| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 19 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 72 | | tagDensity | 0.264 | | leniency | 0.528 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 94.14% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1706 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 2 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 80.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 79.48% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1706 | | totalAiIsms | 7 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "electric" | | 1 | "etched" | | 2 | "footsteps" | | 3 | "silence" | | 4 | "trembled" | | 5 | "weight" | | 6 | "flicked" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 152 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 2 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 152 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 203 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 39 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1703 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 25 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 27.28% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 64 | | wordCount | 1263 | | uniqueNames | 5 | | maxNameDensity | 2.45 | | worstName | "Quinn" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 4 | | worstWindowName | "Venn" | | discoveredNames | | Patel | 16 | | Quinn | 31 | | Tube | 1 | | Venn | 13 | | One | 3 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Patel" | | 1 | "Quinn" | | 2 | "Venn" | | 3 | "One" |
| | places | (empty) | | globalScore | 0.273 | | windowScore | 0.333 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 92 | | glossingSentenceCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.587 | | wordCount | 1703 | | matches | | 0 | "not to hide the killing, but to buy himself a few minutes with the thing the compass had" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 203 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 102 | | mean | 16.7 | | std | 17.14 | | cv | 1.026 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 26 | | 1 | 40 | | 2 | 5 | | 3 | 13 | | 4 | 9 | | 5 | 101 | | 6 | 7 | | 7 | 64 | | 8 | 8 | | 9 | 29 | | 10 | 23 | | 11 | 7 | | 12 | 26 | | 13 | 17 | | 14 | 6 | | 15 | 5 | | 16 | 5 | | 17 | 20 | | 18 | 62 | | 19 | 34 | | 20 | 5 | | 21 | 3 | | 22 | 4 | | 23 | 9 | | 24 | 4 | | 25 | 49 | | 26 | 28 | | 27 | 3 | | 28 | 10 | | 29 | 4 | | 30 | 7 | | 31 | 41 | | 32 | 9 | | 33 | 1 | | 34 | 4 | | 35 | 7 | | 36 | 23 | | 37 | 5 | | 38 | 7 | | 39 | 9 | | 40 | 7 | | 41 | 22 | | 42 | 10 | | 43 | 2 | | 44 | 2 | | 45 | 45 | | 46 | 5 | | 47 | 1 | | 48 | 2 | | 49 | 11 |
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| 86.80% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 8 | | totalSentences | 152 | | matches | | 0 | "been abandoned" | | 1 | "been asked" | | 2 | "been remade" | | 3 | "were shuttered" | | 4 | "been etched" | | 5 | "been called" | | 6 | "was buttoned" | | 7 | "been bricked" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 3 | | totalVerbs | 210 | | matches | | 0 | "was being" | | 1 | "wasn’t pointing" | | 2 | "was pointing" |
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| 72.48% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 3 | | semicolonCount | 2 | | flaggedSentences | 5 | | totalSentences | 203 | | ratio | 0.025 | | matches | | 0 | "The impatience had gone; in its place was the alertness she wore when a case shifted under her feet." | | 1 | "One track, near the blood, had a regular hitch in it—a small interruption repeated every turn of the wheel." | | 2 | "One wheel turned freely; the other had a small notch missing from its rim." | | 3 | "He had missed the black grit beneath the corpse’s nails, too—the same pale fibers that clung in a small tuft to a splinter on the cart’s wooden bed." | | 4 | "Venn twisted hard, and the market woke around them—shutters rattling, voices rising, feet shifting in the dark." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1270 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 27 | | adverbRatio | 0.02125984251968504 | | lyAdverbCount | 5 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.003937007874015748 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 203 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 203 | | mean | 8.39 | | std | 6.19 | | cv | 0.738 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 13 | | 1 | 13 | | 2 | 12 | | 3 | 5 | | 4 | 23 | | 5 | 5 | | 6 | 8 | | 7 | 5 | | 8 | 9 | | 9 | 6 | | 10 | 14 | | 11 | 10 | | 12 | 11 | | 13 | 32 | | 14 | 5 | | 15 | 23 | | 16 | 7 | | 17 | 17 | | 18 | 6 | | 19 | 19 | | 20 | 14 | | 21 | 8 | | 22 | 5 | | 23 | 3 | | 24 | 9 | | 25 | 20 | | 26 | 6 | | 27 | 4 | | 28 | 13 | | 29 | 7 | | 30 | 9 | | 31 | 11 | | 32 | 6 | | 33 | 5 | | 34 | 12 | | 35 | 4 | | 36 | 2 | | 37 | 5 | | 38 | 5 | | 39 | 5 | | 40 | 7 | | 41 | 8 | | 42 | 12 | | 43 | 14 | | 44 | 4 | | 45 | 32 | | 46 | 5 | | 47 | 7 | | 48 | 6 | | 49 | 16 |
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| 49.92% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 7 | | diversityRatio | 0.32019704433497537 | | totalSentences | 203 | | uniqueOpeners | 65 | |
| 25.45% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 131 | | matches | | | ratio | 0.008 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 27 | | totalSentences | 131 | | matches | | 0 | "They went down the narrow" | | 1 | "Her worn leather watch sat" | | 2 | "His hands were broad and" | | 3 | "His apron was not." | | 4 | "She had a line of" | | 5 | "She moved around the body," | | 6 | "His boots were clean." | | 7 | "She looked at the dead" | | 8 | "His mouth hung open." | | 9 | "His skin had taken on" | | 10 | "Its glass was intact." | | 11 | "It pointed toward the old" | | 12 | "He had not moved." | | 13 | "His gaze rested on the" | | 14 | "He pointed toward the north" | | 15 | "He gestured to the body" | | 16 | "She leaned closer, careful not" | | 17 | "She looked at the platform." | | 18 | "It ran toward the south" | | 19 | "He pointed to a two-wheeled" |
| | ratio | 0.206 | |
| 55.42% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 106 | | totalSentences | 131 | | matches | | 0 | "The station had been abandoned" | | 1 | "The city records had never" | | 2 | "Quinn pressed it into the" | | 3 | "Something turned behind the brickwork." | | 4 | "The lock clicked, and the" | | 5 | "Quinn tucked the token into" | | 6 | "They went down the narrow" | | 7 | "Quinn counted them by habit:" | | 8 | "Her worn leather watch sat" | | 9 | "The stalls were shuttered now." | | 10 | "The body lay near the" | | 11 | "A man in a dark" | | 12 | "A red gash crossed his" | | 13 | "Blood had spread in a" | | 14 | "Quinn stopped several feet short." | | 15 | "His hands were broad and" | | 16 | "His apron was not." | | 17 | "A woman under a striped" | | 18 | "She had a line of" | | 19 | "Patel crouched near the body." |
| | ratio | 0.809 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 131 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 52 | | technicalSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "A few vendors remained, watching from the shadows with the bright stillness of people who had learned not to be surprised by police." | | 1 | "Too clean for a man who had supposedly walked along the platform, where the old tiles sweated water and the market’s foot traffic had ground a fine black grit i…" | | 2 | "He had missed the black grit beneath the corpse’s nails, too—the same pale fibers that clung in a small tuft to a splinter on the cart’s wooden bed." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 19 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 17 | | fancyCount | 1 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "she continued (continue)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 72 | | tagDensity | 0.236 | | leniency | 0.472 | | rawRatio | 0.059 | | effectiveRatio | 0.028 | |