Run: 2026-09-23-01M36NNZTZPZ5RQ5VHJFTBY0N8

Run Details

Duration:
42.7s
Cost:
$0.001474
Provider:
OpenAI

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The door opened six inches before Rory recognised him. Lucien stood in the corridor with rain on his charcoal shoulders and one hand wrapped around the ivory head of his cane. His platinum hair had lost its careful sweep. A dark stain spread beneath his left lapel. For a beat, neither of them moved. Then Rory gripped the edge of the door. “No.” “Good evening to you, too.” “You don’t get to turn up at my flat and borrow manners.” His eyes—one amber, one black—tracked her face. They paused at the small crescent scar on her wrist, bare where her sleeve had ridden up. His mouth tightened. “Someone followed me here.” “Then you’d better keep walking.” “They followed you as well.” Rory started to close the door. Lucien’s cane slid between the door and its frame. She stared down at it. “Take that out.” “Rory, look through the stairwell window.” “I’m not taking orders from you.” “Then call it a favour to yourself.” She let the door hang open. The narrow landing behind him lay empty, lit by a weak bulb that buzzed above the stairs. Through the glass at the far end, the street showed in fragments: a slick pavement, the orange glow of the curry house sign below, a parked car with its lights off. A man stood beside it, looking up at the building. Rory’s fingers tightened around the door. The man raised his head. Even at this distance, she saw him fix on her window. Lucien drew the cane back. “Let me in.” The old instinct—to ask what he knew, to weigh every word for the hidden blade—rose alongside the urge to keep staring at him. She hated both instincts. She hated that neither had weakened with time. “One minute,” she told him. “You always were generous.” “And you always mistook my patience for permission.” She stepped aside. Lucien crossed the threshold. Rory shut the door and slid the bolt into place, then the second. The third deadbolt belonged to Eva’s flat, not hers, but Rory’s own lock turned with a scrape that sounded too loud in the narrow hall. Lucien stood close enough for her to catch the clean scent of his cologne beneath the wet wool and blood. He looked down at her, and something passed across his face before he smoothed it away. “Don’t,” Rory warned. “I haven’t spoken.” “You looked.” “I’m allowed to look.” “Not anymore.” He held her gaze. “I know.” That answer struck harder than an argument would have. She turned toward the kitchen. “Sit down before you drip on the floor.” “I’m all right.” “Blood on your shirt says otherwise.” “It’s not mine.” “Then you can still sit down.” Lucien glanced at the front door, listening. Rory followed his gaze. The old building creaked under a gust of wind. Below them, the bar’s back door banged once, then Silas’s muffled voice rose in a curse. “You brought trouble to my home,” she said. “I didn’t know they had your address.” “You know every address worth knowing in London.” “I knew yours.” His jaw shifted. “I thought it was safe.” “You thought you could keep deciding what was safe for me.” He looked at her again. No polished excuse came. That was new. Rory opened the cupboard and took down the first-aid box. The flat seemed smaller with him in it. A dish towel hung from the oven handle; two delivery bags slumped by the door; her phone sat beside a stack of unpaid bills. She had built a life out of rooms that didn’t ask questions. Lucien’s presence turned every ordinary object into evidence of the months he had missed. “Sit,” she repeated. He lowered himself onto the kitchen chair. His cane rested against his knee. The stain on his shirt had spread toward the buttons. Rory put the box on the table and pulled out gauze, antiseptic, and scissors. “Shirt off.” One dark eyebrow lifted. “Don’t make this weird.” “I’m not the one giving orders.” She snipped through the damp fabric before he could answer. A shallow cut ran along his ribs, clean but angry at the edges. Rory kept her eyes on it. “What happened?” “An argument.” “With a knife?” “With someone who disliked my conclusion.” “Did you win?” “I’m here.” “That’s not an answer.” “It’s the one you’re getting.” Rory pressed gauze to the cut. Lucien’s fingers closed around the edge of the table. His breath caught, quiet and controlled. “Still dramatic,” she muttered. “Still pretending you don’t notice when I’m hurt.” “I notice the mess.” Her hand held the gauze in place. The back of her knuckles brushed his skin. She pulled away first and reached for the antiseptic. Lucien watched her unscrew the cap. “You should have called.” “I didn’t think you’d answer.” “Then you know me better now.” “I knew you before.” “No. You knew the parts I let you have.” His gaze dropped to the table. “I deserved that.” “You deserved worse.” She soaked the cotton. “You told me you’d give me the truth. Then you decided I couldn’t handle it, packed up your lies, and disappeared.” “I didn’t