| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 18 | | adverbTagCount | 2 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "she asked again [again]" | | 1 | "He stood then [then]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 147 | | tagDensity | 0.122 | | leniency | 0.245 | | rawRatio | 0.111 | | effectiveRatio | 0.027 | |
| 94.97% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1988 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 2 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 89.94% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1988 | | totalAiIsms | 4 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "flicked" | | 1 | "flickered" | | 2 | "stomach" | | 3 | "silence" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 141 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 2 | | hedgeCount | 2 | | narrationSentences | 141 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 270 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 35 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1986 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 38 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 90.83% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 32 | | wordCount | 1183 | | uniqueNames | 5 | | maxNameDensity | 1.18 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Rory | 14 | | Lucien | 13 | | Moreau | 1 | | Ptolemy | 2 | | One | 2 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Rory" | | 1 | "Lucien" | | 2 | "Moreau" | | 3 | "Ptolemy" | | 4 | "One" |
| | places | (empty) | | globalScore | 0.908 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 87 | | glossingSentenceCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1986 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 270 | | matches | | 0 | "carried that evening" | | 1 | "thought that distance" |
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| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 177 | | mean | 11.22 | | std | 11.79 | | cv | 1.05 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 22 | | 1 | 52 | | 2 | 7 | | 3 | 12 | | 4 | 6 | | 5 | 13 | | 6 | 4 | | 7 | 34 | | 8 | 1 | | 9 | 1 | | 10 | 45 | | 11 | 10 | | 12 | 5 | | 13 | 6 | | 14 | 8 | | 15 | 7 | | 16 | 5 | | 17 | 44 | | 18 | 37 | | 19 | 6 | | 20 | 1 | | 21 | 2 | | 22 | 2 | | 23 | 2 | | 24 | 12 | | 25 | 5 | | 26 | 9 | | 27 | 50 | | 28 | 1 | | 29 | 3 | | 30 | 8 | | 31 | 6 | | 32 | 1 | | 33 | 4 | | 34 | 8 | | 35 | 15 | | 36 | 6 | | 37 | 6 | | 38 | 34 | | 39 | 13 | | 40 | 1 | | 41 | 1 | | 42 | 25 | | 43 | 15 | | 44 | 3 | | 45 | 12 | | 46 | 11 | | 47 | 25 | | 48 | 5 | | 49 | 3 |
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| 97.80% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 141 | | matches | | 0 | "been expected" | | 1 | "was angled" | | 2 | "being asked" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 210 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 2 | | semicolonCount | 3 | | flaggedSentences | 4 | | totalSentences | 270 | | ratio | 0.015 | | matches | | 0 | "The amber caught the hall light; the black seemed to swallow it." | | 1 | "He had come alone; she could see no one waiting on the steps." | | 2 | "Not in the obvious way—his posture stayed straight, his suit immaculate beneath the rain-heavy coat—but around the eyes." | | 3 | "Lucien’s talent had never been the absence of lies; it was making them feel like kindness." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1187 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 41 | | adverbRatio | 0.03454085930918281 | | lyAdverbCount | 5 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.004212299915754001 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 270 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 270 | | mean | 7.36 | | std | 5.45 | | cv | 0.741 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 22 | | 1 | 5 | | 2 | 24 | | 3 | 11 | | 4 | 12 | | 5 | 7 | | 6 | 12 | | 7 | 6 | | 8 | 7 | | 9 | 6 | | 10 | 4 | | 11 | 13 | | 12 | 5 | | 13 | 12 | | 14 | 4 | | 15 | 1 | | 16 | 1 | | 17 | 21 | | 18 | 24 | | 19 | 3 | | 20 | 7 | | 21 | 5 | | 22 | 6 | | 23 | 8 | | 24 | 7 | | 25 | 5 | | 26 | 14 | | 27 | 7 | | 28 | 13 | | 29 | 10 | | 30 | 3 | | 31 | 18 | | 32 | 9 | | 33 | 7 | | 34 | 6 | | 35 | 1 | | 36 | 2 | | 37 | 2 | | 38 | 2 | | 39 | 6 | | 40 | 6 | | 41 | 5 | | 42 | 4 | | 43 | 5 | | 44 | 5 | | 45 | 35 | | 46 | 6 | | 47 | 4 | | 48 | 1 | | 49 | 3 |
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| 44.81% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 14 | | diversityRatio | 0.2777777777777778 | | totalSentences | 270 | | uniqueOpeners | 75 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 5 | | totalSentences | 125 | | matches | | 0 | "Then he lowered his eyes" | | 1 | "Then a thump sounded below." | | 2 | "Then she leaned toward the" | | 3 | "Once, she had thought that" | | 4 | "Then she looked at Lucien." |
| | ratio | 0.04 | |
| 69.60% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 47 | | totalSentences | 125 | | matches | | 0 | "He was damp with rain." | | 1 | "It darkened the shoulders of" | | 2 | "His gaze returned to her" | | 3 | "She kept one hand on" | | 4 | "His mouth tightened." | | 5 | "He had come alone; she" | | 6 | "It did nothing to loosen" | | 7 | "He had always been good" | | 8 | "She had once taken that" | | 9 | "His eyes flicked down to" | | 10 | "He held her gaze." | | 11 | "Her grip tightened on the" | | 12 | "She searched his face for" | | 13 | "He had taught her that" | | 14 | "She shoved a hand against" | | 15 | "She pushed harder" | | 16 | "His gaze dropped to her" | | 17 | "He set the paper bag" | | 18 | "She thought of the last" | | 19 | "His cane was still raised." |
| | ratio | 0.376 | |
| 68.00% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 98 | | totalSentences | 125 | | matches | | 0 | "The door opened on the" | | 1 | "He was damp with rain." | | 2 | "It darkened the shoulders of" | | 3 | "The other held a brown" | | 4 | "Lucien glanced past her at" | | 5 | "His gaze returned to her" | | 6 | "The amber caught the hall" | | 7 | "She kept one hand on" | | 8 | "His mouth tightened." | | 9 | "The corridor smelled of wet" | | 10 | "He had come alone; she" | | 11 | "It did nothing to loosen" | | 12 | "Lucien looked tired." | | 13 | "He had always been good" | | 14 | "She had once taken that" | | 15 | "His eyes flicked down to" | | 16 | "He held her gaze." | | 17 | "The words settled between them." | | 18 | "Rory felt the flat behind" | | 19 | "Eva’s home, in all but" |
| | ratio | 0.784 | |
| 40.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 125 | | matches | | | ratio | 0.008 | |
| 95.24% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 45 | | technicalSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "He set the paper bag on the nearest clear patch of table, which wasn’t clear so much as a space between a stack of old newspapers and a rolled parchment." | | 1 | "The stairwell was empty, though the yellow bulb on the landing flickered as if someone had just passed beneath it." | | 2 | "He lowered his eyes, accepting the boundary as if it were a gift." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 18 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 14 | | fancyCount | 1 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "she whispered (whisper)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 147 | | tagDensity | 0.095 | | leniency | 0.19 | | rawRatio | 0.071 | | effectiveRatio | 0.014 | |