Run: 2026-09-23-01M36NNKA8AXXV5SN3MAG31D8M

Run Details

Duration:
42.4s
Cost:
$0.001589
Provider:
OpenAI

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The green neon sign above The Raven’s Nest had turned the pavement the colour of old glass. Rain came down in fine, steady threads, catching in the collar of Aurora Carter’s coat as she slipped inside with a paper bag tucked under one arm. The bar held its usual low light. Old maps crowded the walls between black-and-white photographs: streets that no longer existed, men whose names Silas had never offered, a river crossed by a pencil line. Somewhere behind the counter, a glass touched wood. “Tell Yu-Fei the driver’s got the rest,” Silas called. “She knows. She sent me with this because you forgot your supper again.” Aurora set the bag on the counter. Silas stood behind it, his grey-streaked auburn hair combed back, his silver ring flashing as he reached for the handles. He had learnt to put his weight on the right leg when the left knee stiffened. Tonight the limp showed anyway. “Food as blackmail. A sound arrangement.” “You taught me.” He lifted the lid, checked its contents, then gave her a look over the rim of his glasses. “You’re soaked.” “I’m paid by the delivery, not the weather.” “Upstairs, then. Dry off before you turn into a cautionary tale.” Aurora glanced at the room. Three customers occupied the far end, heads bent over their drinks. A woman sat alone near the front window, her hands folded around a glass she hadn’t touched. Her dark hair was cut short at the nape, silver at the temples. A leather jacket lay over the chair beside her, its sleeves creased white at the seams. The woman looked up. Aurora stopped with one hand on the strap of her delivery bag. For a moment, the bar’s small sounds gathered around them: rain ticking at the glass, a tap running behind the counter, the faint scrape of Silas’s ring against the food container. Then the woman stood. “Rory.” Aurora had heard that voice in school corridors and on the phone after midnight, before either of them had learnt to measure what could be said. She had not heard it in eight years. “Eva.” Eva’s mouth moved as though she had meant to smile, then changed its mind. Up close, her face carried new lines around the eyes and a small pale mark beside her chin. Her old schoolgirl softness had left. In its place sat something precise, held in the set of her shoulders and the way she watched Aurora’s hands. “You cut your hair,” Aurora said. Eva glanced at it. “A while ago.” “And you went grey.” “Some of it.” Eva tipped her glass, though the whisky barely shifted. “You look the same.” “No, I don’t.” “No,” Eva agreed. “You don’t.” Silas slid the food bag aside. “Should I bring another glass?” “Water,” Aurora said. Eva’s fingers tightened around her own glass. “Still not drinking?” “Still not taking orders from people I haven’t seen since 2016.” Silas set a glass of water on the counter. “I’ll be in the back.” He limped towards the bookshelf at the rear of the bar, then paused before its spines. His glance passed over Aurora and Eva. He didn’t ask what the room had just become. Aurora took the stool opposite her old friend. “How did you find me?” “I didn’t.” Eva pushed her untouched whisky away. “I came in for a drink. You walked through the door.” “London’s full of bars.” “Apparently I picked the right one.” “That sounds like something you’d say when you didn’t want to answer.” Eva’s eyes dropped to the crescent scar on Aurora’s left wrist. It showed where her sleeve had ridden back. “I heard you were here.” “From whom?” “I don’t know. Someone who knows someone.” “Then you did find me.” “Not the way you think.” Aurora drank from the water. It tasted faintly of metal. “How have you been?” Eva gave a short laugh with no ease in it. “That’s a dangerous question.” “You asked for a drink. I’m asking for the story.” “I’ve been in Bristol. Then Manchester. Then back in Cardiff for a year. My mother’s house was too full of boxes, so I kept leaving it.” She rubbed her thumb along the rim of her glass. “I work for a housing charity now. Mostly legal referrals.” “Legal referrals.” “You used to correct my essays.” “I used to cross out every other sentence.” “You crossed out