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Run: 2026-09-23-01M36P08YBC7FAXF3SQG1SGQTW
Run Details
Model:
GPT-6 Luna (Reasoning, Medium)
Test:
Bad Writing Habits
Scenario:
Romance: separated couple reunites
Duration:
28.8s
Cost:
$0.001093
Provider:
OpenAI
Evaluation summary
Score
Evaluator
Details Link
100.00%
Adverbs in dialogue tags
(details)
100.00%
AI-ism adverb frequency
(details)
100.00%
AI-ism character names
(details)
100.00%
AI-ism location names
(details)
57.84%
AI-ism word frequency
(details)
100.00%
Cliché density
(details)
100.00%
Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
(details)
100.00%
Filter word density
(details)
100.00%
Gibberish response detection
(details)
100.00%
Markdown formatting overuse
(details)
100.00%
Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
(details)
66.07%
Name drop frequency
(details)
100.00%
Narrator intent-glossing
(details)
100.00%
"Not X but Y" pattern overuse
(details)
100.00%
Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
(details)
100.00%
Paragraph length variance
(details)
100.00%
Passive voice overuse
(details)
100.00%
Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
(details)
100.00%
Em-dash & semicolon overuse
(details)
100.00%
Purple prose (modifier overload)
(details)
100.00%
Repeated phrase echo
(details)
100.00%
Sentence length variance
(details)
52.44%
Sentence opener variety
(details)
70.92%
Adverb-first sentence starts
(details)
92.34%
Pronoun-first sentence starts
(details)
23.83%
Subject-first sentence starts
(details)
0.00%
Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
(details)
100.00%
Technical jargon density
(details)
100.00%
Useless dialogue additions
(details)
100.00%
Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
(details)
88.7813%
Overall
Model input
System
You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Romance genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>
Model response
Messages
Meta
AI
The door opened against Lucien
Moreau’s ivory-handled cane.
Aurora caught the edge before
it struck the wall.
The first deadbolt still hung
loose beneath her hand; the other two stood between them and the hall.
Lucien’s platinum hair had lost
its neat sweep.
Blood darkened one cuff of
his charcoal coat. “Before you shut that door,” he said, “someone is coming up the stairs.” “Then you’d better give me a reason not to shut it.” His mismatched eyes held hers. Amber. Black.
The same gaze that had
watched her undress three months ago, then watched her walk away alone. “Because they’re carrying your name.”
Rory’s fingers tightened on the
door. Behind her, Ptolemy gave a warning yowl from somewhere among Eva’s stacks of books and scrolls. “Which name?”
Lucien glanced at the gap
between door and frame. “Aurora Carter.” Her
stomach
went cold. She opened the door wider. He slipped inside, cane first, and she slammed the door behind him.
The locks clicked into place
one after another. Three deadbolts, Eva’s rule. Three chances to keep the world out.
Lucien leaned his shoulder against
the wall while she checked each lock.
He didn’t ask where Eva
was.
He knew she’d gone to
the British Library to chase a reference, and he knew Rory had come to feed the cat and keep an eye on the notes. He knew too much. He always had. “Sit down,” she said. “I’m quite
comfortable
.” “You’re bleeding on Eva’s floor.” “That is less
comfortable
.”
She pointed at the worn
chair between a stack of dictionaries and a half-eaten packet of cat biscuits.
Lucien lowered himself into it
with a quiet hiss.
His cane rested across his
knees, the ivory handle
gleaming
beneath the lamp. Rory brought the first-aid tin from the kitchen. The flat smelled of curry from the restaurant below, dust from Eva’s old books, and the sharp metallic tang of his blood. “How bad?” “Not mine.” “Then whose?” “Someone who made the mistake of standing between me and your door.”
She set the tin on
the table. “How gallant. Did he die?” “No.” “Pity.”
His mouth moved, almost a
smile. “You’ve become cruel.” “You’ve been gone long enough to confuse
silence
with growth.” The almost-smile vanished. Rory snapped open the tin and found clean gauze.
She didn’t offer it to
him.
Instead, she took his hand
and turned it palm-up. A narrow cut scored the heel, shallow but still welling red.
His skin felt warm under
her thumb. Lucien watched her touch him.
He had always been good
at stillness.
It had made his attention
feel
like a hand at the back of her neck. “You could have sent word,” she said. “I did.” “An envelope with no letter in it isn’t word. It’s a joke with expensive paper.” “It was a warning.” “It was cowardice.” His fingers flexed beneath hers. For one brief moment, the old Lucien surfaced, the man who had once pressed her knuckles to his mouth and asked her to trust him.
Then he drew his hand
away. “Someone opened the envelope before it reached you.” “Convenient.” “I don’t expect you to believe me.” “Good. We’re making progress.”
She wrapped the gauze around
his palm and tied it tight.
He didn’t flinch, though she
knew the knot pulled.
