| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 6 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 96 | | tagDensity | 0.063 | | leniency | 0.125 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 97.08% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1711 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 1 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 79.54% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1711 | | totalAiIsms | 7 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "silence" | | 1 | "weight" | | 2 | "pulse" | | 3 | "footsteps" | | 4 | "warmth" | | 5 | "trembled" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 127 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 127 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 217 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 38 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1711 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 25 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 66.90% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 36 | | wordCount | 1083 | | uniqueNames | 6 | | maxNameDensity | 1.66 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2.5 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Lucien | 13 | | Moreau | 1 | | Silas | 2 | | Brick | 1 | | Lane | 1 | | Rory | 18 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Lucien" | | 1 | "Moreau" | | 2 | "Silas" | | 3 | "Rory" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 0.669 | | windowScore | 0.833 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 87 | | glossingSentenceCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 83.11% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 2 | | per1kWords | 1.169 | | wordCount | 1711 | | matches | | 0 | "not hard, but fast" | | 1 | "no longer empty but" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 217 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 142 | | mean | 12.05 | | std | 11.14 | | cv | 0.925 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 15 | | 1 | 25 | | 2 | 9 | | 3 | 22 | | 4 | 7 | | 5 | 2 | | 6 | 4 | | 7 | 9 | | 8 | 10 | | 9 | 29 | | 10 | 3 | | 11 | 43 | | 12 | 15 | | 13 | 7 | | 14 | 2 | | 15 | 2 | | 16 | 25 | | 17 | 5 | | 18 | 19 | | 19 | 3 | | 20 | 5 | | 21 | 11 | | 22 | 21 | | 23 | 3 | | 24 | 28 | | 25 | 5 | | 26 | 22 | | 27 | 3 | | 28 | 3 | | 29 | 3 | | 30 | 3 | | 31 | 3 | | 32 | 11 | | 33 | 4 | | 34 | 11 | | 35 | 23 | | 36 | 1 | | 37 | 2 | | 38 | 37 | | 39 | 6 | | 40 | 4 | | 41 | 11 | | 42 | 4 | | 43 | 30 | | 44 | 2 | | 45 | 3 | | 46 | 2 | | 47 | 7 | | 48 | 42 | | 49 | 7 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 127 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 188 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 0 | | semicolonCount | 2 | | flaggedSentences | 2 | | totalSentences | 217 | | ratio | 0.009 | | matches | | 0 | "The man outside shifted his weight; the floorboards answered with a low creak." | | 1 | "The amber eye caught the lamplight; the black one gave none back." |
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| 94.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1087 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "other against warm skin." |
| | adverbCount | 31 | | adverbRatio | 0.028518859245630176 | | lyAdverbCount | 2 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.0018399264029438822 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 217 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 217 | | mean | 7.88 | | std | 5.34 | | cv | 0.678 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 15 | | 1 | 7 | | 2 | 18 | | 3 | 9 | | 4 | 14 | | 5 | 8 | | 6 | 7 | | 7 | 2 | | 8 | 4 | | 9 | 9 | | 10 | 10 | | 11 | 7 | | 12 | 4 | | 13 | 18 | | 14 | 3 | | 15 | 5 | | 16 | 8 | | 17 | 19 | | 18 | 2 | | 19 | 9 | | 20 | 15 | | 21 | 7 | | 22 | 2 | | 23 | 2 | | 24 | 12 | | 25 | 13 | | 26 | 5 | | 27 | 4 | | 28 | 15 | | 29 | 3 | | 30 | 5 | | 31 | 11 | | 32 | 21 | | 33 | 3 | | 34 | 3 | | 35 | 7 | | 36 | 8 | | 37 | 10 | | 38 | 5 | | 39 | 22 | | 40 | 3 | | 41 | 3 | | 42 | 3 | | 43 | 3 | | 44 | 3 | | 45 | 11 | | 46 | 4 | | 47 | 11 | | 48 | 5 | | 49 | 8 |
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| 47.24% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 6 | | diversityRatio | 0.25806451612903225 | | totalSentences | 217 | | uniqueOpeners | 56 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 117 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 42.22% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 52 | | totalSentences | 117 | | matches | | 0 | "Her other hand curled around" | | 1 | "His eyes moved over her" | | 2 | "He stepped across the threshold." | | 3 | "They made the silence in" | | 4 | "He lowered himself onto the" | | 5 | "He obeyed without comment." | | 6 | "She hated that her body" | | 7 | "Her gaze sharpened." | | 8 | "She reached for his coat." | | 9 | "He caught her wrist, not" | | 10 | "His fingers settled above the" | | 11 | "They both went still." | | 12 | "He released her at once." | | 13 | "She pulled the coat from" | | 14 | "She set it on the" | | 15 | "She saw no one on" | | 16 | "His breath brushed her temple." | | 17 | "She pressed her palm over" | | 18 | "His gaze met hers." | | 19 | "She felt his pulse against" |
| | ratio | 0.444 | |
| 0.00% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 110 | | totalSentences | 117 | | matches | | 0 | "The door opened, and Lucien" | | 1 | "Rory kept one hand on" | | 2 | "Her other hand curled around" | | 3 | "His eyes moved over her" | | 4 | "A thud rose from the" | | 5 | "Rory looked past him." | | 6 | "Lucien’s cane angled towards the" | | 7 | "He stepped across the threshold." | | 8 | "Rory shut the door and" | | 9 | "The bar downstairs kept its" | | 10 | "They made the silence in" | | 11 | "Lucien leaned one shoulder against" | | 12 | "He lowered himself onto the" | | 13 | "Rory took the kitchen towel" | | 14 | "He obeyed without comment." | | 15 | "The towel came away with" | | 16 | "Lucien’s mouth shifted." | | 17 | "The old near-smile, careful at" | | 18 | "Rory knew how it felt" | | 19 | "She hated that her body" |
| | ratio | 0.94 | |
| 42.74% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 117 | | matches | | 0 | "Now they moved with the" |
| | ratio | 0.009 | |
| 100.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 39 | | technicalSentenceCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 6 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 5 | | fancyCount | 1 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "she whispered (whisper)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 96 | | tagDensity | 0.052 | | leniency | 0.104 | | rawRatio | 0.2 | | effectiveRatio | 0.021 | |