Run: 2026-09-23-01M36P2X321X7JKGJPPZ4E8Z1R

Run Details

Duration:
39.1s
Cost:
$0.001466
Provider:
OpenAI

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The door opened six inches, caught by the chain, and stopped. Aurora stared through the gap at Lucien Moreau. He had one hand braced against the frame. Rain had darkened the shoulders of his charcoal coat, and a silver drop clung to the tip of his nose. His platinum hair remained slicked back, though one strand had fallen loose near his temple. The amber eye fixed on her. The black one took in the chain, the hallway behind her, the crescent scar on her wrist. “You have three deadbolts,” he said. “I expected more ceremony.” “You’re standing on the wrong side of all three.” “Then we agree I’ve made progress.” She pushed the door shut. His cane slid between the frame and the jamb. The ivory handle knocked against the wood. “Rory.” “Take that out.” “Open the door.” “I did. You got the full experience.” The cane withdrew. She heard him shift back, then the soft tap of its ferrule against the floorboards. Aurora kept her hand on the chain. In the cramped flat, a stack of books leaned against the wall beside the shoe rack. Someone had left a scroll open across the kitchen table, its inked symbols spilling beneath an untouched mug. Ptolemy wove around her ankles and pressed his striped flank against her shin. “Lucien, I have a phone.” “I know.” “You could have called.” “I did.” “You could have left a message.” “I did that too.” She glanced toward the counter. Her phone lay beneath a roll of notes, screen dark. She had turned it off after work and forgotten to switch it back on. “Was the message any better than this?” “It was shorter.” “That’s not the same thing.” “No.” His voice softened. “It isn’t.” She unhooked the chain but kept the door open only as far as her shoulder. “What do you want?” “To come in.” “Try again.” “To speak with you.” “You had your chance.” “I know.” The rain ran off the edge of his coat and darkened the mat. He didn’t step inside. Lucien could be graceful in the tightest room, could make a crowded bar seem arranged around him. Now he looked as if he’d measured the distance to the threshold and decided not to cross it without permission. That restraint unsettled her more than the cane in the door. Behind her, Ptolemy gave a short, accusing meow. Lucien looked down at the cat. “You’ve acquired a guard.” “He’s more reliable than most men.” The black eye returned to her face. “I deserved that.” “Did you come all this way to catalogue what you deserve?” “No. I came because you were right.” Aurora’s fingers tightened on the edge of the door. “About?” “Which part?” “Don’t turn this into a game.” His jaw shifted. For once, he had no ready answer. She opened the door wider, not enough to welcome him, only enough to see the whole of him. Rain had left a dark line along his collar. His gloved hand rested on the ivory cane. The pale handle gleamed under the hallway bulb. “You said I was useful,” she said. “You said I could help you get what you wanted, and when I asked what that meant, you told me I’d understand when the time came.” “I remember.” “Then you went behind my back and put my name in someone else’s mouth.” “I did.” “You let me walk into that room thinking I had a choice.” His gaze dipped. “You did have a choice.” “Not an informed one.” “No.” The answer landed without defence. It left her with nowhere to throw the next accusation, so she stepped aside. “Come in before you soak the landing.” Lucien crossed the threshold. His eyes swept the flat, registering the books, the crowded shelves, the open scroll. He didn’t comment. Aurora shut the door and slid the chain into place, then turned the first deadbolt. The second. The third. His gaze followed her hand. “Still counting,” he said. “Someone has to.” She went to the kitchen and set the kettle on. Ptolemy sprang onto the table, pawed at the scroll, and nearly sent a stack of papers to the floor. “Get down.” The cat flattened himself across the notes. Lucien leaned his cane against the counter. “He’s made his position clear.” “He’s better at boundaries than you are.” “I know.” “You keep saying that as if it fixes anything.” “I don’t expect it to.” Aurora turned the tap. Water rattled into the kettle. Behind her, Lucien stayed by the door, wet coat and all. “Take that off,” she said. He glanced down at himself. “The coat?” “I’m not having you drip on Eva’s books.” A pause, then he unfastened the top button and shrugged out of it. He folded the coat over his arm, careful not to brush the hanging scrolls. The suit beneath fit him with the same severe precision she remembered. She remembered other things too: his bare fingers around a glass in the back room at Silas’ bar, his voice low against her ear when the music drowned out everyone else, the way he’d looked at her as if she had never once surprised him. She remembered the last time he’d looked at her. “You could have told me,” she said. “I should have.” “Before I stood in that room with three men asking what I knew about Avaros.” “Yes.” “Before one of them touched my arm.” Lucien’s fingers closed around the folded coat. “I saw.” “You saw, and then you used it. You turned the room cold enough that he let go, and you made it look like you’d done me a favour.” “I wasn’t thinking about how it looked.” “No. You were thinking about how it would work.” The kettle began to hiss. She took two mugs from the shelf. “I was thinking about getting you out alive.” “You don’t get to decide that for me.” “I know.” This time, she looked at him. “You’re going to need a different sentence.” His mouth tightened. “You should have been given the whole truth before I asked you to stand beside me.” Better. Still nowhere near enough. She poured hot water over tea bags. “Why now?” “I found out someone had asked after you.” The mug stopped halfway to the