Run: 2026-09-23-01M36P49JE9HWHNY227TY5DN78

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Duration:
35.3s
Cost:
$0.001188
Provider:
OpenAI

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The oak standing stones rose from the grass like the ribs of something buried too shallowly. Their bark had split into deep, black grooves, though no wind touched the branches above them. Rory stopped at the boundary with one hand wrapped around the silver chain at her throat. The Heartstone pressed warm against her palm. Its crimson surface gave a faint pulse, then another. “Tell me that’s normal for a necklace,” Eva said. “It isn’t.” “Good. I’d hate to be alarmed for nothing.” Rory let the pendant fall beneath her collar. Beside her, Silas shifted the strap of his satchel higher on his shoulder. He had insisted on bringing a flask, a torch, and a folding knife. The torch had gone out twice since they left the path. The knife looked small enough to upset a butter dish. Nyx stood at the edge of the trees, a tall silhouette that swallowed the dusk around them. Two violet points watched from beneath the hooded suggestion of a brow. “There is a door here,” Nyx whispered. “It has not opened for you yet.” Eva glanced between the stones. “And how do we persuade it?” “Walk.” “Excellent. I’ll try the ancient method.” She stepped between the oaks. The world folded. Rory felt it pass through her teeth first, a thin pressure like the ache before a storm. The path beneath her boots softened, then vanished. She stumbled onto springy moss beneath a sky the colour of poured honey. Eva caught her arm. “Rory.” “I’m here.” The words sounded too loud. The clearing swallowed their edges, leaving a soft echo that came back from the wrong direction. Silas emerged behind them and turned at once. The standing stones remained, but their far sides looked polished smooth, like the inside of a shell. Beyond them, Richmond Park had disappeared. In its place stretched a slope of silver grass that climbed towards a row of trees with blue-white trunks. “Right,” Silas murmured. “That’s new.” The Heartstone warmed again. Rory drew it from her collar. Beneath its deep crimson surface, a pinprick of light stirred and faded. Nyx passed through the standing stones without touching them. Their shadow lengthened across the clearing, though the sun—or whatever hung above them—stood directly overhead. “This is the Grove,” Nyx said. “The boundary has let us through.” “Then the boundary can let us out,” Eva replied. “It can.” “Comforting.” Rory looked back at the oaks. A faint shimmer wavered between them, visible even to her now. The air there bent like glass held above a flame. Silas lifted his dead torch and tapped it against his palm. “How far in are we going?” “Until we find Isolde,” Rory said. Eva gave her a look. “You say that as if there’s a signpost.” “There might be.” The clearing offered no path, but flattened bands in the grass curved away between patches of wildflowers. Rory chose the widest. The others followed, close enough that their sleeves brushed. Flowers grew in dense drifts along the trail. Some resembled bluebells, except their stems curled in tight spirals and their bells faced the ground. Others opened like small white hands. When Rory reached towards one, its petals folded shut. “Don’t touch anything,” Silas warned. “I wasn’t.” The flower opened again after she passed. Its petals showed tiny silver teeth. Silas lowered his hand. “Noted.” A sound followed them from the trees: three bright notes, like a glass rim struck with a spoon. Eva turned. Nothing moved between the trunks. A moment later the same notes rang ahead of them. “Bird?” Eva asked. “Not one I know,” Rory said. Nyx tilted their head. “It is calling to something.” “Us?” “No.” The answer did not settle anyone. They walked on. The honey-coloured sky held no sun, yet shadows shifted around their feet as if cast by clouds moving overhead. Rory’s boots sank into the moss with each step. The ground gave beneath her weight and rose back after, smooth as a mattress. A coolness clung to her ankles. Above it, the air smelled of rain, crushed mint, and something sharp that brought to mind a struck match. The trail passed under a low arch of interwoven branches. On its far side, the land opened into a valley. Rory stopped. Trees rose from the valley floor in impossible ranks. Their trunks twisted together, then separated high above the ground, holding broad leaves that shone like beaten copper. Between them, streams ran uphill over pale stones. Water spilled from the valley into the sky in narrow ribbons and vanished among clouds that drifted below the ridgeline. Eva stood beside Rory, her mouth slightly open. “Don’t look at me,” she said. “I have no useful comment.” “Neither do I.” Silas stepped to the edge of the slope. “That stream’s running up.” “It’s not a stream,” Rory said. He looked at her. “Not anymore.” They descended carefully. The moss gave way to ground that looked like slate but felt warm through Rory’s soles. Tiny flecks of colour moved beneath its surface, drifting in slow currents. She crouched and placed two fingers against it. A ripple spread from her touch, carrying the flecks outward. Something knocked beneath the stone. Rory snatched her