Run: 2026-09-23-01M36NVBZSG6TMTSNR5W3YJ9BW

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Duration:
24.9s
Cost:
$0.001199
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OpenAI

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System
You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Romance genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The door opened against Lucien Moreau’s polished shoe. Aurora stopped with one hand on the chain. The other held a kitchen knife, its point angled at his throat. “You’ve got three seconds to explain why you’re standing outside my flat.” Lucien glanced down at the blade. His mismatched eyes lifted to hers, amber and black, and took in the black hair falling across her cheek, the crescent scar at her wrist, the fury she had kept ready for him since the last time they spoke. “Two seconds, then,” he said. “Someone has followed me here.” “Try again.” A hard knock struck the door behind him. Lucien caught the edge before she could slam it. His ivory-handled cane slipped from his fingers and clattered across the hall. For a man who had once crossed a room without seeming to move, he looked almost ordinary as he shoved his shoulder against the door. Almost. “Rory.” “Don’t call me that.” “I’m not here to discuss what you call yourself.” “No, you’re here to bring trouble to my doorstep. You’ve always had a gift for choosing the least welcome entrance.” The knock came again. This time, the three deadbolts shivered in their housings. Aurora dropped the chain and hauled Lucien inside. He stumbled over the threshold. She slammed the door, threw the bolts, and pressed her palm flat to the wood as if she could hold the whole corridor out by force. The flat above the curry house had never been built for two people. Books crowded the little sitting room, the kitchen table, even the narrow stretch of floor beside the bed. Scrolls and research notes covered every surface not occupied by Ptolemy, Eva’s tabby cat, who had claimed a stack of papers as his throne. He blinked at Lucien with the grave contempt of a landlord inspecting a late tenant. Lucien retrieved his cane and straightened his charcoal jacket. “You could have warned me,” Aurora said. “You would have refused to open the door.” “Correct.” “Then a warning would have wasted time.” She lifted the knife again. “You have until the next knock.” Lucien’s gaze flicked to her hand. Not the knife. The scar beneath it. “You still grip a blade as if you expect it to apologise.” “And you still enter rooms as if the world owes you the space.” His mouth softened at one corner. It wasn’t quite a smile. She hated that she remembered what his real one looked like. “Someone came to the restaurant,” he said. “They asked for the delivery woman who rides the red bike.” Aurora’s grip tightened. “You followed me?” “I was already there.” “That’s not an answer.” “It’s the only one you’re getting until the door stops shaking.” The wood jolted under another blow. Ptolemy sprang from the papers and vanished beneath the sofa. Aurora moved between Lucien and the front door, knife ready. Lucien stepped in beside her. She cut him a look. “Don’t.” “Don’t what?” “Stand beside me like we’re still—” The next strike silenced her. Dust sifted from the doorframe. Lucien’s expression changed. The polish remained, but something darker pressed behind it. His fingers tightened around the cane. “Three people,” he said. “One human. Two aren’t.” “You can tell from here?” “They smell of iron and wet stone.” “Lovely. And what do they want?” “You.” “Convenient.” “Not for me.” She turned the knife towards him. “You left me with a convenient lie, too.” His face held still. “I know.” “No. You don’t.” The words came fast, then snagged on the memory of his hand around hers, the heat of his thumb over her pulse, the way he had looked at her as if staying would cost him something. “You don’t get to show up here and tell me what you know.” “I came because they found your name.” “My name’s on the restaurant rota.” “Not that name.” The room seemed to narrow. Aurora lowered the knife by an inch. Lucien reached inside his jacket. She raised it again. “Slowly.” He drew out a folded slip of paper and set it on the table. The paper bore a single word, written in black ink. Malphora. Aurora stared at it. The name looked wrong in her flat. Too old, too deliberate, too much like a door that should have stayed shut. “Where did you get that?” “From the man who asked about you.” “What happened to him?” “He won’t ask again.” Her eyes lifted to Lucien’s. “You killed him?” “No.” “Did you hurt him?” “Yes.” “Better.” The bluntness drew a brief, startled breath from him. Then came another impact against the door. A bolt squealed. Lucien moved to the table and took up the paper. “This is not a name someone finds by accident.” “I’m aware.” “Then you understand why I’m here.” “I understand that you don’t trust me with the truth.” His gaze sharpened. “That is not what this is.” “Last time, you said the same thing.” “I was trying to keep you alive.” “And you thought the best way to do that was to vanish.” “I thought distance would keep you out of it.” “You thought wrong.” “I know.” She hated the quiet in his voice. Hated more that it sounded sincere. A crack split the wood near the