the sentences that made sense.” “They needed work.” “They needed you to stop pretending every problem had a clean answer.” Aurora’s mouth tightened. “I never pretended that.” Eva looked at her, and for a second the years fell away—not enough to make either of them younger, only enough to show the old argument beneath the new clothes. “You did,” Eva said. “You had an answer for everything. If I panicked, you made a list. If I got angry, you made a case. If I was scared, you told me what the evidence suggested.” “I was seventeen.” “So was I.” “You were the one who called me at two in the morning.” “I know.” “You were the one who told me to get out of Cardiff.” “I know.” “And when I got there, you were gone.” Eva closed her eyes. The bar’s green sign painted a shifting stripe across the window behind her. “I was in London,” she said. “You were supposed to be at the station.” “I know.” “I stood outside the ticket barrier with two bags and nowhere to go.” “I know.” “You’ve said that twice.” “I don’t have a better thing to say.” Aurora folded her hands on the counter. “You could start with why.” Eva leaned back. The chair gave a small wooden groan. “My dad had been taken into hospital. Mum was trying to keep the house together. I’d missed work. The landlord was calling. You rang me while I was sitting on the floor in the hallway with his blood on my sleeve.” Aurora didn’t move. “I told you I’d be there,” Eva continued. “Then I looked at the clock, and I knew I couldn’t leave. I thought I’d call you once I got him settled. I thought it would be an hour. It turned into the whole night, then the next morning. By then you’d gone.” “I waited until the train left.” “I know.” “I didn’t know where to sleep.” “I know.” “I didn’t know whether you were dead or just done with me.” Eva’s hand went to the pale mark beside her chin, then fell away. “I should’ve called.” “Not in the morning. Not a week later. Not a year later.” “No.” Aurora watched a droplet slide down the outside of her glass. “Why now?” “I saw your name on a list.” “What list?” “Your name turned up in a place I didn’t expect.” Eva’s gaze sharpened, briefly all business. “A woman I was helping in London had been given your number. She said you’d got her out of a bad situation without asking her to explain the parts she couldn’t say.” Aurora’s fingers went still against the glass. “She didn’t tell me anything else,” Eva said. “I wasn’t looking for you. I only recognised the name.” “Which woman?” “I can’t tell you that.” “Then why bring her up?” “Because I needed a reason to walk through the door.” “You could’ve just said you wanted to see me.” “I didn’t know if you did.” Aurora let out a breath through her nose. “You’ve had eight years to wonder.” “I spent most of them avoiding the question.” “Busy life.” “Busy enough to make cowardice look like work.” A couple near the door stood to leave. Their coats brushed against the table as they gathered themselves. Silas emerged from behind the bookcase, carrying a folded cloth. He wiped down the counter three stools away, giving them the privacy of a man who knew privacy had limits. Eva turned her glass in a slow circle. “I kept the postcard you sent.” Aurora’s eyebrows lifted. “I sent you one postcard.” “From Cardiff. The one with the bay on it.” “That wasn’t a postcard. It was a list of bus times.” “You wrote ‘I’m safe’ on the back.” “I was.” “I put it in my kitchen drawer. Took it with me when I moved.” Aurora looked at the leather jacket on the spare chair. “You moved a lot.” “More than I meant to.” “I thought you’d forget me.” “I tried.” “Did it work?” “No.” Aurora picked at a nick in the counter. “I wanted it to.” Eva’s face flinched, but she held Aurora’s gaze. “That’s fair.” “Don’t make it sound fair. It isn’t.” “Then what is it?” “It’s old. That’s all.” The words landed between them with the dull weight of something that had been carried too far to drop. Eva’s shoulders lowered. She looked older then, not from the grey at her temples but from the effort of keeping herself upright. “I’m sorry,” she said. Aurora turned the glass once, then stopped. “I know.” “That’s not the same as forgiving me.” “No.” “I’m not asking for that.” “Good.” Eva nodded. She didn’t reach across the