| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 18 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 165 | | tagDensity | 0.109 | | leniency | 0.218 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 92.90% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 2114 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 3 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 81.08% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 2114 | | totalAiIsms | 8 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "comforting" | | 1 | "footsteps" | | 2 | "silence" | | 3 | "familiar" | | 4 | "flickered" | | 5 | "comfortable" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 134 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 1 | | narrationSentences | 134 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 281 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 40 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 2112 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 44 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 64.02% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 45 | | wordCount | 1163 | | uniqueNames | 6 | | maxNameDensity | 1.72 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 3 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Lucien | 16 | | Moreau | 1 | | Rory | 20 | | Ptolemy | 5 | | Eva | 2 | | Avarosian | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Lucien" | | 1 | "Moreau" | | 2 | "Rory" | | 3 | "Ptolemy" | | 4 | "Eva" |
| | places | (empty) | | globalScore | 0.64 | | windowScore | 0.667 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 83 | | glossingSentenceCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.473 | | wordCount | 2112 | | matches | | 0 | "not fresh enough to bleed but not healed" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 281 | | matches | | 0 | "found that smell" | | 1 | "chose that moment" | | 2 | "hated that it" |
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| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 196 | | mean | 10.78 | | std | 12.3 | | cv | 1.141 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 10 | | 1 | 35 | | 2 | 4 | | 3 | 21 | | 4 | 12 | | 5 | 4 | | 6 | 13 | | 7 | 9 | | 8 | 11 | | 9 | 58 | | 10 | 5 | | 11 | 4 | | 12 | 3 | | 13 | 2 | | 14 | 9 | | 15 | 46 | | 16 | 1 | | 17 | 1 | | 18 | 16 | | 19 | 22 | | 20 | 1 | | 21 | 9 | | 22 | 1 | | 23 | 1 | | 24 | 18 | | 25 | 4 | | 26 | 9 | | 27 | 23 | | 28 | 6 | | 29 | 1 | | 30 | 9 | | 31 | 3 | | 32 | 5 | | 33 | 26 | | 34 | 8 | | 35 | 7 | | 36 | 4 | | 37 | 3 | | 38 | 60 | | 39 | 9 | | 40 | 5 | | 41 | 11 | | 42 | 2 | | 43 | 4 | | 44 | 2 | | 45 | 28 | | 46 | 7 | | 47 | 11 | | 48 | 7 | | 49 | 56 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 134 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 212 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 81.85% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 2 | | semicolonCount | 4 | | flaggedSentences | 6 | | totalSentences | 281 | | ratio | 0.021 | | matches | | 0 | "His platinum hair caught the hall light; rain beaded on the shoulders of his charcoal coat." | | 1 | "His hand caught the edge—not forcing it, just holding it there." | | 2 | "The cat had never trusted Lucien; it had once bitten through one of his gloves." | | 3 | "Paper crowded every surface; the single window showed a smeared reflection of the two of them standing several feet apart." | | 4 | "Rory felt the old pull between them—irritating, immediate, stubborn as a bruise." | | 5 | "The previous evening returned in fragments: a man by the bus stop, his face half-hidden beneath a cap; a silver flash at his hand when he lifted a phone." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1167 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 42 | | adverbRatio | 0.03598971722365039 | | lyAdverbCount | 6 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.005141388174807198 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 281 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 281 | | mean | 7.52 | | std | 6.1 | | cv | 0.812 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 10 | | 1 | 8 | | 2 | 16 | | 3 | 11 | | 4 | 4 | | 5 | 15 | | 6 | 6 | | 7 | 12 | | 8 | 4 | | 9 | 9 | | 10 | 4 | | 11 | 9 | | 12 | 11 | | 13 | 3 | | 14 | 24 | | 15 | 7 | | 16 | 24 | | 17 | 5 | | 18 | 4 | | 19 | 3 | | 20 | 2 | | 21 | 9 | | 22 | 8 | | 23 | 22 | | 24 | 16 | | 25 | 1 | | 26 | 1 | | 27 | 4 | | 28 | 12 | | 29 | 9 | | 30 | 4 | | 31 | 9 | | 32 | 1 | | 33 | 9 | | 34 | 1 | | 35 | 1 | | 36 | 5 | | 37 | 13 | | 38 | 4 | | 39 | 9 | | 40 | 5 | | 41 | 12 | | 42 | 6 | | 43 | 6 | | 44 | 1 | | 45 | 6 | | 46 | 3 | | 47 | 3 | | 48 | 5 | | 49 | 11 |
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| 46.80% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 9 | | diversityRatio | 0.2099644128113879 | | totalSentences | 281 | | uniqueOpeners | 59 | |
| 56.98% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 117 | | matches | | 0 | "Then the memory of the" | | 1 | "Then he’d taken his hand" |
| | ratio | 0.017 | |
| 49.06% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 50 | | totalSentences | 117 | | matches | | 0 | "His platinum hair caught the" | | 1 | "His mouth tightened." | | 2 | "She had once found that" | | 3 | "He looked past her, toward" | | 4 | "His eyes paused on the" | | 5 | "He lowered his gaze." | | 6 | "It didn’t erase it." | | 7 | "It simply gave it a" | | 8 | "She kept the chain fastened." | | 9 | "His hand caught the edge—not" | | 10 | "His face closed." | | 11 | "His voice went cold." | | 12 | "He’d let her." | | 13 | "She studied him through the" | | 14 | "He looked thinner than she" | | 15 | "Her fingers tightened on the" | | 16 | "She went still." | | 17 | "His grip shifted on the" | | 18 | "His eyes flickered." | | 19 | "He’d translated a page of" |
| | ratio | 0.427 | |
| 7.01% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 106 | | totalSentences | 117 | | matches | | 0 | "The door opened a hand’s" | | 1 | "Rory stared through the gap" | | 2 | "His platinum hair caught the" | | 3 | "The ivory handle of his" | | 4 | "Neither of them spoke." | | 5 | "A scroll slid to the" | | 6 | "Lucien’s gaze moved from her" | | 7 | "Rory kept one hand on" | | 8 | "His mouth tightened." | | 9 | "She had once found that" | | 10 | "That had been before he’d" | | 11 | "He looked past her, toward" | | 12 | "Books leaned against the walls" | | 13 | "His eyes paused on the" | | 14 | "He lowered his gaze." | | 15 | "The sentence took the heat" | | 16 | "It didn’t erase it." | | 17 | "It simply gave it a" | | 18 | "She kept the chain fastened." | | 19 | "A door shut somewhere below." |
| | ratio | 0.906 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 117 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 43 | | technicalSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "For a moment, the hallway filled with the old silence between them: the kind that had once stretched across late-night conversations, his shoulder beside hers a…" |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 18 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 14 | | fancyCount | 1 | | fancyTags | | | dialogueSentences | 165 | | tagDensity | 0.085 | | leniency | 0.17 | | rawRatio | 0.071 | | effectiveRatio | 0.012 | |