Run: 2026-09-23-01M36NSAJTR79S07JTS13Y0S17

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Duration:
34.1s
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$0.001349
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OpenAI

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The standing stones rose from the grass without a path between them. Aurora stopped at the first, one hand on the strap of her bag. Rain clung to the dark surface, but the stone itself looked dry. Its face was scored with shallow lines that bent away from one another like branches seen through water. “Those weren’t here last time,” she said. “Last time, you came in by the south path.” Isolde stood beyond the stones, silver hair loose over her shoulders. No raindrops touched her. “This is the western door.” Nyx gathered along the trunk of an oak, a tall darkness with violet light where eyes might have been. “Doors usually have hinges,” Rory said. “Not the ones that lead somewhere,” Nyx breathed. The pendant beneath Rory’s coat warmed against her chest. She pulled it free. The thumbnail-sized crimson stone gave a faint pulse, the silver chain glinting between her fingers. Isolde’s gaze settled on it. “That heart knows a threshold.” “Does it know this one?” “It knows what waits beyond.” Rory closed her fingers around the pendant. The crescent scar on her wrist caught against the chain. “Comforting.” She stepped between the standing stones. The rain stopped. Not faded. Stopped. A bead hung in the air beside her cheek, round and bright as glass. More drops hovered over the grass, each holding the grey sky in miniature. Rory reached for the nearest. It trembled beneath her fingertip but did not fall. Behind her, Eva swore. “Tell me you saw that.” “I saw it,” Rory said. “Don’t touch anything.” “I wasn’t going to.” Nyx slipped through the gap as a smear of shadow, then gathered into their usual height on the other side. Isolde crossed last. The stones gave a low, wooden groan, though they were rock, and the suspended raindrops winked out. The air tasted of crushed mint and cold metal. Beyond the stones, Richmond Park had vanished. A clearing opened around them, ringed by trees with white bark and leaves the colour of old copper. Wildflowers covered the ground in dense, impossible bloom: blue cups, red stars, pale blossoms that turned their faces as Rory moved. No footprints marked the soft earth behind Isolde. Eva stared at the flowers. “It’s November.” “The Grove keeps its own calendar,” Isolde replied. “Does it keep track of the rest of us?” “It notices the living.” Eva looked down at her boots. “Great.” Rory crouched beside a patch of flowers. Their petals held tiny beads of light, each one bright as a firefly. When she leaned closer, they folded shut. “Don’t pick them,” Isolde said. “I wasn’t.” “The Grove hears intention as well as touch.” Rory straightened. “That seems unfair.” “The Grove was not made for fairness.” A narrow stream crossed the clearing, but its water ran uphill over a bed of black stones. It climbed the slope, slipped between the roots of a copper-leaved tree, and disappeared into the trunk. The bark bulged where it entered, then settled. Eva took a step towards it. “Stay on the grass,” Isolde warned. Eva halted. “What’s wrong with the stones?” “Nothing you would want.” That did it. Eva returned to Rory’s side. The Heartstone warmed another degree. Rory tucked it beneath her collar, though she kept one hand near it. A thin shimmer flickered between the trees ahead, like sunlight on a pane of glass. It vanished when she blinked. “There,” she said. Nyx turned their head. “A seam.” “Is it a rift?” “Not a tear in the Veil. A stitch.” Rory looked at Isolde. “That means?” “That someone bound two places together.” Isolde brushed a leaf from her sleeve. “The Grove and somewhere older.” “Older than the Fae?” “Older than the Courts.” The copper leaves rattled though no wind stirred. From somewhere deeper in the trees came the sound of a bell, low and distant. A second note answered it, then a third, each one arriving from a different direction. Eva put a hand on Rory’s arm. “How many places are stitched together?” “Enough to make a wrong turn costly.” “Glad we asked.” They followed the stream, keeping to the grass. The clearing narrowed into a corridor between trees. Their trunks leaned over the path, arching together high above. Pale moss ran in spirals along the bark. In places, the spirals shifted as Rory watched, opening like slow eyes. A flock of small black birds clung beneath the branches. They had no visible feet. Their beaks clicked in unison as the group passed. One bird dropped from the bough. Rory reached for the Fae-Forged Blade. The leaf-shaped dagger slid free of its sheath, cold moonsilver catching a light that had no clear source. The bird struck the ground and broke apart into a scatter of dark seeds. The rest of the flock fell silent. “Keep walking,” Isolde said. “Was that a warning?” Eva asked. “It was a bird.” “Birds don’t usually turn into seeds.” “Here, they do.” Rory lowered the blade but kept it in her hand. The corridor dipped. Roots threaded across the ground, some thick as arms, others fine as red wire. They moved beneath the soil with a slow, muscular roll. Rory felt the motion through her soles. Nyx’s shape blurred at the edges. “Something is following us,” they said. Eva glanced back. The path behind them lay empty. “You said that because you saw it?” “I felt the space it left.” “That’s not better.” They came to a grove of pale trees arranged in a circle. At its centre stood a stone basin, dry and cracked. Small metal objects covered its rim: keys, coins, rings, a child’s brass button. Each carried a green-black patina. Rory leaned