Run: 2026-09-23-01M36P1R3GBX72QR0F80W6SYTJ

Run Details

Duration:
39.0s
Cost:
$0.001489
Provider:
OpenAI

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The door opened a hand’s width, stopped by the chain. Rory stared through the gap at Lucien Moreau. His platinum hair caught the hall light; rain beaded on the shoulders of his charcoal coat. The ivory handle of his cane rested beneath one gloved hand. Neither of them spoke. Behind Rory, Ptolemy leapt from a stack of books and landed on the kitchen counter. A scroll slid to the floor. Lucien’s gaze moved from her face to the chain, then back again. “You’ve added a lock.” “Three, actually.” Rory kept one hand on the door. “You’ve found the first.” “I wasn’t aware you’d become so fond of security.” “I wasn’t aware you’d become so fond of arriving without warning.” His mouth tightened. In the narrow gap, she caught the faint scent of wet wool and something sharper beneath it, like smoke left in a sealed room. She had once found that smell comforting. That had been before he’d disappeared from her life with a warning, a lie, and no explanation she could use to hate him properly. “What do you want, Lucien?” “To speak with you.” “You’ve had months.” “I know.” “Then you’ll understand why I’m not inviting you in.” He looked past her, toward the cluttered flat. Books leaned against the walls in uneven towers, research notes pinned above the sofa, a chipped mug balanced on a closed dictionary. His eyes paused on the crescent scar at her wrist where her sleeve had slipped back. “Rory.” “Don’t.” He lowered his gaze. “I have information about the people who have been asking after you.” The sentence took the heat out of her anger. It didn’t erase it. It simply gave it a new place to stand. “Who?” “I’d prefer not to discuss it in the hallway.” “Convenient.” “Accurate.” She kept the chain fastened. “If you brought trouble to my door, you can take it back downstairs.” “I didn’t bring them.” “That’s not the same as saying they aren’t here.” A door shut somewhere below. Footsteps crossed the landing beneath them, then faded toward the curry house. Lucien didn’t look away from her. “May I come in?” he asked. “No.” A muscle ticked in his jaw. “I expected that.” “Good. You’re adjusting.” Rory pushed the door closed. His hand caught the edge—not forcing it, just holding it there. She froze. Lucien released it at once and raised both hands, cane balanced in one. “I won’t cross the threshold without your permission.” “You already crossed the city without asking.” “I can’t undo that.” “No. You can’t.” For a moment, the hallway filled with the old silence between them: the kind that had once stretched across late-night conversations, his shoulder beside hers at a crowded bar, his attention fixed on her mouth whenever she stopped speaking. Then the memory of the last time he’d looked at her rose up, too. His face closed. His voice went cold. Go home, Rory. This was never yours to carry. She’d gone. He’d let her. “What happened?” she asked. “And don’t give me another polished half-truth.” “I won’t.” “You said that before.” “I know.” Ptolemy wound around Rory’s ankles and gave a demanding yowl. Rory glanced down. The cat had never trusted Lucien; it had once bitten through one of his gloves. “Your audience is losing patience,” Lucien said. “Ptolemy has no patience. It’s one of his few consistent qualities.” “Then I’ll try to keep this brief.” She studied him through the gap. Rain had darkened the blond hair at his temples. He looked thinner than she remembered, though his suit sat precisely on his shoulders. The familiar heterochromia held her attention against her will: one amber eye, one black, both fixed on her with a care he had once hidden behind wit. “What information?” she asked. “Someone has been asking about the delivery routes from the Golden Empress.” Her fingers tightened on the door. “Who?” “I don’t know their name.” “Then you know nothing.” “I know they’re paying for details about a woman who works there. Black hair. Blue eyes. A scar on her