Run: 2026-09-23-01M36NMQ1EF33HG3YFH6HWQJSM

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Duration:
34.8s
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$0.001214
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OpenAI

Model input

System
You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Horror genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Aurora caught the pendant before it struck the standing stone. The silver chain bit into her palm. Its crimson heart gave one warm pulse, then another, as if it had felt the stone answer. She let the chain slide through her fingers. Beyond the stones, Richmond Park lay empty beneath the black limbs of its oaks. Behind her, the path she had followed from the gate looked ordinary enough: churned earth, bracken, a discarded crisp packet snagged on a thorn. Ahead, the grove waited in its small ring of ancient stones. Rory checked her phone. Eva’s message still sat at the top of the screen. I know who gave you the pendant. Richmond. Come alone. No number. No time. No explanation. Eva had sent it an hour ago, though the voice note beneath it carried a faint hiss like a radio tuned between stations. Rory had played it twice. The voice sounded like Eva. That did not mean Eva had sent it. She pocketed the phone and stepped through the stones. The grove swallowed the distant hush of traffic. Wildflowers crowded the clearing, pale heads open among the grass though no season should have coaxed them into bloom. Their scent reached her a moment later, sweet and heavy, with a bitter note beneath it. Rory turned towards the entrance. The stones stood where they had stood. Beyond them, the park path had vanished. She took one step back. The threshold offered the same view: grass, flowers, oaks. No gate. No path. The crisp packet had disappeared. “Fine,” she said. Her voice went nowhere. She pulled her phone out again. The screen showed no signal. The time read 11:47. It had shown 11:47 when she left the bus. Rory tapped the display. Nothing changed. A sound came from the centre of the grove. Three soft knocks, as if someone tapped a fingernail against a wooden door. She looked between the trees. The clearing held no door, only a low mound furred with moss and a ring of mushrooms pressed into the ground. Knock. Knock. Knock. The noise came from beneath the mound. Rory tightened her fist around the pendant. Its warmth spread through her skin, faint but steady. She had followed that pulse from the park gate, though the thing had never reacted to the stones before. She had come for an answer, and she would not leave with a voice message and a disappearing path. She moved towards the mound. The flowers leaned away as she passed. Their stems bent without breaking, all of them turning to track her. Rory stopped. The nearest blossom faced her, its petals folded like a closed mouth. A twig snapped behind her. She spun round. Nothing stood between the stones. Yet the flowers behind her had flattened in a narrow trail, as if something had crossed the clearing on its hands and knees. Rory pulled a small torch from her coat. The beam shook once before she steadied it. She swept it over the ground, the stones, the black trunks beyond. A pale shape slipped behind an oak at the edge of the grove. She kept the torch on the tree. “Eva?” A laugh answered. Thin and bright. It came from somewhere high in the branches. Rory’s hand found the scar on her left wrist. She pressed her thumb against its crescent edge until the sting sharpened her focus. The figure behind the oak did not move. The branches above it did not stir. “Show yourself.” The laughter stopped. Her phone buzzed in her pocket. Rory snatched it out. The screen had lit up, though it still showed no signal. A new voice message waited from Eva. Rory stared at it. The message length read 00:00. She pressed play. “Rory,” Eva whispered from the speaker. “Don’t answer when it calls you.” The message ended. From the oak, a voice said, “Rory.” Eva’s voice. Not the recording. Not even close enough to mistake for it. This one had a wet catch at the back of the throat, as if each word scraped past a mouthful of soil. Rory backed towards the standing stones. The mound’s three knocks resumed. Louder now. A dull thump followed each one, and the grass shivered in time. “Rory,” the voice called again. “I found him.” Her gaze fixed on the oak. A hand slid round its trunk. Pale fingers, narrow as roots. They curled against the bark. “Found who?” The fingers withdrew. A shape emerged on the other side of the tree. It stood too far away for Rory to make out a face, but it wore Eva’s red coat, the one with the broken zip and the brass button she had sewn at the throat. Rory knew the coat. She had borrowed it during a wet winter in Cardiff and returned it with a cigarette burn in one cuff. Eva had laughed and said it gave the thing character. The figure lifted its head. “Come here,” it said. Rory’s phone slipped in her damp hand. She caught it against her thigh. “Eva?” The figure bent its arm. The coat sleeve creased. Its hand emerged, palm up, with something dark resting in it. A phone. The same cracked screen as Rory’s. She looked down. Her own phone lay against her thigh, its screen dark. When she raised it, the glass reflected the grove behind her. In the reflection, the standing stones were crowded with people. Rory jerked round. The stones stood empty. In the phone’s glass, a woman leaned against each one. A man crouched at the base of the nearest stone. A child sat with its feet in the grass. Their faces looked blank, but all their eyes fixed on Rory. The reflected child opened its mouth. The knocks beneath the mound stopped. Something inside the earth drew a long, slow breath. Rory dropped the phone. It hit the ground face-up. The reflected people vanished from its screen. A crack ran across the mossy mound. Soil pushed up between the stones in a thin black line. The flowers around it snapped their heads towards Rory. She lunged for the boundary. The gap between the standing stones had shifted. One stone now leaned across the other, leaving a narrow slit that would barely admit her shoulders. The pendant burned against her palm. Behind her, the figure in Eva’s coat stepped away from the oak. “Rory,” it said. “You left me here.” The voice had changed. A man’s voice now, low and familiar. Evan. Her breath snagged. The grove’s scent turned sharp, like wet