Run: 2026-09-23-01M36P03WDD2K67HF9AR28QMET

Run Details

Duration:
33.9s
Cost:
$0.001311
Provider:
OpenAI

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The door opened against the chain, leaving a narrow gap between Rory and Lucien Moreau. For a beat, neither moved. His platinum hair held its precise sweep; his charcoal coat showed rain along the shoulders. The ivory knob of his cane rested beneath one hand. In the gap, Rory saw his amber eye, then the black one. She kept her fingers on the door’s edge. “You’ve got the wrong flat.” “Eva’s name is on the bell.” “Eva isn’t in.” “I came to see you.” “Then you’ve got the wrong evening.” Ptolemy wound around Rory’s ankles, his tail brushing her calf. The tabby stopped at the threshold and fixed Lucien with the suspicion of a magistrate. Lucien glanced down. “He remembers me.” “He remembers you tried to feed him olives.” “He ate one.” “He spat it into your shoe.” “An act of poor judgement on both sides.” Rory’s mouth twitched before she could stop it. She shut it down and shifted her shoulder against the door. The chain held. Behind her, books and scrolls crowded the little flat’s shelves, and a stack of Eva’s notes had slid across the kitchen table into a tea ring. “What do you want?” “Five minutes.” “You had more than five minutes last time.” “I know.” The words landed without defence. That made them harder to brush aside. Rory studied his face through the gap. He looked rested, dressed, assembled. She remembered the way he’d appeared in the back room of the Golden Empress after midnight, sleeves rolled to his elbows, a cut across his knuckles and her name in his mouth as though he’d been carrying it there all night. She remembered the kiss that followed. Then the morning after, when she learned he’d known Evan had been looking for her and had chosen not to tell her. The chain scraped as she tested it with her thumb. “Five minutes,” she said. “You stay by the door.” “Agreed.” She shut the door, lifted the chain, and opened it again. Lucien stepped inside. His cane clicked once against the floorboards. Rory closed the door and slid all three deadbolts into place. “You still prefer a fortress,” he said. “I prefer doors that stay shut.” His gaze travelled over her face and settled on the small crescent scar at her left wrist, visible beneath her pushed-up sleeve. Rory pulled the cuff down. “Don’t.” His eyes returned to hers. “I didn’t say anything.” “You looked.” “I can stop looking.” “Can you?” The question held them there. Lucien’s hand tightened around the cane handle, the only sign that it had struck. Rory moved past him into the kitchen. “Five minutes.” Ptolemy followed, then sat on a book beside the radiator. The flat smelled of black tea, paper, and the curry house downstairs. Rory took a mug from the counter and poured from the chipped kettle. She didn’t ask if Lucien wanted one. He stayed near the door. “You came all this way to stand in the draught?” “I came because I owed you an apology.” “You’ve owed me one for months.” “I know.” “Do you have anything besides that?” Lucien took a breath. The cane’s silver ferrule tapped once against the boards, then went still. “I should have told you Evan had been asking questions.” Rory set the kettle down. “You should have told me you’d made a deal with him.” “I didn’t make a deal.” “You gave him information.” “I gave him a name he already had.” “He didn’t know where I was.” “He knew you’d left Cardiff. He knew you’d come to London. He was asking everyone who might have seen you.” “And you decided I didn’t need to know.” “I thought telling you would put you in more danger.” “You thought wrong.” “Yes.” She turned, mug in hand. “That’s it? You thought wrong?” “No.” Lucien’s jaw shifted. “I thought I could manage the risk for you. I mistook your fear for a reason to take the choice out of your hands.” The kettle ticked as it cooled. Rory lifted the mug, but the tea was too hot to drink. She held it between both hands. “That sounds almost like you understand.” “I do understand.” “Understanding after the fact doesn’t change what you did.” “I’m not asking it to.” He said it without lowering his eyes or dressing the admission up. Rory hated that it made her believe him. She set the mug on the table. “Why now?” “Because I heard you were staying here.” “That’s not an answer.” “No.” He glanced at the notes scattered around them. “I heard you’d been asking questions about a man in Limehouse who sells names. I came to tell you not to meet him alone.” Rory gave a short laugh. “You crossed the city to give me an order?” “To give you information.” “Try that again.” “His name is Dorian Vale. He’s not a broker. He sells people to anyone who can pay.” “I know who he is.” “Then you know he’s dangerous.” “I know enough to decide what I do with that.” “I didn’t come to stop you.” “You came to tell me what to do.” “I came because I didn’t want you walking into a room without knowing what waited in it.” “Last time, you kept me in the dark and called it protection. Why should I take your word now?” Lucien’s mouth opened. He shut it again and let the silence stand. Rory took a drink. The tea burned her tongue. “You could’ve sent a message.” “I considered it.” “And?” “I didn’t want another thing left between us that you had to read alone.” Her fingers tightened around the mug. “You don’t get to decide what happens between us.” “No.” He looked at her. “I don’t.” The room seemed to contract around the table, the notes, the two of them. Rory noticed the rain slipping from his coat onto the floor. One dark drop spread near his shoe. “You kissed me,” she said. “Then you lied to me.” “I did.” “Was the kiss a lie too?” “No.” His answer came fast. Rory had expected a pause, a qualification, one of those careful little phrases he used when he wanted to keep every door open. She found herself searching his face for the trick. Lucien held her gaze. “You don’t get to say that like it fixes anything.” “I know.” “Stop agreeing with me.” “What would you prefer?” “Something honest.” His fingers eased around the cane. “I wanted you. I still want you. I also thought wanting you gave me the right to choose what you could bear. It didn’t.” Rory looked down at the mug. A pale crescent of tea clung to the rim. “You make everything sound tidy.” “I’m not trying to make it tidy.” “No? You’ve got three clean sentences and a polished coat.” “I can take off the coat.” “That isn’t what I meant.” “I know.” She set the mug down with a hard click. “You keep saying that as if it proves you’ve changed.” “What would prove it?” “Nothing you can say in my kitchen.” He nodded once. The gesture carried no appeal. He looked at the space between them, then at the door he’d come through. His hand shifted on the cane. Rory