table. “Who?” “An intermediary. Human. Nervous. He claimed a man wanted to know whether you still worked for the Golden Empress.” Her grip sharpened around the ceramic. “Did he give a name?” “No.” “You believed him?” “I checked the details. He knew your route, your hours, and where you lived.” The flat seemed to draw in around them: the low ceiling, the cluttered table, the three locks at the door. Aurora set the mug down without drinking. “Did he know about this place?” “He knew you stayed above a bar. He didn’t have the address.” “Could have been anyone who’s seen me working.” “Yes.” “You could have called.” “My message said I needed to warn you.” “My phone was off.” “I know that now.” She folded her arms. “So you came here unannounced.” “I didn’t want to send details over a line someone might be monitoring.” “And turning up at a stranger’s home seemed discreet?” “You’re not a stranger.” The words found the old bruise and pressed. Aurora looked away first, furious at herself for doing it. Ptolemy stepped off the scroll and sat beside the untouched mug, his tail curling over his paws. “Did you come because you were worried about me,” she asked, “or because you need something?” Lucien set his coat on the back of a chair. “Both.” “At least that’s honest.” “I need to know whether you’ve noticed anyone following you.” “No.” “Anyone asking questions at the restaurant?” “People ask questions. It’s a restaurant.” “Rory.” “There was a man outside yesterday. Blue scarf, grey cap. He ordered nothing and watched the deliveries.” Lucien’s face changed by a fraction, but she caught it. “You didn’t mention that.” “I didn’t know it mattered.” “What did he look like?” “Average height. Mid-forties. A split in one eyebrow. He had a paper bag from the bakery next door.” “Did you speak to him?” “No. I left by the back.” “Good.” “Don’t praise me.” “I wasn’t.” “You sounded like you were.” “I was relieved.” The quiet after that held more than the words could. Aurora picked up her tea. It had steeped too long, a bitter stain spreading through the water. “You don’t get to show up, lay out a threat, and assume I’ll fall in behind you,” she said. “I’m not asking you to.” “What are you asking?” “To let me stay until we know whether that man returns.” She almost laughed. “You want to guard the door?” “If you’ll allow it.” “You hate being ordered around.” “I can endure the strain.” “Can you?” His amber eye warmed, the corner of his mouth shifting. There he was: the man who could turn a barbed exchange into an invitation with nothing but a look. She had once mistaken that ease for safety. She hadn’t made the same mistake twice. “Don’t,” she said. The hint of a smile vanished. “I wasn’t.” “You were.” “I was remembering.” “So was I.” He lowered his gaze to the cane. His thumb ran once over the ivory handle. “I didn’t come to ask you to forgive me.” “Good.” “I came to tell you I should have trusted you with the truth. Not because it would have helped me. Because you deserved it.” Aurora rested her mug on the table. “And what was the truth?” “Those men wanted a ledger from a broker in Avaros. I believed they thought you’d seen it. I let them think you had access to me, because they were less likely to threaten you while they believed I could reach them.” “You made me bait.” “I put you in danger.” “You dressed it up as protection.” “Yes.” There it was. Clean and ugly. She looked at the wet line on his collar, the pale hand on the cane. “You don’t get to make that choice again.” “I won’t.” “You don’t get to say that and expect me to believe you.” “I don’t expect you to.” “What do you expect?” He lifted his eyes. “That you’ll make your own decision about the man in the blue scarf. And about me.” Her throat tightened, an unwelcome response to a sentence she should have wanted from him months ago. “You should have said that then.” “I know.” She shoved a mug toward him. “Drink something. You’re dripping on the floor.” He took it, fingers brushing hers. The contact lasted less than a second, yet her pulse kicked as if he had laid a hand on her waist. Lucien noticed. Of course he did. His thumb paused against the mug’s handle, but he didn’t lean closer. That mattered. Aurora drew her hand back and moved to the window. Beyond the glass, Brick Lane shone with rain and streetlight. People pushed beneath umbrellas, shoulders hunched, heads turned towards the curry house sign below. A man in a blue scarf stood beside the bakery’s shuttered door. She set down her mug. Lucien rose. His cane struck the floor once. “Don’t go out,” she said. “I wasn’t.” “Good. We’re not chasing anyone through the street because you’ve decided to be noble.” “I hadn’t.” “Then sit down.” He stopped beside the table. “You saw him?” “I saw someone.” “Blue scarf?” “Possibly.” “Move away from the window.” Aurora glanced at him. “Ask.” A beat passed. “Will you move away from the window?” She stepped back. “Yes.” He joined her, leaving a careful span of floor between them. Their shoulders nearly touched. His coat smelled of rain and cold air. She hated that she remembered the warmth beneath it. “Do you want me to call Silas?” she asked. “If he knows the man, that helps.” “And if he doesn’t?” “We keep the door locked. You tell me what you saw. I leave when you ask.” “Even if you think I’m making the wrong call?” “Especially then.” She studied his face. The black eye gave her nothing. The amber one held steady, without the old glint of amusement to soften his answer. “Stay by the door,” she said. “Don’t touch the lock. Don’t answer it. And don’t tell me what I’m allowed to do.” “Understood.” Aurora reached for her phone beneath the roll of notes. Lucien remained where she’d left him, cane upright beside his leg. She unlocked the screen and started the call. “Silas,” she said when he picked up. “I need you to look out from the bar. There’s a man by the bakery in a blue scarf.”