wrist.” She went still. Lucien’s expression hardened at the sight of it. “I’m sorry.” “Don’t spend that yet. Who asked?” “A broker in Camden. He turned them away.” “Why?” “Because I reached him first.” “Of course you did.” “Rory, this isn’t a favour you owe me.” “I didn’t say it was.” “You’re treating it like one.” “I’m treating you like the man who left me alone with a warning he wouldn’t explain.” His grip shifted on the cane. “I was trying to keep you out of something dangerous.” “You kept me out of the truth.” “I had reasons.” “You always had reasons. You never had the decency to share them.” His eyes flickered. For a second, she saw the man who’d sat beside her on the floor of this flat at two in the morning, sorting through Eva’s research while Ptolemy slept on his jacket. He’d translated a page of Avarosian script and laughed when she called his handwriting criminal. He’d touched her wrist as he passed her a cup, thumb brushing the small scar. Neither of them had moved away. Then he’d taken his hand back. “May I come in now?” he asked. “You can tell me what you know from there.” “I’d rather not expose you to the whole building.” “That sounds like a problem for you.” His mouth softened, almost a smile, then thought better of it. “You haven’t changed.” “I have. You missed the interesting parts.” The words landed. He looked down at the threshold. “Can I at least close the door?” he asked. “The draught is making your cat consider violence.” “Ptolemy always considers violence.” The cat chose that moment to swipe at Rory’s heel. She shifted back, keeping one hand on the chain. Lucien didn’t take advantage of the movement. He stayed in the hall, shoulders squared beneath his damp coat. Rory unhooked the chain but left the door only partly open. “You get five minutes,” she said. “Thank you.” “That wasn’t gratitude. It was a timer.” “I understand.” She stepped aside. Lucien crossed the threshold with care, leaving the cane tip on the mat until she nodded toward the small strip of clear floor beside the bookcase. He wiped his shoes, hung his coat over the back of a chair, and kept his gloves on. Rory closed and locked the door. All three deadbolts slid home. Lucien listened to each one. “You remember the order,” she said. “I remember the night Eva installed them.” “You were here.” “I was.” “You were here a lot.” His gaze met hers. “Yes.” The flat seemed to contract around them. Paper crowded every surface; the single window showed a smeared reflection of the two of them standing several feet apart. Ptolemy hopped onto the arm of the sofa, looked Lucien over, then tucked his paws beneath himself. Rory folded her arms. “Start talking.” “Three days ago, a man came to the broker I mentioned. He had a photograph of you leaving the restaurant. He asked for your address and your usual delivery hours.” “Did the broker give him anything?” “No.” “Because you reached him first.” “Because he knows what happens when people sell information that belongs to me.” “Your favourite kind of explanation. Vague enough to sound impressive.” “It wasn’t meant to impress you.” “Then be precise.” Lucien set his cane against the table. “The man used a false name. His accent suggested the north of England, though I can’t be certain. He wore a silver ring engraved with a split circle. The broker thought the symbol meant nothing. I didn’t.” Rory’s attention sharpened. “What does it mean?” “I’m still checking.” She let out a short breath. “So you came here with a symbol and a stranger’s accent.” “I came because the man knew you worked for Yu-Fei. He’d been watching the restaurant.” “Did he follow me?” “I don’t know.” “You should have called.” “I don’t have your number.” She stared at him. “I deleted it,” he added. The honesty cut more cleanly than an excuse would have. Rory looked away first, toward the scattered pages on the table. “You could have asked Eva.” “I did.” “And?” “She told me to stay away from you.” “That was sensible.” “She also told me you’d decide for yourself.” “Eva enjoys making other people’s lives difficult.” “She