Run: 2026-09-23-01M36P2QF1ZAXGQTFN5216BH9Y

Run Details

Duration:
33.5s
Cost:
$0.001132
Provider:
OpenAI

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The oak stones stood in a crooked ring among the Richmond Park bracken. Their bark had split into deep, dark seams, though none of them had roots. Silver lichen traced the cuts like writing. Aurora stopped at the nearest stone. Her hand hovered inches from its surface. “Is that a boundary,” she asked, “or a warning?” Isolde’s long silver hair stirred in a wind Aurora couldn’t feel. The Seer’s pale eyes rested on the gap between two stones. “A door may wear a warning’s face,” she said. “A warning may open when asked.” Nyx leaned from the shade of an oak. Their violet eyes glimmered beneath a hood of living darkness. “That sounds like a door.” “It sounds like neither,” Aurora replied. “It sounds like Isolde.” The Half-Fae smiled without showing her teeth. She passed through the gap. The air folded around her. For a moment, she seemed stretched across two places: one foot among the bracken, the other on a carpet of blue flowers. Then she vanished. Aurora glanced at Nyx. “After you.” “I am made of thresholds.” “Then this should feel familiar.” Nyx slid into the gap. Their outline blurred, broke into ribbons of shadow, and drew itself together on the other side. Aurora touched the Heartstone beneath her collar. The little crimson gem had warmed against her skin. She drew the Fae-forged blade from its sheath. Moonlight ran along its leaf-shaped edge, though the afternoon sky above the park remained grey. She stepped between the stones. For one breath, cold pressure closed over her ears. The park vanished. Then the sound returned all at once: a low rush like water in a buried tunnel, the creak of branches, a chiming that seemed to come from the ground. Aurora stood in a clearing beneath a sky the colour of old pearl. The oak stones rose behind her, their tops lost in a canopy of leaves that had no branches to support them. Wildflowers crowded the grass, red and white and a blue so dark it looked cut from the night. Each flower turned its head as she moved. She lifted one boot. The grass clung to its sole in fine silver threads. “How far did we walk?” she asked. Isolde looked back at the stones. Beyond them, the park lay in a narrow strip, no wider than a window. “Far enough to lose the way home,” she said. “That’s not an answer.” “It is the one the grove gives.” Nyx tilted their head. “The grove has a voice?” “It has many.” A bell chimed under the earth. Aurora’s fingers tightened around the blade. “That one sounded like a warning.” “Then it may be one,” Isolde said. “Or a welcome.” “Useful distinction.” The Seer moved ahead. Her feet left no mark among the flowers. Aurora followed, watching the ground. It sloped gently downward, though the clearing’s edge remained at the same height. Between the trunks, she glimpsed pale forms moving in the distance—tall arches, a line of trees with glassy leaves, a black pool reflecting a sky crowded with stars. The path did not seem to lead toward any of them. It turned between two immense roots and opened onto a stream. The water ran uphill. Aurora crouched at its bank. The stream was narrow, clear, and bright with flecks of gold. Stones on the bottom glowed like coals. When she held out her hand, the current leaned towards her palm. She pulled back. “Don’t drink,” Isolde said. “Wasn’t planning to.” “Good. The stream remembers every mouth.” Nyx’s shadow stretched over the water. The gold flecks stopped moving. “Something’s beneath it,” they whispered. The stream bulged. A face surfaced without breaking the water: long and smooth as a mask, with two small black hollows where its eyes belonged. Its lips parted. The chiming rose through Aurora’s bones. She stepped back, blade ready. The face sank. The water closed above it, then rushed on uphill. “Does it follow us?” Aurora asked. “Only if it learns your name,” Isolde said. Aurora stared at the stream. “And if it does?” “It will call you home.” A tremor ran through the pendant. Its warmth sharpened against Aurora’s chest. Nyx turned towards the path ahead. “There is a tear nearby.” “Hel?” Aurora asked. “I smell iron and smoke.” Isolde’s gaze shifted to the Heartstone. “The gem hears doors before we do.” Aurora tucked the pendant beneath her shirt. Its pulse continued, small and steady. She remembered the last time it had warmed: a corridor where the walls sweated black water, a door that had opened onto a place no map could contain. She kept the memory to herself. They crossed the stream on a bridge made of a single curved branch. Its bark was slick, its surface warm under Aurora’s palm. Halfway across, the wood flexed. Beneath the bridge, something vast rolled beneath the uphill water. Aurora froze. “Keep moving,” Nyx murmured. “It has no eyes.” “That doesn’t improve the situation.” “It has no eyes,” Isolde said, “and sees all the same.” Aurora crossed without looking down. The trees thickened beyond the stream. Their trunks grew pale and smooth, like bone washed by tides. Leaves hung in clusters of translucent discs. When the wind moved through them, they struck one another with soft, clear notes. The sound changed as the group advanced: first a scattered