Run: 2026-09-23-01M36NX9JCGBVQ52EJ24V4FA42

Run Details

Duration:
34.0s
Cost:
$0.001333
Provider:
OpenAI

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The door opened six inches, caught by the chain, and Aurora found Lucien Moreau on the landing. For a moment neither of them moved. He stood beneath the stairwell bulb in a charcoal suit that looked untouched by the drizzle outside. His platinum hair had been combed back from his forehead. Water beaded on the shoulders of his coat. One gloved hand rested on the ivory handle of his cane; the other held a paper bag with the Golden Empress logo printed across it. Aurora’s fingers tightened around the door. “No.” “Good evening to you as well.” “What are you doing here?” “Standing in a draught, it seems.” “You know where the stairs are.” “I also know you have three deadbolts.” His gaze moved to the chain. “You’ve only used one.” “Give me a reason to use the other two.” His amber eye caught the light. The black one seemed to swallow it. “I brought food.” “I can see that.” “You haven’t eaten.” “I don’t remember asking you to keep track.” “You didn’t.” That answer sat between them, harder to dismiss than an excuse. Aurora studied the narrow slice of his face visible through the gap. She’d spent months practising the sight of him in her mind until it no longer unsettled her. The real thing had ruined the work in seconds. Behind her, Ptolemy jumped from the arm of the sofa and padded into the hall. The tabby pressed his head against Aurora’s ankle, then peered through the gap. “Even the cat is pleased to see me,” Lucien said. “Ptolemy likes paper bags.” “He has excellent taste.” “He has a weakness for fish.” “Then we have something in common.” Aurora let the door swing shut. Lucien didn’t move. His shoes remained on the landing, his shoulders square beneath the coat. She heard no protest, no knock. That was worse. She set her forehead against the wood and counted to four, the way she did when a customer shouted at her over a late delivery. Then she slid the chain free and opened the door again. “You have five minutes.” “I’ll try to be concise.” “Don’t.” He stepped inside. She shut the door and turned all three deadbolts. The metal clicks filled the cramped hall. Lucien watched her hands. His gaze paused at the small crescent scar on her left wrist, then lifted before she could cover it. The flat looked as if a bookshop had collided with a paper mill. Scrolls crowded the windowsill. Research notes covered the kitchen table beneath a chipped mug and a stack of unopened post. Ptolemy threaded between Lucien’s legs, inspected his trousers, then sat beside the food bag. “You’ve moved the table,” Lucien said. “I’ve moved a lot of things.” “Have you?” “Not enough.” He offered her the bag. She didn’t take it. “Set it down.” He obeyed, placing it on the table with care. The smell of ginger and fried garlic escaped through the folded top. Her stomach tightened, betraying her at once. Lucien heard it. His mouth shifted, not quite a smile. “Don’t.” “I said nothing.” “You made a face.” “My face has been accused of worse.” “Your face has earned worse.” He lowered his eyes to the bag. “I brought the dumplings you used to steal from the kitchen.” “I never stole them.” “You took six from a tray marked for the staff.” “I was staff.” “You were delivering orders.” “I was delivering hunger.” A brief warmth crossed his features. It vanished as soon as it arrived. Aurora remained by the door. “Why are you here?” Lucien unbuttoned his coat. “I need your help.” “No.” “I haven’t told you what with.” “You could be asking me to hide a body. The answer would still be no.” “I’d choose someone with a larger freezer.” “Then we’ve both saved time.” He rested one hand on the cane. The ivory handle bore a faint scratch near the curve. Aurora remembered where it came from: the edge of a table, the night he’d laughed so hard he’d leaned back too far. She remembered his laugh more clearly than she wanted to. “What happened?” she asked. He looked up. “A ledger disappeared.” “Call the police.” “It contains names that would make the police less useful than usual.” “Supernatural names?” “And a few human ones.” “Why bring it to me?” “Because you can read the code.” “I can read a code. That doesn’t mean I’ll help you.” “I know.” The quiet certainty in his voice snagged at her. Lucien didn’t plead. He made offers, set terms, and let other people mistake the silence for kindness. She’d once admired that discipline. Then she’d learned what it concealed. “Who took it?” “I don’t know.” “Then you don’t have a lead.” “I have a time and a place.” “Which is?” “Tonight. A warehouse near the canal.” Aurora gave a short laugh. “And you came all the way here because you thought I’d drop everything and go with you?” “I came because the code was yours.” “It was my code because I wrote it.” “Yes.” “You didn’t have permission to keep it.” “No.” “You copied my notes.” “I did.” “You told me you’d destroyed them.” “I lied.” She stared at him. The damp had darkened the cuff of his coat. He looked tired beneath the polish, a fine tension drawn from his jaw to the hinge of his neck. “You always did know how to make an apology sound like a confession.” “I’m not apologising for the ledger.” “Of course not.” “I’m apologising for the notes.” The words landed without ornament. No explanation followed. Aurora hated how much of her