hand back. A second knock came from farther down the slope. Then another, travelling away from them, one measured tap at a time. Silas raised the folding knife. “Put that away,” Eva said. “I’m prepared.” “You’re armed with cutlery.” The knocking stopped. At the foot of the slope, the uphill stream crossed the trail. Its water climbed through the air in a transparent arc, passing above their heads. Rory heard a steady low murmur inside it, too layered to be water alone. Voices braided together, rising and falling without words. Silas stared up at the stream. “I heard my mother.” Eva looked at him. “What?” “Nothing.” He scrubbed a thumb over the knife’s handle. “It sounded like her.” Rory had heard no voice, only the murmur. Still, her skin tightened beneath her sleeves. She held out an arm to bar Eva from stepping closer. The Heartstone burned against her chest. She pulled it free. Its inner glow had strengthened, red light showing through the seams of the gem. Nyx moved to the edge of the stream. Their shadow stretched upward, narrow and wavering, until it touched the water. The voices cut out. A shape appeared inside the stream. For a moment Rory saw a pale face beneath the rising current, its eyes closed, long hair streaming down against the flow. Then the figure opened its eyes. The whole arch shivered. “Back,” Nyx said. No one argued. They retreated uphill. The face turned with them, gaze fixed on Rory’s pendant. The Heartstone pulsed once, hard enough to strike her breastbone. The stream snapped shut. Water fell in a bright curtain. It struck the slate without a splash and vanished through it. The pale face went with it. Silas lowered the knife. “That wasn’t your mother.” “I know.” “Good.” “I’d know her face.” The silence after that had weight. Rory tucked the pendant away and pressed her hand over it until its warmth dulled. A narrow bridge crossed the valley farther on. It had no rail and no visible supports, just a strip of dark wood suspended over a drop filled with slow-turning stars. The stars moved in clusters, circling a point far beneath the bridge. At its entrance, three standing stones had been set in a row. Their faces bore shallow carvings: a hand, a crescent, and a closed eye. “Those weren’t there before,” Eva said. Rory looked back at the slope. The path had disappeared behind a screen of copper-leaved trees. “Maybe they were,” she said. “We didn’t see them.” Silas crouched by the nearest stone. “The carvings are old.” “Older than the grove?” Eva asked. “Old enough to look as if the stone grew around them.” Rory traced the air above the crescent without touching it. A thin line of cold reached her fingertips. Her left wrist prickled beneath the small crescent scar. She pulled her hand back. Nyx faced the bridge. “It remembers a crossing.” “Who crossed?” Eva asked. “The dead. The lost. Those who carried a name they could not give away.” “That’s a lovely menu of options.” Rory looked across. The bridge ended at a grove of slender trees. Between their trunks, she glimpsed the outline of a low stone building, half-hidden by hanging moss. A warm light moved behind one of its narrow windows. “Isolde’s there,” she said. “How do you know?” Silas asked. “I don’t. But it’s the only place with a light.” Eva drew a breath and stepped onto the bridge. The wood flexed under her boot. A faint note sounded beneath it, as if the bridge had plucked a string. “Wait,” Rory said. Eva looked back. “Take one step at a time. Don’t look down.” “Wasn’t planning to.” She crossed. Rory followed, one hand skimming the bridge’s dark surface. The wood felt cold and slick. Beneath her, stars turned in their silent hollow. One bright cluster shifted closer, and she saw that the points of light were not stars but small windows, each showing a different landscape: a field under snow, a red desert, a room flooded to the ceiling. A pale hand rose from the dark below. Rory jerked away from the edge. “Keep moving,” Nyx whispered. “It has no claim on you.” The hand sank. Rory crossed the last stretch in four quick strides. On the far side, the air changed. The sharp scent of struck match gave way to smoke and damp stone. Moss hung from the trees in long silver threads. Their leaves stirred although the branches remained still. The building stood in a ring of wildflowers. It had no door, only an archway filled with darkness. A small bell hung above it, green with age. Eva stopped at the flower ring. “Is this the sort of place where knocking is dangerous?” “Probably,” Rory said. “Then I vote we use the bell.” She reached up and touched it with one finger. The bell gave a soft, clean note. The sound travelled through the trees, then returned from the building as a low hum. A figure waited inside the dark archway. Silver hair framed a pale face, and lavender eyes fixed on Rory’s chest. “Your heart carries a door,” Isolde said. “Your feet carry the question. Which one shall I answer first?” The Heartstone warmed beneath Rory’s hand. Eva stayed at her shoulder. Silas edged up on Rory’s other side, his folding knife shut in his fist. “Start with the way out,” Rory said. Isolde’s gaze shifted to the three of them, then returned to the pendant. “The way out has not moved,” she said. “But it has learned your names.”
