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Run: 2026-09-23-01M36NQAWFHSN5NMXD9VNFZ1FW
Run Details
Model:
GPT-6 Luna
Test:
Bad Writing Habits
Scenario:
Romance: separated couple reunites
Duration:
26.5s
Cost:
$0.001685
Provider:
OpenAI
Evaluation summary
Score
Evaluator
Details Link
100.00%
Adverbs in dialogue tags
(details)
100.00%
AI-ism adverb frequency
(details)
100.00%
AI-ism character names
(details)
100.00%
AI-ism location names
(details)
82.91%
AI-ism word frequency
(details)
100.00%
Cliché density
(details)
100.00%
Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
(details)
100.00%
Filter word density
(details)
100.00%
Gibberish response detection
(details)
100.00%
Markdown formatting overuse
(details)
100.00%
Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
(details)
23.63%
Name drop frequency
(details)
100.00%
Narrator intent-glossing
(details)
100.00%
"Not X but Y" pattern overuse
(details)
100.00%
Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
(details)
100.00%
Paragraph length variance
(details)
100.00%
Passive voice overuse
(details)
100.00%
Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
(details)
100.00%
Em-dash & semicolon overuse
(details)
100.00%
Purple prose (modifier overload)
(details)
100.00%
Repeated phrase echo
(details)
100.00%
Sentence length variance
(details)
47.69%
Sentence opener variety
(details)
49.38%
Adverb-first sentence starts
(details)
100.00%
Pronoun-first sentence starts
(details)
0.00%
Subject-first sentence starts
(details)
0.00%
Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
(details)
100.00%
Technical jargon density
(details)
100.00%
Useless dialogue additions
(details)
100.00%
Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
(details)
86.7871%
Overall
Model input
System
You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Romance genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>
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The door struck the chain
with a sharp metallic snap.
Aurora Carter froze with one
hand on the knob. Through the narrow gap, Lucien Moreau’s amber eye caught the light.
His black one stayed fixed
on her face. “Take the chain off.” “You’ve got a gift for making an entrance.” “Rory.”
He said her name as
if the years between them were a matter of poor manners she could correct. Behind her, Ptolemy knocked a book from the table.
It hit the floor with
a thump. Lucien glanced past her shoulder, taking in the crowded flat, the cat, the scrolls, the three deadbolts she had thrown before the chain. “You live here now?” “I live wherever I can lock the door.” His mouth tightened. “Then you should let me in.” “Give me one good reason.” “Someone followed me.” “That’s your reason for coming here?” “It’s the reason I didn’t go home.”
The words slipped through the
gap with him.
Rory studied the corridor behind
his shoulder. Empty.
The old stairwell smelled of
curry, damp plaster and the neighbour’s incense.
Lucien held his ivory-handled cane
in one gloved hand.
A dark stain marked the
cuff of his charcoal coat. Not blood, she hoped. She shut the door. The chain scraped free.
She opened it again and
stepped aside, keeping her hand close to the kitchen knife tucked in her waistband. Lucien entered without touching her.
His coat brought in the
cold, clean scent of rain and expensive soap. Ptolemy hissed from the table. “Your hospitality has improved,” Lucien said. “Your survival instincts haven’t.”
He turned, and she threw
the deadbolts one by one.
The clicks sounded too small
for the comfort they
were meant
to offer. “What happened to your sleeve?” “Nothing that concerns you.” “Good. I was hoping you’d come by for the charming conversation.”
His gaze flicked to the
knife’s handle. “You still carry one.” “You still notice.” “I notice everything about you.” “Then you noticed I don’t want you here.” Lucien lowered his cane, resting both hands on its ivory handle. The weapon inside it could slice through a throat.
She knew because she had
watched him draw the blade once, years ago, with the calm of a man choosing a pen. “I need your help.” “That’s unfortunate.” “Rory, listen.” “No. You don’t get to appear at my door after all this time and tell me what I get to do.” His jaw shifted. “I’m not asking you to forgive me.” “Excellent. That saves us both the trouble.”
He looked past her towards
the books and loose pages that covered every surface. Eva’s research had spread across the flat like a paper disease. A sketch of a black circle sat pinned to the wall, its centre marked with a cross. Lucien’s expression changed. “Where did you get that?” “Eva drew it.” “Has she been here?” “Not since yesterday. Why?” He moved towards the sketch. Rory stepped between him and the wall. “Don’t.” “It’s a summoning mark.” “I know.” “No, you don’t.”