wanted one. She crossed to the table and opened the paper bag. A carton of dumplings sat on top of a tub of rice. Beneath them, a second bag held a slice of lemon cake from the bakery around the corner. “You remembered,” she said. “I remember most things about you.” “That was never the problem.” His hand tightened on the cane. “No.” Ptolemy reached up and hooked a claw into the bag. Aurora moved it out of his reach. “Sit down,” she said. Lucien glanced at her. “Is that part of the five minutes?” “It’s a practical instruction. You’re dripping on my floor.” He took the chair nearest the door. His cane rested against the table, within easy reach. Aurora found two plates in the sink and rinsed them, though one had only a tea ring. She needed the tap running. The water filled the narrow kitchen with a steady hiss, giving her something to listen to besides his breathing. When she turned, he had taken off his gloves. A thin red line crossed the base of his thumb. “What happened to your hand?” “Nothing.” “Lucien.” “A cut.” “From what?” “Something sharp.” “That’s a startlingly complete answer.” He slid his bare hand beneath the table. She placed the plates down. “I’m not asking because I care.” “I know.” “Stop agreeing with me.” “I’ll make a note of it.” “Don’t you dare.” He leaned back. “You have a small scar on your wrist. I have a cut on my hand. Neither deserves a hearing.” “That’s not the same.” “No. Yours came from a window when you were twelve.” The plate stopped in her hand. “You remember that?” “You broke into your parents’ conservatory to retrieve a book. The window did most of the work.” “I told you that once.” “You told me everything once.” The flat seemed to narrow around them. Aurora set the plate on the table and stood with both palms against its edge. “You don’t get to talk as if I handed you the whole of me and you simply misplaced it.” His face lost the last trace of warmth. “I know.” “Do you?” “I thought I could keep you out of it.” “You kept me out by making the choice for me.” “I thought it would keep you safe.” “You thought you knew better.” “Yes.” The answer had no defence in it. She would have preferred a defence. She could have knocked one down. Aurora pulled out the opposite chair and sat. “You could have told me.” “I should have.” “You could have trusted me.” “I should have.” “You could have come back.” His eyes held hers. “I wanted to.” “That isn’t what I asked.” “No.” He looked at the table, at the maps and scraps of handwriting crowding its surface. “I didn’t come back because I was ashamed.” She swallowed. “You were better at shame than I was.” “I had practice.” “You had practice at leaving.” The words cut deeper than she meant them to. Lucien didn’t flinch, but his fingers closed around the cane’s handle. “I deserved that.” “Don’t make it easy.” “I’m not.” “Then tell me what you want from me. The actual answer.” He drew a breath through his nose. “I want your help with the ledger. I want you to come because I don’t trust anyone else to read the code, and because there’s a chance the person who took it knows your name.” “And after that?” “After that, you decide whether you ever want to see me again.” “You came here expecting me to say yes.” “I came here expecting you to say no.” “Then why bring dinner?” “Because you would be angry, and you forget to eat when you’re angry.” “I don’t forget.” “You once spent twelve hours translating a receipt because you’d decided it was evidence of a demonic import route.” “It was.” “It was a receipt for a kettle.” “It was a very suspicious kettle.” A breath escaped her, almost a laugh. She caught it and set her jaw. Lucien’s gaze softened. “There you are.” “Don’t.” “I know.” The pause between them felt crowded with old rooms: his office, the dim booth at the bar, the doorstep outside her last flat when he’d stood close enough for her to feel his coat brush hers and said the one thing she hadn’t known how to forgive. Aurora reached for a dumpling. “What time?” “Now.” “Of course.” “The warehouse won’t stay empty.” “You could have led with that.” “I wanted to be invited in.” “You were not invited in.” “No,” he said. “But you let me stay.” “Only because it’s raining.” “I appreciate the distinction.” She pointed the dumpling at him. “We go in, we find the ledger, and you tell me everything you know. No omissions. No clever edits.” “Agreed.” “If you lie to me again, I leave.” “Agreed.” “If you get between me and a threat—” “I know.” “Finish that sentence and I leave now.” His mouth closed. Aurora set the dumpling down and reached for her coat, hanging over a stack of scrolls near the window. Lucien rose to help, then stopped when she turned. She shrugged into the coat herself and pulled the collar straight. “Five minutes are up,” she said. “I know.” She opened the door and lifted the chain. Lucien reached for his gloves, then paused with one half on. “Rory.” Her hand stayed on the lock. “Don’t call me that.” “Understood.” She turned the key. “Bring the cane.” “I wasn’t planning to leave it.” “Then we’re both prepared.” He took the food bag from the table and tucked it beneath his arm. Aurora pulled the door open. The damp air from the stairwell slipped into the flat, carrying the curry house’s spice and the rain’s cold metal smell. Lucien stepped past her without touching her shoulder. She followed him onto the landing and locked the three deadbolts behind them.