Her wrist scar brushed his
cuff, the small crescent pale against her skin. His gaze dropped to it. “Don’t,” she said. “I said nothing.” “You don’t have to.” A knock struck the door. Ptolemy shot from beneath the desk and vanished under a chair. Rory froze with one hand still on Lucien’s bandage. The knock came again. Three
measured
taps. Lucien stood, drawing the cane into his grip. “You should go into the kitchen.” “You should stop giving orders in my friend’s flat.” “Rory.” Her name, spoken in that low, careful voice, pulled at something she’d spent months stitching shut. She stepped past him and took the brass letter opener from the table. “If you say my name like that again, I’ll use this.” “On me?” “Start with the coat. Work inward.” The handle turned. One of the deadbolts shuddered. Rory’s gaze snapped to it. Lucien moved between her and the door. “Who’s out there?” “A debt collector.” “Demons don’t send men with clipboards.” “This one has adapted.” The deadbolt rattled again. A thin black line crept around its brass edge, like ink seeping through paper. Rory lifted the letter opener. The metal
trembled
in her grip. “Can you stop it?” “I can.” “Will it cost you?” “Almost certainly.” The latch groaned. Rory looked at his bandaged hand. “You came here bleeding, brought trouble to Eva’s door, and expect me to let you pay whatever price you like?” “I expect nothing from you.” “Liar.” For a beat, they stood close enough that she
could feel
his breath. He looked as he had the last night they shared, only rougher around the edges. The memory of his mouth against hers was sharp and unwelcome. So was the hurt that followed it. “You told me I was safe,” she said. “I believed it.” “You knew they were looking for me.” “I knew they were looking for what you carried. I didn’t know they had your name.” “You knew enough to leave.” His jaw tightened. Beneath the bruised skin at his throat, a dark vein
pulsed
once, then faded. “I left because staying would have given them another way to reach you.” “You don’t get to decide what hurts me.” “No.” His voice thinned. “I don’t.” The door gave a hard jerk. The second deadbolt snapped loose. Lucien raised his cane. The ivory handle twisted beneath his hand, revealing the blade within. It caught the light, a narrow line of silver. Rory slid the letter opener into her sleeve. “Tell me what you brought to Eva’s flat.” “Nothing.” “Then why are they here?” His black eye fixed on the door. “Because I am.” The first deadbolt dropped. Metal struck wood. Rory stepped beside him, not behind him. “You could have led them somewhere else.” “I did. They followed.” “Then you are even worse at your work than I thought.” “I’ll bear the insult.” The final lock
began to
turn by itself. Lucien planted the cane against the floor. A sound like a struck glass shivered through the flat. Books
fluttered
open. Ptolemy hissed from under the chair. “Get down,” Lucien said. Rory grabbed his sleeve and hauled him sideways as the door burst inward. Something tall and narrow filled the doorway. Its face wore a man’s features badly, skin stretched too tight across a skull, mouth split to reveal rows of small, dark teeth. In one hand it held a folded sheet of paper. Rory’s name showed through the paper in fresh red ink. Lucien’s blade flashed. The creature caught it between two fingers. The silver edge smoked against its skin, but it did not let go. “Lucien Moreau,” it rasped. “The contract has changed.” He braced his injured hand against the creature’s wrist. “Then you’ll have to renegotiate.” The thing smiled at Rory. “Your name is the payment now.”
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9/23/2026, 8:27:05 AM
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Evaluation details
Result
Evaluator
Details
Meta Data
100.00%
Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags
8
adverbTagCount
0
adverbTags
(empty)
dialogueSentences
69
tagDensity
0.116
leniency
0.232
rawRatio
0
effectiveRatio
0
100.00%
AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount
1186
totalAiIsmAdverbs
0
found
(empty)
highlights
(empty)
100.00%
AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
100.00%
AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
57.84%
AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount
1186
totalAiIsms
10
found
0
word
"stomach"
count
1
1
word
"comfortable"
count
2
2
word
"gleaming"
count
1
3
word
"silence"
count
1
4
word
"measured"
count
1
5
word
"trembled"
count
1
6
word
"could feel"
count
1
7
word
"pulsed"
count
1
8
word
"fluttered"
count
1
highlights
0
"stomach"
1
"comfortable"
2
"gleaming"
3
"silence"
4
"measured"
5
"trembled"
6
"could feel"
7
"pulsed"
8
"fluttered"
100.00%
Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches
0
maxInWindow
0
found
(empty)
highlights
(empty)
100.00%
Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells
0
narrationSentences
103
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount
1