does.” A silence settled between them. It wasn’t comfortable, but it wasn’t empty either. Rory remembered his voice in three languages, the easy shift between them. She remembered how he’d once taught her to hold a knife without showing fear, his hand warm over hers, his breath close to her ear. She pushed the thought aside. “Why are you telling me this in person?” she asked. “You could’ve left a note.” “Because I need to know whether you saw the ring.” “I don’t know. I deliver food, Lucien. I don’t catalogue strangers’ jewellery.” “Think.” “I do think.” “I know.” His tone gentled, and that made her angrier than the warning had. “You notice things other people miss.” “Don’t flatter me into doing your work.” “I’m asking because you might have seen it.” She studied his face, searching for the old artifice. “Did you come here only for information?” “No.” There it was. The second answer, quiet and bare. “Then what else?” “I wanted to see you.” “You could’ve started with that.” “I thought you’d shut the door.” “I nearly did.” “I know.” “Stop saying that.” His lips pressed together. He took off one glove, finger by finger, and set it on the table. The hand beneath showed a narrow cut across the knuckles, not fresh enough to bleed but not healed. Rory noticed despite herself. “What happened to your hand?” “Nothing that matters.” “Don’t answer my questions with the same rubbish you used before.” “A doorframe.” “You fought a doorframe?” “It was a very hostile doorframe.” The dry attempt at humour stirred something she didn’t want stirred. Her mouth almost responded. She looked at the cut instead. “Sit down before you fall down.” “I’m not going to fall.” “Then sit to prove it.” Lucien lowered himself onto the edge of the chair. He left the cane within reach. Rory remained standing. “You could’ve let me think you didn’t care,” she said. “That would’ve been kinder.” His fingers closed around his bare glove. “I cared.” “You said I was a liability.” “I said you were in danger.” “You called me a liability.” “I was wrong.” “You were cruel.” “Yes.” The answer stopped her. He didn’t dress it up. Didn’t lay out reasons like papers on a desk. Rory’s arms loosened at her sides. “Why?” “I thought if you hated me, you’d keep your distance.” “That’s the plan you chose?” “It was the only one I could see.” “Then you weren’t looking very hard.” His gaze held hers. “No. I wasn’t.” For a moment, she couldn’t find anything to say. The room hummed around them: pipes in the wall, a car passing outside, the soft scrape of Ptolemy’s claws as he shifted on the sofa. Lucien reached for the cane, then stopped before his hand touched it. “I don’t expect you to forgive me.” “Good.” “I don’t expect anything from you.” “Also good.” “I still wanted to tell you the truth.” “You’ve told me one truth.” “Which one?” “That you wanted to see me.” His eyes moved over her face. He looked as if he might say something else, then chose not to. Rory felt the old pull between them—irritating, immediate, stubborn as a bruise. She hated that it had survived his silence. “Five minutes are nearly up,” she said. “Then I’ll ask the question I came to ask.” He leaned forward, hands on his knees. “Did you see anyone watching the restaurant this week? Anyone who didn’t belong?” Rory glanced at the table, where her delivery sheet sat beneath Eva’s notes. The previous evening returned in fragments: a man by the bus stop, his face half-hidden beneath a cap; a silver flash at his hand when he lifted a phone. She looked back at Lucien. “There was someone outside on Tuesday,” she said. “I didn’t see his face.” His attention sharpened. “What did you see?” “A ring. Silver. Split circle.” Lucien stood. The chair legs scraped the floor. “Where did he go?” “Don’t move.” Rory stepped between him and the door. “You said you wanted information. You have it. Now you’re going to tell me everything you know about that mark before you walk out of my flat.” His gaze dropped to the space between them, then returned to her face. “All right,” he said. “I’ll tell you.”
