Run: 2026-09-23-01M36NRAA3B1VV47P23WWE98KR

Run Details

Duration:
1m 13s
Cost:
$0.002330
Provider:
OpenAI

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The door opened, and Lucien Moreau stood on the landing with blood on his cuff. Rory kept one hand on the latch. Her other hand curled around the edge of the door, thumb brushing the crescent scar on her wrist. “You have three seconds to explain why you’re here.” His eyes moved over her face, then stopped at the hand on the latch. One amber, one black, both shadowed with fatigue. “Someone put a price on your name.” “Two seconds.” “I refused the job.” “And came here to tell me that in person?” “I came because the man who offered it followed me.” A thud rose from the stairwell below. Rory looked past him. Lucien’s cane angled towards the landing, its ivory handle clean despite the dark stain spreading along his sleeve. “Inside,” she said. He stepped across the threshold. Rory shut the door and threw the bolt. The bar downstairs kept its late-night murmur beneath her floorboards: a chair scraped, someone laughed, Silas’s bass voice answered. Ordinary sounds. They made the silence in her flat feel staged. Lucien leaned one shoulder against the wall and pressed his free hand to his ribs. “Sit down before you stain the carpet.” “Still attentive.” “Still bleeding.” He lowered himself onto the edge of the chair by the window. Rory took the kitchen towel from the counter and tossed it at him. “Hold that against your side.” He obeyed without comment. The towel came away with a red thumbprint when she passed him the first-aid tin. “Who hired you?” “I don’t know his name.” “You expect me to believe you accepted work from a stranger?” “I didn’t accept it. He came to my club with a sealed envelope and enough money to make the offer insulting.” “Sounds like you.” Lucien’s mouth shifted. The old near-smile, careful at the corners. Rory knew how it felt against her throat. She hated that her body remembered before her temper did. “What did the envelope say?” “That a woman named Aurora Carter had begun asking questions about a group in Whitechapel. It included your address and a photograph.” Her gaze sharpened. “Where is it?” “In my coat.” “Take it out.” “I’d rather not.” “Then you can bleed on my chair while I search you.” “Some things never change.” “Neither do men who think a warning counts as an explanation.” She reached for his coat. He caught her wrist, not hard, but fast. His fingers settled above the scar. They both went still. “Rory.” “Let go.” He released her at once. She pulled the coat from his shoulders and checked the inner pocket. A thick cream envelope lay there, sealed with black wax. The mark pressed into it resembled a small open eye. She set it on the table. “You’ve seen that symbol?” “I’ve seen it in a few places. None of them good.” “Who was the man?” “He wore a grey scarf and a silver ring. He had a Liverpool accent and a way of holding still that suggested he wanted everyone in the room to notice.” “Any demon?” “Human, I think.” “You think?” “His shadow kept touching the wrong wall.” Rory glanced at the window. The glass reflected the lamplight and the clutter on her table: unopened post, a chipped mug, a stack of delivery menus. Behind that, Brick Lane shone wet under the streetlamps. She saw no one on the pavement. A heavy step crossed the landing outside. Lucien’s hand closed around the cane. Rory lifted one finger to her lips. The step stopped beside her door. A pause stretched across the room. The man outside shifted his weight; the floorboards answered with a low creak. Lucien stood. Rory grabbed the front of his shirt and pulled him down behind the wall beside the door. His breath brushed her temple. “Don’t move,” she whispered. “I had no intention of—” She pressed her palm over his mouth. His gaze met hers. The amber eye caught the lamplight; the black one gave none back. Beneath her hand, his breath warmed her skin. She felt his pulse against her fingers, steady except for one hard beat. The person outside knocked twice. Rory kept her hand over Lucien’s mouth. Her other hand slid to the kitchen knife she had left on the narrow shelf by the door. It wasn’t much, but the man outside didn’t know that. A phone rang somewhere on the landing. The footsteps retreated. A door opened below, then shut. Rory waited until the stairwell gave up every sound. Lucien touched her wrist, and she lowered her hand. “You could have told me you were bringing company.” “I didn’t invite him.” “People rarely do.” She stepped back. His shirt had ridden up where he’d pressed the towel to his side. A dark line of blood marked the fabric. She pointed at the chair. “Sit. And this time, stay there.” He sat. Rory opened the first-aid tin and found gauze, antiseptic, and a needle already threaded. She’d stocked it after a delivery had ended with a broken bottle and a customer who thought an