tinkling, then a tune with a slow, uneasy rhythm. Aurora felt the beat in her teeth. “Has anyone been here before?” she asked. “Many,” Isolde replied. “Some came seeking a cure. Some came seeking a weapon. One came seeking a lost child.” “What happened to them?” “The child was found.” “And the others?” The Seer stepped over a root without glancing down. “They found what they sought.” “That wasn’t what I asked.” “No.” Ahead, the trees ended at a wall of black stone, smooth as a sheet of ice. Its surface rose beyond the canopy. Thin lines of light ran through it, red and violet, each branching into smaller paths. They pulsed out of rhythm with the pendant. At the wall’s base, a narrow opening gaped between two slabs. Nyx drifted close. Their outline thinned until the wall’s dark reflection showed through their body. “The grove is older here,” they said. “Older than the stones.” Aurora walked to the opening. The black surface reflected her, but the image lagged behind her movements. In it, she still held the blade at her side. Her reflected self watched her with bright blue eyes and an expression Aurora had never worn. The reflection lifted its free hand and pressed it to the wall. Aurora didn’t move. The reflected hand remained there. A pale crescent scar crossed its wrist, matching the one on Aurora’s left. Her throat tightened. “This isn’t a mirror.” “No,” Isolde said. Her voice had lost its riddle’s lilt. “It is a choice dressed as one.” The reflection’s lips moved. No sound came through the stone. Aurora raised the blade. The image did the same, though the reflected dagger had a dark, jagged edge. Nyx drew closer. “Don’t answer it.” “I haven’t said anything.” “It’s listening to more than speech.” A low hum rolled through the wall. The red lines brightened. Aurora’s pendant warmed until its chain pressed hot against her skin. The opening between the slabs widened by a finger’s breadth. From within came the scent of wet earth, crushed apples, and smoke. Aurora lowered her blade. The reflected woman did not. She kept the weapon pointed at the wall, her face set in a hard line. “Whatever’s in there,” Aurora said, “it knows we came.” “Things know,” Isolde replied. “Knowing does not mean welcome.” “Can we go around?” “The wall has no end.” “Can we go back?” “The grove will remember the way you walked.” “That also isn’t an answer.” A chime rang behind them. The uphill stream fell silent. Every glass leaf in the trees turned towards the black wall. Nyx’s shadow stretched across the opening and shuddered. “Something crossed the stream.” Aurora looked back. Between the bone-pale trunks, the path lay empty. Then a ripple passed through the flowers, moving against the wind. The black pool she had glimpsed earlier appeared between the trees, though it had been far behind them. Stars glimmered on its surface in the pearl-coloured day. The pool’s reflection showed a sky of warm amber. Aurora’s Heartstone beat against her ribs. Isolde turned to the opening. “The door has heard us. The grove has heard the door. We have little time to decide which will answer.” Aurora pressed the blade’s cold spine against her palm. Her reflection still watched from the wall, dagger raised. “Nyx, can you pass through?” “I can pass through most shadows.” “Most?” “Stone does not always cast one.” Nyx sent a thin strand of darkness into the gap. It slipped across the threshold and disappeared. Their violet eyes narrowed. “What did you see?” “A corridor. Steps descending. A light at the bottom.” “What kind?” Nyx paused. “A kitchen.” Aurora glanced at Isolde. The Seer’s face gave nothing away. “Many doors lead to kitchens.” “Not many sit inside a wall that reflects me wrong.” “No.” Another ripple stirred the flowers. This time it came closer, bending their heads in a widening path towards the black stone. Aurora slid the Fae blade into the gap. The edge crossed the threshold without resistance. The red lines in the wall flickered. Somewhere beyond the opening, metal clanged against metal. The reflected woman smiled. Aurora pulled the dagger back. “That’s enough.” She put one boot over the threshold. Warm air touched her face, carrying a rich sweetness that turned bitter in her mouth. Behind her, Nyx moved like a dark curtain drawn by an unseen hand. Isolde followed, her silver hair bright against the stone. The corridor swallowed the grove’s music. Stone steps descended into amber light. Aurora reached for the wall, but its surface felt soft beneath her fingers, pulsing like skin. A breath rose from below, heavy with smoke and the scent of bruised fruit. The Heartstone answered with a hot, crimson throb. Aurora kept her blade in front of her and took the first step down.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags19
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences74
tagDensity0.257
leniency0.514
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
97.05% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1697
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"gently"
count1
highlights
0"gently"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
76.43% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1697
totalAiIsms8
found
0
word"traced"
count1
1
word"familiar"
count1
2
word"warmth"
count1
3