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags14
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences164
tagDensity0.085
leniency0.171
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount2115
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
85.82% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount2115
totalAiIsms6
found
0
word"measured"
count1
1
word"unsettled"
count1
2
word"eyebrow"
count1
3
word"pulse"
count1
4
word"warmth"
count1
5
word"glint"
count1
highlights
0"measured"
1"unsettled"
2"eyebrow"
3"pulse"
4"warmth"
5"glint"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences134
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences134
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"began to"
1"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences285
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen45
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords2115
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions40
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
95.26% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions31
wordCount1096
uniqueNames6
maxNameDensity1.09
worstName"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Lucien12
Moreau1
Ptolemy4
Brick1
Lane1
Aurora12
persons
0"Lucien"
1"Moreau"
2"Ptolemy"
3"Aurora"
places
0"Brick"
1"Lane"
globalScore0.953
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences86
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount2115
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount2
totalSentences285
matches
0"mistaken that ease"
1"hated that she"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs200
mean10.58
std12.02
cv1.137
sampleLengths
011
18
266
310
49
56
65
716
81
93
103
117
1218
1354
145
152
164
172
186
194
2029
217
223
235
246
2519
263
272
284
294
302
3154
3211
338
3410
356
3610
3711
387
3910
402
416
4210
4343
4433
452
4614
472
4812
498
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences134
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs188
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences285
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1093
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount21
adverbRatio0.0192131747483989
lyAdverbCount4
lyAdverbRatio0.0036596523330283625
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences285
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences285
mean7.42
std5.94
cv0.8
sampleLengths
011
18
28
320
415
56
617
76
84
99
106
115
129
137
141
153
163
177
183
1915
207
2116
2218
2313
245
252
264
272
286
294
305
3110
3214
337
343
355
364
372
3815
394
403
412
424
434
442
4513
464
4717
4820
4911
47.19% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats8
diversityRatio0.2631578947368421
totalSentences285
uniqueOpeners75
28.49% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences117
matches
0"Of course he did."
ratio0.009
38.80% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount53
totalSentences117
matches
0"He had one hand braced"
1"His platinum hair remained slicked"
2"She pushed the door shut."
3"His cane slid between the"
4"She heard him shift back,"
5"She glanced toward the counter."
6"Her phone lay beneath a"
7"She had turned it off"
8"His voice softened"
9"She unhooked the chain but"
10"He didn’t step inside."
11"His jaw shifted."
12"She opened the door wider,"
13"His gloved hand rested on"
14"His gaze dipped."
15"It left her with nowhere"
16"His eyes swept the flat,"
17"He didn’t comment."
18"His gaze followed her hand."
19"She went to the kitchen"
ratio0.453
7.01% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount106
totalSentences117
matches
0"The door opened six inches,"
1"Aurora stared through the gap"
2"He had one hand braced"
3"Rain had darkened the shoulders"
4"His platinum hair remained slicked"
5"The amber eye fixed on"
6"The black one took in"
7"She pushed the door shut."
8"His cane slid between the"
9"The ivory handle knocked against"
10"The cane withdrew."
11"She heard him shift back,"
12"Aurora kept her hand on"
13"Someone had left a scroll"
14"Ptolemy wove around her ankles"
15"She glanced toward the counter."
16"Her phone lay beneath a"
17"She had turned it off"
18"His voice softened"
19"She unhooked the chain but"
ratio0.906
42.74% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences117
matches
0"Now he looked as if"
ratio0.009
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences46
technicalSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags14
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags12
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences164
tagDensity0.073
leniency0.146
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
88.1767%