Run: 2026-09-10-01M25DYV8T723GC0GHTREK21B5

Run Details

Duration:
19.1s
Cost:
$0.001617
Provider:
DeepSeek

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4417" name="Tomás Herrera" aliases="Tommy, Tomás, Herrera" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Support"> <eyeColor>warm brown</eyeColor> <hair>short curly dark brown</hair> <height>5'10"</height> <age>29</age> <skinTone>olive skin</skinTone> <scar>scar running along his left forearm from a knife attack</scar> <medallion>Saint Christopher medallion around his neck</medallion> <birthplace>Seville, Spain</birthplace> <description>A former paramedic who provides off-the-books medical care for the clique.</description> <backstory>Born in Seville, Spain. He moved to London to work for the NHS but lost his license after administering unauthorized treatments to supernatural patients.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the thriller genre. A detective is pursuing a suspect through rain-soaked city streets at night. The chase takes them from the street level down into an underground market. The detective must decide whether to follow the suspect into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The rain had been falling for six hours without apology, and Detective Harlow Quinn had been sitting in it for two of them. Water sheeted off the green neon sign above the Raven's Nest and broke apart on the roof of her unmarked Vauxhall, so that Soho's grimy brickwork flickered in and out of emerald every few seconds, like a bad heart monitor. She kept her hands at ten and two on the wheel, not because she was driving, but because eighteen years of service had taught her that stillness was a kind of armour. Her father's watch—worn leather, cracked crystal, forty years older than she was—sat heavy on her left wrist. Nineteen forty-seven. Twelve minutes past midnight. She'd been watching the bar since half ten. Same routine as the last four Thursdays. The tall man with the curly hair came out at the back, never the front, always carrying the same cheap canvas kit bag that paramedics used before the NHS started issuing the moulded plastic ones. Tomás Herrera. Twenty-nine. Stripped of his licence eighteen months ago for administering treatment he wasn't cleared to administer to patients who, according to the tribunal transcript Harlow had read four times, did not officially exist. He stepped out into the alley now, hood up, bag over one shoulder, and the light caught something at his throat—a small silver medallion on a chain, Saint Christopher, the patron of travellers, swinging as he walked. Harlow was out of the car before she decided to be. Rain hit her scalp through her cropped hair like gravel. She crossed Gerrard Street at a walk that wasn't a walk, boots slapping the wet tarmac in a rhythm she'd learned at Hendon and never unlearned, and by the time Herrera reached the mouth of the alley she was close enough to hear his trainers squeak. He turned his head. Their eyes met for a quarter second—his warm brown, widening, doing the arithmetic—and then he ran. "Police!" she shouted, and it came out flat and useless, the way it always did in these streets where nobody had ever been helped by the word. "Tomás Herrera. Stop." He didn't stop. He went left down Shaftesbury Avenue, weaving through a clot of late-night revellers spilling out of a kebab shop, and she went after him, shoulder first, spilling lager and a plastic tray of chips across the pavement. Someone swore at her. She didn't hear it. The rain made everything a smear of refracted colour—red bus, white headlights, the pink of a chicken shop sign—and Herrera was a dark shape cutting through all of it, faster than a man with a canvas bag should be. She was faster. She had four inches and fifteen years of chasing people who didn't want to be caught, and she closed the gap on Charing Cross Road, close enough to hear him breathing, close enough to see the scar along his left forearm where the sleeve had ridden up—a pale rope of tissue from wrist to elbow, the kind of scar that came from holding your arm up while someone with a knife tried to open it. Then he cut sideways, into the mouth of an alley she'd never noticed in eighteen years of walking this patch. She followed, and the alley narrowed until her shoulders brushed both walls, and it smelled of old fat and wet cardboard and underneath it something else, something alkaline and wrong, like the air near a hospital incinerator. He was gone. No. Not gone. There was a gate at the end, chain-link, standing open, and beyond it the low brick parapet of the Regent's Canal, black water running fast with rain. She vaulted the parapet. Landed on towpath gravel. Her knee complained. She kept running. He was thirty feet ahead, heading north along the canal, and she could see now where he was heading, because she knew this stretch, she'd walked it after Morris died, the way you do when you can't sleep and you need somewhere that belongs to nobody—the disused entrance to what had been Camden Town's