He reached into his inner
pocket, then paused when she lifted the knife. “I’m not drawing a weapon.” “You came armed.” “I always come armed.” “Not a defence.” “Never claimed it was.” Something in his voice scraped against her patience. Familiar, polished, infuriating. The same tone he had used the last time they stood this close, when he’d told her the truth in pieces and expected her to be grateful for each one.
She gripped the knife until
the handle bit her palm. “Why are you here?” Lucien’s eyes held hers. “The people who followed me want the mark.” “Then give it to them.” “They want the person who made it.” “Eva?” “They believe she opened a door.” Rory glanced at the drawing. The black circle looked harmless in charcoal. A child’s doodle.
She remembered Eva hunched over
the kitchen table, refusing to eat, her fingers smudged with ink. “Opened it to where?” “Avaros.” Ptolemy sprang from the table and darted beneath the sofa. Lucien watched the cat go. “You brought demons to my door.” “I brought a warning.” “Those are often the same thing.” A bang shook the front door. Rory swung the knife towards it. Lucien stepped in front of her. She shoved his shoulder. “Move.” “Stay behind me.” “Not a chance.” Another bang. The door shuddered in its frame. A voice drifted through the wood, low and wet. “Moreau.” Lucien’s gloved fingers tightened on his cane. Rory’s
stomach
drew tight. “Friend of yours?” “Not anymore.” “Names would help.” “Veyr.” The voice outside laughed. “You can’t keep her from us.” Lucien’s face emptied. Whatever
warmth
had lingered in his eyes vanished. “Are they here for Eva?” “They’re here for the mark. And you.” “Why me?” “Because I took something from them.” “What?” “The name of the demon who sent them.” Rory gave a short, sharp laugh. “You stole a name and came to my flat?” “I came because you’re the only person I trust to see a trap before stepping in it.” “Trust.”
She tasted the word like
something gone off. “You left me alone with a dead man and a police report that made me look insane.” “I know.” “You knew what would happen.” “I knew less than I should have.” “You knew enough to vanish.”
His gaze dropped to her
wrist. The small crescent scar showed below her sleeve, pale against her skin. He had kissed it once, then pressed his mouth to her palm as if he could make the old pain disappear. “Rory,” he said. “No.” The door groaned. The deadbolts held, but the frame cracked around the top hinge. Lucien pulled the blade from his cane. Steel whispered free. “Where’s the back exit?” “Kitchen window.” “Ground floor?” “Third.” “Of course.” “You can jump.” “I can fall with style.” The wood split beside the lock. A thin black line appeared in the gap, then widened, though no hand touched the door. The hall beyond
seemed to
breathe. Rory backed towards the kitchen. Lucien matched her pace, keeping his body between her and the entrance. “Tell me what you took,” she said. “The demon’s true name.” “That’s all?” “That is never all.” A blade punched through the door. The tip scraped across the inside, searching for the lock. Rory seized a stack of Eva’s papers and threw them at Lucien. He caught them, startled. “Read the symbols on the back.” He turned the pages. “These are in reverse Greek.” “They’re not. They’re Welsh phonetics written backwards. Eva used them to hide the translation.” His amber eye lifted. “You’ve read it?” “I read everything in this flat. It’s what happens when you live above a bar and your friend keeps vanishing.” The door buckled. The blade withdrew. Lucien
scanned
the page, lips moving soundlessly. “This isn’t a summoning mark.” “What is it?” “A seal.” The front door burst inward. A man in a dark coat filled the doorway. His face looked almost human, except for the skin stretched too tight over his cheekbones and the small, shining teeth behind his smile. Lucien lunged. Steel struck steel. The impact rang through the flat. Rory ducked as the stranger swung a hooked blade at Lucien’s ribs. Lucien caught the blow on his cane, twisted, and drove his knee into the man’s
stomach