apology meant she should stop asking for payment. “Lift your shirt.” Lucien did. A shallow cut ran along his ribs, an angry line beneath his skin. Rory washed it with antiseptic. His jaw tightened, but he didn’t flinch away. “You used to let me know when something hurt.” “I used to know what you wanted to hear.” She looked up from the wound. “That’s not the same thing.” “No.” The answer landed without defence. She threaded the needle through his skin. He drew in a breath and let it out through his nose. “You don’t have to make this easy,” she said. “I’m not.” “You always did that. Showed up with a crisis, then waited for me to be grateful you brought it to me.” “I came because I thought you deserved the truth.” “You could have sent a message.” “I didn’t know if your phone was watched.” “You could have called Eva.” “I didn’t want to put her in the middle.” “You didn’t mind putting yourself there.” “No.” He looked down at her hands. “I didn’t.” Rory tied the thread and cut it. The knot sat neat against his skin. “Why didn’t you tell me about the file?” His fingers closed around the edge of the chair. “I thought it would keep you safe.” “You kept notes on me. My shifts. My routes. The places I went.” “I kept notes on anyone who might use you to reach me.” “I wasn’t a route on one of your maps, Lucien.” “I know that now.” “You knew it then. You just thought your reasons mattered more than my answer.” “Yes.” She reached for the gauze. Her anger had once made her hands shake. Now they moved with the same precision she brought to sealing takeaway bags, checking the address twice before she left the restaurant. She pressed the pad to his side. His hand came up to hold it in place. His knuckles brushed hers. “I should have told you,” he said. “I should have asked what you wanted. I’m sorry.” Rory tied the bandage around his middle. “You said you didn’t want anything lasting.” “I said it because I wanted you to leave.” “You got your wish.” His gaze lifted to hers. “I know.” For a few seconds, the room shrank to the space between them. His shirt remained open. Her hands still rested at his waist, one on the knot of the bandage, the other against warm skin. The first time she’d touched him there, he’d drawn her closer. The last time, she’d put her coat on and walked out without turning back. “Why did you say it?” she asked. “Because you’d started asking questions I couldn’t answer without admitting how badly I wanted you to stay.” “That’s a poor excuse.” “I know.” “Were you afraid I’d ask you to change?” “No. I was afraid I’d agree.” Her hands went still. Downstairs, Silas raised his voice over a burst of laughter. Someone clapped along to the music. The flat’s thin windows rattled in their frames. Rory stepped away and dropped the bloody gauze into the bin. “You don’t get to come here and say the right thing because you’re hurt.” “I know.” “You don’t get to decide that one apology settles it.” “I know that too.” “Then what do you want?” Lucien looked at the envelope on the table. “I wanted you to know someone had your address. I wanted you to have the choice I took from you before.” “And after that?” His eyes returned to her. “After that, I wanted to see you.” The words did not soften his face. He didn’t dress them up. Rory could see the effort it took to leave them bare. She picked up the envelope and turned it over in her hands. The wax seal held no warmth. She set it down again. “You can stay until the man leaves.” “Thank you.” “Don’t thank me. I’m not doing this for you.” “I wouldn’t insult you by pretending otherwise.” She took the chair opposite him, though the space between their knees barely fit the table. Lucien leaned forward to reach the water glass. His fingers trembled once, then steadied around it. Rory watched his hand. “You’re in pain.” “Less than I deserve.” “Don’t make me disagree with you.” “I wouldn’t dare.” She met his eyes. A smile tugged at his mouth and vanished. Hers didn’t appear. The silence settled, no longer empty but crowded with all the things they had left between them: the door she’d closed, the messages she hadn’t answered, the hand he’d held too tightly once and released at once tonight. Lucien placed the glass on the table. “May I touch you?” The question reached her without a plea attached to it. Rory looked at his hand, then at his face. “Not yet.” He drew his hand back. “Thank you for asking.” She set her fingers on the table beside his. Not touching. Close enough that the heat from his skin reached her knuckles. Lucien stayed where he was. Outside, someone walked along the pavement beneath the window. Their shadow crossed the wall, passed, and left the room to the two of them.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags6
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences96
tagDensity0.063
leniency0.125
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
97.08% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1711