second station, sealed with wooden hoarding since before she was born, and the hoarding was pulled back. Just wide enough for a man. Herrera looked back at her once. She saw the medallion flash. Then he was through the gap, and the hoarding settled back into place behind him, and Harlow stood on the towpath with the rain running off her chin and her breath fogging in front of her face. She stood there for four seconds. She counted them. She was aware of doing it. Because there was a version of this where she turned around, called it in, went home, took off her wet coat, and let somebody with a warrant and a torch and a reason come back in daylight. DS Morris had gone into a place very like this one without a reason. Three years ago in November, on a call that didn't appear in the log, into a building that according to the Land Registry didn't have a basement. They'd found him on the second floor, at the window, and the pathologist had written the word *unexplained* four times in a two-page report, and the coroner had read those words aloud with a straight face, and Harlow had sat in the third row and understood, with a clarity that had never left her, that the reason nobody could explain it was that nobody wanted to. Her service weapon sat at her hip, wet and cold under her jacket. She put her hand on the hoarding. The wood was rotten and it gave easily. Beyond it was a doorway with a metal grille, and the grille was padlocked—but the padlock hung open, loose, recently oiled. She ducked through. The stairs went down farther than a station should. Tilework glazed in cream and bottle green. A tiled sign on the far wall, the letters picked out in white: CAMDEN TOWN. A dead poster for a Brand's Essence advert, a man with a moustache and a bowl of something, the paper bubbling off the wall in blisters. The air was warmer than the street and smelled of the canal, of old dust, of candle smoke, and now, faintly, of something alive: cardamom, sweat, wet wool, a hundred people breathing. At the bottom of the stairs, there was a woman. She was small and old and she sat on a folding chair beside a doorway cut into the tunnel brick, and she held in her lap a wooden bowl. Below her, the tunnel opened out. Harlow could see it: a vaulted space that went on and on and should not be there, strung with bulbs on wires, crowded with stalls, tarpaulins, awnings, lanterns. People moving through it in ones and twos, hooded, carrying things. The sound of it rose up the tiles like the sound of a river under a bridge. She smelled coffee and scorched copper and something sweetly rotten. She saw, on a trestle table not twenty feet in, a jar of teeth. She saw a woman in surgical green weighing powder into twists of paper and handing them across. She saw a man with his shirt off and something moving under the skin of his back, a slow patient undulation, like a calf turning in a womb. Tomás Herrera was walking into it, thirty yards ahead, the canvas bag over his shoulder. Not hurrying. He'd slowed down. He was home. The old woman in the chair looked up at Harlow. Rain was still dripping off her coat onto the tiles and each drop sounded enormous. "Token," the woman said. Not unfriendly. Just a fact about the world. She tapped a finger on the rim of the bowl. It was empty except for three pale knuckles of small bone, carved with tiny spirals, the size of a thumbnail. "I don't have one." "Then you don't come in." The woman looked past her, up the stairs, in a way that suggested there might be someone at the top of them soon, and that it wasn't Harlow's problem yet but it could be. Harlow's hand went to her hip. The warrant card, useless—no jurisdiction in a place that wasn't on a map. The radio on her shoulder, which would give her a channel full of static and a sergeant who'd tell her to withdraw and file a report. The weapon under her jacket, cold as a key. Herrera was disappearing into the press of the crowd. She had perhaps ten more seconds of him. Nothing about this was lawful. She knew that the way she knew her own name. Every box on every form she'd ever filled would be unticked by the next step she took, and she could feel, standing there on the tiles with the water running off her, the exact shape of her career curving away behind her like the last stretch of towpath before the tunnel mouth. She'd been in this place before. Not this market. The other one. The second floor, the window, the word *unexplained*. She'd stood outside then too, and she'd waited for daylight, and she'd been wrong. Harlow looked at the old woman. Then she crouched, and with two fingers, careful and deliberate, she took one of the little carved bones out of the bowl. The woman watched her do it and didn't stop her. The corner of her mouth moved—not a smile, not quite, but an acknowledgement, the way you'd nod to someone stepping onto a bridge in the dark. "Keep it," the woman said. "You'll want it coming back." Harlow closed her fist around the bone, and stepped through the doorway, and the light of the Veil Market took her.