upper bolt. Aurora backed away from the door, scanning the crowded room. The window opened onto Brick Lane, two storeys above the pavement. The fire escape was narrow and rusted. The kitchen had one exit, the front door. Her gaze snagged on Eva’s research notes, the mess of chalk diagrams and old maps. “Can you get us out through the window?” she asked. “Can you?” “I asked first.” “I can get you out. I didn’t say I could make the landing pleasant.” “Put that on the list of things I didn’t ask.” He set his cane against the table and crossed to the window. Aurora watched the line of his shoulders beneath the tailored jacket, the controlled movement of his hands as he tested the latch. Once, she had liked those hands. Their restraint. The gentleness he had kept hidden from everyone else. Then he had used them to close a door between them. “Locked,” he said. “Eva keeps the key in the kitchen drawer.” Lucien turned. “You live here with Eva?” “She owns the flat. I live above a bar. This is where I come when I need research.” “And you came tonight?” “I was already here.” The words sat between them, another small truth he hadn’t earned. He crossed to the kitchen. Aurora followed, knife still in hand. The drawer stuck, then gave with a wooden scrape. Keys, a corkscrew, and a handful of takeaway menus rattled inside. She found the window key beneath a rubber band. Lucien reached for it at the same moment. Their fingers brushed. A thin spark snapped through her palm. Not magic, not that. She knew the difference. This was memory with teeth, her body recalling his before her mind could refuse. He drew back first. “How thoughtful,” she said. “You’ve learnt to keep your hands to yourself.” “Not by choice.” The honesty made her throat tighten. She hated him for knowing how to do that. A third blow struck the door. The lower deadbolt tore loose with a metallic shriek. Aurora unlocked the window and shoved it open. The street noise spilled in: a delivery scooter revving, voices rising from the restaurant below, the clink of dishes. The metal fire escape ran down the brick wall to a narrow yard. It looked ready to collapse under a hard stare. “After you,” Lucien said. “You first. You’re the one who brought the guests.” A splintered crack sounded from the front room. The door bowed inward. Lucien took the window ledge in one smooth step. “Aurora.” She hated the way he said her full name. Like a hand around a wrist. Like a promise he’d once made and broken. “Don’t make this sound like a plea.” “It isn’t.” “Good.” She climbed onto the sill. Lucien’s hand hovered at her waist, close enough to catch her if the rusted metal buckled, far enough not to touch. That restraint unsettled her more than a grab would have. She swung one leg over the ledge. The fire escape groaned. Behind them, the front door gave way. Wood cracked against the wall. Lucien’s head snapped towards the sound. His cane came up, blade sliding from the ivory handle with a whisper. A man filled the doorway. His coat hung in strips, and dark veins webbed the skin at his throat. The second figure crouched behind him, too thin in the shoulders, with a face that seemed to shift when Aurora tried to focus on it. The man smiled at her. “Malphora,” he said. Lucien turned his blade towards him. “Wrong flat.” The stranger’s smile widened. “We came for the girl.” “Then you’ve made a poor choice of door.” The stranger raised one hand. The loose deadbolt ripped from the wood and shot across the room. Lucien shoved Aurora out through the window. She caught the fire escape rail as metal shrieked beneath her weight. Her knee struck the grate. Pain flared, sharp and useful. Lucien came after her, landing hard beside her as the window frame shattered behind him. Something seized his coat from inside. Aurora grabbed his wrist. For one breath, his hand locked around hers. Warm, solid, familiar. His amber eye met her blue ones, and all the old hurt crowded into that look. Then the thing in the flat yanked him backwards. Aurora braced her boots against the grating. The rail bit into her palm. “Lucien!” His free hand closed around the cane. He drove its blade into the dark shape reaching through the broken window. A hiss filled the room. The grip on his coat loosened. Lucien lunged onto the fire escape. Aurora hauled him the last foot, and they crashed together against the brick. His breath struck her cheek. His arm wrapped around her waist, tight enough to hold her, not tight enough to trap her. For half a second, neither moved. Then the thin figure climbed through the window behind them, its joints bending the wrong way. Aurora shoved Lucien towards the stairs. “Move.” He descended first, blade in hand. “You do give orders well.” “I’ll give you a better one if you fall on me.” The thing dropped onto the landing above. Metal buckled. Lucien glanced over his shoulder. “Run.” “I am running.” “Not fast enough.” She kicked the stair rail. The rusted section tore free and swung into the creature’s face. It reeled, shrieking, and Lucien caught Aurora’s hand again. This time, neither of them let go.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags10
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"The words came fast [fast]"
dialogueSentences91
tagDensity0.11
leniency0.22
rawRatio0.1
