| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 13 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 85 | | tagDensity | 0.153 | | leniency | 0.306 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1323 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 84.88% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1323 | | totalAiIsms | 4 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "eyebrow" | | 1 | "pulse" | | 2 | "measured" | | 3 | "familiar" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "let out a breath" | | count | 1 |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 107 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 2 | | narrationSentences | 107 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | 0 | "started to" | | 1 | "seemed to" |
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| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 179 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 52 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1318 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 22 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 45.60% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 37 | | wordCount | 910 | | uniqueNames | 5 | | maxNameDensity | 2.09 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 3 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Rory | 19 | | Eva | 1 | | Silas | 3 | | French | 1 | | Lucien | 13 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Rory" | | 1 | "Eva" | | 2 | "Silas" | | 3 | "Lucien" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 0.456 | | windowScore | 0.667 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 68 | | glossingSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "seemed smaller with him in it" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.759 | | wordCount | 1318 | | matches | | 0 | "not hers, but Rory’s own lock turned with a scrape" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 179 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 124 | | mean | 10.63 | | std | 13.02 | | cv | 1.225 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 9 | | 1 | 38 | | 2 | 7 | | 3 | 8 | | 4 | 1 | | 5 | 5 | | 6 | 12 | | 7 | 27 | | 8 | 4 | | 9 | 5 | | 10 | 5 | | 11 | 20 | | 12 | 3 | | 13 | 6 | | 14 | 6 | | 15 | 7 | | 16 | 54 | | 17 | 10 | | 18 | 22 | | 19 | 5 | | 20 | 3 | | 21 | 35 | | 22 | 5 | | 23 | 4 | | 24 | 8 | | 25 | 45 | | 26 | 36 | | 27 | 3 | | 28 | 3 | | 29 | 2 | | 30 | 4 | | 31 | 2 | | 32 | 6 | | 33 | 14 | | 34 | 8 | | 35 | 3 | | 36 | 6 | | 37 | 3 | | 38 | 6 | | 39 | 36 | | 40 | 8 | | 41 | 7 | | 42 | 8 | | 43 | 11 | | 44 | 11 | | 45 | 12 | | 46 | 68 | | 47 | 3 | | 48 | 23 | | 49 | 14 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 107 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 157 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 47.09% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 5 | | semicolonCount | 4 | | flaggedSentences | 6 | | totalSentences | 179 | | ratio | 0.034 | | matches | | 0 | "His eyes—one amber, one black—tracked her face." | | 1 | "The old instinct—to ask what he knew, to weigh every word for the hidden blade—rose alongside the urge to keep staring at him." | | 2 | "A dish towel hung from the oven handle; two delivery bags slumped by the door; her phone sat beside a stack of unpaid bills." | | 3 | "For a moment, the months between them seemed to thin—not vanish, not forgive, only thin enough for memory to push through: his palm at her waist in a quiet bar, his voice in her ear in French, his mouth stopping just short of hers because she had asked him to wait." | | 4 | "Her anger hadn’t gone anywhere; it sat between them, sharp and familiar." | | 5 | "The fixer vanished; the man beneath him had no prepared answer." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 916 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 24 | | adverbRatio | 0.026200873362445413 | | lyAdverbCount | 2 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.002183406113537118 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 179 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 179 | | mean | 7.36 | | std | 5.87 | | cv | 0.798 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 9 | | 1 | 22 | | 2 | 8 | | 3 | 8 | | 4 | 7 | | 5 | 8 | | 6 | 1 | | 7 | 5 | | 8 | 12 | | 9 | 7 | | 10 | 17 | | 11 | 3 | | 12 | 4 | | 13 | 5 | | 14 | 5 | | 15 | 6 | | 16 | 9 | | 17 | 5 | | 18 | 3 | | 19 | 6 | | 20 | 6 | | 21 | 7 | | 22 | 6 | | 23 | 17 | | 24 | 31 | | 25 | 10 | | 26 | 6 | | 27 | 5 | | 28 | 11 | | 29 | 5 | | 30 | 3 | | 31 | 23 | | 32 | 4 | | 33 | 8 | | 34 | 5 | | 35 | 4 | | 36 | 8 | | 37 | 3 | | 38 | 4 | | 39 | 13 | | 40 | 25 | | 41 | 20 | | 42 | 16 | | 43 | 3 | | 44 | 3 | | 45 | 2 | | 46 | 4 | | 47 | 2 | | 48 | 4 | | 49 | 2 |
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| 46.65% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 6 | | diversityRatio | 0.2569832402234637 | | totalSentences | 179 | | uniqueOpeners | 46 | |
| 33.67% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 99 | | matches | | 0 | "Then Rory gripped the edge" |
| | ratio | 0.01 | |
| 62.42% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 39 | | totalSentences | 99 | | matches | | 0 | "His platinum hair had lost" | | 1 | "His eyes—one amber, one black—tracked" | | 2 | "They paused at the small" | | 3 | "His mouth tightened." | | 4 | "She stared down at it." | | 5 | "She let the door hang" | | 6 | "She hated both instincts." | | 7 | "She hated that neither had" | | 8 | "she told him" | | 9 | "She stepped aside." | | 10 | "He looked down at her," | | 11 | "He held her gaze." | | 12 | "She turned toward the kitchen." | | 13 | "His jaw shifted" | | 14 | "He looked at her again." | | 15 | "She had built a life" | | 16 | "He lowered himself onto the" | | 17 | "His cane rested against his" | | 18 | "She snipped through the damp" | | 19 | "His breath caught, quiet and" |
| | ratio | 0.394 | |
| 15.56% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 88 | | totalSentences | 99 | | matches | | 0 | "The door opened six inches" | | 1 | "Lucien stood in the corridor" | | 2 | "His platinum hair had lost" | | 3 | "A dark stain spread beneath" | | 4 | "His eyes—one amber, one black—tracked" | | 5 | "They paused at the small" | | 6 | "His mouth tightened." | | 7 | "Rory started to close the" | | 8 | "Lucien’s cane slid between the" | | 9 | "She stared down at it." | | 10 | "She let the door hang" | | 11 | "The narrow landing behind him" | | 12 | "A man stood beside it," | | 13 | "Rory’s fingers tightened around the" | | 14 | "The man raised his head." | | 15 | "Lucien drew the cane back." | | 16 | "The old instinct—to ask what" | | 17 | "She hated both instincts." | | 18 | "She hated that neither had" | | 19 | "she told him" |
| | ratio | 0.889 | |
| 50.51% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 99 | | matches | | 0 | "Even at this distance, she" |
| | ratio | 0.01 | |
| 93.60% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 29 | | technicalSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "The narrow landing behind him lay empty, lit by a weak bulb that buzzed above the stairs." | | 1 | "The third deadbolt belonged to Eva’s flat, not hers, but Rory’s own lock turned with a scrape that sounded too loud in the narrow hall." |
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| 86.54% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 13 | | uselessAdditionCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "she said, without looking up" |
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| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 11 | | fancyCount | 4 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Rory warned (warn)" | | 1 | "she repeated (repeat)" | | 2 | "she muttered (mutter)" | | 3 | "she whispered (whisper)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 85 | | tagDensity | 0.129 | | leniency | 0.259 | | rawRatio | 0.364 | | effectiveRatio | 0.094 | |