word"pulse"
count1
4
word"pulsed"
count1
5
word"lilt"
count1
6
word"flickered"
count1
7
word"throb"
count1
highlights
0"traced"
1"familiar"
2"warmth"
3"pulse"
4"pulsed"
5"lilt"
6"flickered"
7"throb"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
highlights
0"eyes narrowed"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences167
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences167
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"seem to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences222
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen29
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1696
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions23
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
16.67% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions76
wordCount1338
uniqueNames10
maxNameDensity2.62
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity4.5
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Richmond1
Park1
Isolde13
Aurora35
Seer4
Nyx13
Half-Fae1
Heartstone4
Fae-forged1
Fae3
persons
0"Park"
1"Isolde"
2"Aurora"
3"Seer"
4"Nyx"
5"Half-Fae"
6"Fae"
places
0"Richmond"
globalScore0.192
windowScore0.167
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences104
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"seemed stretched across two places: one foot among the bracken, the other on a carpet of blue flowers"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1696
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences222
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs122
mean13.9
std13.22
cv0.951
sampleLengths
034
113
29
322
415
518
65
710
812
930
104
112
125
135
1421
1539
165
1741
1860
1914
207
2120
229
234
247
259
263
276
2812
2910
302
3158
3222
334
3435
353
364
373
386
3911
405
4134
425
4312
446
458
469
475
4812
4911
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences167
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs232
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount1
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences1
totalSentences222
ratio0.005
matches
0"Between the trunks, she glimpsed pale forms moving in the distance—tall arches, a line of trees with glassy leaves, a black pool reflecting a sky crowded with stars."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1344
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount26
adverbRatio0.019345238095238096
lyAdverbCount1
lyAdverbRatio0.000744047619047619
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences222
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences222
mean7.64
std4.83
cv0.632
sampleLengths
013
114
27
36
47
59
611
711
89
96
108
1110
125
136
144
157
165
175
1822
193
204
212
225
235
245
2516
267
279
288
2915
305
319
323
3329
3413
3521
3618
378
384
3910
407
416
4214
439
444
457
464
475
483
496
48.05% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats5
diversityRatio0.30180180180180183
totalSentences222
uniqueOpeners67
91.32% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount4
totalSentences146
matches
0"Then she vanished."
1"Then the sound returned all"
2"Then a ripple passed through"
3"Somewhere beyond the opening, metal"
ratio0.027
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount32
totalSentences146
matches
0"Their bark had split into"
1"Her hand hovered inches from"
2"Their violet eyes glimmered beneath"
3"She passed through the gap."
4"Their outline blurred, broke into"
5"She drew the Fae-forged blade"
6"She stepped between the stones."
7"She lifted one boot."
8"Her feet left no mark"
9"It sloped gently downward, though"
10"It turned between two immense"
11"She pulled back."
12"Its lips parted."
13"She stepped back, blade ready."
14"Its warmth sharpened against Aurora’s"
15"Its pulse continued, small and"
16"She remembered the last time"
17"She kept the memory to"
18"They crossed the stream on"
19"Its bark was slick, its"
ratio0.219
31.92% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount125
totalSentences146
matches
0"The oak stones stood in"
1"Their bark had split into"
2"Aurora stopped at the nearest"
3"Her hand hovered inches from"
4"Isolde’s long silver hair stirred"
5"The Seer’s pale eyes rested"
6"Nyx leaned from the shade"
7"Their violet eyes glimmered beneath"
8"The Half-Fae smiled without showing"
9"She passed through the gap."
10"The air folded around her."
11"Aurora glanced at Nyx."
12"Nyx slid into the gap."
13"Their outline blurred, broke into"
14"Aurora touched the Heartstone beneath"
15"The little crimson gem had"
16"She drew the Fae-forged blade"
17"Moonlight ran along its leaf-shaped"
18"She stepped between the stones."
19"The park vanished."
ratio0.856
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences146
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences53
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"The oak stones rose behind her, their tops lost in a canopy of leaves that had no branches to support them."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags19
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags19
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"they whispered (whisper)"
1"Nyx murmured (murmur)"
dialogueSentences74
tagDensity0.257
leniency0.514
rawRatio0.105
effectiveRatio0.054
88.7146%