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags18
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences165
tagDensity0.109
leniency0.218
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
92.90% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount2114
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"precisely"
count1
1
adverb"very"
count2
highlights
0"precisely"
1"very"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
81.08% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount2114
totalAiIsms8
found
0
word"comforting"
count1
1
word"footsteps"
count1
2
word"silence"
count3
3
word"familiar"
count1
4
word"flickered"
count1
5
word"comfortable"
count1
highlights
0"comforting"
1"footsteps"
2"silence"
3"familiar"
4"flickered"
5"comfortable"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences134
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences134
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences281
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen40
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords2112
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions44
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
64.02% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions45
wordCount1163
uniqueNames6
maxNameDensity1.72
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Lucien16
Moreau1
Rory20
Ptolemy5
Eva2
Avarosian1
persons
0"Lucien"
1"Moreau"
2"Rory"
3"Ptolemy"
4"Eva"
places(empty)
globalScore0.64
windowScore0.667
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences83
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.473
wordCount2112
matches
0"not fresh enough to bleed but not healed"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount3
totalSentences281
matches
0"found that smell"
1"chose that moment"
2"hated that it"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs196
mean10.78
std12.3
cv1.141
sampleLengths
010
135
24
321
412
54
613
79
811
958
105
114
123
132
149
1546
161
171
1816
1922
201
219
221
231
2418
254
269
2723
286
291
309
313
325
3326
348
357
364
373
3860
399
405
4111
422
434
442
4528
467
4711
487
4956
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences134
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs212
matches(empty)
81.85% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount2
semicolonCount4
flaggedSentences6
totalSentences281
ratio0.021
matches
0"His platinum hair caught the hall light; rain beaded on the shoulders of his charcoal coat."
1"His hand caught the edge—not forcing it, just holding it there."
2"The cat had never trusted Lucien; it had once bitten through one of his gloves."
3"Paper crowded every surface; the single window showed a smeared reflection of the two of them standing several feet apart."
4"Rory felt the old pull between them—irritating, immediate, stubborn as a bruise."
5"The previous evening returned in fragments: a man by the bus stop, his face half-hidden beneath a cap; a silver flash at his hand when he lifted a phone."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1167
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount42
adverbRatio0.03598971722365039
lyAdverbCount6
lyAdverbRatio0.005141388174807198
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences281
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences281
mean7.52
std6.1
cv0.812
sampleLengths
010
18
216
311
44
515
66
712
84
99
104
119
1211
133
1424
157
1624
175
184
193
202
219
228
2322
2416
251
261
274
2812
299
304
319
321
339
341
351
365
3713
384
399
405
4112
426
436
441
456
463
473
485
4911
46.80% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats9
diversityRatio0.2099644128113879
totalSentences281
uniqueOpeners59
56.98% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences117
matches
0"Then the memory of the"
1"Then he’d taken his hand"
ratio0.017
49.06% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount50
totalSentences117
matches
0"His platinum hair caught the"
1"His mouth tightened."
2"She had once found that"
3"He looked past her, toward"
4"His eyes paused on the"
5"He lowered his gaze."
6"It didn’t erase it."
7"It simply gave it a"
8"She kept the chain fastened."
9"His hand caught the edge—not"
10"His face closed."
11"His voice went cold."
12"He’d let her."
13"She studied him through the"
14"He looked thinner than she"
15"Her fingers tightened on the"
16"She went still."
17"His grip shifted on the"
18"His eyes flickered."
19"He’d translated a page of"
ratio0.427
7.01% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount106
totalSentences117
matches
0"The door opened a hand’s"
1"Rory stared through the gap"
2"His platinum hair caught the"
3"The ivory handle of his"
4"Neither of them spoke."
5"A scroll slid to the"
6"Lucien’s gaze moved from her"
7"Rory kept one hand on"
8"His mouth tightened."
9"She had once found that"
10"That had been before he’d"
11"He looked past her, toward"
12"Books leaned against the walls"
13"His eyes paused on the"
14"He lowered his gaze."
15"The sentence took the heat"
16"It didn’t erase it."
17"It simply gave it a"
18"She kept the chain fastened."
19"A door shut somewhere below."
ratio0.906
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences117
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences43
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"For a moment, the hallway filled with the old silence between them: the kind that had once stretched across late-night conversations, his shoulder beside hers a…"
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags18
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags14
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"he added (add)"
dialogueSentences165
tagDensity0.085
leniency0.17
rawRatio0.071
effectiveRatio0.012
85.9898%