watched him reach for nothing. “You’re leaving?” “You said five minutes.” “I said you could stay by the door.” “I can go.” The flat went quiet except for the hiss of a pipe behind the wall. Ptolemy rose from the radiator and stretched, his claws catching in Eva’s notes. Rory moved first, stepping around the table. “Don’t make me ask you to stay.” Lucien stopped. She stood close enough to see the small scar at his chin, a faint line she’d touched once with her thumb while he was speaking French into her hair. The memory arrived intact: the warmth of his skin, his laugh against her cheek, her own hand resting on his chest before she remembered the door he kept locked inside himself. “Your five minutes aren’t up,” she said. “No.” “And I haven’t decided what I think of your apology.” “I wouldn’t expect you to.” “I still don’t trust you.” “I know.” Her eyes narrowed. “One more time and I’ll throw you out.” A hint of warmth reached his face, then stopped short of becoming a smile. “Understood.” Rory lifted her hand, then let it fall before she could touch him. Lucien watched the movement. He didn’t reach for her. “What did Dorian want with me?” she asked. “He thinks you have something he can use.” “What?” “I don’t know.” “Then you came here with half a warning.” “I came with what I had.” “And you expect me to thank you?” “No.” She folded her arms, aware of the distance between them and the fact that it no longer felt like enough. “Tell me everything you know about him,” she said. “Start with why he knows my name.” Lucien’s eyes held hers. His hand moved from the cane to the edge of the table, leaving the blade hidden and his palm open. “Before I do,” he said, “I need to know what you heard about me.”
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags10
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences115
tagDensity0.087
leniency0.174
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1530
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
90.20% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1530
totalAiIsms3
found
0
word"silence"
count1
1
word"warmth"
count2
highlights
0"silence"
1"warmth"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
highlights
0"eyes narrowed"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences92
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences92
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences197
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen41
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1530
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions28
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
30.10% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions43
wordCount834
uniqueNames9
maxNameDensity2.4
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity4
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Rory20
Lucien13
Moreau1
Eva2
Golden1
Empress1
Evan1
French1
Ptolemy3
persons
0"Rory"
1"Lucien"
2"Moreau"
3"Eva"
4"Evan"
5"Ptolemy"
places(empty)
globalScore0.301
windowScore0.333
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences57
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"felt like enough"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1530
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences197
matches
0"hated that it"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs140
mean10.93
std11.62
cv1.063
sampleLengths
015
142
28
35
46
53
65
76
825
96
108
113
126
138
1448
154
162
178
182
1912
2081
2110
229
231
2411
2521
267
276
2827
291
309
312
324
332
3419
359
3642
375
3810
398
406
412
426
4316
4410
4516
465
474
488
496
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences92
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs152
matches
0"was speaking"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences1
totalSentences197
ratio0.005
matches
0"His platinum hair held its precise sweep; his charcoal coat showed rain along the shoulders."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount835
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount29
adverbRatio0.03473053892215569
lyAdverbCount1
lyAdverbRatio0.0011976047904191617
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences197
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences197
mean7.77
std6.02
cv0.775
sampleLengths
015
15
215
310
412
58
65
76
83
95
106
1110
1215
133
143
158
163
176
188
198
2011
213
2226
234
242
258
262
275
287
297
305
3141
326
3322
3410
354
365
371
3811
393
407
4111
427
436
4422
455
461
475
484
492
44.42% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats11
diversityRatio0.2182741116751269
totalSentences197
uniqueOpeners43
39.68% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences84
matches
0"Then the morning after, when"
ratio0.012
67.62% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount32
totalSentences84
matches
0"His platinum hair held its"
1"She kept her fingers on"
2"She shut it down and"
3"He looked rested, dressed, assembled."
4"She remembered the way he’d"
5"She remembered the kiss that"
6"She shut the door, lifted"
7"His cane clicked once against"
8"His gaze travelled over her"
9"His eyes returned to hers."
10"She didn’t ask if Lucien"
11"He stayed near the door."
12"She turned, mug in hand."
13"She held it between both"
14"He said it without lowering"
15"She set the mug on"
16"He glanced at the notes"
17"He shut it again and"
18"Her fingers tightened around the"
19"He looked at her"
ratio0.381
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount79
totalSentences84
matches
0"The door opened against the"
1"His platinum hair held its"
2"The ivory knob of his"
3"She kept her fingers on"
4"Ptolemy wound around Rory’s ankles,"
5"The tabby stopped at the"
6"Lucien glanced down."
7"Rory’s mouth twitched before she"
8"She shut it down and"
9"The chain held."
10"The words landed without defence."
11"That made them harder to"
12"Rory studied his face through"
13"He looked rested, dressed, assembled."
14"She remembered the way he’d"
15"She remembered the kiss that"
16"The chain scraped as she"
17"She shut the door, lifted"
18"Lucien stepped inside."
19"His cane clicked once against"
ratio0.94
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences84
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences33
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"She remembered the way he’d appeared in the back room of the Golden Empress after midnight, sleeves rolled to his elbows, a cut across his knuckles and her name…"
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags10
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags7
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences115
tagDensity0.061
leniency0.122
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
85.7337%