effectiveRatio0.022
97.20% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1785
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"slowly"
count1
highlights
0"slowly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
74.79% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1785
totalAiIsms9
found
0
word"grave"
count1
1
word"flicked"
count1
2
word"pulse"
count1
3
word"scanning"
count1
4
word"unsettled"
count1
5
word"whisper"
count1
6
word"weight"
count1
7
word"shattered"
count1
8
word"familiar"
count1
highlights
0"grave"
1"flicked"
2"pulse"
3"scanning"
4"unsettled"
5"whisper"
6"weight"
7"shattered"
8"familiar"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences157
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount3
narrationSentences157
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"tried to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences238
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen40
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1785
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions25
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
50.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions51
wordCount1302
uniqueNames7
maxNameDensity2
worstName"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity3.5
worstWindowName"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Lucien26
Moreau1
Ptolemy2
Eva2
Aurora18
Brick1
Lane1
persons
0"Lucien"
1"Moreau"
2"Ptolemy"
3"Eva"
4"Aurora"
places
0"Brick"
1"Lane"
globalScore0.502
windowScore0.5
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences102
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"looked like"
1"face that seemed to shift when Aurora tried to focus on it"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1785
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences238
matches
0"hated that she"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs146
mean12.23
std12.7
cv1.039
sampleLengths
08
120
212
345
410
52
68
746
81
91
104
119
1220
1313
1439
1570
169
177
188
191
207
2111
2213
2312
2413
2522
2618
276
284
294
3011
3131
326
332
346
3510
3618
378
385
397
406
411
421
433
4414
456
4652
477
486
493
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences157
matches
0"been built"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs230
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences238
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1303
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount36
adverbRatio0.02762854950115119
lyAdverbCount0
lyAdverbRatio0
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences238
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences238
mean7.5
std5.51
cv0.735
sampleLengths
08
18
212
312
46
539
65
75
82
98
109
1112
1225
131
141
154
169
1720
184
199
208
215
2226
2313
2418
2524
2615
279
287
298
301
317
325
336
346
353
364
3712
3813
396
405
4111
427
4311
443
453
464
474
4811
496
45.38% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats11
diversityRatio0.2857142857142857
totalSentences238
uniqueOpeners68
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount6
totalSentences143
matches
0"Too old, too deliberate, too"
1"Then came another impact against"
2"Once, she had liked those"
3"Then he had used them"
4"Then the thing in the"
5"Then the thin figure climbed"
ratio0.042
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount42
totalSentences143
matches
0"His mismatched eyes lifted to"
1"His ivory-handled cane slipped from"
2"He stumbled over the threshold."
3"She slammed the door, threw"
4"He blinked at Lucien with"
5"She lifted the knife again."
6"His mouth softened at one"
7"It wasn’t quite a smile."
8"She hated that she remembered"
9"She cut him a look."
10"His fingers tightened around the"
11"She turned the knife towards"
12"His face held still."
13"She raised it again."
14"He drew out a folded"
15"Her eyes lifted to Lucien’s."
16"His gaze sharpened."
17"She hated the quiet in"
18"Her gaze snagged on Eva’s"
19"He set his cane against"
ratio0.294
19.44% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount126
totalSentences143
matches
0"The door opened against Lucien"
1"Aurora stopped with one hand"
2"The other held a kitchen"
3"Lucien glanced down at the"
4"His mismatched eyes lifted to"
5"A hard knock struck the"
6"Lucien caught the edge before"
7"His ivory-handled cane slipped from"
8"The knock came again."
9"This time, the three deadbolts"
10"Aurora dropped the chain and"
11"He stumbled over the threshold."
12"She slammed the door, threw"
13"The flat above the curry"
14"Books crowded the little sitting"
15"Scrolls and research notes covered"
16"He blinked at Lucien with"
17"Lucien retrieved his cane and"
18"She lifted the knife again."
19"Lucien’s gaze flicked to her"
ratio0.881
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences143
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences41
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"Too old, too deliberate, too much like a door that should have stayed shut."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags10
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags9
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences91
tagDensity0.099
leniency0.198
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
89.5603%