copper. She shoved the pendant inside her fist and drove her shoulder against the leaning stone. It did not move. The mound split open. A hand rose from the crack, black with soil. It gripped the turf and pulled. The ground stretched around its knuckles like skin. Rory struck the stone with the heel of her hand. Pain flashed up her arm. She struck again. The pendant throbbed against her fingers, hot enough to blister. The figure in the red coat crossed the clearing. Its feet never touched the grass. Its face remained turned away, but a second face bulged beneath the skin at the back of its head, pushing outward with a slow, patient pressure. “Rory,” it said, in her own voice. The hand in the earth clamped around her ankle. She kicked. Fingers dug through her trouser cuff. The stone gap narrowed, grinding shut with a sound like teeth. Rory slammed the pendant against the standing stone. Crimson light flared through the grove. Every flower snapped upright. Every oak branch bent towards the clearing. The figures behind the stones turned their blank faces as one. The hand around Rory’s ankle released her. Then something beneath the mound spoke with her mother’s voice. “Laila,” it said. “Open the door.”
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
75.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags8
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"the voice called again [again]"
dialogueSentences16
tagDensity0.5
leniency1
rawRatio0.125
effectiveRatio0.125
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1303
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
76.98% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1303
totalAiIsms6
found
0
word"pulse"
count2
1
word"churned"
count1
2
word"warmth"
count1
3
word"familiar"
count1
4
word"throbbed"
count1
highlights
0"pulse"
1"churned"
2"warmth"
3"familiar"
4"throbbed"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences167
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences167
filterMatches
0"know"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences175
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen34
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1303
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions8
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
63.52% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions39
wordCount1272
uniqueNames6
maxNameDensity1.73
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Richmond2
Park1
Eva10
Rory22
Cardiff1
Knock3
persons
0"Eva"
1"Rory"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
2"Cardiff"
globalScore0.635
windowScore0.667
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences99
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1303
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences175
matches
0"followed that pulse"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs81
mean16.09
std15.14
cv0.941
sampleLengths
010
124
257
34
410
510
647
79
843
95
1014
1123
127
1324
146
1522
1626
173
187
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205
2133
225
233
2428
2541
267
271
2814
2938
302
313
3228
339
343
3512
363
377
3835
3925
408
4122
422
433
4478
455
464
4713
481
4920
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences167
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs202
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences175
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1273
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount24
adverbRatio0.018853102906520033
lyAdverbCount2
lyAdverbRatio0.0015710919088766694
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences175
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences175
mean7.45
std5.3
cv0.712
sampleLengths
010
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217
38
414
524
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122
132
142
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2216
235
247
257
265
279
282
292
305
313
324
336
345
354
369
374
382
399
4013
415
4221
431
441
451
467
477
489
4919
40.29% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats17
diversityRatio0.2742857142857143
totalSentences175
uniqueOpeners48
22.83% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences146
matches
0"Then something beneath the mound"
ratio0.007
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount41
totalSentences146
matches
0"Its crimson heart gave one"
1"She let the chain slide"
2"I know who gave you"
3"She pocketed the phone and"
4"Their scent reached her a"
5"She took one step back."
6"Her voice went nowhere."
7"She pulled her phone out"
8"It had shown 11:47 when"
9"She looked between the trees."
10"Its warmth spread through her"
11"She had followed that pulse"
12"She had come for an"
13"She moved towards the mound."
14"Their stems bent without breaking,"
15"She spun round."
16"She swept it over the"
17"She kept the torch on"
18"It came from somewhere high"
19"She pressed her thumb against"
ratio0.281
18.22% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount129
totalSentences146
matches
0"Aurora caught the pendant before"
1"The silver chain bit into"
2"Its crimson heart gave one"
3"She let the chain slide"
4"Rory checked her phone."
5"Eva’s message still sat at"
6"I know who gave you"
7"Eva had sent it an"
8"Rory had played it twice."
9"The voice sounded like Eva."
10"That did not mean Eva"
11"She pocketed the phone and"
12"The grove swallowed the distant"
13"Wildflowers crowded the clearing, pale"
14"Their scent reached her a"
15"Rory turned towards the entrance."
16"The stones stood where they"
17"She took one step back."
18"The threshold offered the same"
19"The crisp packet had disappeared."
ratio0.884
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences146
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences43
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"Three soft knocks, as if someone tapped a fingernail against a wooden door."
1"Yet the flowers behind her had flattened in a narrow trail, as if something had crossed the clearing on its hands and knees."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags8
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
87.50% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags8
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"Eva whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences16
tagDensity0.5
leniency1
rawRatio0.125
effectiveRatio0.125
86.1445%