. The stranger hardly moved. Rory snatched a heavy brass candleholder from the shelf and brought it down on the back of his head. The impact jolted her arms. The creature turned towards her, smiling wider. Lucien caught its wrist. “Run.” “Not without you.” “Rory.” “Get used to disappointing me.” She slashed the creature’s forearm. The knife opened its sleeve and scored something dark beneath, a substance that steamed against the blade. It shrieked. Lucien used the moment to wrench its arm behind its back and drive his hidden blade under its jaw. The thing collapsed, dragging him down with it. A second shape pushed through the doorway. Rory grabbed Lucien’s lapel and hauled him towards the kitchen. He came with her, stumbling once, blood darkening his collar. “Window,” he said. “I know where my window is.” She shoved aside a stack of books and wrenched the sash up. The alley below waited three floors down, narrow and cluttered with bins. A fire escape ladder hung beyond reach. Lucien looked at the papers still clutched in his hand. “What does the seal do?” “Closes the door.” “Which door?” The second intruder stepped over the body. Its eyes fixed on the sketch pinned to the wall. The paper
began to
burn from the centre. Rory understood. “The door they opened.” Lucien’s gaze snapped to hers. “Where?” “Eva’s flat.” “She’s there?” “No. But if the seal burns, the door opens wider.” The intruder raised its weapon. Lucien shoved Rory aside. The blade cut across his shoulder, tearing cloth and skin. She struck the creature’s wrist with the candleholder. Its weapon clattered to the floor. Lucien drove his blade into its chest, and Rory seized the fallen weapon. “Tell me what to do with this.” “Don’t let it touch the mark.” “Helpful.” The burning sketch curled inward. A sound came from the wall behind it, a deep, grinding knock. Once. Twice.
Then something on the other
side knocked back. Lucien caught Rory’s face between his hands. His palms were warm, his grip too careful for a man with blood on his shirt. “Get Eva. Find the original seal. Do not let her draw another.” “You come with me.” “I’ll hold them here.” “Not happening.” “Rory, if that door opens, London won’t survive the night.” The wall cracked. Black light seeped through. She pressed the tip of her knife to his chest, just above his heart. “If you vanish again, Lucien, I’ll find a way to kill you.” His mouth lifted, barely. “I’d expect nothing less.” The wall burst open. A hand reached through, long-fingered and crowned with bone. It seized Lucien by the throat and dragged him backwards. Rory caught his wrist. The creature’s grip tightened. Lucien’s blade fell from his hand. “Rory, let go.” She planted her boots against the kitchen tiles and pulled. The black light swallowed his arm, then his shoulder. “I said let go.” “And I heard you.” His free hand closed around hers. For one raw second, the old heat came back between them, tangled with his blood and her anger.
Then the thing in the
wall pulled harder. Lucien’s fingers slipped through hers. The bone-crowned hand closed around his throat, and his boots left the floor.
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Evaluation details
Result
Evaluator
Details
Meta Data
100.00%
Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags
6
adverbTagCount
0
adverbTags
(empty)
dialogueSentences
120
tagDensity
0.05
leniency
0.1
rawRatio
0
effectiveRatio
0
100.00%
AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount
1755
totalAiIsmAdverbs
0
found
(empty)
highlights
(empty)
100.00%
AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
100.00%
AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
82.91%
AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount
1755
totalAiIsms
6
found
0
word
"flicked"
count
1
1
word
"familiar"
count
1
2
word
"stomach"
count
2
3
word
"warmth"
count
1
4
word
"scanned"
count
1
highlights
0
"flicked"
1
"familiar"
2
"stomach"
3
"warmth"
4
"scanned"
100.00%
Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches
0
maxInWindow
0
found
(empty)
highlights
(empty)
100.00%
Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells
0
narrationSentences
146
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount
0
hedgeCount
2
narrationSentences
146
filterMatches
(empty)
hedgeMatches
0
"seemed to"
1
"began to"
100.00%
Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences
260
gibberishSentences
0
adjustedGibberishSentences
0
longSentenceCount
0
runOnParagraphCount
0
giantParagraphCount
0
wordSaladCount
0
repetitionLoopCount
0
controlTokenCount
0
repeatedSegmentCount
0
maxSentenceWordsSeen
30
ratio
0
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans
0
markdownWords
0
totalWords
1755
ratio
0
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions
