.\""
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1169
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount41
adverbRatio0.03507271171941831
lyAdverbCount4
lyAdverbRatio0.003421727972626176
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences95
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences95
mean17.75
std17.63
cv0.993
sampleLengths
020
128
27
342
422
54
62
72
82
930
1050
117
1232
1316
146
1547
166
177
183
194
2026
2116
227
2323
2414
2526
263
275
2817
2928
306
3116
3241
3314
345
352
3619
375
3840
396
4017
419
4224
434
447
456
4623
477
4855
497
49.82% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats16
diversityRatio0.4
totalSentences95
uniqueOpeners38
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount5
totalSentences62
matches
0"Then she slid the first"
1"Then he reached inside his"
2"Somewhere below, a shutter rattled"
3"Then he did something she"
4"Then the rustle of wet"
ratio0.081
58.71% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount25
totalSentences62
matches
0"She set the scroll aside"
1"He was not carrying an"
2"His hair was still slicked"
3"He said it as though"
4"He tipped his head a"
5"he agreed, without shame, which"
6"She should have closed the"
7"She knew that the way"
8"She unhooked the chain and"
9"He surveyed the room the"
10"He turned the ivory handle"
11"It was the only tell"
12"He watched her for a"
13"He did not answer immediately,"
14"he said at last"
15"Her left hand had found"
16"She made herself let go"
17"She heard her own voice"
18"He turned the handle of"
19"He indicated the envelope with"
ratio0.403
16.45% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount55
totalSentences62
matches
0"The knock came at three"
1"Rory sat cross-legged on Eva's"
2"Nobody knocked on that door"
3"The curry house below had"
4"Ptolemy lifted his head from"
5"The knock came again."
6"She set the scroll aside"
7"The peephole gave her a"
8"Rory closed her eyes for"
9"Lucien Moreau stood under the"
10"He was not carrying an"
11"His hair was still slicked"
12"The amber eye caught the"
13"The black one caught nothing"
14"Nobody called her that."
15"He said it as though"
16"He tipped his head a"
17"Rory's jaw tightened."
18"he agreed, without shame, which"
19"She should have closed the"
ratio0.887
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences62
matches(empty)
ratio0
0.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences29
technicalSentenceCount9
matches
0"The curry house below had shut its shutters an hour ago; the stairwell smelled of cardamom and wet brick, and the only people who climbed it were Eva, and the l…"
1"She set the scroll aside and stood, and her knees cracked, and she padded to the door in her socks with her heart doing something it had no business doing."
2"His hair was still slicked back, platinum and immaculate, the water not daring to ruin it, and his hand rested on the ivory handle of his cane with the easy own…"
3"Not Eva, not Yu-Fei, not the man at the corner shop who had known her for a year as the girl who takes the late deliveries."
4"The tabby cat, who had abandoned the sofa and was now crossing the floor with the shameless purpose of a creature who did not care whose side he was on, and who…"
5"He did not answer immediately, and the silence went on long enough that she heard herself breathe twice, and knew that he had heard it too, because he heard eve…"
6"Rory looked at the envelope, and then at him, and the anger was still there, banked and hot, but underneath it was the other thing, the thing that had been sitt…"
7"Then he did something she had never seen him do, not once, in four months of watching him work rooms like a man playing an instrument: he looked away from her, …"
8"Rory stepped back, and the door was still open behind him, and the cold was coming up the stairwell in a draught that moved the papers on the table, and none of…"
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags20
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags12
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"he agreed (agree)"
1"he agreed (agree)"
dialogueSentences41
tagDensity0.293
leniency0.585
rawRatio0.167
effectiveRatio0.098
83.5046%