created_at"2026-09-10T10:31:33.407Z" 9/10/2026, 10:31:33 AM
model"deepseek/deepseek-v4.1-flash-20260910"
app_id182717
external_user(null)
streamedtrue
cancelledfalse
latency476
moderation_latency(null)
generation_time19057
tokens_prompt888
tokens_completion2899
native_tokens_prompt853
native_tokens_completion2638
native_tokens_completion_images(null)
native_tokens_reasoning588
native_tokens_cached640
num_media_prompt(null)
num_input_audio_prompt(null)
num_media_completion0
num_search_results(null)
num_fetches(null)
web_search_engine(null)
origin"https://ncbench.com/"
is_byokfalse
finish_reason"stop"
native_finish_reason"stop"
service_tier(null)
usage0.00161667
router(null)
user_agent"langchainjs-openai/1.0.0 ((node/v24.20.0; linux; x64))"
http_referer(null)
request_id"req-1789036293-n2wRInjuAkAkOD8f3HWx"
session_id(null)
preset_id(null)
api_type"completions"
id"gen-1789036293-yn3WdWfQ16Vu8bYtLr2D"
upstream_id"fd7b977c-342a-4b92-8908-c7781da53bb8"
provider_responses
0
endpoint_id"fd104bc8-535a-4d31-a847-a8e402e86a02"
id"fd7b977c-342a-4b92-8908-c7781da53bb8"
is_byokfalse
latency323
model_permaslug"deepseek/deepseek-v4.1-flash-20260910"
provider_name"DeepSeek"
status200
total_cost0.00161667
cache_discount0.00009408
upstream_inference_cost0
provider_name"DeepSeek"
response_cache_source_id(null)
data_region"global"
workspace_id"97e315e5-d303-487d-83c1-83180e8a13d4"

Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags4
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences7
tagDensity0.571
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
93.88% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1633
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"very"
count1
1
adverb"sweetly"
count1
highlights
0"very"
1"sweetly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
90.81% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1633
totalAiIsms3
found
0
word"flickered"
count1
1
word"crystal"
count1
2
word"could feel"
count1
highlights
0"flickered"
1"crystal"
2"could feel"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences100
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences100
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"tried to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences103
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen76
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans2
markdownWords2
totalWords1621
ratio0.001
matches
0"unexplained"
1"unexplained"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions5
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions47
wordCount1600
uniqueNames31
maxNameDensity0.69
worstName"Harlow"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Harlow"
discoveredNames
Detective1
Harlow11
Quinn1
Raven1
Nest1
Vauxhall1
Soho1
Thursdays1
Herrera6
Saint1
Christopher1
Gerrard1
Street1
Hendon1
Shaftesbury1
Avenue1
Charing1
Cross1
Road1
Regent1
Canal1
Morris2
Camden1
Town1
November1
Land1
Registry1
Brand1
Essence1
Veil1
Market1
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Raven"
3"Herrera"
4"Saint"
5"Christopher"
6"Regent"
7"Morris"
8"Registry"
9"Brand"
10"Market"
places
0"Vauxhall"
1"Soho"
2"Gerrard"
3"Street"
4"Hendon"
5"Shaftesbury"
6"Avenue"
7"Charing"
8"Cross"
9"Road"
10"Town"
11"November"
12"Land"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences72
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"not quite but an acknowledgement, the way you'd nod to someone stepping onto a bridge in the dark"
76.62% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches2
per1kWords1.234
wordCount1621
matches
0"not a smile, not quite, but an acknowledgement, the way you'd nod to someone stepping on"
1"not quite, but an acknowledgement, the way you'd nod to someone stepping on"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount2
totalSentences103
matches
0"was that nobody"
1"knew that the"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs34
mean47.68
std39.2
cv0.822
sampleLengths
0118
185
237
367
44
516
630
748
8117
957
103
1144
1277
1348
1415
15144
1620
1732
1889
1910
20160
2123
2225
2342
244
2539
2654
2717
2867
2934
3028
3136
3210
3321
87.72% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount5
totalSentences100
matches
0"was—sat"
1"been helped"
2"was gone"
3"was pulled"
4"was padlocked"
57.55% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount5
totalVerbs234
matches
0"was driving"
1"was heading"
2"was walking"
3"was still dripping"
4"was disappearing"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount12
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences9
totalSentences103
ratio0.087
matches
0"Her father's watch—worn leather, cracked crystal, forty years older than she was—sat heavy on her left wrist."
1"He stepped out into the alley now, hood up, bag over one shoulder, and the light caught something at his throat—a small silver medallion on a chain, Saint Christopher, the patron of travellers, swinging as he walked."
2"Their eyes met for a quarter second—his warm brown, widening, doing the arithmetic—and then he ran."
3"The rain made everything a smear of refracted colour—red bus, white headlights, the pink of a chicken shop sign—and Herrera was a dark shape cutting through all of it, faster than a man with a canvas bag should be."