11
unquotedAttributions
0
matches
(empty)
23.63%
Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions
54
wordCount
1187
uniqueNames
6
maxNameDensity
2.53
worstName
"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity
3.5
worstWindowName
"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Carter
1
Lucien
30
Moreau
1
Ptolemy
3
Eva
3
Rory
16
persons
0
"Carter"
1
"Lucien"
2
"Moreau"
3
"Ptolemy"
4
"Eva"
5
"Rory"
places
(empty)
globalScore
0.236
windowScore
0.5
100.00%
Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences
92
glossingSentenceCount
0
matches
(empty)
100.00%
"Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches
0
per1kWords
0
wordCount
1755
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount
0
totalSentences
260
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs
182
mean
9.64
std
9.82
cv
1.019
sampleLengths
0
10
1
28
2
4
3
8
4
1
5
19
6
39
7
4
8
8
9
9
10
5
11
3
12
6
13
7
14
47
15
4
16
4
17
23
18
23
19
6
20
4
21
23
22
5
23
4
24
11
25
11
26
3
27
5
28
8
29
42
30
4
31
2
32
2
33
21
34
10
35
7
36
42
37
3
38
5
39
3
40
4
41
4
42
12
43
1
44
4
45
2
46
21
47
3
48
4
49
3
100.00%
Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount
1
totalSentences
146
matches
0
"were meant"
100.00%
Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount
0
totalVerbs
206
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount
0
semicolonCount
0
flaggedSentences
0
totalSentences
260
ratio
0
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount
1190
adjectiveStacks
0
stackExamples
(empty)
adverbCount
32
adverbRatio
0.02689075630252101
lyAdverbCount
3
lyAdverbRatio
0.0025210084033613447
100.00%
Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences
260
echoCount
0
echoWords
(empty)
100.00%
Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences
260
mean
6.75
std
4.87
cv
0.722
sampleLengths
0
10
1
9
2
11
3
8
4
4
5
8
6
1
7
19
8
9
9
7
10
23
11
4
12
8
13
3
14
6
15
5
16
3
17
6
18
7
19
8
20
7
21
1
22
12
23
9
24
10
25
4
26
4
27
4
28
19
29
5
30
13
31
5
32
6
33
4
34
10
35
13
36
5
37
4
38
11
39
7
40
4
41
3
42
5
43
8
44
11
45
9
46
22
47
4
48
2
49
2
47.69%
Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats
6
diversityRatio
0.27692307692307694
totalSentences
260
uniqueOpeners
72
49.38%
Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount
2
totalSentences
135
matches
0
"Then something on the other"
1
"Then the thing in the"
ratio
0.015
100.00%
Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount
36
totalSentences
135
matches
0
"His black one stayed fixed"
1
"He said her name as"
2
"It hit the floor with"
3
"His mouth tightened."
4
"She shut the door."
5
"She opened it again and"
6
"His coat brought in the"
7
"He turned, and she threw"
8
"His gaze flicked to the"
9
"She knew because she had"
10
"His jaw shifted."
11
"He looked past her towards"
12
"He moved towards the sketch."
13
"He reached into his inner"
14
"She gripped the knife until"
15
"She remembered Eva hunched over"
16
"She shoved his shoulder."
17
"She tasted the word like"
18
"His gaze dropped to her"
19
"He had kissed it once,"
ratio
0.267
0.00%
Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount
127
totalSentences
135
matches
0
"The door struck the chain"
1
"Aurora Carter froze with one"
2
"His black one stayed fixed"
3
"He said her name as"
4
"It hit the floor with"
5
"Lucien glanced past her shoulder,"
6
"His mouth tightened."
7
"The words slipped through the"
8
"Rory studied the corridor behind"
9
"The old stairwell smelled of"
10
"Lucien held his ivory-handled cane"
11
"A dark stain marked the"
12
"She shut the door."
13
"The chain scraped free."
14
"She opened it again and"
15
"Lucien entered without touching her."
16
"His coat brought in the"
17
"Ptolemy hissed from the table."
18
"He turned, and she threw"
19
"The clicks sounded too small"
ratio
0.941
0.00%
Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount
0
totalSentences
135
matches
(empty)
ratio
0
100.00%
Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences
49
technicalSentenceCount
1
matches
0
"He said her name as if the years between them were a matter of poor manners she could correct."
100.00%
Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags
6
uselessAdditionCount
0
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags
4
fancyCount
0
fancyTags
(empty)
dialogueSentences
120
tagDensity
0.033
leniency
0.067
rawRatio
0
effectiveRatio
0
86.7871%