counter. Aurora was grateful for that. Silas came over with a clean towel. “You’ve both left your drinks untouched.” “Her whisky’s untouched,” Aurora said. “My water’s doing its best.” “I can get you something else.” “Tea.” “At this hour?” “Especially at this hour.” Silas filled the kettle beneath the counter. His ring tapped the metal once. “And you?” Eva glanced at Aurora before answering. “Nothing.” Silas gave a quiet nod and left them with the hiss of the kettle. “You live upstairs?” Eva asked. “Above the bar.” “Of course you do.” “What does that mean?” “You always liked being near the exit.” Aurora looked towards the door. “You think that’s what this is?” “I think you were good at leaving before anyone else could.” “Some of us had reason.” “Yes.” Eva pressed her lips together. “You did.” Aurora’s gaze sharpened. “You know about Evan?” “I heard bits. Not from you.” “Who told you?” “Your mother.” Aurora looked away. A black-and-white photograph above the bar showed a row of men standing outside a building with no sign. She had seen it a hundred times and never asked Silas who they were. “Mum shouldn’t have told you.” “She was worried.” “She had no right.” “She said the same thing about herself.” Aurora’s jaw set. “You called my mother?” “Once. Last year.” “Why?” “To ask whether you were all right.” “And what did she say?” “That you were in London. That you had work. That you’d stopped answering her calls for a while, then started again.” “Quite the report.” “She didn’t give me your address.” “Good.” “I didn’t ask.” Aurora held Eva’s gaze. “You used to ask for everything.” “I used to think being your friend meant I had a right to the whole story.” “And now?” “Now I know I can stand here and not get it.” The kettle clicked off. Silas poured water into a mug and brought it over. A tea bag darkened the surface, turning the water the colour of old wood. Aurora wrapped her hands around the mug. “What changed?” Eva considered the question. “My father died. My mother sold the house. I moved to Manchester because I couldn’t stand the street where everyone knew what had happened and nobody knew what to do with it.” “You never told me he died.” “I thought you didn’t want to hear from me.” “I didn’t.” “I thought that meant I should leave you alone.” “It did.” “Then I thought that was what you wanted forever.” Aurora took a sip. The tea scalded her tongue. “And today?” “Today I walked into a bar and saw you.” “That’s not a plan.” “No. It isn’t.” They sat with the gap between them. The bar filled it with small noises: ice settling in a glass, rain tapping the sill, the muted clunk of a bottle set into the rack. Eva slid her glass farther away. “I’m not asking to be your friend again.” “You used to say that after every fight.” “I used to say a lot of things.” “You used to leave before I could answer.” “I know.” Aurora placed the mug down. “You can’t make eight years fit into one drink.” “I’m not asking you to.” “Good.” “I could call you sometime.” “You could.” “Would you answer?” “I don’t know.” Eva nodded, accepting the answer without trying to sand it smooth. Silas returned to the counter and set a small plate beside the food bag. “There’s bread in the kitchen. I’m cutting it before I forget.” “Is this a hint?” Aurora asked. “It’s bread.” She almost smiled. The expression caught at one corner of her mouth, then loosened. Eva saw it and didn’t claim it. Aurora lifted her coat from the stool. “I’ve got to take my bag upstairs.” “Of course.” “I’m not leaving because of you.” “I didn’t think you were.” “You always did think you knew what I meant.” “I’m working on that.” Aurora put on the coat, then adjusted the delivery strap on her shoulder. At the foot of the stairs, she turned back. “Don’t leave without saying goodbye.” Eva rose from her stool. “I won’t.” “Don’t promise things you can’t control.” “I can control that much.” Aurora held her eyes for another second. Then she climbed the narrow stairs, the mug of tea warming her hand and the rain still working at the windows behind her. Eva stayed by the counter. When Silas set a plate of bread within reach, she looked down at it. “Do you know if she’s coming back?” Silas wiped the counter, his silver ring catching the light. “She lives upstairs.”