4"She had four inches and fifteen years of chasing people who didn't want to be caught, and she closed the gap on Charing Cross Road, close enough to hear him breathing, close enough to see the scar along his left forearm where the sleeve had ridden up—a pale rope of tissue from wrist to elbow, the kind of scar that came from holding your arm up while someone with a knife tried to open it."
5"He was thirty feet ahead, heading north along the canal, and she could see now where he was heading, because she knew this stretch, she'd walked it after Morris died, the way you do when you can't sleep and you need somewhere that belongs to nobody—the disused entrance to what had been Camden Town's second station, sealed with wooden hoarding since before she was born, and the hoarding was pulled back."
6"Beyond it was a doorway with a metal grille, and the grille was padlocked—but the padlock hung open, loose, recently oiled."
7"The warrant card, useless—no jurisdiction in a place that wasn't on a map."
8"The corner of her mouth moved—not a smile, not quite, but an acknowledgement, the way you'd nod to someone stepping onto a bridge in the dark."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1617
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount34
adverbRatio0.021026592455163882
lyAdverbCount7
lyAdverbRatio0.004329004329004329
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences103
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences103
mean15.74
std15.4
cv0.979
sampleLengths
023
140
232
317
42
54
68
77
835
92
101
1132
1237
1311
1410
1546
164
1716
1827
193
203
2137
224
234
2439
253
2675
2720
2837
293
301
312
3227
334
344
353
363
3771
386
396
405
4137
426
433
446
4537
4614
4727
4866
4913
52.10% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats13
diversityRatio0.3883495145631068
totalSentences103
uniqueOpeners40
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount5
totalSentences93
matches
0"Then he cut sideways, into"
1"Just wide enough for a"
2"Then he was through the"
3"Just a fact about the"
4"Then she crouched, and with"
ratio0.054
47.96% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount40
totalSentences93
matches
0"She kept her hands at"
1"Her father's watch—worn leather, cracked"
2"She'd been watching the bar"
3"He stepped out into the"
4"She crossed Gerrard Street at"
5"He turned his head."
6"Their eyes met for a"
7"she shouted, and it came"
8"He didn't stop."
9"He went left down Shaftesbury"
10"She didn't hear it."
11"She was faster."
12"She had four inches and"
13"She followed, and the alley"
14"He was gone."
15"She vaulted the parapet."
16"Her knee complained."
17"She kept running."
18"He was thirty feet ahead,"
19"She saw the medallion flash."
ratio0.43
51.40% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount76
totalSentences93
matches
0"The rain had been falling"
1"Water sheeted off the green"
2"She kept her hands at"
3"Her father's watch—worn leather, cracked"
4"She'd been watching the bar"
5"The tall man with the"
6"He stepped out into the"
7"Harlow was out of the"
8"She crossed Gerrard Street at"
9"He turned his head."
10"Their eyes met for a"
11"she shouted, and it came"
12"He didn't stop."
13"He went left down Shaftesbury"
14"Someone swore at her."
15"She didn't hear it."
16"The rain made everything a"
17"She was faster."
18"She had four inches and"
19"She followed, and the alley"
ratio0.817
53.76% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences93
matches
0"Because there was a version"
ratio0.011
44.82% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences51
technicalSentenceCount7
matches
0"The tall man with the curly hair came out at the back, never the front, always carrying the same cheap canvas kit bag that paramedics used before the NHS starte…"
1"Stripped of his licence eighteen months ago for administering treatment he wasn't cleared to administer to patients who, according to the tribunal transcript Ha…"
2"She crossed Gerrard Street at a walk that wasn't a walk, boots slapping the wet tarmac in a rhythm she'd learned at Hendon and never unlearned, and by the time …"
3"She had four inches and fifteen years of chasing people who didn't want to be caught, and she closed the gap on Charing Cross Road, close enough to hear him bre…"
4"Then he was through the gap, and the hoarding settled back into place behind him, and Harlow stood on the towpath with the rain running off her chin and her bre…"
5"They'd found him on the second floor, at the window, and the pathologist had written the word *unexplained* four times in a two-page report, and the coroner had…"
6"Every box on every form she'd ever filled would be unticked by the next step she took, and she could feel, standing there on the tiles with the water running of…"
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags4
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
7.14% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags3
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"she shouted (shout)"
dialogueSentences7
tagDensity0.429
leniency0.857
rawRatio0.333
effectiveRatio0.286
82.1254%