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags26
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences73
tagDensity0.356
leniency0.712
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
94.45% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1803
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count1
1
adverb"carefully"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
1"carefully"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
63.95% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1803
totalAiIsms13
found
0
word"pulse"
count1
1
word"echo"
count1
2
word"comforting"
count1
3
word"wavered"
count1
4
word"weight"
count2
5
word"measured"
count1
6
word"wavering"
count1
7
word"streaming"
count1
8
word"pulsed"
count1
9
word"silence"
count1
10
word"warmth"
count1
11
word"traced"
count1
highlights
0"pulse"
1"echo"
2"comforting"
3"wavered"
4"weight"
5"measured"
6"wavering"
7"streaming"
8"pulsed"
9"silence"
10"warmth"
11"traced"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences181
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences181
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences228
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen37
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1801
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions22
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
43.12% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions81
wordCount1497
uniqueNames8
maxNameDensity2.14
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity3.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Heartstone5
Rory32
Silas13
Eva18
Richmond1
Park1
Nyx9
Isolde2
persons
0"Heartstone"
1"Rory"
2"Silas"
3"Eva"
4"Nyx"
5"Isolde"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
globalScore0.431
windowScore0.5
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences121
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"looked like slate but felt warm through R"
1"appeared inside the stream"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1801
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences228
matches
0"saw that the"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs123
mean14.64
std14.52
cv0.992
sampleLengths
048
116
29
32
48
555
629
714
811
91
106
115
123
1338
145
152
1621
1750
185
1922
2024
2112
229
232
241
2527
2617
276
2813
293
3030
3139
325
332
3413
355
3635
373
386
399
401
411
426
4370
4420
452
4655
478
4811
493
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences181
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs266
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount2
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences1
totalSentences228
ratio0.004
matches
0"Their shadow lengthened across the clearing, though the sun—or whatever hung above them—stood directly overhead."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1504
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount39
adverbRatio0.025930851063829786
lyAdverbCount6
lyAdverbRatio0.003989361702127659
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences228
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences228
mean7.9
std4.89
cv0.619
sampleLengths
016
116
216
37
49
59
62
78
88
913
1013
1111
1210
1317
1412
157
167
175
186
191
206
215
223
2317
248
2513
264
271
282
295
3016
318
3217
336
3419
353
362
374
386
3912
409
4115
426
436
449
452
461
476
4811
4910
54.39% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats6
diversityRatio0.34210526315789475
totalSentences228
uniqueOpeners78
43.57% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences153
matches
0"Then another, travelling away from"
1"Then the figure opened its"
ratio0.013
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount27
totalSentences153
matches
0"Their bark had split into"
1"Its crimson surface gave a"
2"He had insisted on bringing"
3"She stepped between the oaks."
4"She stumbled onto springy moss"
5"Their shadow lengthened across the"
6"Its petals showed tiny silver"
7"They walked on."
8"Their trunks twisted together, then"
9"He looked at her."
10"They descended carefully."
11"She crouched and placed two"
12"Its water climbed through the"
13"He scrubbed a thumb over"
14"She held out an arm"
15"She pulled it free."
16"Its inner glow had strengthened,"
17"Their shadow stretched upward, narrow"
18"They retreated uphill."
19"It struck the slate without"
ratio0.176
31.90% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount131
totalSentences153
matches
0"The oak standing stones rose"
1"Their bark had split into"
2"Rory stopped at the boundary"
3"The Heartstone pressed warm against"
4"Its crimson surface gave a"
5"Rory let the pendant fall"
6"He had insisted on bringing"
7"The torch had gone out"
8"The knife looked small enough"
9"Nyx stood at the edge"
10"Eva glanced between the stones."
11"She stepped between the oaks."
12"The world folded."
13"Rory felt it pass through"
14"The path beneath her boots"
15"She stumbled onto springy moss"
16"Eva caught her arm."
17"The words sounded too loud."
18"The clearing swallowed their edges,"
19"Silas emerged behind them and"
ratio0.856
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences153
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences61
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"In its place stretched a slope of silver grass that climbed towards a row of trees with blue-white trunks."
1"The honey-coloured sky held no sun, yet shadows shifted around their feet as if cast by clouds moving overhead."
2"Their trunks twisted together, then separated high above the ground, holding broad leaves that shone like beaten copper."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags26
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
95.21% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags25
fancyCount4
fancyTags
0"Nyx whispered (whisper)"
1"Silas murmured (murmur)"
2"Silas warned (warn)"
3"Nyx whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences73
tagDensity0.342
leniency0.685
rawRatio0.16
effectiveRatio0.11
87.5527%