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags17
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"Eva’s gaze sharpened briefly [briefly]"
dialogueSentences194
tagDensity0.088
leniency0.175
rawRatio0.059
effectiveRatio0.01
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount2289
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
95.63% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount2289
totalAiIsms2
found
0
word"weight"
count2
highlights
0"weight"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"let out a breath"
count1
highlights
0"let out a breath"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences120
matches
0"was grateful"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences120
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences297
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen43
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords2288
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions46
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
0.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions87
wordCount1098
uniqueNames6
maxNameDensity3.46
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity6.5
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Raven1
Nest1
Aurora38
Carter1
Silas15
Eva31
persons
0"Raven"
1"Nest"
2"Aurora"
3"Carter"
4"Silas"
5"Eva"
places(empty)
globalScore0
windowScore0
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences79
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.437
wordCount2288
matches
0"not from the grey at her temples but from the effort of keeping herself upright"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences297
matches
0"heard that voice"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs213
mean10.74
std11.49
cv1.069
sampleLengths
044
142
29
313
448
56
63
720
88
911
1062
114
1212
1331
144
151
1634
171
1858
196
207
214
2216
233
245
2511
263
2710
2811
2914
3032
3113
3219
334
346
3512
3624
372
387
395
405
4114
4214
4310
4446
452
466
478
488
493
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences120
matches
0"been carried"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs185
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount1
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences1
totalSentences297
ratio0.003
matches
0"Eva looked at her, and for a second the years fell away—not enough to make either of them younger, only enough to show the old argument beneath the new clothes."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1104
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount38
adverbRatio0.034420289855072464
lyAdverbCount4
lyAdverbRatio0.0036231884057971015
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences297
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences297
mean7.7
std6.64
cv0.862
sampleLengths
017
127
27
327
48
59
613
77
820
916
105
116
123
1318
142
158
1611
175
1811
1917
2013
2116
224
2312
2431
254
261
2726
288
291
3014
3118
326
3320
346
354
363
374
3812
394
403
413
422
436
445
453
467
473
4811
499
42.93% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats21
diversityRatio0.23905723905723905
totalSentences297
uniqueOpeners71
93.46% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount3
totalSentences107
matches
0"Somewhere behind the counter, a"
1"Then the woman stood."
2"Then she climbed the narrow"
ratio0.028
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount19
totalSentences107
matches
0"He had learnt to put"
1"He lifted the lid, checked"
2"Her dark hair was cut"
3"She had not heard it"
4"Her old schoolgirl softness had"
5"He limped towards the bookshelf"
6"His glance passed over Aurora"
7"He didn’t ask what the"
8"It showed where her sleeve"
9"It tasted faintly of metal."
10"She rubbed her thumb along"
11"Their coats brushed against the"
12"He wiped down the counter"
13"She looked older then, not"
14"She didn’t reach across the"
15"His ring tapped the metal"
16"She had seen it a"
17"They sat with the gap"
18"She almost smiled."
ratio0.178
6.73% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount97
totalSentences107
matches
0"The green neon sign above"
1"Rain came down in fine,"
2"The bar held its usual"
3"Aurora set the bag on"
4"Silas stood behind it, his"
5"He had learnt to put"
6"Tonight the limp showed anyway."
7"He lifted the lid, checked"
8"Aurora glanced at the room."
9"A woman sat alone near"
10"Her dark hair was cut"
11"A leather jacket lay over"
12"The woman looked up."
13"Aurora stopped with one hand"
14"Aurora had heard that voice"
15"She had not heard it"
16"Eva’s mouth moved as though"
17"Her old schoolgirl softness had"
18"Eva glanced at it."
19"Eva tipped her glass, though"
ratio0.907
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences107
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences42
technicalSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags17
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags13
fancyCount3
fancyTags
0"Eva agreed (agree)"
1"Eva continued (continue)"
2"Eva pressed (press)"
dialogueSentences194
tagDensity0.067
leniency0.134
rawRatio0.231
effectiveRatio0.031
87.9582%