disappear.” “You stopped answering. You sent a message through a man who called me Laila, which isn’t even my name.” His mouth tightened. “I was trying to keep you out of it.” “You were keeping me out of my own life.” “I thought—” “Don’t tell me what you thought. I lived with the results.” He didn’t interrupt. Rory pressed the cotton to the cut. He flinched, and she eased her hand despite herself. “Tell me what the man outside wants.” “He works for people who have been asking questions about you.” “Why?” “Because of me.” “That’s convenient.” “It’s also true.” She taped gauze over his ribs. The work brought her close to his chest. Beneath the ruined shirt, his skin was warm. She could count the beats in his pulse where her fingers rested. For a moment, the months between them seemed to thin—not vanish, not forgive, only thin enough for memory to push through: his palm at her waist in a quiet bar, his voice in her ear in French, his mouth stopping just short of hers because she had asked him to wait. She pulled the tape tight. He let out a breath. “Sorry,” she said, without looking up. “You’re not.” “No.” The corner of his mouth moved, almost a smile. It disappeared when a footstep creaked on the stairs below. Rory took the scissors from the table. Lucien reached for his cane. “Don’t go near the door.” “I wasn’t.” The steps stopped on the landing beneath them. A knock sounded against the building’s street entrance. Rory’s eyes met his. “Silas will handle it,” she said. “Silas shouldn’t open the door.” “Why?” “Because the man outside isn’t alone.” The knock came again, three measured strikes. From downstairs, Silas called, “You expecting anyone, Rory?” She looked at Lucien. “Not anymore.” Lucien pushed himself upright. His hand went to the cane, but he didn’t move toward the hall. “Stay here,” Rory said. “I came here to keep them away from you.” “You came here because every other door was closed.” “That too.” The bluntness left no room for a neat reply. Rory set the scissors down. Her anger hadn’t gone anywhere; it sat between them, sharp and familiar. So did the other thing, the thing she’d spent months teaching herself not to reach for. The knock sounded a third time. Silas called her name again. Rory stepped close to Lucien and took his cane from his hand. “Tell me what you left out,” she whispered. His face changed. The fixer vanished; the man beneath him had no prepared answer. “Everything,” he said. “Start with what’s downstairs.” He looked at the door, then back at her. His bare hand lifted, paused beside her wrist, and waited. Rory held his gaze. “Start talking.”
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags13
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences85
tagDensity0.153
leniency0.306
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1323
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
84.88% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1323
totalAiIsms4
found
0
word"eyebrow"
count1
1
word"pulse"
count1
2
word"measured"
count1
3
word"familiar"
count1
highlights
0"eyebrow"
1"pulse"
2"measured"
3"familiar"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"let out a breath"
count1
highlights
0"let out a breath"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences107
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences107
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"started to"
1"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences179
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen52
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1318
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions22
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
45.60% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions37
wordCount910
uniqueNames5
maxNameDensity2.09
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Rory19
Eva1
Silas3
French1
Lucien13
persons
0"Rory"
1"Eva"
2"Silas"
3"Lucien"
places
0"French"
globalScore0.456
windowScore0.667
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences68
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"seemed smaller with him in it"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.759
wordCount1318
matches
0"not hers, but Rory’s own lock turned with a scrape"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences179
matches
0"hated that neither"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs124
mean10.63
std13.02
cv1.225
sampleLengths
09
138
27
38
41
55
612
727
84
95
105
1120
123
136
146
157
1654
1710
1822
195
203
2135
225
234
248
2545
2636
273
283
292
304
312
326
3314
348
353
366
373
386
3936
408
417
428
4311
4411
4512
4668
473
4823
4914
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences107
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs157
matches(empty)
47.09% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount5
semicolonCount4
flaggedSentences6
totalSentences179
ratio0.034
matches
0"His eyes—one amber, one black—tracked her face."
