| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 21 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 57 | | tagDensity | 0.368 | | leniency | 0.737 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1588 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 71.66% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1588 | | totalAiIsms | 9 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "chilled" | | 1 | "stomach" | | 2 | "pulsed" | | 3 | "pulse" | | 4 | "trembled" | | 5 | "warmth" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 157 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 157 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 193 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 42 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1587 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 16 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 50.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 63 | | wordCount | 1318 | | uniqueNames | 8 | | maxNameDensity | 1.9 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 3.5 | | worstWindowName | "Aurora" | | discoveredNames | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Heartstone | 4 | | Isolde | 15 | | Nyx | 14 | | Fae-forged | 1 | | Aurora | 25 | | Fae | 2 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Heartstone" | | 1 | "Isolde" | | 2 | "Nyx" | | 3 | "Aurora" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 0.552 | | windowScore | 0.5 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 99 | | glossingSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "not quite a bow, then vanished between the vines" |
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| 73.98% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 2 | | per1kWords | 1.26 | | wordCount | 1587 | | matches | | 0 | "not from eating, but from breathing" | | 1 | "not a silhouette, but a tall figure with a pale face" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 193 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 98 | | mean | 16.19 | | std | 16.13 | | cv | 0.996 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 22 | | 1 | 37 | | 2 | 19 | | 3 | 36 | | 4 | 6 | | 5 | 18 | | 6 | 23 | | 7 | 6 | | 8 | 28 | | 9 | 6 | | 10 | 4 | | 11 | 32 | | 12 | 22 | | 13 | 89 | | 14 | 15 | | 15 | 17 | | 16 | 13 | | 17 | 4 | | 18 | 1 | | 19 | 7 | | 20 | 19 | | 21 | 23 | | 22 | 14 | | 23 | 5 | | 24 | 6 | | 25 | 3 | | 26 | 30 | | 27 | 19 | | 28 | 8 | | 29 | 52 | | 30 | 10 | | 31 | 6 | | 32 | 4 | | 33 | 9 | | 34 | 9 | | 35 | 5 | | 36 | 55 | | 37 | 14 | | 38 | 9 | | 39 | 5 | | 40 | 7 | | 41 | 30 | | 42 | 4 | | 43 | 6 | | 44 | 5 | | 45 | 4 | | 46 | 16 | | 47 | 62 | | 48 | 11 | | 49 | 5 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 157 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 232 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 1 | | semicolonCount | 1 | | flaggedSentences | 2 | | totalSentences | 193 | | ratio | 0.01 | | matches | | 0 | "Sweetness filled her mouth—not from eating, but from breathing." | | 1 | "The skins were thin and glossy; beneath them, dark fluid shifted with each pulse of the Heartstone." |
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| 88.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1245 | | adjectiveStacks | 2 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "Cold pressed against her" | | 1 | "pale bone-white wood." |
| | adverbCount | 29 | | adverbRatio | 0.023293172690763052 | | lyAdverbCount | 2 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.001606425702811245 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 193 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 193 | | mean | 8.22 | | std | 5.31 | | cv | 0.645 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 11 | | 1 | 11 | | 2 | 11 | | 3 | 7 | | 4 | 19 | | 5 | 6 | | 6 | 13 | | 7 | 16 | | 8 | 13 | | 9 | 7 | | 10 | 6 | | 11 | 12 | | 12 | 6 | | 13 | 3 | | 14 | 11 | | 15 | 9 | | 16 | 6 | | 17 | 5 | | 18 | 18 | | 19 | 5 | | 20 | 3 | | 21 | 3 | | 22 | 4 | | 23 | 8 | | 24 | 6 | | 25 | 7 | | 26 | 11 | | 27 | 7 | | 28 | 15 | | 29 | 7 | | 30 | 13 | | 31 | 17 | | 32 | 11 | | 33 | 41 | | 34 | 4 | | 35 | 11 | | 36 | 3 | | 37 | 14 | | 38 | 4 | | 39 | 9 | | 40 | 4 | | 41 | 1 | | 42 | 7 | | 43 | 11 | | 44 | 8 | | 45 | 12 | | 46 | 6 | | 47 | 5 | | 48 | 8 | | 49 | 6 |
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| 50.09% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 5 | | diversityRatio | 0.3160621761658031 | | totalSentences | 193 | | uniqueOpeners | 61 | |
| 76.34% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 131 | | matches | | 0 | "Instead, clear liquid climbed upward" | | 1 | "Then the basin went dark." | | 2 | "Then one stepped into the" |
| | ratio | 0.023 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 29 | | totalSentences | 131 | | matches | | 0 | "Its silver chain had snagged" | | 1 | "Their voice passed over the" | | 2 | "She crossed the shimmer." | | 3 | "Her stomach rose into her" | | 4 | "She stumbled onto a broad" | | 5 | "It had no sun, yet" | | 6 | "She heard no birds." | | 7 | "It pulsed against her palm," | | 8 | "Their fingers disappeared past the" | | 9 | "Their undersides shone pale as" | | 10 | "It smelled of honey, bruised" | | 11 | "Her stomach tightened." | | 12 | "They followed the path downhill." | | 13 | "Their silver bodies flashed as" | | 14 | "Their reflection appeared in the" | | 15 | "Its hands gripped a basket" | | 16 | "It watched them." | | 17 | "They left the terrace by" | | 18 | "Its towers rose in lopsided" | | 19 | "It reached the arch before" |
| | ratio | 0.221 | |
| 47.79% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 108 | | totalSentences | 131 | | matches | | 0 | "The standing stones in Richmond" | | 1 | "Aurora stepped between them with" | | 2 | "The crimson pendant warmed against" | | 3 | "Its silver chain had snagged" | | 4 | "A band of light lay" | | 5 | "Nyx stood at her shoulder," | | 6 | "Isolde waited on the other" | | 7 | "Nyx’s head tilted." | | 8 | "Their voice passed over the" | | 9 | "Aurora drew the Fae-forged blade." | | 10 | "Moonlight gathered along its leaf-shaped" | | 11 | "The hilt chilled her palm." | | 12 | "She crossed the shimmer." | | 13 | "Her stomach rose into her" | | 14 | "She stumbled onto a broad" | | 15 | "Nyx emerged behind her without" | | 16 | "Isolde followed, and the shimmer" | | 17 | "The sky spread overhead in" | | 18 | "It had no sun, yet" | | 19 | "A vineyard climbed the slopes" |
| | ratio | 0.824 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 131 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 55 | | technicalSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "Trees bore fruit in colours Aurora had no names for: blue-black bulbs that glimmered like wet ink, clusters of translucent pears with tiny sparks trapped inside…" | | 1 | "It smelled of roasted meat, fresh bread, and something mineral that caught at the back of her throat." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 21 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 20 | | fancyCount | 2 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Nyx whispered (whisper)" | | 1 | "she murmured (murmur)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 57 | | tagDensity | 0.351 | | leniency | 0.702 | | rawRatio | 0.1 | | effectiveRatio | 0.07 | |