over the basin. The objects were not scattered at random. They had been set in a pattern around a smooth depression in the stone. “Offerings?” she asked. Isolde’s silver hair stirred, though the air remained still. “Remnants.” “Of what?” “Those who came seeking a way through.” Rory looked at the basin’s empty centre. A red line marked the stone there, thin as a vein. The pendant throbbed against her palm. “Does it belong in the basin?” Eva asked. “No,” Isolde said. “Could it?” “Yes.” Rory drew the pendant from her collar. Its inner glow had strengthened, and the crimson stone seemed to hold a pulse of its own. She moved it closer to the basin. The metal objects began to chatter against one another. Nyx lifted one long hand. “Stop.” Rory halted. The objects went still. From inside the basin came a sound like someone swallowing. Rory stepped back. “That would have taken it.” “It would have taken the pendant,” Isolde said. “Whether it returned anything is another question.” “Why didn’t you say that first?” “I did not know what it would do until it wanted something.” “That’s not a satisfying answer.” “No,” Isolde said. “It is the true one.” A crack opened down the basin’s side. The red line brightened, then faded. One of the keys lifted from the rim and dropped into the hollow with a clink. It landed upright, balanced on its narrow end. Then it began to turn. Rory backed away, blade raised. The key spun faster. A thin, reedy whistle poured from it, filling the circle of trees. The metal objects shook. The ground gave a single hard jerk beneath their feet. “Move,” Nyx said. They ran. The passage beyond the stone circle sloped down between walls of root and earth. Rory heard the key’s whistle chase them, growing louder, then breaking into a series of high notes that sounded almost like laughter. Eva grabbed Rory’s sleeve as the ground bucked again. A root tore through the path ahead. Nyx spread into shadow, covering the rupture. The root recoiled as though it had touched flame. Nyx snapped back into solid form, their violet eyes dim. “Keep going.” The passage opened onto a ledge. Rory stopped so fast Eva struck her shoulder. Beyond the edge stretched a wide dark gulf, and across it lay a landscape suspended beneath a sky of shifting colours. No sun marked its ceiling. Bands of green and rose moved through the black overhead like slow ribbons. Floating cliffs hung at different heights, their undersides bristling with roots that trailed into nothing. Water streamed off one of them and rose in silver threads towards the sky. Far below, lights gathered in clusters, not houses or stars but living things—great translucent shapes gliding through the dark. Their bodies shone blue along their spines. One turned. A vast, lidless eye fixed on the ledge. Eva’s breath caught. Rory felt the cold from the blade spread through her fingers. The Heartstone, in contrast, burned warm against her skin. A narrow bridge stretched from the ledge to the nearest floating cliff. It looked woven from pale grass and strands of hair. No supports held it. At its centre, a small figure crouched with its back to them. “Is that human?” Eva whispered. The figure lifted its head. Its face was hidden behind a porcelain mask, smooth except for a painted red mouth. It raised one hand and pointed to the bridge. Isolde stepped beside Rory. “We have found the stitch.” The masked figure pointed again. The bridge trembled. Rory looked at the others. Nyx had gone still. Eva’s hand had tightened around her sleeve. Isolde watched the figure with an expression Rory could not read. “What’s on the other side?” Rory asked. Isolde’s eyes reflected the moving sky. “A place that remembers being buried.” The figure stood. Its clothes hung in strips of dark cloth, moving in a wind Rory couldn’t feel. It turned and began walking across the bridge without looking back. Rory lowered the blade to her side. The cliff across from them gave a deep, stone-on-stone groan. Somewhere below, the glowing creature rolled through the dark, and the light along its spine blinked out one segment at a time. Eva released Rory’s sleeve. “We’re going after it, aren’t we?” Rory watched the bridge sway above the gulf. “We came here to find out what the pendant was answering.” “That’s not a yes.” “It’s the closest one you’re getting.” Rory set one boot on the bridge. The woven strands tightened beneath her weight, cold and faintly damp. Behind her, the silver chain warmed in her hand. Before her, the masked figure reached the far cliff and disappeared into a cleft in the stone.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags21
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences74
tagDensity0.284
leniency0.568
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1738
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
71.23% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1738
totalAiIsms10
found
0
word"pulse"
count2
1
word"glinting"
count1
2
word"comforting"
count1
3
word"trembled"
count2
4
word"flickered"
count1
5
word"throbbed"
count1
6
word"porcelain"
count1
7
word"weight"
count1
highlights
0"pulse"
1"glinting"
2"comforting"
3"trembled"
4"flickered"
5"throbbed"
6"porcelain"
7"weight"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"hung in the air"
count1
highlights
0"hung in the air"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences173
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount3
narrationSentences173
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences226
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen22
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1737
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions19
unquotedAttributions1
matches
0"Behind her, Eva swore."
