| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 21 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 74 | | tagDensity | 0.284 | | leniency | 0.568 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1738 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 71.23% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1738 | | totalAiIsms | 10 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "pulse" | | 1 | "glinting" | | 2 | "comforting" | | 3 | "trembled" | | 4 | "flickered" | | 5 | "throbbed" | | 6 | "porcelain" | | 7 | "weight" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "hung in the air" | | count | 1 |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 173 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 3 | | narrationSentences | 173 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 226 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 22 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1737 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 19 | | unquotedAttributions | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "Behind her, Eva swore." |
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| 16.67% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 87 | | wordCount | 1410 | | uniqueNames | 10 | | maxNameDensity | 2.48 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 4.5 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Isolde | 17 | | Nyx | 10 | | Rory | 35 | | Eva | 16 | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Heartstone | 2 | | Fae-Forged | 1 | | Blade | 1 | | One | 3 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Isolde" | | 1 | "Nyx" | | 2 | "Rory" | | 3 | "Eva" | | 4 | "Heartstone" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 0.259 | | windowScore | 0.167 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 110 | | glossingSentenceCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.576 | | wordCount | 1737 | | matches | | 0 | "not houses or stars but living things" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 226 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 125 | | mean | 13.9 | | std | 14.4 | | cv | 1.036 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 12 | | 1 | 43 | | 2 | 7 | | 3 | 29 | | 4 | 19 | | 5 | 6 | | 6 | 8 | | 7 | 28 | | 8 | 10 | | 9 | 5 | | 10 | 5 | | 11 | 17 | | 12 | 1 | | 13 | 6 | | 14 | 3 | | 15 | 44 | | 16 | 4 | | 17 | 5 | | 18 | 8 | | 19 | 4 | | 20 | 40 | | 21 | 9 | | 22 | 54 | | 23 | 7 | | 24 | 8 | | 25 | 9 | | 26 | 4 | | 27 | 7 | | 28 | 27 | | 29 | 5 | | 30 | 2 | | 31 | 8 | | 32 | 5 | | 33 | 7 | | 34 | 42 | | 35 | 6 | | 36 | 6 | | 37 | 7 | | 38 | 4 | | 39 | 8 | | 40 | 38 | | 41 | 3 | | 42 | 6 | | 43 | 4 | | 44 | 8 | | 45 | 6 | | 46 | 18 | | 47 | 4 | | 48 | 4 | | 49 | 38 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 173 | | matches | | 0 | "was scored" | | 1 | "was hidden" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 250 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 1 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 1 | | totalSentences | 226 | | ratio | 0.004 | | matches | | 0 | "Far below, lights gathered in clusters, not houses or stars but living things—great translucent shapes gliding through the dark." |
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| 94.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1418 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "burned warm against her" |
| | adverbCount | 23 | | adverbRatio | 0.01622002820874471 | | lyAdverbCount | 2 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.0014104372355430183 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 226 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 226 | | mean | 7.69 | | std | 4.67 | | cv | 0.608 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 12 | | 1 | 13 | | 2 | 12 | | 3 | 18 | | 4 | 7 | | 5 | 20 | | 6 | 4 | | 7 | 5 | | 8 | 19 | | 9 | 6 | | 10 | 8 | | 11 | 9 | | 12 | 4 | | 13 | 15 | | 14 | 5 | | 15 | 5 | | 16 | 5 | | 17 | 5 | | 18 | 7 | | 19 | 10 | | 20 | 1 | | 21 | 6 | | 22 | 3 | | 23 | 2 | | 24 | 1 | | 25 | 14 | | 26 | 13 | | 27 | 5 | | 28 | 9 | | 29 | 4 | | 30 | 5 | | 31 | 5 | | 32 | 3 | | 33 | 4 | | 34 | 20 | | 35 | 3 | | 36 | 17 | | 37 | 9 | | 38 | 7 | | 39 | 18 | | 40 | 21 | | 41 | 8 | | 42 | 5 | | 43 | 2 | | 44 | 8 | | 45 | 9 | | 46 | 4 | | 47 | 6 | | 48 | 1 | | 49 | 7 |
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| 50.00% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 7 | | diversityRatio | 0.3185840707964602 | | totalSentences | 226 | | uniqueOpeners | 72 | |
| 45.35% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 147 | | matches | | 0 | "Then it began to turn." | | 1 | "Somewhere below, the glowing creature" |
| | ratio | 0.014 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 23 | | totalSentences | 147 | | matches | | 0 | "Its face was scored with" | | 1 | "She pulled it free." | | 2 | "She stepped between the standing" | | 3 | "It trembled beneath her fingertip" | | 4 | "Their petals held tiny beads" | | 5 | "It climbed the slope, slipped" | | 6 | "It vanished when she blinked." | | 7 | "They followed the stream, keeping" | | 8 | "Their trunks leaned over the" | | 9 | "They had no visible feet." | | 10 | "Their beaks clicked in unison" | | 11 | "They moved beneath the soil" | | 12 | "They came to a grove" | | 13 | "They had been set in" | | 14 | "Its inner glow had strengthened," | | 15 | "She moved it closer to" | | 16 | "It landed upright, balanced on" | | 17 | "Their bodies shone blue along" | | 18 | "It looked woven from pale" | | 19 | "Its face was hidden behind" |
| | ratio | 0.156 | |
| 41.63% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 123 | | totalSentences | 147 | | matches | | 0 | "The standing stones rose from" | | 1 | "Aurora stopped at the first," | | 2 | "Rain clung to the dark" | | 3 | "Its face was scored with" | | 4 | "Isolde stood beyond the stones," | | 5 | "Nyx gathered along the trunk" | | 6 | "The pendant beneath Rory’s coat" | | 7 | "She pulled it free." | | 8 | "The thumbnail-sized crimson stone gave" | | 9 | "Isolde’s gaze settled on it." | | 10 | "Rory closed her fingers around" | | 11 | "The crescent scar on her" | | 12 | "She stepped between the standing" | | 13 | "The rain stopped." | | 14 | "A bead hung in the" | | 15 | "Rory reached for the nearest." | | 16 | "It trembled beneath her fingertip" | | 17 | "Nyx slipped through the gap" | | 18 | "Isolde crossed last." | | 19 | "The stones gave a low," |
| | ratio | 0.837 | |
| 34.01% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 147 | | matches | | 0 | "Before her, the masked figure" |
| | ratio | 0.007 | |
| 93.60% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 58 | | technicalSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "Wildflowers covered the ground in dense, impossible bloom: blue cups, red stars, pale blossoms that turned their faces as Rory moved." | | 1 | "The leaf-shaped dagger slid free of its sheath, cold moonsilver catching a light that had no clear source." | | 2 | "Rory heard the key’s whistle chase them, growing louder, then breaking into a series of high notes that sounded almost like laughter." | | 3 | "Floating cliffs hung at different heights, their undersides bristling with roots that trailed into nothing." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 21 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 19 | | fancyCount | 3 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Nyx breathed (breathe)" | | 1 | "Isolde warned (warn)" | | 2 | "Eva whispered (whisper)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 74 | | tagDensity | 0.257 | | leniency | 0.514 | | rawRatio | 0.158 | | effectiveRatio | 0.081 | |