1"The old instinct—to ask what he knew, to weigh every word for the hidden blade—rose alongside the urge to keep staring at him."
2"A dish towel hung from the oven handle; two delivery bags slumped by the door; her phone sat beside a stack of unpaid bills."
3"For a moment, the months between them seemed to thin—not vanish, not forgive, only thin enough for memory to push through: his palm at her waist in a quiet bar, his voice in her ear in French, his mouth stopping just short of hers because she had asked him to wait."
4"Her anger hadn’t gone anywhere; it sat between them, sharp and familiar."
5"The fixer vanished; the man beneath him had no prepared answer."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount916
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount24
adverbRatio0.026200873362445413
lyAdverbCount2
lyAdverbRatio0.002183406113537118
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences179
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences179
mean7.36
std5.87
cv0.798
sampleLengths
09
122
28
38
47
58
61
75
812
97
1017
113
124
135
145
156
169
175
183
196
206
217
226
2317
2431
2510
266
275
2811
295
303
3123
324
338
345
354
368
373
384
3913
4025
4120
4216
433
443
452
464
472
484
492
46.65% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats6
diversityRatio0.2569832402234637
totalSentences179
uniqueOpeners46
33.67% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences99
matches
0"Then Rory gripped the edge"
ratio0.01
62.42% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount39
totalSentences99
matches
0"His platinum hair had lost"
1"His eyes—one amber, one black—tracked"
2"They paused at the small"
3"His mouth tightened."
4"She stared down at it."
5"She let the door hang"
6"She hated both instincts."
7"She hated that neither had"
8"she told him"
9"She stepped aside."
10"He looked down at her,"
11"He held her gaze."
12"She turned toward the kitchen."
13"His jaw shifted"
14"He looked at her again."
15"She had built a life"
16"He lowered himself onto the"
17"His cane rested against his"
18"She snipped through the damp"
19"His breath caught, quiet and"
ratio0.394
15.56% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount88
totalSentences99
matches
0"The door opened six inches"
1"Lucien stood in the corridor"
2"His platinum hair had lost"
3"A dark stain spread beneath"
4"His eyes—one amber, one black—tracked"
5"They paused at the small"
6"His mouth tightened."
7"Rory started to close the"
8"Lucien’s cane slid between the"
9"She stared down at it."
10"She let the door hang"
11"The narrow landing behind him"
12"A man stood beside it,"
13"Rory’s fingers tightened around the"
14"The man raised his head."
15"Lucien drew the cane back."
16"The old instinct—to ask what"
17"She hated both instincts."
18"She hated that neither had"
19"she told him"
ratio0.889
50.51% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences99
matches
0"Even at this distance, she"
ratio0.01
93.60% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences29
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"The narrow landing behind him lay empty, lit by a weak bulb that buzzed above the stairs."
1"The third deadbolt belonged to Eva’s flat, not hers, but Rory’s own lock turned with a scrape that sounded too loud in the narrow hall."
86.54% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags13
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"she said, without looking up"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags11
fancyCount4
fancyTags
0"Rory warned (warn)"
1"she repeated (repeat)"
2"she muttered (mutter)"
3"she whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences85
tagDensity0.129
leniency0.259
rawRatio0.364
effectiveRatio0.094
85.5504%