16.67% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions87
wordCount1410
uniqueNames10
maxNameDensity2.48
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity4.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Isolde17
Nyx10
Rory35
Eva16
Richmond1
Park1
Heartstone2
Fae-Forged1
Blade1
One3
persons
0"Isolde"
1"Nyx"
2"Rory"
3"Eva"
4"Heartstone"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
globalScore0.259
windowScore0.167
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences110
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.576
wordCount1737
matches
0"not houses or stars but living things"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences226
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs125
mean13.9
std14.4
cv1.036
sampleLengths
012
143
27
329
419
56
68
728
810
95
105
1117
121
136
143
1544
164
175
188
194
2040
219
2254
237
248
259
264
277
2827
295
302
318
325
337
3442
356
366
377
384
398
4038
413
426
434
448
456
4618
474
484
4938
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences173
matches
0"was scored"
1"was hidden"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs250
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount1
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences1
totalSentences226
ratio0.004
matches
0"Far below, lights gathered in clusters, not houses or stars but living things—great translucent shapes gliding through the dark."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1418
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"burned warm against her"
adverbCount23
adverbRatio0.01622002820874471
lyAdverbCount2
lyAdverbRatio0.0014104372355430183
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences226
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences226
mean7.69
std4.67
cv0.608
sampleLengths
012
113
212
318
47
520
64
75
819
96
108
119
124
1315
145
155
165
175
187
1910
201
216
223
232
241
2514
2613
275
289
294
305
315
323
334
3420
353
3617
379
387
3918
4021
418
425
432
448
459
464
476
481
497
50.00% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats7
diversityRatio0.3185840707964602
totalSentences226
uniqueOpeners72
45.35% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences147
matches
0"Then it began to turn."
1"Somewhere below, the glowing creature"
ratio0.014
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount23
totalSentences147
matches
0"Its face was scored with"
1"She pulled it free."
2"She stepped between the standing"
3"It trembled beneath her fingertip"
4"Their petals held tiny beads"
5"It climbed the slope, slipped"
6"It vanished when she blinked."
7"They followed the stream, keeping"
8"Their trunks leaned over the"
9"They had no visible feet."
10"Their beaks clicked in unison"
11"They moved beneath the soil"
12"They came to a grove"
13"They had been set in"
14"Its inner glow had strengthened,"
15"She moved it closer to"
16"It landed upright, balanced on"
17"Their bodies shone blue along"
18"It looked woven from pale"
19"Its face was hidden behind"
ratio0.156
41.63% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount123
totalSentences147
matches
0"The standing stones rose from"
1"Aurora stopped at the first,"
2"Rain clung to the dark"
3"Its face was scored with"
4"Isolde stood beyond the stones,"
5"Nyx gathered along the trunk"
6"The pendant beneath Rory’s coat"
7"She pulled it free."
8"The thumbnail-sized crimson stone gave"
9"Isolde’s gaze settled on it."
10"Rory closed her fingers around"
11"The crescent scar on her"
12"She stepped between the standing"
13"The rain stopped."
14"A bead hung in the"
15"Rory reached for the nearest."
16"It trembled beneath her fingertip"
17"Nyx slipped through the gap"
18"Isolde crossed last."
19"The stones gave a low,"
ratio0.837
34.01% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences147
matches
0"Before her, the masked figure"
ratio0.007
93.60% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences58
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"Wildflowers covered the ground in dense, impossible bloom: blue cups, red stars, pale blossoms that turned their faces as Rory moved."
1"The leaf-shaped dagger slid free of its sheath, cold moonsilver catching a light that had no clear source."
2"Rory heard the key’s whistle chase them, growing louder, then breaking into a series of high notes that sounded almost like laughter."
3"Floating cliffs hung at different heights, their undersides bristling with roots that trailed into nothing."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags21
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags19
fancyCount3
fancyTags
0"Nyx breathed (breathe)"
1"Isolde warned (warn)"
2"Eva whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences74
tagDensity0.257
leniency0.514
rawRatio0.158
effectiveRatio0.081
88.2164%