hedgeCount
1
narrationSentences
103
filterMatches
0
"feel"
hedgeMatches
0
"began to"
100.00%
Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences
164
gibberishSentences
0
adjustedGibberishSentences
0
longSentenceCount
0
runOnParagraphCount
0
giantParagraphCount
0
wordSaladCount
0
repetitionLoopCount
0
controlTokenCount
0
repeatedSegmentCount
0
maxSentenceWordsSeen
29
ratio
0
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans
0
markdownWords
0
totalWords
1186
ratio
0
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions
13
unquotedAttributions
0
matches
(empty)
66.07%
Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions
40
wordCount
834
uniqueNames
8
maxNameDensity
1.68
worstName
"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity
2.5
worstWindowName
"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Lucien
14
Moreau
1
Ptolemy
3
Eva
4
British
1
Library
1
Rory
13
Three
3
persons
0
"Lucien"
1
"Moreau"
2
"Ptolemy"
3
"Eva"
4
"Rory"
places
0
"British"
1
"Library"
globalScore
0.661
windowScore
0.833
100.00%
Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences
66
glossingSentenceCount
0
matches
(empty)
100.00%
"Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches
0
per1kWords
0
wordCount
1186
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount
0
totalSentences
164
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs
105
mean
11.3
std
11.06
cv
0.979
sampleLengths
0
8
1
27
2
16
3
13
4
11
5
24
6
5
7
22
8
2
9
11
10
9
11
31
12
54
13
4
14
3
15
5
16
4
17
40
18
30
19
2
20
2
21
2
22
12
23
12
24
1
25
1
26
9
27
10
28
3
29
42
30
27
31
7
32
2
33
15
34
4
35
3
36
36
37
8
38
1
39
7
40
4
41
33
42
5
43
3
44
3
45
4
46
5
47
20
48
7
49
14
100.00%
Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount
0
totalSentences
103
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount
0
totalVerbs
146
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount
0
semicolonCount
1
flaggedSentences
1
totalSentences
164
ratio
0.006
matches
0
"The first deadbolt still hung loose beneath her hand; the other two stood between them and the hall."
100.00%
Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount
839
adjectiveStacks
0
stackExamples
(empty)
adverbCount
24
adverbRatio
0.028605482717520857
lyAdverbCount
2
lyAdverbRatio
0.0023837902264600714
100.00%
Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences
164
echoCount
0
echoWords
(empty)
100.00%
Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences
164
mean
7.23
std
4.94
cv
0.683
sampleLengths
0
8
1
9
2
18
3
8
4
8
5
13
6
11
7
5
8
1
9
1
10
17
11
5
12
6
13
16
14
2
15
9
16
2
17
4
18
5
19
12
20
8
21
4
22
7
23
12
24
6
25
29
26
4
27
3
28
4
29
3
30
5
31
4
32
18
33
9
34
13
35
8
36
22
37
2
38
2
39
2
40
12
41
7
42
5
43
1
44
1
45
6
46
3
47
10
48
3
49
9
52.44%
Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats
9
diversityRatio
0.3475609756097561
totalSentences
164
uniqueOpeners
57
70.92%
Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount
2
totalSentences
94
matches
0
"Instead, she took his hand"
1
"Then he drew his hand"
ratio
0.021
92.34%
Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount
30
totalSentences
94
matches
0
"His mismatched eyes held hers."
1
"Her stomach went cold."
2
"She opened the door wider."
3
"He slipped inside, cane first,"
4
"He didn’t ask where Eva"
5
"He knew she’d gone to"
6
"He knew too much."
7
"He always had."
8
"She pointed at the worn"
9
"His cane rested across his"
10
"She set the tin on"
11
"His mouth moved, almost a"
12
"She didn’t offer it to"
13
"His skin felt warm under"
14
"He had always been good"
15
"It had made his attention"
16
"His fingers flexed beneath hers."
17
"She wrapped the gauze around"
18
"He didn’t flinch, though she"
19
"Her wrist scar brushed his"
ratio
0.319
23.83%
Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount
82
totalSentences
94
matches
0
"The door opened against Lucien"
1
"Aurora caught the edge before"
2
"The first deadbolt still hung"
3
"Lucien’s platinum hair had lost"
4
"Blood darkened one cuff of"
5
"His mismatched eyes held hers."
6
"The same gaze that had"
7
"Rory’s fingers tightened on the"
8
"Lucien glanced at the gap"
9
"Her stomach went cold."
10
"She opened the door wider."
11
"He slipped inside, cane first,"
12
"The locks clicked into place"
13
"Lucien leaned his shoulder against"
14
"He didn’t ask where Eva"
15
"He knew she’d gone to"
16
"He knew too much."
17
"He always had."
18
"She pointed at the worn"
19
"Lucien lowered himself into it"
ratio
0.872
0.00%
Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount
0
totalSentences
94
matches
(empty)
ratio
0
100.00%
Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences
30
technicalSentenceCount
0
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags
8
uselessAdditionCount
0
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags
6
fancyCount
0
fancyTags
(empty)
dialogueSentences
69
tagDensity
0.087
leniency
0.174
rawRatio
0
effectiveRatio
0
88.7813%