created_at"2026-09-23T08:25:27.379Z" 9/23/2026, 8:25:27 AM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags9
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences165
tagDensity0.055
leniency0.109
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
97.41% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1927
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"very"
count1
highlights
0"very"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
84.43% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1927
totalAiIsms6
found
0
word"unsettled"
count1
1
word"stomach"
count1
2
word"warmth"
count2
3
word"silence"
count1
4
word"tension"
count1
highlights
0"unsettled"
1"stomach"
2"warmth"
3"silence"
4"tension"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences118
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences118
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences274
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen47
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1927
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions30
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
66.67% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions37
wordCount1049
uniqueNames6
maxNameDensity1.53
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Aurora16
Lucien15
Moreau1
Golden1
Empress1
Ptolemy3
persons
0"Aurora"
1"Lucien"
2"Moreau"
3"Ptolemy"
places(empty)
globalScore0.737
windowScore0.667
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences83
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"not quite a smile"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1927
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences274
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs200
mean9.64
std11.39
cv1.182
sampleLengths
017
17
260
36
41
56
65
76
86
917
109
1113
123
134
143
158
162
1749
1828
1910
204
214
226
236
246
2549
2611
274
285
291
3042
3147
326
336
342
352
369
373
3828
3910
401
413
424
437
445
4518
464
4710
483
494
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences118
matches
0"been combed"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs190
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences1
totalSentences274
ratio0.004
matches
0"One gloved hand rested on the ivory handle of his cane; the other held a paper bag with the Golden Empress logo printed across it."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1049
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount27
adverbRatio0.025738798856053385
lyAdverbCount2
lyAdverbRatio0.0019065776930409914
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences274
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences274
mean7.03
std5.58
cv0.793
sampleLengths
017
17
217
310
48
525
66
71
86
95
106
116
1213
134
149
156
167
173
184
193
208
212
2211
2312
2417
259
2615
2713
2810
294
304
316
326
336
343
3512
366
373
3825
3911
404
415
421
433
449
457
464
4719
4813
494
46.72% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats9
diversityRatio0.23357664233576642
totalSentences274
uniqueOpeners64
60.61% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences110
matches
0"Then she slid the chain"
1"Then she’d learned what it"
ratio0.018
45.45% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount48
totalSentences110
matches
0"He stood beneath the stairwell"
1"His platinum hair had been"
2"His gaze moved to the"
3"His amber eye caught the"
4"She’d spent months practising the"
5"His shoes remained on the"
6"She heard no protest, no"
7"She set her forehead against"
8"He stepped inside."
9"She shut the door and"
10"His gaze paused at the"
11"He offered her the bag."
12"She didn’t take it."
13"He obeyed, placing it on"
14"Her stomach tightened, betraying her"
15"His mouth shifted, not quite"
16"He lowered his eyes to"
17"It vanished as soon as"
18"He rested one hand on"
19"She remembered his laugh more"
ratio0.436
0.91% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount101
totalSentences110
matches
0"The door opened six inches,"
1"He stood beneath the stairwell"
2"His platinum hair had been"
3"Water beaded on the shoulders"
4"Aurora’s fingers tightened around the"
5"His gaze moved to the"
6"His amber eye caught the"
7"The black one seemed to"
8"That answer sat between them,"
9"Aurora studied the narrow slice"
10"She’d spent months practising the"
11"The real thing had ruined"
12"The tabby pressed his head"
13"Aurora let the door swing"
14"Lucien didn’t move."
15"His shoes remained on the"
16"She heard no protest, no"
17"That was worse."
18"She set her forehead against"
19"He stepped inside."
ratio0.918
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences110
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences38
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"He stood beneath the stairwell bulb in a charcoal suit that looked untouched by the drizzle outside."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags9
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags7
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences165
tagDensity0.042
leniency0.085
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
86.7396%