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"tightly"
count1
highlights
0"tightly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
79.54% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1711
totalAiIsms7
found
0
word"silence"
count2
1
word"weight"
count1
2
word"pulse"
count1
3
word"footsteps"
count1
4
word"warmth"
count1
5
word"trembled"
count1
highlights
0"silence"
1"weight"
2"pulse"
3"footsteps"
4"warmth"
5"trembled"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences127
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences127
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences217
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen38
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1711
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions25
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
66.90% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions36
wordCount1083
uniqueNames6
maxNameDensity1.66
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Lucien13
Moreau1
Silas2
Brick1
Lane1
Rory18
persons
0"Lucien"
1"Moreau"
2"Silas"
3"Rory"
places
0"Brick"
1"Lane"
globalScore0.669
windowScore0.833
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences87
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
83.11% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches2
per1kWords1.169
wordCount1711
matches
0"not hard, but fast"
1"no longer empty but"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences217
matches
0"hated that her"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs142
mean12.05
std11.14
cv0.925
sampleLengths
015
125
29
322
47
52
64
79
810
929
103
1143
1215
137
142
152
1625
175
1819
193
205
2111
2221
233
2428
255
2622
273
283
293
303
313
3211
334
3411
3523
361
372
3837
396
404
4111
424
4330
442
453
462
477
4842
497
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences127
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs188
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount2
flaggedSentences2
totalSentences217
ratio0.009
matches
0"The man outside shifted his weight; the floorboards answered with a low creak."
1"The amber eye caught the lamplight; the black one gave none back."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1087
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"other against warm skin."
adverbCount31
adverbRatio0.028518859245630176
lyAdverbCount2
lyAdverbRatio0.0018399264029438822
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences217
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences217
mean7.88
std5.34
cv0.678
sampleLengths
015
17
218
39
414
58
67
72
84
99
1010
117
124
1318
143
155
168
1719
182
199
2015
217
222
232
2412
2513
265
274
2815
293
305
3111
3221
333
343
357
368
3710
385
3922
403
413
423
433
443
4511
464
4711
485
498
47.24% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats6
diversityRatio0.25806451612903225
totalSentences217
uniqueOpeners56
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences117
matches(empty)
ratio0
42.22% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount52
totalSentences117
matches
0"Her other hand curled around"
1"His eyes moved over her"
2"He stepped across the threshold."
3"They made the silence in"
4"He lowered himself onto the"
5"He obeyed without comment."
6"She hated that her body"
7"Her gaze sharpened."
8"She reached for his coat."
9"He caught her wrist, not"
10"His fingers settled above the"
11"They both went still."
12"He released her at once."
13"She pulled the coat from"
14"She set it on the"
15"She saw no one on"
16"His breath brushed her temple."
17"She pressed her palm over"
18"His gaze met hers."
19"She felt his pulse against"
ratio0.444
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount110
totalSentences117
matches
0"The door opened, and Lucien"
1"Rory kept one hand on"
2"Her other hand curled around"
3"His eyes moved over her"
4"A thud rose from the"
5"Rory looked past him."
6"Lucien’s cane angled towards the"
7"He stepped across the threshold."
8"Rory shut the door and"
9"The bar downstairs kept its"
10"They made the silence in"
11"Lucien leaned one shoulder against"
12"He lowered himself onto the"
13"Rory took the kitchen towel"
14"He obeyed without comment."
15"The towel came away with"
16"Lucien’s mouth shifted."
17"The old near-smile, careful at"
18"Rory knew how it felt"
19"She hated that her body"
ratio0.94
42.74% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences117
matches
0"Now they moved with the"
ratio0.009
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences39
technicalSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags6
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags5
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"she whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences96
tagDensity0.052
leniency0.104
rawRatio0.2
effectiveRatio0.021
85.0940%